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英语 选择性必修 第三册(译林)
Section Ⅴ Writing 话题写作——写一篇关于外星人的故事
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于外星人的故事。外星人的话题总是让人们充满了好奇和想象,引导人们不断去探索是否真有外星人的存在,这类故事在写作时,可以基于现有的科学研究,再充分发挥自己的想象力和创造力,写出一篇富有想象力的关于外星人的故事。写作时一般分为三部分:
开头——介绍故事发生的背景;
主体——介绍故事中的主要人物及故事情节;
结尾——介绍故事的结局。
1.开头常用句式
①In recent years, scientists in many parts of the world have pooled their money, time and efforts to research the space.
近年来,世界上许多地方的科学家都投入了资金、时间和精力来研究太空。
②This story brings me back to an event many years ago.
这个故事把我带回到许多年前的一件事情上。
③Whether you like it or not, the search for alien life began a long time ago.
无论你是否喜欢,对外星生命的寻找很早就开始了。
2.主体段落常用句式
①For all we know, intelligent alien life might receive our messages and want to work with us.
因为我们都知道,聪明的外星生命也许会收到我们的信息然后想和我们合作。
②During holiday seasons, I will live in the countryside, where air is fresh and people are friendly.
在假期,我会住在乡下,那里空气新鲜而且人们友好。
③Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
沐浴在阳光中,我们高兴得欢呼雀跃。
④We were enjoying the wonderful sight when a loud noise caught our attention.
我们正在欣赏美景,这时一声巨响吸引了我们的注意力。
⑤There happened to be a lot of people by the road. They helped us pull the car out of the big hole.
路边恰好有很多人,他们帮助我们把车从那个大坑里拉了出来。
⑥We took the indoor roller coaster on the Space Mountain and it was very exciting.
我们坐了太空山的室内过山车,非常刺激。
3.结尾常用句式
①What an amazing short stroll that must have been but a very historic one too.
那是多么美妙而短暂的漫步啊,不过也是历史性的一次。
②Perhaps aliens are actually nice.
也许外星人实际上是很善良的。
③Therefore, aliens are most likely to live along the line between shadow and light, a temperate region known as the terminator.
因此,外星人可能会住在昼夜分割线附近,这样就可以随意穿梭于黑夜与白昼之间了。
假定你是李华,昨天晚上你梦见了外星人,请你给你的笔友Tom写一封信,讲述这个有趣的梦。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
[精彩范文]
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you my interesting dream, in which I came across an alien.
After finishing my homework, I was so tired that I fell asleep immediately. Suddenly, I saw a UFO land in the yard. Out came an alien, who looked tall and strong with two heads and three eyes. When I saw the alien walking towards me, I was too astonished to move. The alien seemed to be saying something to greet me but I couldn't understand it. Just at that time, a loud noise woke me up. It was my alarm clock.
Do you think my dream is interesting? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
总评 本文情节思路清晰,上下文连贯,语法结构和词汇用的恰到好处,不失为一篇佳作。
[亮点呈现]
(1)after, suddenly, but 等连接词的使用,使文章结构紧凑,条理清晰。
(2)come across, at that time, wake up等短语搭配的使用,显示了作者对相关短语的熟练运用能力。
(3)文中使用了“介词+关系词”引导的定语从句、句型so ... that ... 及Out came an alien这样的完全倒装句,使句式灵活多变,凸显作者较高的英语运用能力。
假设你与外星人Aeiln来到了他的家乡,请你讲述在这里发生的故事。内容包括:
1.外星人家乡的环境;
2.和外星人发生的故事。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[精彩范文]
How time flies! It's months since we came to Astar—the home planet of my new friend Aeiln. It seems science fiction has come true. I have had incredible views of this land of fire and ice. The landscape is wild and dramatic, with huge icy mountains and hot rocks on the flat plains. Different from humans, the creatures here look the same with white skin and three large black eyes.
One day Aeiln and I were observing space through something like a telescope when we found a new star deep in the universe. This has aroused our great interest. What does it look like? Are there creatures like Aeiln and me? We want to go and see.
These days we are making preparations and there are technological obstacles to overcome. For example, how can we promote the timecapsule in which aliens can travel to continue our journey? You know even the aliens themselves have never travelled that far. Now, we can't wait to start, wondering what the journey has in store for us!
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