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中考命题角度探究
1.陕西近6年中考:暂未考查
2.全国视野:近三年全国考查角度:①新科技的出现与应用;②新科技/人工智能利弊谈;③个人隐
私与网络安全;④对未来生活的畅想
3. 热点角度:人工智能利弊谈;对ChatGPT的看法;个人隐私与网络安全
教材单元链接
人教版
九(全)Unit6发明
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素材积累
短语与搭配
角度1 信息技术
1.surftheInternet网上冲浪
2.textmessage(手机)短信
3.keepintouchwith与……保持联系
4.searchforinformation查找信息
角度2 作用与影响
1.beusedtodosth.被用来做某事
2.takeadvantageof利用
3.inthefieldof在……领域
4.changeoneslife改变某人的生活
5.withthedevelopmentof随着……的发展
6.makealotofprogress取得很大的进步
7.haveagreatinfluenceon对……产生巨大影响
角度3 对某科技或发明的看法
1.Frommypointofview/Inmyopinion/Asfor
me,爥 在我看来,……
2.Alinal/Inshort/Inaword/Inconclusion,I
believe爥 总之,我相信……
句型
开头句
1.TheInternetischangingtheworld.
2.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology
hasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.
3.TheinventionofChatGPThasmadeAIahot
topicamongpeopleinoursociety.
中间句
角度1 某发明/科技的功能
1.Onlinelearningalsoprovidesmewithrichlearn
ingresources.
2.Homerobotshelpwithhouseworksothatpeople
havemoretimetodothingstheyenjoy.
3.Assoonaspeoplethrowawaysomewasteon
thestreet,theywilbecleanedupbythedust
binatonce.
4.Theelectriccarcannotonlysaveenergybut
alsoprotecttheenvironment.
角度2 人工智能利弊谈
1.ArtificialInteligencecanchatwithpeople,and
itcanhelpsolvepeoplesproblems.Forexam
ple,itcanhelpthestudentsdohomeworkcor
rectlyandsolvethesubjectproblems.Besides,
itcandesignpicturesinashorttime.
2.However,italsohasmanydisadvantages.Ifwe
alwaysdependonit,itwilmakeuslazyin
mind.Itsappearancewilreducepeoplesjob
opportunities.
角度3 个人隐私与网络安全
1.Firstofal,protectourpersonalinformation.
Dontgiveawayourpersonalinformationlike
ournamesoraddresses.
2.Second,wemustntclickonanystrangelinksor
emailsinordertoavoidmoneyloss.
3.Third,nevermeetstrangerswechatwithonline
andneverbelievewhatthestrangerssayonline.
角度4 未来生活
1.Nooneknowswhatthefuturewilbelike.
【人教版八(上)U7】
2.Thepublictransportinthefutureisverycom
fortableandproducesnoairpolution.
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3.Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,morepeo
plewouldbesenttoMars.
4.Ihopethattherewilbemoreeschoolssothat
childrencanstudyontheInternetathome.
结尾句
角度1 表达自己的观点
1.Inmyopinion,homerobotscanmakeourlives
easier.
2.Alinal,smartproductshavebothadvantages
andshortcomings.Ibelievethatifweusethem
corectly,theywilbringusmoreconvenientlife
inthefuture.
角度2 表达期望
1.Wewillivehappilyandmoreconvenientlywith
thehelpofAI.
2.Asastudent,Iwilstudyhardtogetintoatop
university.Inthisway,Icangetmorechances
tomakeagreatcontributiontoChinassci
enceandtechnologyindustry.
3.Onlywhenweobeytherulesabovecanwe
buildahealthyonlineworld.
俗语/谚语
1.Everythinghastwosides.凡事都有两面性。
2.Thequestionmarkisthekeytoanyscience.问
号是开启任何一门科学的钥匙。
3.Technologyisadoubleedgedsword.科技是把
双刃剑。
针对训练
1.Iwanttoinventaspecialcar.Thecarcanswim
inthewaterandrunontheland.(用 which引
导的定语从句升格句子)
2.Istartthecaranditcanflylikeabird.(用 as
soonas引导的时间状语从句升格句子)
3.Thecarischeapandenvironmentalyfriendly.
(用notonly爥butalso爥升格句子)
4.Changetheseatsinthecarintobeds.(用被动
语态升格句子)
5.Youcancreateorinventsomething.Youknow
moreabouttheknowledgefirst.(用 Onlywhen
引导的倒装句升格句子)
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假设你是李华,学校科技节将举办题目为“AIinOurLife”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写
一篇英语演讲稿,包含以下内容:
要求:
1.文章应包含导图所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
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话题写作培优册
AIinOurLife
Dearteachersandstudents,
Aswealknow,AIhasbecomemoreandmorepopularinourdailylifeandhaschangedourlives
greatly.
Thatsal.Thankyouforyourlistening!
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②人称:介绍AI对我们学习生活的影响时,用第 人称,介绍“我”对于AI的看法时,用
第 人称;
③时态:讲述 AI给我们的生活带来的帮助和影响时以 为主,介绍 AI的未来发展
用 。
二、构思框架
Beginning→ 引入话题:从学习及生活等方面介绍AI改变了我们的生活
参考句型:①makesth.+adj.;②haveproblemsin(doing)sth.;③bring爥 to爥
例:Wehaveanyproblemsinourstudies.Wewilasksmartphoneforhelp.(用if引导的条件
状语从句升格句子)
Body→ 具体介绍对于AI的一些担忧
参考句型:①withAItechnologybeingwidelyused,爥;②loseonesabilitytodosth.
例:Studentslosetheirabilitiestodothingsbythemselves.SomestudentsdependonAItoo
much.(用sothat引导的结果状语从句升格句子)
Ending→结语:自己对AI的一些看法
参考句型:①justas爥;②Ibelievethat爥
例:WeuseAIcorectly.AIwilbringusmoreconvenientlifeinthefuture.(用if引导的
条件状语从句升格句子)
三、连句成篇
AIinOurLife
Dearteachersandstudents,
Aswealknow,AIhasbecomemoreandmorepopularinourdailylifeandhaschangedourlife
greatly.
Thatsal.Thankyouforyourlistening!
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假如你是李华,你去参观了有关智能厨房的
科技展。请根据以下内容写一封电子邮件告诉
你的英国朋友Tom你的所见所闻及想法。
SmartKitchen
Whatdoesithave?
(至少写出4点,可选择以下内容或自由发挥)
·poweredbycleanenergy
·smartfridge(beconnectedto,shop)
·smartscreen(byvoice,playmusic,show
menus爥)
·smartcooker(abalanceddiet)
·safetysystem(keep爥safe)
·smarthousekeeper(control)
Youropinions:爥(请至少写2点)
要求:
1.文章应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,可适当
发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校
名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总
词数。)
DearTom,
Ilearnedalotaboutsmartkitchensatatech
exhibition.
Yours,
LiHua
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话题7 良好的人际关系与人际交往
一阶 素材积累与训练
针对训练
1.Havingfriendsiscoolbecausewecanhavefunandshare
secretswiththem.
2.Thereisnodoubtthatitisimportanttotreatfriendswith
kindnessandrespect.
3.Wheneveryourfriendsareintrouble,youshouldbeready
tohelpthem.
4.Althoughourmathteacherisstrictwithusinclass,sheis
verykindtousafterclass.
二阶 典例探究明思路
写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一;三 ③一般现在时
④importance;ways;ending
二、Beginning:Bydiscussingwithteammembers,wecan
comeupwithbeterideas.
Body:Trustourteammates,whichhelpsdevelopteamspirit.
Ending:Teamworkplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.
三、
BeaGoodTeamMember
ThereisanoldsayinginChina,“Unityisstrength.”It
telspeopletheimportanceofteamwork.Bydiscussingwith
teammembers,wecancomeupwithbeterideas.Buthow
canwebeagoodteammember?Herearesomesuggestions
foryou.
First,communicatemorewitheachother.Thereisno
doubtthatcommunicationcanhelpusunderstandourteam
matesbeter.Weshouldlistentoothersactivelyandexpress
ourthoughtsbravely.Second,weshouldsupportandhelp
othersinneed.Finaly,trustourteammates,whichhelps
developteamspirit.
Alinal,teamworkplaysanimportantroleinourdaily
life.Letsbegoodteammembersandworkweltogether.
三阶 写作实战提能力
A(n)UnforgetableTalk
Ihavequiteafewunforgetabletalksandthemostunfor
getableoneisbetweenmygrandfatherandme.
Oneevening,mygrandfatherstartedaconversationto
sharehislifelessonsashewasmovingtoanothercity.We
discusseddiferentkindsoftopics,fromtheimportanceofed
ucationtothevalueoffamily.Herecaledhisyoungerdays,
thechalengeshefaced,andtheachievementshemade.His
wordswerefulofwisdom,encouragingmetofacelifewith
courage.
Forme,thistalkwasmorethanjustanexchangeof
words.Itwasavaluablemomentthattaughtmealotabout
beingsmartandmakinggoodchoices.Itmademerespect
andlovehimevenmore.Hiswordsalwaysstaywithmeand
helpmedecidewhattodo.Ikeepthinkingaboutourtalkand
howtobewiselikehim.
话题8 传统文化———讲好中国故事
一阶 素材积累与训练
针对训练
1.ThereasonwhyIlovedumplingsbestisthattheymean
goodluckandwealth.
2.Itsthetimethatwevisitourrelativesandfriendstogive
thembestwishes.
3.Chinaisoneoftheoldestcountriesintheworld,andit
hasalonghistory.
4.RedislovedbymostChinesepeoplebecauseitisseenas
asymbolofgoodluck.
二阶 典例探究明思路
写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②三;一 ③一般过去时;一般现在时
二、Body:Therabbitransofastthathequicklylefttheturtle
farbehind.;Theturtleinsistedonpulinghimselfslowlyto
theend,thoughhewasquitetired.
Ending:Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriouslynotonlyinmy
study,butalsoinmylifeinthefuture.
三、分阶范文
1.①高阶范文内容更加丰富,增加了一些细节描述,如
“Amomentofpridewentthroughhismind”和“theturtle
insistedon”,使得故事更加生动;②高阶范文故事的寓
意更加深刻,不仅强调了认真对待任务的重要性,还
提到了通过努力可以实现看似不可能的事情;
2.高阶范文结构完整,有明确的引入、正文和结尾,使得
文章更加流畅;
3.①高阶范文逻辑清晰,通过增加细节描述和对故事寓
意的深入分析,增强了文章的说服力;②高阶范文通
过对比兔子和乌龟的行为,突出了故事的寓意,使得
读者更容易接受和理解;
4.①使用so爥that爥引导的结果状语从句升格句式[高
阶范文第二段第二句];②使用多种复合句:宾语从
句,条件状语从句,定语从句,使文章表达更多样[高
阶范文第三段第一句]。
三阶 写作实战提能力
DearHenry,
Howareyoudoingthesedays?Imgladtohearyoure
interestedinChinesesugarpainting.Today,Idliketoshare
somethingaboutitwithyou.
SugarpaintingisaformoftraditionalChinesefolkhand
work.Asitsnameshows,itisapaintingmadeofsugar.
DatingbacktotheMingDynasty,ithasalonghistory.Sugar
paintingistheperfectcombinationofsugarandpainting,so
peoplecannotonlyadmireitbutalsoeatit.Itisoftenmade
intodiferentshapeslikedragonsandbuterflies.Asasymbol
oftraditionalChineseculture,sugarpaintingislovedbypeo
pleofalages.Besides,itisalsowelcomedinmanyforeign
countries.
Ihopeitwilbepasseddowninthefuture.Andnexttime
youcometoChina,wecanlearnhowtomakeittogether.
Yours,
LiHua
话题9 科学技术与工程,人类发明与创新
一阶 素材积累与训练
1.Iwanttoinventaspecialcarwhichcanswiminthewater
andrunontheland.
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2.AssoonasIstartthecar,itcanflylikeabird.
3.Thecarisnotonlycheapbutalsoenvironmentalyfriend
ly.
4.Seatsinthecarcanbechangedintobeds.
5.Onlywhenyouknowmoreabouttheknowledgefirstcan
youcreateorinventsomething.
二阶 典例探究明思路
写作剖析
一、①应用文 ②三;一 ③一般现在时;一般将来时
二、Beginning:Ifwehaveanyproblemsinourstudies,we
wilasksmartphoneforhelp.
Body:SomestudentsdependonAItoomuchsothattheywil
losetheirabilitiestodothingsbythemselves.
Ending:IfweuseAIcorectly,itwilbringusmoreconven
ientlifeinthefuture.
三、
AIinOurLife
Dearteachersandstudents,
Aswealknow,AIhasbecomemoreandmorepopular
inourdailylifeandhaschangedourlifegreatly.Wecansee
diferentkindsofAIproductsinourdailylife.Forexample,
smartphonecanmakeworkandstudymoreeficient.Ifwe
haveanyproblemsinourstudies,wewilasksmartphonesfor
help.Cleaningrobotscanhelpwithhousework.Theyal
bringgreatconvenienceandprogresstooursociety.
However,withAItechnologybeingwidelyused,many
workerslosetheirjobs.Also,somestudentsdependonAI
toomuchsothattheylosetheirabilitiestodothingsbythem
selves.
Alinal,justaseverycoinhasitstwosides,AIprod
uctshavebothadvantagesandshortcomings.Ibelievethatif
weuseAIcorectly,itwilbringusmoreconvenientlifein
thefuture.
Thatsal.Thankyouforyourlistening!
三阶 写作实战提能力
DearTom,
Ilearnedalotaboutsmartkitchensatatechexhibition.
Theentirekitchenispoweredbycleanenergy.There
aremanysmartappliancesinthekitchen.Thesmartfridge
canbeconnectedtowirelessnetworksandusedforshopping.
Inaddition,thesmartscreenintherefrigeratorhasmany
functions,suchasplayingmusicanddisplayingmenusby
voice.Therearealsolotsofsmartcookersinthekitchento
makesurewehaveabalanceddiet.Thewholekitchensecur
itysystemisverygood,anditcankeepussafe.Itscon
troledbyaninteligenthousekeeper.IrealyhopethatIcan
havesuchasmartkitcheninthefuture,andIthinkitisvery
convenientandcool.
Whatdoyouthinkofit?Wouldyouliketohaveasmart
kitchen,ordoyoupreferthetraditionalwayofcooking?
Yours,
LiHua
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话题10 环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为
一阶 素材积累与训练
针对训练
1.Firstly,Iwiltakepublictransportationasmuchaspossi
blewhenIgoout.
2.Itsnecessaryformetosavewaterbywateringtheflowers
withusedwater.
3.Itisbetertousechinacupsandclothbagsbecausethey
canbeusedmanytimes.
4.ThemoreIrecycle,thecleanertheearthwilbecome.
5.Usingtoomanyplasticbagsisharmfulto/doesharmto/is
badforourenvironment.
二阶 典例探究明思路
写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一 ③一般现在时;一般将来时
④Greenlife;Greentrafic;Greenhomeland
二、
要点1:Whenweleavearoom,weshouldturnofthelights.
要点2:Whenwegooutside,wecantakepublictransport,
suchastakingthesubwayandtakingabus.
要点3:Weshouldalsotakepartinmorecommunityactivities
tomakeourcitycleanandbeautiful.
三、
LetsBuildaGreenCityTogether!
Aswealknow,theenvironmentisimportanttous.So
itsourdutytoprotectit.Agreencityisthekeytoahealthy
life.Letstakeactionnow!
First,itsimportanttohaveagreenlife.Weshouldsave
waterandelectricity.Whenweleavearoom,weshouldturn
ofthelights.Weshouldntthrowrubbisheverywhere.Sec
ond,thegreentraficisgoodforreducingairpolution.
Whenwegooutside,wecantakepublictransport,suchas
takingthesubwayandtakingabus.Third,tomakeourcity
greener,weshouldplantmoretrees.Weshouldalsotake
partinmorecommunityactivitiestomakeourcitycleanand
beautiful.
Ibelievetheskywilbebluer,themountainswilbe
greenerandtheriverswilbeclearer.Ourcourtrywilberic
herandmorebeautiful.Letsbuildagreencitytogether!
三阶 写作实战提能力
Aswealknow,animalsarepeoplesfriends.However,
thenumberofwildanimalsisgetingsmalerandsmalerbe
causewildanimalslivingspaceisbecominglessandless.
Also,manywildanimalsnowcantfindenoughfoodtoeat.
Atthesametime,peoplearekilinganimalsfortheirfur,
teeth,bonesandotherpartsofthebodies.
Whatshouldwedotoprotectwildanimals?Firstly,we
shouldstopbuyingfurcoatsandotherproductsmadefrom
wildanimals.Secondly,weshouldatachgreatimportanceto
protectingwildanimals.Lastly,thegovernmentcanalso
makesomelawstostoppeoplefromhurtingthem.
Alinal,letsworktogethertoprotectwildanimalsand
keepthebalancebetweenhumansandnature.
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