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必修一,二 应用文写作
作业10 核心知识巩固+拓展突破
应用文是人们在生活、学习、工作中为处理实际事情而写作,并形成惯用格式的文体,具有实用性的特点。《普通高中英语课程标准》(2017版)明确要求高中生要掌握一定类型的应用文及相关的语篇知识,并运用它们有效地进行交际。作为半开放型的试题,高考应用文写作主要考查学生在语境中灵活运用所学语言知识的能力,引导学生形成正确的价值观念和道德情感。题目要求只给出写作的基本框架,给考生留下巨大的自我发挥的空间,考生在写作中可以充分发挥自己的个性化思维。
技巧点拨
1 言之有心在审题定裁
2 言之有理在谋篇布局
3 言之有序在衔接过渡
4 言之有物在锤词炼句
假定你是新华中学学生会主席李华, 收到来自交换生联盟主席Mary的邮件, 她计划在新华中学建立一个新的俱乐部, 希望你能给她一些建议。请给她回一封信, 内容包括:
1. 明确俱乐部的类型和目的;
2. 确定活动内容;
3. 如何组织成员。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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审题谋篇:
文体:本文是一封建议信.
时态:一般现在时和一般将来时
人称:第一人称
文章布局:第一段开门见山引出话题.
第二段:提出具体建议.
第三段:提出希望.
词句翻译打磨
1.(一句多译)我很高兴知道你计划在我们学校建立一个新的俱乐部。
(1)I’m happy to know that you plan to found a new club in our school.
(2)I’m glad to know that you plan to set up a new club in our school.
(3)I know with delight that a new club in our school will be started by you as planned.
2.(一句多译)我的建议如下。
(1)My proposals are as follows.
(2)My suggestions are offered here.
(3)I’m writing to offer my advice as follows.
3.(一句多译)首先, 你最好明确俱乐部的类型以及名字和目标。
(1)Firstly, you are advised to think out the type, the name and goal of the club.
(2)The first thing is that you should define the type, the name and goal of the club.
(3)First of all, you’d better make it clear about the type of the club as well as the name and the aim.
连句成篇
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to know that you plan to set up a new club in our school. My proposals are as follows.
First of all, you’d better make it clear about the type of the club as well as the name and the aim. Besides, club activities should be designed carefully with good preparations for enough material needs. Lastly, it’s also important to consider finding new members.
I sincerely hope that you can make achievements in your future work!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作话题 学校生活提案
(2024-2025学年高一上·内蒙古·阶段练习)假设你是小明的好朋友李华,小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛(English speech contest),他对比赛非常担心,向你求助,请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
写作内容:
1.说明回信意图;
2.向小明提出建议;
3.预祝小明比赛成功。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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写作话题 如何处理亲子关系的建议信
(2024-2025学年高一上·江苏扬州·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友George由于生活琐事跟父母发生冲突,发来邮件询问你如何解决。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.提出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作话题 写一篇如何成为好朋友的日记
(2024-2025学年高一上·湖南·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris在新学校与新同学相处不愉快,很烦恼。他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.表明目的;
2.表示理解;
3.提出建议(至少三条)。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Hearing that you have difficulty getting along well with your new classmates,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
写作话题 怎么看待整形手术
(2024-2025学年高一上·江苏盐城·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Linda为使身材苗条而节食减肥,请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的观点;
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Linda.
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作话题 电影评论
(23-24高二上·福建厦门·开学考试)假如你是李华,要参加一个关于电影评论的征文活动。请根据以下要点推荐一部电影投稿,要点如下:
1. 选择一部你喜欢的电影;
2. 简单描述电影情节;
3. 你对影片的评价及感悟。
注意:1.词数100词左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Movie
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写作话题 关于锻炼身体的建议信
(安徽省示范高中培优联盟2024-2025学年高一上学期12月冬季联考英语试卷)假如你是某校高一学生,你发现班上很多同学由于种种原因几乎不参加体育锻炼,请你针对这一情况写一篇文章,内容包括:1. 分析原因;2. 你的看法和建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
A Report on Students’ Taking Exercise
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写作话题 介绍中国传统节日文化
为传播中国优秀文化,你校将举办介绍中国传统节日的演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍你最喜爱的中国传统节日。内容包括:
1.节日介绍;
2.喜欢该节日的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Festival
Ladies and gentlemen,
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写作话题 推荐一部文学作品
假定你是李华,前不久听了美国文学教授史密斯先生关于“读英语文学作品,提高英语运用能力”的讲座,受益匪浅,但仍有一些问题不是很清楚,所以写信向他求助,内容包括:
1. 请教读文学作品时要注意什么;2. 请他为你推荐几本适合阅读的英语作品。
注意:
1. 词数80左右:2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 信件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 1 student.
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作话题 学校生活提案
(2024-2025学年高一上·四川内江·期中)假如你是李华,最近,你的美国笔友Peter写信向你诉说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难,感到非常焦虑。请你根据下面的写作要点给他写一封回信。
1. 理解他的处境,这种情况是正常的;
2. 给他提出几点建议;
3. 希望他采纳你的建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作话题 如何处理亲子关系的建议信
(2024-2025学年高一上·湖南衡阳·期中)假设你是 Li Hua,你的好友 Jack写信告诉你说跟父母相处困难,请你给他回一封信。
内容包括:1.给与安慰;2.提出建议。
注意:字数80左右。
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写作话题 写一篇如何成为好朋友的日记
(2024-2025学年高一上·安徽亳州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的好友 Paul刚进入高一国际班学习,他想知道如何让自己快速适应高中生活。请你给他写封建议信,内容包括:
1. 你的建议;
2. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作话题 怎么看待整形手术
(2024-2025学年高一上·重庆·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Alice来信向你倾诉她深受体重问题的困扰,希望你能给她一些健康减肥的建议。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信:
1. 表示理解和关心;
2. 给出具体的减肥建议(如合理饮食、适量运动、保持良好作息等);
3. 鼓励她保持积极心态,相信自己能够成功。
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作话题 电影评论
假设你是李华,你要参加一个关于电影评论的征文活动。请你根据所给内容写一篇影评投稿。内容包括:
1. 《阿甘正传》(Forrest Gump)是一部美国电影,改编自Winston Groom写的小说,由Tom Hanks主演;
2. 主人公 Forrest Gump虽然智商低,但他豁达坚强,最终获得成功成为一名橄榄球(football)明星、战争英雄和百万富翁(millionaire);
3. 你对影片的评价及感悟。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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写作话题 关于锻炼身体的建议信
(2024-2025学年高一上·浙江嘉兴·阶段练习)假如你是李华,上周你校学生会组织开展了“运动健康周”活动。请你为校英语报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;2. 活动反响和意义。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Sports and Fitness Week
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写作话题 介绍中国传统节日
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。为弘扬中国文化,加强国际交流,帮助外国友人更好的了解中国,今年学生会将围绕“中国文化”举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛。作为组织者,你将在演讲比赛开始前发言,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
1.说明活动的主题及意义;
2.介绍中国文化的博大精深,包括语言文字、民族艺术、传统节日等;
3.预祝演讲比赛圆满成功,感谢大家的积极参与。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100:
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文章中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
参考词汇:博大精深extensive and profound
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good afternoon! Welcome to this year’s English Speech Competition._______________________________
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写作话题 推荐一部文学作品
你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣,并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.书的题目和作者;2.书的主要内容;3.你的推荐理由。
注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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必修一,二 应用文写作
作业10 核心知识巩固+拓展突破
应用文是人们在生活、学习、工作中为处理实际事情而写作,并形成惯用格式的文体,具有实用性的特点。《普通高中英语课程标准》(2017版)明确要求高中生要掌握一定类型的应用文及相关的语篇知识,并运用它们有效地进行交际。作为半开放型的试题,高考应用文写作主要考查学生在语境中灵活运用所学语言知识的能力,引导学生形成正确的价值观念和道德情感。题目要求只给出写作的基本框架,给考生留下巨大的自我发挥的空间,考生在写作中可以充分发挥自己的个性化思维。
技巧点拨
1 言之有心在审题定裁
2 言之有理在谋篇布局
3 言之有序在衔接过渡
4 言之有物在锤词炼句
假定你是新华中学学生会主席李华, 收到来自交换生联盟主席Mary的邮件, 她计划在新华中学建立一个新的俱乐部, 希望你能给她一些建议。请给她回一封信, 内容包括:
1. 明确俱乐部的类型和目的;
2. 确定活动内容;
3. 如何组织成员。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
审题谋篇:
文体:本文是一封建议信.
时态:一般现在时和一般将来时
人称:第一人称
文章布局:第一段开门见山引出话题.
第二段:提出具体建议.
第三段:提出希望.
词句翻译打磨
1.(一句多译)我很高兴知道你计划在我们学校建立一个新的俱乐部。
(1)I’m happy to know that you plan to found a new club in our school.
(2)I’m glad to know that you plan to set up a new club in our school.
(3)I know with delight that a new club in our school will be started by you as planned.
2.(一句多译)我的建议如下。
(1)My proposals are as follows.
(2)My suggestions are offered here.
(3)I’m writing to offer my advice as follows.
3.(一句多译)首先, 你最好明确俱乐部的类型以及名字和目标。
(1)Firstly, you are advised to think out the type, the name and goal of the club.
(2)The first thing is that you should define the type, the name and goal of the club.
(3)First of all, you’d better make it clear about the type of the club as well as the name and the aim.
连句成篇
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to know that you plan to set up a new club in our school. My proposals are as follows.
First of all, you’d better make it clear about the type of the club as well as the name and the aim. Besides, club activities should be designed carefully with good preparations for enough material needs. Lastly, it’s also important to consider finding new members.
I sincerely hope that you can make achievements in your future work!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作话题 学校生活提案
(2024-2025学年高一上·内蒙古·阶段练习)假设你是小明的好朋友李华,小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛(English speech contest),他对比赛非常担心,向你求助,请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
写作内容:
1.说明回信意图;
2.向小明提出建议;
3.预祝小明比赛成功。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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【答案】
Dear Xiaoming,
You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you.
In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it.
Wish you success in the speech.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向即将参加英语演讲比赛的同学提供建议并预祝其成功。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:contest → competition
建议:suggestion → advice
依我看来:in my opinion →from my point of view
此外:besides → what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror.
拓展句:In my opinion, what you should do is get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
写作话题 如何处理亲子关系的建议信
(2024-2025学年高一上·江苏扬州·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友George由于生活琐事跟父母发生冲突,发来邮件询问你如何解决。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.提出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear George,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in conflict with your parents due to some trivial matters. Try the following suggestions, and see if they will help.
First, be patient with your parents and put yourself in their shoes. The key to solving the problem is honest communication. Explain your actions and feelings calmly, listen carefully, and address their concerns. Besides, try to see things from their point of view. Possibly, you’ll learn to back down and they’ll relax their control.
Hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful and make up with your parents soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,英国笔友George由于生活琐事跟父母发生冲突,发来邮件询问你如何解决。要求考生给笔友回一封邮件。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由于:due to → because of
建议:suggestion → proposal
解决:solve → settle
有帮助的:helpful → useful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m sorry to hear that you are in conflict with your parents due to some trivial matters.
拓展句:Hardly can you imagine how sorry I am when hearing that you are in conflict with your parents due to some trivial matters.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I’m sorry to hear that you are in conflict with your parents due to some trivial matters. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Try the following suggestions, and see if they will help. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)
写作话题 写一篇如何成为好朋友的日记
(2024-2025学年高一上·湖南·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris在新学校与新同学相处不愉快,很烦恼。他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.表明目的;
2.表示理解;
3.提出建议(至少三条)。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Hearing that you have difficulty getting along well with your new classmates,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hearing that you have difficulty getting along well with your new classmates, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I definitely understand your feelings, but cheer up. It’s time to find an opportunity to have a full and frank talk with them face to face and be sure to explain how you feel. Friendships are like flowers which need to be taken good care of, so you should be friendlier and always be a good listener. It’s natural that you sometimes disagree with your new classmates, but you need to respect different opinions. Last but not least, it might be a good idea to always support your new classmates through thick and thin.
Hopefully you’ll find these ideas helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris就与新同学相处不愉快的问题写一份建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供某人某物:offer sb sth→provide sb with sth
建议:suggestion→advice
不同的:different→various
解释:explain→account for
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Last but not least, it might be a good idea to always support your new classmates through thick and thin.
同义句:Last but not least, it might be a good idea that you always support your new classmates through thick and thin.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Friendships are like flowers which need to be taken good care of, so you should be friendlier and always be a good listener. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s natural that you sometimes disagree with your new classmates, but you need to respect different opinions. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
写作话题 怎么看待整形手术
(2024-2025学年高一上·江苏盐城·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Linda为使身材苗条而节食减肥,请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的观点;
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Linda.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Linda,
I hear that you are on a diet these days to be slim. In my opinion, being healthy is more important than being slim. I would like to offer you some advice on how to lose weight in a healthy way.
Firstly, I suggest you go jogging in the morning because jogging is quite a popular form of exercise. You may as well go to the gym regularly, which is also an effective way to lose weight and keep healthy. Last but not least, keep on exercise, you are sure to have a slim figure and stay fit.
I hope you will find my recommendations helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Linda写一封信,就她为使身材苗条而节食减肥给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:Firstly → To begin with
在我看来:In my opinion → As far as I'm concerned
定期:regularly →at regular intervals
有帮助的:helpful → be of help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I would like to offer you some advice on how to lose weight in a healthy way.
拓展句:I would like to offer you some advice, which can help you lose weight in a healthy way.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】You may as well go to the gym regularly, which is also an effective way to lose weight and keep healthy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Firstly, I suggest you go jogging in the morning because jogging is quite a popular form of exercise.(运用了省略that的宾语从句和because连接的原因状语从句)
写作话题 电影评论
(23-24高二上·福建厦门·开学考试)假如你是李华,要参加一个关于电影评论的征文活动。请根据以下要点推荐一部电影投稿,要点如下:
1. 选择一部你喜欢的电影;
2. 简单描述电影情节;
3. 你对影片的评价及感悟。
注意:1.词数100词左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Movie
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【答案】
My Favorite Movie
The movie I adore most is The Million Pound Bank Note, which is based upon a story by Mark Twain.
In the movie, Henry Adams, the main character, landed in England by accident with no money or friends. By chance, he is made the subject of a bet by two wealthy brothers on whether someone could live in London for a month with a million pound bank note. With the large bank note, Henry finds that people’s attitudes towards him change greatly. The film, with excellent acting, beautiful music and interesting plots, is a real success.
I liked the play because of some exciting twists and turns. I also learned that success is not measured by how much money you have. It is totally worth seeing.
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据要点推荐一部电影投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜爱:adore → be fond of
偶然:by accident/by chance → accidentally
富有:wealthy → rich
因为:because of → due to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I liked the play because of some exciting twists and turns.
拓展句:I liked the play because it has some exciting twists and turns.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The movie I adore most is The Million Pound Bank Note, which is based upon a story by Mark Twain. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I also learned that success is not measured by how much money you have. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
写作话题 关于锻炼身体的建议信
(安徽省示范高中培优联盟2024-2025学年高一上学期12月冬季联考英语试卷)假如你是某校高一学生,你发现班上很多同学由于种种原因几乎不参加体育锻炼,请你针对这一情况写一篇文章,内容包括:1. 分析原因;2. 你的看法和建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
A Report on Students’ Taking Exercise
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【答案】
A Report on Students’ Taking Exercise
I’m a Senior One student. Recently I have found that many students in my class seldom take physical exercise and some of them even give it up completely. They owe it to the fact that study and homework take up too much of their time, and some prefer to lie on the bed for a rest rather than work out. Some quit exercise for fear of being hurt.
As far as I am concerned, they should change their thought. Balance can be struck between study and exercise. As the saying goes, “All work no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Proper exercise can sharpen our mind and help reduce stress. On the other hand, as long as they wear comfortable clothes and shoes as instructed, and keep alert while doing exercise, they can avoid hurting themselves.
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇文章,介绍班上很多同学几乎不参加体育锻炼的原因并给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently→lately
很少:seldom→rarely
就我而言:as far as I am concerned→in my opinion
警惕的:alert→watchful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Some quit exercise for fear of being hurt.
拓展句:Some quit exercise for fear of being hurt, which worries me.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Recently I have found that many students in my class seldom take physical exercise and some of them even give it up completely.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】They owe it to the fact that study and homework take up too much of their time, and some prefer to lie on the bed for a rest rather than work out.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
写作话题 介绍中国传统节日文化
为传播中国优秀文化,你校将举办介绍中国传统节日的演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍你最喜爱的中国传统节日。内容包括:
1.节日介绍;
2.喜欢该节日的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Festival
Ladies and gentlemen,
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【答案】One possible version:
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Festival
Ladies and gentlemen.
It is my honor to give a speech on my favorite traditional Chinese Festival, the Spring Festival.
It starts from the late days of the 12 th lunar month and lasts till the mid-lst lunar month of the next year. Chinese people attach great importance to Spring festival Eve, when all family members eat dinner together and enjoy the Spring Festival gala. As for me, I love the Spring Festival most because during the festival, not only can I set off fireworks, but I can also get lucky money. Besides, it symbolizes unity, prosperity and raw hopes for the future,
Hope the excitement of the celebration will reach more people across the world. Thank you for your listening.
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇介绍中国传统节日的演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表讲话:give a speech→ make a speech
高度重视:attach great importance to→ think highly of
吃晚饭:eat dinner→ have dinner
对我来说:as for me→ to me
2.句式拓展
/同义句转换
原句:It is my honor to give a speech on my favorite traditional Chinese Festival, the Spring Festival.
拓展句:It is my honor to give a speech, which is about my favorite traditional Chinese Festival, the Spring Festival.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Chinese people attach great importance to Spring festival Eve, when all family members eat dinner together and enjoy the Spring Festival gala. (运用了时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Hope the excitement of the celebration will reach more people across the world. (运用了祈使句和宾语从句)
写作话题 推荐一部文学作品
假定你是李华,前不久听了美国文学教授史密斯先生关于“读英语文学作品,提高英语运用能力”的讲座,受益匪浅,但仍有一些问题不是很清楚,所以写信向他求助,内容包括:
1. 请教读文学作品时要注意什么;2. 请他为你推荐几本适合阅读的英语作品。
注意:
1. 词数80左右:2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 信件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 1 student.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 1 student. The other day, I attended your lecture on "Read English literary works to improve your ability to use English" which has benefited me a lot. But in some aspects, I still need your help, so I'm writing to you today.
First, could you please tell me what I should mainly focus on when reading English literary work, vocabulary, grammar, culture or something else? Besides, what's the correct order to deal with the different aspects? What's more, I was wondering whether you could recommend some good works which are suitable for senior 1 students.
I'd appreciate it if you could do me a favour!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写信向美国文学教授史密斯先生请教如何通过读英语文学作品,提高英语运用能力。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时,少量用过去时和现在进行时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 请教读文学作品时要注意什么;
2. 请他为你推荐几本适合阅读的英语作品。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
English literary works; improve your ability to use English; focus on ; different aspects; recommend some good works.be suitable for.
第三步:连词成句
1. I attended your lecture on "Read English literary works to improve your ability to use English" which has benefited me a lot.
2. Could you please tell me what I should mainly focus on when reading English literary work, vocabulary, grammar, culture or something else?
3. I was wondering whether you could recommend some good works which are suitable for senior 1 students.
4. I'd appreciate it if you could do me a favour!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides
3.表转折对比关系:but
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The other day, I attended your lecture on "Read English literary works to improve your ability to use English" which has benefited me a lot.(which引导定语从句。)
[高分句型2]could you please tell me what I should mainly focus on when reading English literary work, vocabulary, grammar, culture or something else?(what引导宾语从句和when引导时间状语从句。)
[高分句型3]What's more, I was wondering whether you could recommend some good works which are suitable for senior 1 students.(whether引导宾语从句和which引导定语从句。)
写作话题 学校生活提案
(2024-2025学年高一上·四川内江·期中)假如你是李华,最近,你的美国笔友Peter写信向你诉说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难,感到非常焦虑。请你根据下面的写作要点给他写一封回信。
1. 理解他的处境,这种情况是正常的;
2. 给他提出几点建议;
3. 希望他采纳你的建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Learning that you are having a hard time learning Chinese, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.
To begin with, don’t worry too much about it and trust yourself. It’s normal for learners to find Chinese difficult in the beginning. Besides, take every chance to practise speaking Chinese. A proverb goes that practice makes perfect. Last but not least, read books and watch TV programs in Chinese and make friends with Chinese native speakers, which provide you more chances to use Chinese.
If you follow my advice, I am sure you will find pleasure in learning Chinese.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Peter写一封回信,就他在汉语学习中遇到了困难,感到非常焦虑的情况提供几点建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion → tip
困难的:difficult → hard
机会:chance → opportunity
提供:provide → offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变为复合句
原句:It’s normal for learners to find Chinese difficult in the beginning.
拓展句:It’s normal that learners find Chinese difficult in the beginning.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Learning that you are having a hard time learning Chinese, I’m writing to offer some suggestions. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Last but not least, read books and watch TV programs in Chinese and make friends with Chinese native speakers, which provide you more chances to use Chinese. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
写作话题 如何处理亲子关系的建议信
(2024-2025学年高一上·湖南衡阳·期中)假设你是 Li Hua,你的好友 Jack写信告诉你说跟父母相处困难,请你给他回一封信。
内容包括:1.给与安慰;2.提出建议。
注意:字数80左右。
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【答案】
Dear Jack,
How are you going these days? I heard that you have trouble getting along with your parents. I can offer some useful suggestions based on my own experience.
First, you should understand your parents because they are busy with their work every day. Talk with your parents when it is convenient. Second, you need to do some activities together with your parents. This will make the relationship closer. Third, share your school life with your parents at dinner. It’s the best time for you to learn about each other’s life.
I hope these will be helpful and you are sure to make a change and live with your parents happily.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。好友Jack来信说与父母相处困难,要求考生给他回信,给予安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:offer → provide
建议:suggestion → proposal/advice
忙于:be busy with → be occupied with
有帮助的:be helpful → be of help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I can offer some useful suggestions based on my own experience.
拓展句:I can offer some useful suggestions which are based on my own experience.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]First, you should understand your parents because they are busy with their work every day. (运用了从属连词because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]I hope these will be helpful and you are sure to make a change and live with your parents happily. (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
写作话题 写一篇如何成为好朋友的日记
(2024-2025学年高一上·安徽亳州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的好友 Paul刚进入高一国际班学习,他想知道如何让自己快速适应高中生活。请你给他写封建议信,内容包括:
1. 你的建议;
2. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Paul,
I’m writing to offer some advice that might help you adapt to your new high school life.
Firstly, I suggest you get involved in school activities that go with your interests. It is a great way to make new friends. Secondly, it is important to have time management strategies, with which you can balance your study and life. Finally, don’t be afraid to ask for help when necessary. High school life can be challenging at times, but it’s also a time of discovery and fun.
I wish you all the best in your high school journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给刚进入高一国际班学习的好友 Paul写信,对于如何快速适应高中生活提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
给予:offer → give
建议:advice → suggestion
参与:get involved in → participate in
最后:finally → at last
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:High school life can be challenging at times, but it’s also a time of discovery and fun.
拓展句:Although high school life can be challenging at times, it’s also a time of discovery and fun.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to offer some advice that might help you adapt to your new high school life.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Secondly, it is important to have time management strategies, with which you can balance your study and life.(运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式to have为真正的主语,以及“介词+关系”引导的非限制性定语从句)
写作话题 怎么看待整形手术
(2024-2025学年高一上·重庆·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Alice来信向你倾诉她深受体重问题的困扰,希望你能给她一些健康减肥的建议。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信:
1. 表示理解和关心;
2. 给出具体的减肥建议(如合理饮食、适量运动、保持良好作息等);
3. 鼓励她保持积极心态,相信自己能够成功。
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I was sorry to hear about your struggles with weight. Please know that I fully understand how difficult it can be to deal with such a sensitive matter, and let me share some advice that might help.
Firstly, focus on a balanced diet. Try to eat more fruits and vegetables, and reduce your intake of sugary foods and drinks. Secondly, regular exercise is crucial. Find an activity you enjoy, such as walking, jogging, or yoga. Aim for at least 30 minutes each time you exercise. Additionally, getting enough sleep is important for weight management. Try to maintain a regular sleep schedule to reduce stress.
Please remember that weight loss is a gradual process that requires patience and persistence. I believe in you and your ability to make positive changes in your life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给英国朋友Alice写一封回信,为深受体重问题困扰的她提供一些健康减肥的建议,需首先对她的情况表示理解和关心,然后可从饮食、运动及作息方面给出具体的建议,最后给予她鼓励。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
困难的:difficult → hard, tough
应对:deal with → handle, tackle
专心于:focus on → concentrate on
关键的:crucial → essential, significant, vital
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Additionally, getting enough sleep is important for weight management. Try to maintain a regular sleep schedule to reduce stress.
拓展句:Additionally, as getting enough sleep is important for weight management, try to maintain a regular sleep schedule to reduce stress.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Please know that I fully understand how difficult it can be to deal with such a sensitive matter, and let me share some advice that might help. (运用了第一个that引导宾语从句、how引导宾语从句、第二个that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Additionally, getting enough sleep is important for weight management. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
写作话题 电影评论
假设你是李华,你要参加一个关于电影评论的征文活动。请你根据所给内容写一篇影评投稿。内容包括:
1. 《阿甘正传》(Forrest Gump)是一部美国电影,改编自Winston Groom写的小说,由Tom Hanks主演;
2. 主人公 Forrest Gump虽然智商低,但他豁达坚强,最终获得成功成为一名橄榄球(football)明星、战争英雄和百万富翁(millionaire);
3. 你对影片的评价及感悟。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Forrest Gump is an American film, which is adapted from the novel written by Winston Groom. Tom Hanks stars in the film. It is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me.
Forrest Gump, the main character, was unfortunately born with a lower IQ, but he is an open-minded person with strong determination. It is unbelievable that he has achieved great success at last. Not only is he a football star, but he is also a war hero and later a millionaire.
The film is filled with a tender feeling and kindness. What’s more, it conveys a message that we should take a positive attitude towards life. No matter what difficulty we meet in life, we should not give up. Besides, the use of the language is striking, which also makes the film a success.
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇关于电影《阿甘正传》的影评。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
担任主演:star → act the leading role
给……留下深刻印象:leave a deep impression on → make a deep impression on/impress greatly
不幸地:unfortunately → unluckily
难以置信地:unbelievable → incredible
充满:be filled with → be full of
2. 句式拓展
两个独立句合并
原句:Forrest Gump is an American film, which is adapted from the novel written by Winston Groom. Tom Hanks stars in the film.
拓展句:Forrest Gump is an American film, which is adapted from the novel written by Winston Groom, with Tom Hanks starring in the film.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me.(使用了that引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】No matter what difficulty we meet in life, we should not give up. (使用了No matter what引导让步状语从句)
写作话题 关于锻炼身体的建议信
(2024-2025学年高一上·浙江嘉兴·阶段练习)假如你是李华,上周你校学生会组织开展了“运动健康周”活动。请你为校英语报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;2. 活动反响和意义。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Sports and Fitness Week
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【答案】
Sports and Fitness Week
Last week, our Student Union organized the “Sports and Health Week,” which aimed to promote physical fitness and a healthy lifestyle among teachers and students.
A variety of activities were held, including morning exercises, basketball matches, and fitness challenges. Additionally, health seminars and a fun run encouraged everyone to stay active.
The event was highly praised by both students and staff. Not only did it provide a chance for us to get into shape, but it also made us realize the importance of incorporating exercise into our busy daily routines.
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份为校英语报撰写一篇关于“运动健康周”活动的报道。文章需要包括活动的内容、反响和意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
此外:additionally → furthermore
提供:provide → offer
重要性:importance → significance
机会:chance → opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A variety of activities were held, including morning exercises, basketball matches, and fitness challenges.
拓展句:A variety of activities were held, which included morning exercises, basketball matches, and fitness challenges.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Last week, our Student Union organized the “Sports and Health Week,” which aimed to promote physical fitness and a healthy lifestyle among teachers and students.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only did it provide a chance for us to get into shape, but it also made us realize the importance of incorporating exercise into our busy daily routines.(运用了not only...but also...连接并列结构及not only位于句首时的部分倒装)
写作话题 介绍中国传统节日
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。为弘扬中国文化,加强国际交流,帮助外国友人更好的了解中国,今年学生会将围绕“中国文化”举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛。作为组织者,你将在演讲比赛开始前发言,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
1.说明活动的主题及意义;
2.介绍中国文化的博大精深,包括语言文字、民族艺术、传统节日等;
3.预祝演讲比赛圆满成功,感谢大家的积极参与。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100:
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文章中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
参考词汇:博大精深extensive and profound
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good afternoon! Welcome to this year’s English Speech Competition._______________________________
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【答案】
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good afternoon! Welcome to this year’s English Speech Competition. As the chairman of the Student Union, I am greatly honored to share some aspects about it with you as follows.
Firstly, the theme of this speech competition is Chinese culture, which should be mainly introduced to the foreigners. And it goes without saying that holding this activity is very meaningful to us. By doing so, we can not only carry forward Chinese culture, but also it can enhance cultural confidence.
In addition, we are supposed to introduce that Chinese culture is extensive and profound. For one thing, we have unique language and our national arts are colorful. For another, Chinese traditional festivals have a long history.
In the end, I sincerely hope that this year’s activity will be held very successfully. And thank you for your active participation.
That’s all. Thank you.
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为“中国文化”英语演讲比赛的组织者,写一篇赛前发言稿,内容包括:1.说明活动的主题及意义;2.介绍中国文化的博大精深,包括语言文字、民族艺术、传统节日等;3.预祝演讲比赛圆满成功,感谢大家的积极参与。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly → first of all
组织:hold → organize
应该:be supposed to do → ought to do
真诚地:sincerely → genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变倒装句
原句:By doing so, we can not only carry forward Chinese culture, but also it can enhance cultural confidence.
拓展句:By doing so, not only can we carry forward Chinese culture, but also it can enhance cultural confidence.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Firstly, the theme of this speech competition is Chinese culture, which should be mainly introduced to the foreigners. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】In the end, I sincerely hope that this year’s activity will be held very successfully. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
写作话题 推荐一部文学作品
你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣,并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.书的题目和作者;2.书的主要内容;3.你的推荐理由。
注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am fairly a literature lover myself.
I recommend a well-known Chinese book titled The Ordinary World to you. The book was written by a famous Chinese writer, Lu Yao. It centers on the life and destinies of three families of Sun, Tian and Jin in a village. It pictures the tough process of building up a better and wealthier life during the very beginning of reform and openness in China. Reading the book, you will be greatly moved by the courage and spirit of the main characters. That’s why I make this recommendation.
I am looking forward to your view of this book.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣,并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请考生按要求给他回信推荐中国文学作品。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常:more than → very
著名的:well-known → famous
描绘:picture → depict/describe
艰难的:tough → difficult
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I recommend a well-known Chinese book titled The Ordinary World to you.
拓展句:I recommend a well-known Chinese book to you, whose title is The Ordinary World.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am fairly a literature lover myself. (运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句和从属连词because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】That’s why I make this recommendation. (运用了连接副词why连接的表语从句)
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