内容正文:
话题写作培优册
chancetoimprovemyspokenEnglish.SoImadeaneforttopractice.Finaly,Imadeitandwas
highlypraised.
Infact,itismypositiveatitudethatbringsoutthebestinmealthetime.
Passage4
DearEric,
Thanksforyouremail.Imverygladtotelyousomethingaboutmydreamjob.Ihavedreamed
ofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisagreatprofessionandIenjoy
stayingwithchildren.Besides,Iwanttobeateacherbecauseofthepowerofanexample—MissLi,my
Englishteacher.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglishandinfluencesmealot.Istilrememberthat
onceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.Shecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegood
waystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Sincethen,Ihave
madeupmymindtobeagoodteacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.AlthoughIknowitisnoteasyto
beateacher,Iwilmakemoreefortstorealizemydream.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiPing
©4%¬®¯«ª(2024)
常见题目表述
①我们都收到过礼物,每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么,你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢?
对你来说,它有什么特殊的意义?请以“A/An Gift”为题,写一篇不少于70词的英语
短文。
②互相帮助是一种美德,请结合下列思维导图,以“HelpingOthersMakesMe ”为题,写一
篇不少于70词的短文,谈谈自己的一次助人为乐的经历及感受。
③假如你是李辉,你校官网英文版块最近开设了一个“MovingMoments”的栏目,现面向全校学生
征集稿件。请结合下面的征稿启事,用英语写一篇短文投稿,描述一个令你难忘的感人瞬间。
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④尝试是一种积极的生活态度,它让我们在面对困难时不退缩,不逃避,而是积极地去寻找解决问
题的方法。只有敢于尝试,我们才能突破自我,实现更大的成就。请你结合自身体验描述一次挑
战自我的经历。内容包括:
1.你曾经尝试过做什么?
2.你是如何突破自我的?
3.这次尝试给你的启示是什么?
⑤在成长的道路上,我们总会收获很多助力,让我们不断前行。这些助力可能来自一位家人、一位
朋友,也有可能是一次挑战、一次失败……。请以“ Bring(s)MePower”为题,结合下图
提示,写一篇不少于70词的英语短文,分享你的一次经历。
⑥生活的长河中,每个人都是一名独特的航行者,追寻着属于自己的梦想和荣光。在这段旅程中,
我们经历了无数的挑战和困难,也收获了无数的欢笑和泪水。其中,总会有一件事情让我们深感
骄傲与自豪。校报英语编辑部正开展以“OneThingImProudof”为题的征文活动。请你结合提示
中的问题写一篇短文投稿。
常见经历角度
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话题写作培优册
作文框架
开头:以简短的话语引入自己即将要介绍/分享的经历;
中间:讲述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果,即五个“W”(what,who,when,where,
why)和一个“H”(how);
结尾:对上述经历进行总结,表明自己在此次经历中学到了什么或以后会怎么做。
高分模板
One Experience
Imgladtoshare (我的经历).
WhenIfirstwentintojuniorhighschool,I (遇到的事情)because (原因).I
was (感受)anddidntknowwhattodo. (人物)encouragedmeandgavemelotsof
helpfuladvice.Firstofal, (我的行为①),whichhelpedto (这样做的结果①).
Second, (我的行为②).Inthisway,Inotonly butalso (这样做的结果
②).Daybyday,Icould (可以做的事情)andI (现在的行为)now.
Throughtheexperience,Ihaverealizedthat (感悟).
优秀范文记背
Passage1(2024陕西真题范文)
HiTom,
Howsitgoing?Idliketosharetheinterestingexperienceofmylaborhomeworkwithyou.
Thisterm,myteacherassignedmeaprojecttogrowaplantandrecorditschanges.Ichosea
sunflowerandnameditSunny.Iputtheseedtoanicecontainerandcarefulyrecordeditschanges.Each
day,IwateredandlookedafterSunnywithcare.Itwasfascinatingtoseehowitslowlygrewtaler
andstronger.WhenIsawthesunflowergrowwel,Igotastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.Andthe
funnyshapeofthesunflowermademedeeplyinterestedinit.
Theinterestingexperiencetaughtmepatienceandthebeautyofnature.Ihopeyoutrythistoo!
Canyoushareyourinterestingexperiencewithme?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
LiBin
Passage2
AValuableGift
Ivereceivedlotsofpresents,butthemostvaluablegiftIvereceivedisthebookTheOldManand
theSeafrommymother.
Itwasmy13thbirthday.Ifailedtopasstheexamsomedaysagoandfeltrealyupsetthosedays.My
motherwantedtocheermeupandencouragedmetobestrong,soshegavethebooktome.Iwasso
surprisedandhappytogetit.AfterIfinishedreadingthebook,Ihavelearnedthatwhenwemeetwith
dificulties,weshouldnevergiveup.
Fromthenon,Ikeeptryingmybesttostudyhard.IthinkIlgrowupwithitbecauseitisnotonly
abookbutalsomymotherslove.SoIconsideritthemostvaluablegift.
Passage3
HelpingOthersMakesMeHappy
Helpingothersisarealyhappythingforme.
ItwasonasnowyafternoonwhenIwaswalkingbackhome.Justatthestreetcorner,Ifoundan
oldmansitingontheground.Hewascoldandtired.Iaskedhimwhatwasthemater.Hetoldmethat
hehadnomoneyforfoodandhewasveryhungry.Iusedmypocketmoneytobuyabowlofnoodlesfor
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him.Heatethenoodlesquicklyandthankedmeverymuch.AndIgavehimalofmypocketmoney
then.Seeinghisthankfulsmile,IfelthappythatIcouldhelpamaninneed.Fromthenon,Ialways
rememberedtospendmoneyonsomemeaningfulthingsandalwaystriedtohelpthepoorandtheold.
Ibelievehelpingothersinneedisoneofmypleasures.
Passage4
AnUnforgetableMovingMoment
IlneverforgetthefoursecondmovingmomentwhenItooktheP.E.examforhighschool.
Ienteredthe800meterracethatday.Unluckily,Ifelontheplayground.Helplessandworied,I
wantedtogiveup.Afewsecondslater,agirlgavemeahandandencouragedmetogetup.Atlast,I
finishedtheraceandthegirlgotfulmarksalthoughshedlostfoursecondsbecauseofhelpingme.
Iwilneverforgetthefourseconds.Afoursecondmomentdoesntseemtochangeanything,butit
teachesmenevertogiveup.
Passage5
Tryingisapositiveatitudetowardslife.Youwouldneverknowwhatyoucangetuntilyou
haveatry.
Lastterm,therewasaspeechcompetitioninourschool.Ineverenteredaspeechcompetitionbe
causeIwasafraidtospeakinpublic.Withtheencouragementfrommyparents,Idecidedtogiveitatry.
Toprepareforthecompetition,Istudiedsomespeechvideoscarefuly.ThenIwrotemyownspeech,
andpracticeditagainandagain.Finaly,Igaveanexcelentperformanceandwonthethirdplace.
Fromthisexperience,Ivelearnedthatitsmeaningfultotrysomethingnew.Itcanhelpus
findanddevelopourhiddentalentsandbecomemoreconfident.
Passage6
OneThingImProudof
ThethingIamproudofisthatIvisitedsomeoldpeopletomakethemhappy.
ItwasonafineautumnafternoonwhenIwasinGrade7.Inoticedanoldgrandmasitingsilentlyun
derataltreeinfrontofherhouse,lookingrathersadandlonely.Iwenttohaveachatwithher.After
ourshortconversation,Igottoknowthattheoldwomanssonsanddaughterswerealfarawayfromher,
makingalivinginbigcitiesandshefeltlonely.Ifeltsympatheticforher,andIrealizedthattherewere
actualymanyoldpeoplelikeher.Soagoodideaoccuredtomesuddenly.
Igatheredmyfriendsandorganizedthemtovisittheseoldpeopleonebyone.Wesangsongs,
dancedandtoldjokestothem,whichmadethemhappy.Oneofthemwassomovedthathertearsfel
down.
Caringforthosearoundusandspreadingourhappinessarewhatwehavelearntthatday.I
madeit,andIfeltrealyproudofmyselfbecauseIbringjoyandhappinesstothosewhoneededmost.
©8%°0±j²(2020)
常见题目表述
①近来,学校校刊就学生参与家务劳动的情况进行了问卷调查,下图展示了家长的意见与观点。你
对做家务有什么看法?请结合图示信息,根据写作要求写一篇英语短文,表达你的观点。
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