2025届读后续写写作练习-人与自我：野外历练，成长蜕变

读后续写-人与自我：野外历练，成长蜕变 第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。 When I was fifteen years old, my parents signed me up for a wilderness survival training camp. At first, I was extremely reluctant to go. To me, leaving the cozy environment of home and venturing into the wild, which was filled with uncertainties and challenges, was nothing but a form of torture. However, my parents were so insistent that I had no choice but to embark on this journey. Upon arriving at the training camp, I felt even more like backing out when I saw the unfamiliar peers around me and the strict coaches. The first day's training task was to search for the designated supplies in the mountain forest and then set up simple tents for us to sleep in at night. I clumsily followed everyone's lead, but mistakes kept popping up. Sometimes I would lose my way while looking for the supplies, and other times I accidentally broke the poles when trying to put up the tent. I felt like a total failure and was overwhelmed with frustration. I stood there, staring blankly at the half-built tent and the scattered poles, feeling a sense of helplessness welling up inside me. The other campers seemed to be getting along just fine, chatting and laughing as they completed their tasks smoothly. In contrast, I was in such a mess, and it made me feel even more out of place and discouraged. I couldn't help but think that maybe I just wasn't cut out for this kind of activity and that I would never be able to fit in or succeed here. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just as I was on the verge of giving up and going to the coach to beg to go home, a boy who looked even smaller and thinner than me walked over with a friendly smile on his face. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ He carefully studied the instruction manual while guiding me on what to do step by step. 一、事件线索 1.十五岁时，父母坚持给 “我” 报名野外生存训练营，“我” 虽不情愿但只能前往。 到达训练营后，面对陌生伙伴和严苛教练，“我” 本就想打退堂鼓，而第一天训2.练任务中，在山林找物资和搭建帐篷时 “我” 不断出错，状况频出，感觉自己像个失败者，内心满是沮丧和无助。 3.看着其他营员顺利完成任务，“我” 越发觉得自己不适合这里，融入不了也难以取得成功。 二、人物情感线索 从最开始对参加训练营的极度不情愿，到抵达训练营后的害怕退缩，在第一天训练任务里因不断犯错而产生强烈的挫败感、无助感，看到别人顺利时进一步陷入自我怀疑、气馁的消极情绪之中。 三、文章主旨 文通过描述 “我” 在野外生存训练营初期经历困难与挫折时的种种表现和内心感受，旨在展现成长往往伴随着面对挑战、克服困难以及突破自我怀疑的过程，启示人们要勇于在困境中坚持并尝试改变，才能实现成长。 4、 续写思路 可以沿着 “我” 在小亮帮助下重燃信心后继续后续训练的角度展开，比如在后续其他项目中又遇到新困难，“我” 如何运用从搭帐篷中获得的经验和新收获的勇气去应对，进一步体现成长；或者写在训练营后续日子里与伙伴、教练之间关系的变化，以及 “我” 心态上从消极到积极的彻底转变等，最后点明这次经历对 “我” 今后人生的深远影响，突出成长这一主题。 5、 优秀范文 Just as I was on the verge of giving up and going to the coach to beg to go home, a boy who looked even smaller and thinner than me walked over with a friendly smile on his face. His eyes were bright and full of warmth, as if carrying an invisible power that could dispel the gloomy clouds hanging over my heart. He said gently, "Don't worry. Everyone makes mistakes at first. Let's do it together." His voice was soft yet firm, like a gentle breeze in the still air of my despair, and his words were like a warm ray of sunshine in the cold, gradually melting the ice of self-doubt and frustration within me. He carefully studied the instruction manual while guiding me on what to do step by step. Every now and then, he would look up at me, explaining in detail how to insert the poles into the right slots and secure them firmly. When I fumbled with the ropes, not knowing how to tie the knots properly, he patiently demonstrated the correct way again and again, his hands moving deftly, showing me each movement slowly until I got the hang of it. With his patient help, we finally managed to set up the tent properly. And it was then that I realized that I shouldn't give up easily. This small success was like a spark that reignited the fire of my confidence, giving me new courage to face the following challenges in the camp. 6、 高分表达 1. like a gentle breeze in the still air of my despair 2. with great concentration 3. a sense of achievement filled my heart 4. I couldn't help but smile, feeling a mixture of pride and relief. 5. It was then that I realized that I shouldn't give up easily. 6. with a friendly smile on his face 学科网（北京）股份有限公司1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$