第二部分 话题9 科学技术与工程,人类发明与创新-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册(陕西专用)

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 话题写作培优册    PQ 9 %—a"˜r™šfˆ›}œrž 中考命题角度探究 1.陕西近6年中考:暂未考查 2.全国视野:近三年全国考查角度:①新科技的出现与应用;②新科技/人工智能利弊谈;③个人隐 私与网络安全;④对未来生活的畅想 3. 热点角度:人工智能利弊谈;对ChatGPT的看法;个人隐私与网络安全 教材单元链接 人教版 九(全)Unit6发明 !" #$%&'() 素材积累 短语与搭配 角度1 信息技术 1.surftheInternet网上冲浪 2.textmessage(手机)短信 3.keepintouchwith与……保持联系 4.searchforinformation查找信息 角度2 作用与影响 1.beusedtodosth.被用来做某事 2.takeadvantageof利用 3.inthefieldof在……领域 4.changeoneslife改变某人的生活 5.withthedevelopmentof随着……的发展 6.makealotofprogress取得很大的进步 7.haveagreatinfluenceon对……产生巨大影响 角度3 对某科技或发明的看法 1.Frommypointofview/Inmyopinion/Asfor me,爥 在我看来,…… 2.Alinal/Inshort/Inaword/Inconclusion,I believe爥 总之,我相信…… 句型 开头句 1.TheInternetischangingtheworld. 2.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology hasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife. 3.TheinventionofChatGPThasmadeAIahot topicamongpeopleinoursociety. 中间句 角度1 某发明/科技的功能 1.Onlinelearningalsoprovidesmewithrichlearn ingresources. 2.Homerobotshelpwithhouseworksothatpeople havemoretimetodothingstheyenjoy. 3.Assoonaspeoplethrowawaysomewasteon thestreet,theywilbecleanedupbythedust binatonce. 4.Theelectriccarcannotonlysaveenergybut alsoprotecttheenvironment. 角度2 人工智能利弊谈 1.ArtificialInteligencecanchatwithpeople,and itcanhelpsolvepeoplesproblems.Forexam ple,itcanhelpthestudentsdohomeworkcor rectlyandsolvethesubjectproblems.Besides, itcandesignpicturesinashorttime. 2.However,italsohasmanydisadvantages.Ifwe alwaysdependonit,itwilmakeuslazyin mind.Itsappearancewilreducepeoplesjob opportunities. 角度3 个人隐私与网络安全 1.Firstofal,protectourpersonalinformation. Dontgiveawayourpersonalinformationlike ournamesoraddresses. 2.Second,wemustntclickonanystrangelinksor emailsinordertoavoidmoneyloss. 3.Third,nevermeetstrangerswechatwithonline andneverbelievewhatthestrangerssayonline. 角度4 未来生活 1.Nooneknowswhatthefuturewilbelike. 【人教版八(上)U7】 2.Thepublictransportinthefutureisverycom                                                     fortableandproducesnoairpolution. 34   众相原创 赋能中考 陕西英语(RJ) 3.Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,morepeo plewouldbesenttoMars. 4.Ihopethattherewilbemoreeschoolssothat childrencanstudyontheInternetathome. 结尾句 角度1 表达自己的观点 1.Inmyopinion,homerobotscanmakeourlives easier. 2.Alinal,smartproductshavebothadvantages andshortcomings.Ibelievethatifweusethem corectly,theywilbringusmoreconvenientlife inthefuture. 角度2 表达期望 1.Wewillivehappilyandmoreconvenientlywith thehelpofAI. 2.Asastudent,Iwilstudyhardtogetintoatop university.Inthisway,Icangetmorechances tomakeagreatcontributiontoChinassci enceandtechnologyindustry. 3.Onlywhenweobeytherulesabovecanwe buildahealthyonlineworld. 俗语/谚语 1.Everythinghastwosides.凡事都有两面性。 2.Thequestionmarkisthekeytoanyscience.问 号是开启任何一门科学的钥匙。 3.Technologyisadoubleedgedsword.科技是把 双刃剑。 针对训练 1.Iwanttoinventaspecialcar.Thecarcanswim inthewaterandrunontheland.(用 which引 导的定语从句升格句子)     2.Istartthecaranditcanflylikeabird.(用 as soonas引导的时间状语从句升格句子)     3.Thecarischeapandenvironmentalyfriendly. (用notonly爥butalso爥升格句子)     4.Changetheseatsinthecarintobeds.(用被动 语态升格句子)   5.Youcancreateorinventsomething.Youknow moreabouttheknowledgefirst.(用 Onlywhen 引导的倒装句升格句子)                                                      *" +,-./01   假设你是李华,学校科技节将举办题目为“AIinOurLife”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写 一篇英语演讲稿,包含以下内容: 要求: 1.文章应包含导图所给的关键信息,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。) 44  话题写作培优册 AIinOurLife Dearteachersandstudents, Aswealknow,AIhasbecomemoreandmorepopularinourdailylifeandhaschangedourlives greatly.     Thatsal.Thankyouforyourlistening! 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体:本文是一篇      ; ②人称:介绍AI对我们学习生活的影响时,用第      人称,介绍“我”对于AI的看法时,用 第      人称; ③时态:讲述 AI给我们的生活带来的帮助和影响时以      为主,介绍 AI的未来发展 用      。 二、构思框架 Beginning→ 引入话题:从学习及生活等方面介绍AI改变了我们的生活     参考句型:①makesth.+adj.;②haveproblemsin(doing)sth.;③bring爥 to爥     例:Wehaveanyproblemsinourstudies.Wewilasksmartphoneforhelp.(用if引导的条件     状语从句升格句子)                                            Body→ 具体介绍对于AI的一些担忧     参考句型:①withAItechnologybeingwidelyused,爥;②loseonesabilitytodosth.     例:Studentslosetheirabilitiestodothingsbythemselves.SomestudentsdependonAItoo     much.(用sothat引导的结果状语从句升格句子)                                                                                       Ending→结语:自己对AI的一些看法     参考句型:①justas爥;②Ibelievethat爥     例:WeuseAIcorectly.AIwilbringusmoreconvenientlifeinthefuture.(用if引导的     条件状语从句升格句子)                                                                        三、连句成篇 AIinOurLife Dearteachersandstudents, Aswealknow,AIhasbecomemoreandmorepopularinourdailylifeandhaschangedourlife greatly.               Thatsal.Thankyouforyourlistening! 54   众相原创 赋能中考 陕西英语(RJ) 四、反思与评价 Howwelcanyoudothesethings? Verywel OK Needswork ·Icankeepmywritingpaperclean. ·IcanusecorectEnglishexpressionsforwriting. ·Icanwritealthepoints. ·Myarticleisclearlystructured,welorganizedand comprehensiveincontent(内容全面). □ □ □ □ □ □ □ □ □ □ □ □ Overalcomment Selfassessment Peerreview Teachersassessment Totalscore:     /15 2" 3456789   假如你是李华,你去参观了有关智能厨房的 科技展。请根据以下内容写一封电子邮件告诉 你的英国朋友Tom你的所见所闻及想法。 SmartKitchen Whatdoesithave? (至少写出4点,可选择以下内容或自由发挥) ·poweredbycleanenergy ·smartfridge(beconnectedto,shop) ·smartscreen(byvoice,playmusic,show menus爥) ·smartcooker(abalanceddiet) ·safetysystem(keep爥safe) ·smarthousekeeper(control) Youropinions:爥(请至少写2点) 要求: 1.文章应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,可适当 发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校 名和地名等); 4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总 词数。) DearTom, Ilearnedalotaboutsmartkitchensatatech exhibition.                                 Yours,                                             LiHua 64   众相原创 赋能中考 VWZ[ 话题7 良好的人际关系与人际交往 一阶 素材积累与训练 针对训练 1.Havingfriendsiscoolbecausewecanhavefunandshare secretswiththem. 2.Thereisnodoubtthatitisimportanttotreatfriendswith kindnessandrespect. 3.Wheneveryourfriendsareintrouble,youshouldbeready tohelpthem. 4.Althoughourmathteacherisstrictwithusinclass,sheis verykindtousafterclass. 二阶 典例探究明思路 写作剖析 一、①说明文 ②一;三 ③一般现在时  ④importance;ways;ending 二、Beginning:Bydiscussingwithteammembers,wecan comeupwithbeterideas. Body:Trustourteammates,whichhelpsdevelopteamspirit. Ending:Teamworkplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife. 三、 BeaGoodTeamMember ThereisanoldsayinginChina,“Unityisstrength.”It telspeopletheimportanceofteamwork.Bydiscussingwith teammembers,wecancomeupwithbeterideas.Buthow canwebeagoodteammember?Herearesomesuggestions foryou. First,communicatemorewitheachother.Thereisno doubtthatcommunicationcanhelpusunderstandourteam matesbeter.Weshouldlistentoothersactivelyandexpress ourthoughtsbravely.Second,weshouldsupportandhelp othersinneed.Finaly,trustourteammates,whichhelps developteamspirit. Alinal,teamworkplaysanimportantroleinourdaily life.Letsbegoodteammembersandworkweltogether. 三阶 写作实战提能力 A(n)UnforgetableTalk Ihavequiteafewunforgetabletalksandthemostunfor getableoneisbetweenmygrandfatherandme. Oneevening,mygrandfatherstartedaconversationto sharehislifelessonsashewasmovingtoanothercity.We discusseddiferentkindsoftopics,fromtheimportanceofed ucationtothevalueoffamily.Herecaledhisyoungerdays, thechalengeshefaced,andtheachievementshemade.His wordswerefulofwisdom,encouragingmetofacelifewith courage. Forme,thistalkwasmorethanjustanexchangeof words.Itwasavaluablemomentthattaughtmealotabout beingsmartandmakinggoodchoices.Itmademerespect andlovehimevenmore.Hiswordsalwaysstaywithmeand helpmedecidewhattodo.Ikeepthinkingaboutourtalkand howtobewiselikehim. 话题8 传统文化———讲好中国故事 一阶 素材积累与训练 针对训练 1.ThereasonwhyIlovedumplingsbestisthattheymean goodluckandwealth. 2.Itsthetimethatwevisitourrelativesandfriendstogive thembestwishes. 3.Chinaisoneoftheoldestcountriesintheworld,andit hasalonghistory. 4.RedislovedbymostChinesepeoplebecauseitisseenas asymbolofgoodluck. 二阶 典例探究明思路 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②三;一 ③一般过去时;一般现在时 二、Body:Therabbitransofastthathequicklylefttheturtle farbehind.;Theturtleinsistedonpulinghimselfslowlyto theend,thoughhewasquitetired. Ending:Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriouslynotonlyinmy study,butalsoinmylifeinthefuture. 三、分阶范文 1.①高阶范文内容更加丰富,增加了一些细节描述,如 “Amomentofpridewentthroughhismind”和“theturtle insistedon”,使得故事更加生动;②高阶范文故事的寓 意更加深刻,不仅强调了认真对待任务的重要性,还 提到了通过努力可以实现看似不可能的事情; 2.高阶范文结构完整,有明确的引入、正文和结尾,使得 文章更加流畅; 3.①高阶范文逻辑清晰,通过增加细节描述和对故事寓 意的深入分析,增强了文章的说服力;②高阶范文通 过对比兔子和乌龟的行为,突出了故事的寓意,使得 读者更容易接受和理解; 4.①使用so爥that爥引导的结果状语从句升格句式[高 阶范文第二段第二句];②使用多种复合句:宾语从 句,条件状语从句,定语从句,使文章表达更多样[高 阶范文第三段第一句]。 三阶 写作实战提能力 DearHenry, Howareyoudoingthesedays?Imgladtohearyoure interestedinChinesesugarpainting.Today,Idliketoshare somethingaboutitwithyou. SugarpaintingisaformoftraditionalChinesefolkhand work.Asitsnameshows,itisapaintingmadeofsugar. DatingbacktotheMingDynasty,ithasalonghistory.Sugar paintingistheperfectcombinationofsugarandpainting,so peoplecannotonlyadmireitbutalsoeatit.Itisoftenmade intodiferentshapeslikedragonsandbuterflies.Asasymbol oftraditionalChineseculture,sugarpaintingislovedbypeo pleofalages.Besides,itisalsowelcomedinmanyforeign countries. Ihopeitwilbepasseddowninthefuture.Andnexttime youcometoChina,wecanlearnhowtomakeittogether. Yours, LiHua 话题9 科学技术与工程,人类发明与创新 一阶 素材积累与训练 1.Iwanttoinventaspecialcarwhichcanswiminthewater andrunontheland.                                                                      03   陕西英语(RJ) 2.AssoonasIstartthecar,itcanflylikeabird. 3.Thecarisnotonlycheapbutalsoenvironmentalyfriend ly. 4.Seatsinthecarcanbechangedintobeds. 5.Onlywhenyouknowmoreabouttheknowledgefirstcan youcreateorinventsomething. 二阶 典例探究明思路 写作剖析 一、①应用文 ②三;一 ③一般现在时;一般将来时 二、Beginning:Ifwehaveanyproblemsinourstudies,we wilasksmartphoneforhelp. Body:SomestudentsdependonAItoomuchsothattheywil losetheirabilitiestodothingsbythemselves. Ending:IfweuseAIcorectly,itwilbringusmoreconven ientlifeinthefuture. 三、 AIinOurLife Dearteachersandstudents, Aswealknow,AIhasbecomemoreandmorepopular inourdailylifeandhaschangedourlifegreatly.Wecansee diferentkindsofAIproductsinourdailylife.Forexample, smartphonecanmakeworkandstudymoreeficient.Ifwe haveanyproblemsinourstudies,wewilasksmartphonesfor help.Cleaningrobotscanhelpwithhousework.Theyal bringgreatconvenienceandprogresstooursociety. However,withAItechnologybeingwidelyused,many workerslosetheirjobs.Also,somestudentsdependonAI toomuchsothattheylosetheirabilitiestodothingsbythem selves. Alinal,justaseverycoinhasitstwosides,AIprod uctshavebothadvantagesandshortcomings.Ibelievethatif weuseAIcorectly,itwilbringusmoreconvenientlifein thefuture. Thatsal.Thankyouforyourlistening! 三阶 写作实战提能力 DearTom, Ilearnedalotaboutsmartkitchensatatechexhibition. Theentirekitchenispoweredbycleanenergy.There aremanysmartappliancesinthekitchen.Thesmartfridge canbeconnectedtowirelessnetworksandusedforshopping. Inaddition,thesmartscreenintherefrigeratorhasmany functions,suchasplayingmusicanddisplayingmenusby voice.Therearealsolotsofsmartcookersinthekitchento makesurewehaveabalanceddiet.Thewholekitchensecur itysystemisverygood,anditcankeepussafe.Itscon troledbyaninteligenthousekeeper.IrealyhopethatIcan havesuchasmartkitcheninthefuture,andIthinkitisvery convenientandcool. Whatdoyouthinkofit?Wouldyouliketohaveasmart kitchen,ordoyoupreferthetraditionalwayofcooking? Yours, LiHua VWX\ 话题10 环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为 一阶 素材积累与训练 针对训练 1.Firstly,Iwiltakepublictransportationasmuchaspossi blewhenIgoout. 2.Itsnecessaryformetosavewaterbywateringtheflowers withusedwater. 3.Itisbetertousechinacupsandclothbagsbecausethey canbeusedmanytimes. 4.ThemoreIrecycle,thecleanertheearthwilbecome. 5.Usingtoomanyplasticbagsisharmfulto/doesharmto/is badforourenvironment. 二阶 典例探究明思路 写作剖析 一、①说明文 ②一 ③一般现在时;一般将来时 ④Greenlife;Greentrafic;Greenhomeland 二、 要点1:Whenweleavearoom,weshouldturnofthelights. 要点2:Whenwegooutside,wecantakepublictransport, suchastakingthesubwayandtakingabus. 要点3:Weshouldalsotakepartinmorecommunityactivities tomakeourcitycleanandbeautiful. 三、 LetsBuildaGreenCityTogether! Aswealknow,theenvironmentisimportanttous.So itsourdutytoprotectit.Agreencityisthekeytoahealthy life.Letstakeactionnow! First,itsimportanttohaveagreenlife.Weshouldsave waterandelectricity.Whenweleavearoom,weshouldturn ofthelights.Weshouldntthrowrubbisheverywhere.Sec ond,thegreentraficisgoodforreducingairpolution. Whenwegooutside,wecantakepublictransport,suchas takingthesubwayandtakingabus.Third,tomakeourcity greener,weshouldplantmoretrees.Weshouldalsotake partinmorecommunityactivitiestomakeourcitycleanand beautiful. Ibelievetheskywilbebluer,themountainswilbe greenerandtheriverswilbeclearer.Ourcourtrywilberic herandmorebeautiful.Letsbuildagreencitytogether! 三阶 写作实战提能力 Aswealknow,animalsarepeoplesfriends.However, thenumberofwildanimalsisgetingsmalerandsmalerbe causewildanimalslivingspaceisbecominglessandless. Also,manywildanimalsnowcantfindenoughfoodtoeat. Atthesametime,peoplearekilinganimalsfortheirfur, teeth,bonesandotherpartsofthebodies. Whatshouldwedotoprotectwildanimals?Firstly,we shouldstopbuyingfurcoatsandotherproductsmadefrom wildanimals.Secondly,weshouldatachgreatimportanceto protectingwildanimals.Lastly,thegovernmentcanalso makesomelawstostoppeoplefromhurtingthem. Alinal,letsworktogethertoprotectwildanimalsand keepthebalancebetweenhumansandnature.                                                                      13

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