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中考命题角度探究
1.陕西近6年中考:暂未考查
2.全国视野:近三年全国考查角度:①阅读、学习的重要性/益处;②学习中存在的问题;③找到正确
的读书、学习方法;④最喜欢的科目
教材单元链接
人教版
九(全)Unit1学着如何学习
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素材积累
短语与搭配
角度1 学习计划
1.haveenoughtimetodosth.有足够的时间做某
事
2.remembertodosth.记得去做某事(未做)
3.finishdoingsth.完成做某事
角度2 学习策略
1.studyfor为……学习
2.learninghabits学习习惯
3.do(+学科)exercises做……(学科)练习题
4.findout发现;查明
5.writedown写下;记下
6.studyskils学习技巧
7.languagelearning语言学习
8.Itis+adj.+forsb.todosth.对某人来说做某
事是怎样的。
句型
开头句
1.Everyoneisbornwiththeabilitytolearn.But
whetherornotyoucandothisweldepends
onyourlearninghabits. 【人教版九(全)U1】
2.Learninganewlanguagetakestime.Itcanbe
achalenge,butthenewlanguagecangivepeo
plemoreopportunities. 【冀教版七(下)U5】
3.Englishisimportantandusefultous.Howcan
welearnitwel?Herearemysuggestions.
4.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseis
becomingmoreandmorepopular.Many
foreignerswanttolearnChinese.Imhappyto
sharesomewayswithyou.
5.Nowadays,manystudentscantmakegooduse
oftheirtime,whichhasabadinfluenceon
theirstudies.
中间句
角度1 阅读、学习的重要性及意义
1.Booksaremybestfriends.Readingcanbring
mehappinessandmakemegrowinwisdom.
2.Iprefertostudyalonebecauseitcanhelpme
thinkindependently.
3.Readingmakesagreatdiferencetoourlife.
Itsimportantforustokeepgoodreadinghabits.
角度2 学习中存在的问题
1.WelhaveatesttomorowandIalwaysget
nervousbeforeatest.
2.IdarenotanswerquestionsinclassbecauseIm
afraidofmakingmistakes.
3.TheteacherspokesoquicklythatIdidnot
understandhermostofthetime.
4.Thereisnodoubtthatplayingvideogamesis
goingto be the biggestproblem afecting
studentsstudy.
角度3 学习方法与建议
1.Themoreyoupractice,thefewermistakesyou
wilmake.
2.Icanimprovemylisteningskilsbylisteningto
Englishsongs.
3.ListeningtoyourfavoriteEnglishsongsisactual
lyanefectiveway.
4.Trytoguessawordsmeaningbyreadingthesen
tencesbeforeandafterit. 【人教版九(全)U1
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5.Youcanbecomebeterbyreadingsomethingyou
enjoyeveryday. 【人教版九(全)U1】
6.Thebestwaytoremembernewwordsisto
practicethemeveryday.
7.Dontbeafraidofmakingmistakeswhenyou
practicespeakingEnglish.
角度4 在学习中的收获
1.HistoryissointerestingthatIamcrazyabout
learningit.
2.Itcannotonlymakemehappierbutalsobring
mealotofknowledge.
3.ThereasonwhyIlikeEnglishbestisthatmy
Englishteacherishumorousinclassandhe
alwaysmakesuslearnsomethinginarelaxing
environment.
结尾句(感受、呼吁与号召)
1.Withagoodknowledgeofanewlanguage,you
canenjoyabeterlife. 【冀教版七(下)U5】
2.IbelieveifIputmyheartintolearningit,I
wilmakemuchprogress.
3.Onlywhenyoustudyintherightwaywilyour
gradesimprove.
4.Everyoneshouldbelieveinthemselvesbecause
theyhavetheabilitytodothingsbeter.
5.Inaword,readingbringsmenotonlymuch
joybutalsogreatinterestinEnglishlearning.
俗语/谚语
1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。
【人教版九(全)U1】
2.Learnthenewwhilereviewingtheold.温故而
知新。
3.Readingtenthousandbooksisliketravelingten
thousandmiles.读万卷书,行万里路。
针对训练
1.Readingplaysanimportantroleinourdaily
lives.(用thereisnodoubtthat爥升格句子)
2.IamgoodatspokenEnglish.Icancommunicate
withforeignersinEnglishfreely.(用so爥that爥
升格句子)
3.Youshouldremembertotakenotesofkeypoints
inclasscarefuly.(用祈使句升格句子)
4.Iwanttoinventaspecialcar.Thecarcanswim
inthewaterandrunontheland.(用定语从句
升格句子)
5.Youcancreateorinventsomething.Youknow
moreaboutitsknowledgefirst.(用 Onlywhen
引导的倒装句升格句子)
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(2024河北改编)假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动,下面是你的同伴张
军的自我课堂表现记录(ClassRecord),请你根据记录内容写一篇短文,总结他在五个方面的课堂表
现并进行简单评价,然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
ClassRecord Name:ZhangJun
Questions Yes No
Didyoulistentotheteachercarefuly? √
Didyouanswerquestionsactively? √
Didyouaskanyquestions? √
Didyouworkinyourgroup? √
Didyoutakenotes? √
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话题写作培优册
要求:
1.文章应包含表格中所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Weldone,ZhangJun!
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:短文要求总结张军的课堂表现并进行评价,另外就他需要改进的方面提出建议,是一篇评论
性 ;
②人称:评价张军的表现并给建议,使用第 人称,表达对张军的期待和祝愿时,用第
人称;
③时态:评价张军的表现时,用 ;给出建议时,用 。
二、构思框架
Beginning→引出话题:介绍张军的课堂表现并给出评价
参考句型:①Thisshowsthat爥;②beabletodosth.
例:Youwereabletotakeanactivepartinthediscussionandexpressyourthoughtscreatively.
(用Thisshowsthat爥引导的宾语从句升格句子)
Body→提出建议:就张军需要改进的两个方面提出建议
参考句型:①inonesopinion;②alowsb.todosth.;③besupposedtodosth.④sothat爥
例:Youcanreviewwhatyouhavelearnedafterclass.Youaresupposedtotakenotes.
(用sothat引导的目的状语从句升格句子)
Ending→表达期待:总结并表达祝愿
参考句型:①keepthegoodhabits;②trytodosth.;③Ibelievethat爥
例:YouldobeterinEnglishclass.(用Ibelievethat爥引导宾语从句)
三、连句成篇
Weldone,ZhangJun!
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众相原创 赋能中考 陕西英语(RJ)
四、反思与评价
Howwelcanyoudothesethings?
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·Icankeepmywritingpaperclean.
·IcanusecorectEnglishexpressionsforwriting.
·Icanwritealthepoints.
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语言是窗,让我们看见更广阔的世界;语言
是桥,拉近了我们与世界的距离。你在英语学习
方面有哪些好的方法呢?请以“TheWaysto
LearnEnglish”为题并根据要点提示写一篇短文,
分享你的学习经验。
要求:
1.文章应包含导图所给的关键信息,可适当
发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校
名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总
词数。)
TheWaystoLearnEnglish
Astheworldisdeveloping,Englishhas
becomeanimportantpartofpeopleslife.Howcan
welearnitwel?HerearesomegoodwaysIwantto
giveyou.
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众相原创 赋能中考
三、
TheMostUnforgetableActivity
Howtimeflies!Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfresh
inmymind.
Altheteachersandstudentscelebratedthecomingnew
year.Myclassmatesshowedtheirtalentsinartandmusic.
Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,andothersdancedto
themusic.Asforme,Iplayedapieceofmusiconthevio
lin.Alofthemcheeredmeup.Attheendoftheparty,we
readapoemwritenbyourclassmatestoourteachers.
Thispartyismeaningfulnotonlybecausewehadahap
pytimetogether,butalsobecauseitwasachancetoexpress
ourthankstoourteachers.Itwasthemostunforgetableac
tivityinmyschoollife.Ithasleftmesoftandsweetmemories
inmyheart.
三阶 写作实战提能力
DearDavid,
Therearemanywonderfulmemoriesduringmyschool
life.Oneofmybestmemoriesisthedancingcompetition.
IstilrememberitwasinGrade8.Atfirst,Ididnthave
muchtimetogetmyselfready.ItseemedthatIhadlitle
chanceofwinningthecompetition.However,Ididntgive
up.ThoughIwastiredaftermybusydailystudies,Istil
managedtopracticedancingforatleastonehourinmyspare
time.Finaly,inthecompetition,Ididmybestandwona
specialprize.
Ifeltproudofmyself.Thisexperiencehasbroughtme
pleasureandsuccess.Ihavenotonlydevelopedmyskils,
butalsoformedcloserfriendshipswithmyclassmates.The
mostimportantthingisthatIhavefoundthecouragetoface
dificulties.
Yours,
LinHui
话题3 积极的学习体验,恰当的
学习方法,勤学善思
一阶 素材积累与训练
针对训练
1.Theresnodoubtthatreadingplaysanimportantrolein
ourdailylives.
2.IamsogoodatspokenEnglishthatIcancommunicate
withforeignersinitfreely.
3.Remembertotakenotesofkeypointsinclasscarefuly.
4.Iwanttoinventaspecialcarwhich/thatcanswiminthe
waterandrunontheland.
5.Onlywhenyouknowmoreaboutitsknowledgefirstcan
youcreateorinventsomething.
二阶 典例探究明思路
写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②二;一 ③一般过去时;一般现在时
二、Beginning:Thisshowsthatyouwereabletotakeanac
tivepartinthediscussionandexpressyourthoughtscreative
ly.
Body:Youaresupposedtotakenotessothatyoucanreview
whatyouhavelearnedafterclass.
Ending:IbelievethatyouldobeterinEnglishclass!
三、
Weldone,ZhangJun!Youlistenedtotheteachercare
fulyinclassandansweredquestionsactively.Youalso
workedwelinyourgroup.Thisshowsthatyouwereableto
takeanactivepartinthediscussionandexpressyour
thoughtscreatively.However,youdidntaskanyquestions
andyouforgottotakenotes.
Inmyopinion,youshouldaskquestionsbecauseital
lowsyoutosolveproblemsintime.Whatsmore,youare
supposedtotakenotessothatyoucanreviewwhatyouhave
learnedafterclass.
Alinal,youshouldkeepthegoodhabitsandtryto
giveupthebadhabits.IbelievethatyouldobeterinEng
lishclass!
三阶 写作实战提能力
TheWaystoLearnEnglish
Astheworldisdeveloping,Englishhasbecomeanim
portantpartofpeopleslife.Howcanwelearnitwel?Here
aresomegoodwaysIwanttogiveyou.
Firstly,weshouldoftenlistentoEnglishnewsandpro
grams.ItsalsohelpfulforustowatchEnglishmoviesand
listentoEnglishsongs.Secondly,weshouldspeakEnglish
withourfriendsasmuchaspossible.Dontbeafraidofmak
ingmistakes.Themorewespeak,thefewermistakeswel
make.WedbeterjointheEnglishclubandpracticewith
others.Thirdly,wecanreadmoreEnglishnovelsandnews
papers.Itsgoodforus.Finaly,weshouldkeepdiariesin
Englisheverydayandreadsomegoodarticles.
Alinal,ifwedomorelistening,speaking,reading
andwriting,wewilsurelylearnEnglishwel.
话题4 身心健康、安全与体育运动
一阶 素材积累与训练
针对训练
1.Weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueour
lives.
2.Itsnecessaryforustoeatsomefruiteveryday.
3.Therearemanywaystokeephealthy,suchasdeveloping
goodeatinghabitsandtakingexercise.
二阶 典例探究明思路
一、①应用文 ②二;一 ③一般现在时;一般将来时
二、要点 1:Themostimportantthingistobeconfidentand
positivebecauseitwilhelpyouhavethecouragetofaceand
overcomeyourtrouble.
要点3:Itsnecessaryforyoutodosomeproperexercise.
三、1.高阶范文在给出建议的同时,增加了解释和原因,
使建议更加具体和具有说服力;
2.初阶范文结构简单清晰,高阶范文结构更为丰富;
3.初高阶范文在提建议时都使用衔接词,如:Firstly,Sec
ondly,Thirdly,使得文章结构清晰;
4.①使用 thereisnoneedtodosth.,Themostimportant
thingisto爥 because爥等高级句型升格句子[高阶范文
第二段第一、二句];②用 Itis+adj.+forsb.todosth.
句型使文章表达更多样[高阶范文第二段第四句]。
三阶 写作实战提能力
DoingSportsCanMakeMeRelaxed
Inthebusydailystudies,Ifindthatdoingsportsisa
greatwaytorelax.Ioftengotothesportsfieldorthegymto
domyfavoritesport—basketbal.
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