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中考命题角度探究
1.陕西近6年中考:暂未考查
2.全国视野:近三年全国考查角度:①介绍中国的传统节日和习俗;②介绍文化活动;③介绍传统艺
术形式
3. 热点角度:讲好中国故事,传播好中国声音,积极推动中华文化走出去
教材单元链接
人教版
九(全)Unit2节日 九(全)Unit5中国制造的事物 九(全)Unit10风俗习惯
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素材积累
短语与搭配
角度1 节日文化
1.celebratethefestival庆祝节日
2.theSpringFestival春节
3.theMidAutumnFestival中秋节
4.theLanternFestival元宵节
5.theDragonBoatFestival端午节
6.preparefor为……做准备
7.gettogether聚会
8.sweepaway扫除
9.watchtheSpringFestivalGala观看春节联欢晚
会
10.hanglanterns挂灯笼
11.watchthedragonboatraces观看赛龙舟
12.admirethemoon赏月
13.eatmooncakes/zongzi吃月饼/粽子
14.visitrelativesandfriends走亲访友
角度2 社会风俗与艺术
1.traditionalculture传统文化
2.socialcustoms社会风俗
3.folkstories民间故事
4.folkart民间艺术
5.kungfu功夫
6.papercuting剪纸
7.Chineseknot中国结
8.Beijing/PekingOpera京剧
9.thePalaceMuseum故宫博物院
10.lunarcalendar阴历,农历
11.solarcalendar阳历
12.asymbolof爥 ……的象征
13.havealonghistory有悠久的历史
14.bringgoodluckandhappiness带来好运和
幸福
15.protect/spreadChinesetraditionalculture保
护/传播中华传统文化
16.increaseonesknowledgeaboutChineseculture
增加某人对中华文化的了解
句型
开头句
1.NowletmetelyousomethingabouttheSpring
Festival.
2.EachdiferentpartofChinahasitsownspecial
formsoftraditionalart. 【人教版九(全)U5】
3.Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleshowgreat
interestintraditionalChineseculture.
4.Withtherapiddevelopmentofourcountry,itis
meaningfulforustotelourhometownsstories
welinEnglishtomoreforeigners.
中间句
角度1 传统节日及其意义
1.Mooncakescarypeopleswishestothefamilies
theyloveandmiss. 【人教版九(全)U2】
2.Therearesomanyspecialthingsaboutthe
SpringFestival.Youngchildrenusualyget
gifts—luckymoney.Weeatdumplingsand
manyotherdeliciousfoods.Wehavetemple
fairsandalkindsofperformances.Itsthe
mostimportantfestivalinChina.
【冀教版九(全)U8】
3.ItsoneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChi
na,whichfalsonthefifthdayoflunarMay.
4.ThereasonwhyIlovethetraditionalfestivalis
notonlytheenjoymentitbringsbutalso
the
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deepmeaningbehindit.
角度2 传统艺术
1.Today,skylanternsareusedatfestivalsandother
celebrations.Theyareseenasbrightsymbolsof
happinessandgoodwishes.【人教版九(全)U5】
2.Mymomlovespapercutingsandsheputsthem
upwhentheSpringFestivaliscoming.
角度3 饮食文化
1.Overthepastcenturies,Chinesepeoplehave
developedtheiruniqueteaculture,including
teaplanting,tealeafpicking,teamakingand
teadrinking.
2.Zongzi,asourtraditionalChinesefood,ismade
ofrice,meatandsoon.
角度4 文化活动
1.LastTuesday,ourschoolhostedaHanfuFesti
val.Itwasheldfrom4:30p.m.to6:00p.m.
ontheschoolplayground,thefestivalwasa
greatsuccess.
2.Oneofthemostpopularactivitiesduringthis
festivalisthedragonboatraces.
3.Welearnedmuchabouttraditionalfoodandex
periencedthefunofcookingtogetherwithour
classmates.
结尾句(表达希望与感受)
1.Hopeyoucanjoinus.Imlookingforwardto
yourreply.
2.Ihopemoreandmorepeoplecanknowbeter
aboutourtraditionalculture.
3.Letsworktogethertoprotectthistraditional
folkcraftandkeepitalive.
4.Throughthisactivity,Irealyunderstandthe
beautyoftraditionalChinese culture. Im
proudofmycountry.
针对训练
1.Ilovedumplingsbest.Theymeangoodluckand
wealth.(用 thereasonwhy爥isthat爥升格句
子)
2.Wevisitourrelativesandfriendstogivethem
bestwishes.(用itsthetimethat升格句子)
3.Chinaisanoldcountryintheworld,andithas
alonghistory.(用oneofthe+adj.最高级+名
词复数升格句子)
4.大多数中国人喜欢红色,因为它被视为好运的
象征。(汉译英)
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为了坚持讲好中国故事,传播好中国声音。你校英文刊正在开展以“TelTraditionalChineseSto
riesWel”为题的征文活动,请你从下面三个成语故事中选择一则你熟悉的故事,用英语写一篇短
文,并谈谈你受到的启示,向专栏投稿。
要求:
1.文章应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
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话题写作培优册
TelTraditionalChineseStoriesWel
TraditionalChinesestoriesplayanimportantroleinChineseculture.
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文要求讲一篇故事,是一篇 ;
②人称:介绍传统故事里的主人公时用第 人称,介绍“我”从故事中学到的道理时用第
人称;
③时态:讲述传统故事时以 为主,介绍故事带给自己的启发时用 。
二、构思框架
Beginning→表明写作意图:引出要介绍的中国传统故事
参考句型:①playanimportantrolein爥;②wouldliketodosth.
Body→具体讲述中国传统故事
参考句型:①so爥that爥;②catchupwithsb./sth.;③insistondoingsth.
例:Therabbitranveryfast.Therabbitquicklylefttheturtlefarbehind.(用so爥that爥
升格句子)
例:Theturtlewasquitetired.Theturtleinsistedonpulinghimselfslowlytotheend.
(用though引导的让步状语从句升格句子)
Ending→受到的启发
参考句型:①remindsb.+that从句;②Astheoldsayinggoes爥;③takesth.seriously;
④notonly爥butalso爥
例:Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriouslyinmystudyinthefuture.Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriously
inmylifeinthefuture.(用notonly爥butalso爥连接)
三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
TelTraditionalChineseStoriesWel
TraditionalChinesestoriesplayanimpor
tantroleinChineseculture.Now,Idliketoin
troduceastorycaledTheRabbitandtheTurtle.
Onedayarabbitandaturtlehadarace.At
first,therabbitranveryfast.Hequicklyleftthe
turtlefarbehind.Sohethought,“IfIhavea
sleepnow,theturtlecantcatchupwithme,ei
ther.”Thenheslept.However,theturtlekept
goingslowlytotheend.Atlast,theturtlewon
thegame.
Fromthisstory,IthinkIshouldtakeeach
taskseriouslynotonlyinmystudy,butalsoin
mylifeinthefuture.
TelTraditionalChineseStoriesWel
TraditionalChinesestoriesplayanimportantrolein
Chineseculture.Now,Idliketointroduceawel
knownstorycaledTheRabbitandtheTurtle.
Onedayarabbitandaturtlehadarace.Atfirst,
therabbitransofastthathequicklylefttheturtlefar
behind.Amomentofpridewentthroughhismind,“If
Ihaveasleepnow,theturtlecantcatchupwithme,ei
ther.”Thenheslept.However,theturtleinsistedon
pulinghimselfslowlytotheend,thoughhewasquite
tired.Atlast,theturtlewonthegame.
Thestoryremindsmethatsomethingwhichseems
impossiblecanbeachievedifsomeoneputsalhiseforts
intoit.AndIthinkIshouldtakeeachtaskseriouslynot
onlyinmystudy,butalsoinmylifeinthefuture.
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中华传统文化在世界上越来越受欢迎。假
设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Henry对中国的糖画
很感兴趣。请你根据图表提示用英文给他写一
封电子邮件,介绍一下中国的糖画。
ChineseSugarPainting
History datebacktotheMingDynasty
Form
theperfectcombinationofsugarand
painting, be made into diferent
shapeslike爥
Meaning
asymboloftraditionalChinesecul
ture
Hope 爥
要求:
1.文章应包含表格所给的关键信息,可适当
发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校
名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总
词数。)
DearHenry,
Howareyoudoingthesedays?
Yours,
LiHua
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话题7 良好的人际关系与人际交往
一阶 素材积累与训练
针对训练
1.Havingfriendsiscoolbecausewecanhavefunandshare
secretswiththem.
2.Thereisnodoubtthatitisimportanttotreatfriendswith
kindnessandrespect.
3.Wheneveryourfriendsareintrouble,youshouldbeready
tohelpthem.
4.Althoughourmathteacherisstrictwithusinclass,sheis
verykindtousafterclass.
二阶 典例探究明思路
写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一;三 ③一般现在时
④importance;ways;ending
二、Beginning:Bydiscussingwithteammembers,wecan
comeupwithbeterideas.
Body:Trustourteammates,whichhelpsdevelopteamspirit.
Ending:Teamworkplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.
三、
BeaGoodTeamMember
ThereisanoldsayinginChina,“Unityisstrength.”It
telspeopletheimportanceofteamwork.Bydiscussingwith
teammembers,wecancomeupwithbeterideas.Buthow
canwebeagoodteammember?Herearesomesuggestions
foryou.
First,communicatemorewitheachother.Thereisno
doubtthatcommunicationcanhelpusunderstandourteam
matesbeter.Weshouldlistentoothersactivelyandexpress
ourthoughtsbravely.Second,weshouldsupportandhelp
othersinneed.Finaly,trustourteammates,whichhelps
developteamspirit.
Alinal,teamworkplaysanimportantroleinourdaily
life.Letsbegoodteammembersandworkweltogether.
三阶 写作实战提能力
A(n)UnforgetableTalk
Ihavequiteafewunforgetabletalksandthemostunfor
getableoneisbetweenmygrandfatherandme.
Oneevening,mygrandfatherstartedaconversationto
sharehislifelessonsashewasmovingtoanothercity.We
discusseddiferentkindsoftopics,fromtheimportanceofed
ucationtothevalueoffamily.Herecaledhisyoungerdays,
thechalengeshefaced,andtheachievementshemade.His
wordswerefulofwisdom,encouragingmetofacelifewith
courage.
Forme,thistalkwasmorethanjustanexchangeof
words.Itwasavaluablemomentthattaughtmealotabout
beingsmartandmakinggoodchoices.Itmademerespect
andlovehimevenmore.Hiswordsalwaysstaywithmeand
helpmedecidewhattodo.Ikeepthinkingaboutourtalkand
howtobewiselikehim.
话题8 传统文化———讲好中国故事
一阶 素材积累与训练
针对训练
1.ThereasonwhyIlovedumplingsbestisthattheymean
goodluckandwealth.
2.Itsthetimethatwevisitourrelativesandfriendstogive
thembestwishes.
3.Chinaisoneoftheoldestcountriesintheworld,andit
hasalonghistory.
4.RedislovedbymostChinesepeoplebecauseitisseenas
asymbolofgoodluck.
二阶 典例探究明思路
写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②三;一 ③一般过去时;一般现在时
二、Body:Therabbitransofastthathequicklylefttheturtle
farbehind.;Theturtleinsistedonpulinghimselfslowlyto
theend,thoughhewasquitetired.
Ending:Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriouslynotonlyinmy
study,butalsoinmylifeinthefuture.
三、分阶范文
1.①高阶范文内容更加丰富,增加了一些细节描述,如
“Amomentofpridewentthroughhismind”和“theturtle
insistedon”,使得故事更加生动;②高阶范文故事的寓
意更加深刻,不仅强调了认真对待任务的重要性,还
提到了通过努力可以实现看似不可能的事情;
2.高阶范文结构完整,有明确的引入、正文和结尾,使得
文章更加流畅;
3.①高阶范文逻辑清晰,通过增加细节描述和对故事寓
意的深入分析,增强了文章的说服力;②高阶范文通
过对比兔子和乌龟的行为,突出了故事的寓意,使得
读者更容易接受和理解;
4.①使用so爥that爥引导的结果状语从句升格句式[高
阶范文第二段第二句];②使用多种复合句:宾语从
句,条件状语从句,定语从句,使文章表达更多样[高
阶范文第三段第一句]。
三阶 写作实战提能力
DearHenry,
Howareyoudoingthesedays?Imgladtohearyoure
interestedinChinesesugarpainting.Today,Idliketoshare
somethingaboutitwithyou.
SugarpaintingisaformoftraditionalChinesefolkhand
work.Asitsnameshows,itisapaintingmadeofsugar.
DatingbacktotheMingDynasty,ithasalonghistory.Sugar
paintingistheperfectcombinationofsugarandpainting,so
peoplecannotonlyadmireitbutalsoeatit.Itisoftenmade
intodiferentshapeslikedragonsandbuterflies.Asasymbol
oftraditionalChineseculture,sugarpaintingislovedbypeo
pleofalages.Besides,itisalsowelcomedinmanyforeign
countries.
Ihopeitwilbepasseddowninthefuture.Andnexttime
youcometoChina,wecanlearnhowtomakeittogether.
Yours,
LiHua
话题9 科学技术与工程,人类发明与创新
一阶 素材积累与训练
1.Iwanttoinventaspecialcarwhichcanswiminthewater
andrunontheland.
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