内容正文:
Developing ideas—writing about a change
Book 5 Unit 3 Times change!
To read a passage about changing;
To learn to analyze how the writer forms the passage by answering questions;
To think about something that may disappear in the future;
To write a passage about a change;
Read for prediction(预测)
What is it about?
Superman is a superhero published by DC Comics since 1938. He was from the destroyed planet Krypton and raised as Clark Kent by human foster parents, Martha and Jonathan Kent. As an adult, Superman became the protector of Earth.
Read for background information
超人(Superman)是美国DC漫画旗下的超级英雄,超人出生于氪星(Krypton),在氪星面临毁灭之际,他的父母将尚在襁褓中的卡尔用飞船送到了地球。卡尔被农场主肯特夫妇发现,并以克拉克·肯特(Clark Kent)的地球名字抚养长大。
长大成人后,成为地球的保护者。他有着与生俱来的超能力和极强的正义感与同情心,每在危难时刻,便进入电话亭,身着蓝色紧身衣,披上红色斗篷,化身超人行侠仗义,拯救世人。
phone box
1. What is the passage mainly about?
2. What will disappear in the future according to the passage? What is the major reason for this phenomenon(现象)?
3. What supporting arguments(论据) does the author give to make the point convincing?
Read for answers
1. What is the passage mainly about?
This passage mainly tells us that phone boxes where Superman used to get changed in the films are hard to find now and gives us the reasons.
2. What will disappear in the future according to the passage? What is the major reason for this phenomenon(现象)?
Phone boxes will disappear in the future. The major reason is that almost everyone has a mobile phone and they don’t need phone boxes any more.
3. What supporting arguments(论据) does the author give to make the point convincing?
1) It is convenient to take out a mobile and make a call at the touch of a button than to press a series of long numbers.
2) Remembering others’ telephone numbers is not easy.
3) It is more convenient to borrow a mobile phone from someone else than walk around looking for a phone box.
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I was watching a superhero film the other day and a thought occurred to me: where does Superman get changed these days? In the comics and earlier films, Clark Kent would pop into a phone box to change into his Superman costume. But these days, phone boxes are hard to find. The main reason for this is simply that we don’t need them anymore.
Read for structure(结构)
Introducing something that will not be around in the future and giving the reasons.
Almost everyone these days carries a mobile phone with them. It is certainly more convenient to take out a mobile and make a call at the touch of a button than to press a series of long numbers on a telephone. And anyone who happens to leave their mobile phone at home will still have no use for a phone box. Why?Because they are unlikely to remember the number they want to call — that’s something that our mobile phones do for us these days. And even if we could remember a number and needed to call it urgently, it would still be more convenient to borrow a mobile phone from someone else than walk around looking for a phone box.
Supporting arguments
So, the phone box is becoming a thing of the past. Poor Clark Kent will have to find somewhere else to change!
Conclusion
基本框架
第一部分:阐明观点并列举理由;
第二部分:提供支持性的论据;
第三部分:总结并重申自己的观点;
1. These days, … are hard to find.
2. The main reason for this is that …
3. It is certainly more convenient to do … than (to) do …
4. They are unlikely to do …
5. So, … is becoming a thing of the past.
Can you underline some useful expressions that can be used in writing about a change?
Read for vocabulary(词汇)
The TV, the Electric Fan, key, match, news stall(报刊亭), learning machines, ...
We have laptops, tablets, computers and smartphones, which enable us to go online and search for anything we are interested in, they are all portable.
TVs take up too much room , while laptops, computers and smartphones can help save a lot of space.
Writing 1
The Electric Fan: a Thing of the Past
The days of keeping cool with electric fans are numbered. In recent years there has been a significant decrease in their use, and their obvious shortcomings compared to air conditioners make their complete disappearance in the near future possible.
Firstly, electric fans are far less effective in cooling a room. While the breeze they produce can feel pleasant, it does not lower the overall temperature. Not only do air conditioners achieve this, but their settings can be adjusted so that they can reach a specific, ideal temperature.Secondly, electric fans are often less efficient at the use of space, as they usually need to be placed on either the floor or a table; in contrast, air conditioners are usually hung on walls.
But what do you think – will the electric fan soon be a thing of the past?
Writing sample(范文1)
Writing sample(范文2)
Where Has the Learning Machine Gone?
The trend of learning machines has become a thing of the past. It has brought a lot of happiness to the generation after 80s. It was once a household name, and many people still remember it today.
Why does this happen? First of all, a learning machine is too expensive, which may cost 4, 998 yuan. Secondly, the technicians of the factory lacked learning and communication, and of course the leaders of the factory did not import talents. Above all, the popularization of computers makes the learning machine out of the historical stage completely.
In a word, the wheel of history can not go back but forward.
1. Before writing, think about the structure.
2. Think about something that might disappear in the future.
3. Pay attention to the language:
a. using simple present tense or future tense.
b. using objective and simple language.
c. using facts to make the point convincing.
4. You had better choose a good title and an attractive lead-in.
Writing Summary(总结)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack来信询问中国农村的发展变化。请你根据下列要点给他写一封回信介绍中国农村的一些新变化。内容包括:
Writing 2
1. 居住环境方面的改善;
2. 生活条件的提高;
3. 交通的快速发展;
4. 邀请他来参观体验。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
完成句子
1. 经过改革开放后几十年的发展,我的家乡发生了巨大的变化,它呈现出新的面貌。
After decades of ____________________,
_____________________________________. It _____________________.
2. 人们的居住条件已经得到了改善, 砖房已经取代了简陋的房子, 房子里有很多舒服的家具。
________________________________________ and the brick houses_____________________________________the humble houses. _______________________________________________.
reform and opening-up
great changes have taken place in my hometown
has taken on a new look
People's living conditions have been improved
have replaced/have taken the place of
There is a lot of comfortable furniture in the houses
3. 人们的生活水平也得以提高, 人们开始购买绿色食品, 更注重保健和饮食均衡。
Their living standards have also been improved, and __________________________________________________________
________________________________.
4. 随着交通(transportation)的快速发展, 人们旅行很方便(convenient)。(形式主语句型)
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5. 欢迎你在方便的时候来我们国家参观我们的家乡。
_____________________________________ when it is convenient for you.
people have begun to buy green food, paying more attention to keeping healthy and keeping a balanced diet.
With the rapid development of transportation, it's convenient for people to go travelling.
Welcome to our country to visit our hometown
1. Polish your passage and hand it in tomorrow.
2. Prepare a short presentation about how to learn
will change in the future.
Homework
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