Unit 8 写作园地 读后续写——续写故事-【金版教程】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册创新导学案课件PPT（北师大版2019）

WELCOME UNIT UNIT 8　LITERATURE 写作园地　读后续写——续写故事 读后续写，简而言之，就是阅读完一篇未写完的文章后，根据要求和提示把文章续写完整，使之浑然一体。它一方面很好地考查了对所学语言知识的实际运用能力，另一方面也培养了发散思维能力和想象力。 本单元是续写故事，属于记叙文。续写时需要注意以下几点： (1)后续情节的设计，应该衔接所给段落开头语，自然续写内容。 (2)后续结果要把握现在、展望未来，结尾应该是积极向上的；无论续写的情节多么曲折离奇、惊心动魄，在结尾部分一定要健康、乐观。 (3)要遵循原文的写作风格；同时要注意卷面的整洁美观、字体工整，严格控制词数。读后续写的词数在150左右，不宜少写也不宜超出太多。 读后续写——续写故事 (1)The event that stands out in Tom's memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old． 汤姆记忆中的那件事发生在他只有十岁的一天早晨。 (2)I remember the day when I was changed into a new class and none of my friends was there． 我记得我转入新班级的那一天，身边没有一个朋友。 (3)She didn't look nice， but that day she showed me that she was a very nice person． 她看起来不友好，但那天她的表现证明她是个非常和善的人。 读后续写——续写故事 (4)After two weeks， my result of entrance exam was out． 两周后，我的入学考试结果出来了。 (5)As I read what she left for me， tears escaped my eyes and ran across my cheeks． 当我读着她给我的留言时，眼泪夺眶而出，湿润了脸颊。 (6)Her doctor said from that day on， she started to trust others． 她的医生说从那天起，她开始相信他人了。 (7)After hearing the explanation， she was overwhelmed by excitement and gratitude． 听了解释后，她既激动又感激。 读后续写——续写故事 (8)Time went by quickly， and the children laughed， carrying out their great “project”． 时间过得很快，孩子们笑着完成了他们伟大的“工程”。 (9)Joy filled the yard and everyone's heart． 院子里充满了欢乐，每个人心里都充满了喜悦。 (10)So sometimes we may do wrong to our friends if we don't think something carefully． 所以有时候如果我们不仔细考虑，我们可能会对朋友做错事。 读后续写——续写故事 (11)In her eyes， each creature has its own life， which is worth her efforts to help them live a better life when they are living in this world． 在她看来，每一个生物都有自己的生命，帮助它们在这个世界上过上更好的生活是值得努力的。 (12)It turned out that they not only helped a boy in need， but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others． 事实证明，他们不仅帮助了一个需要帮助的男孩，而且自己也尝到了帮助别人的甜蜜滋味。 读后续写——续写故事 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The eight­year­old Carol lived with her father David， mother May and elder brother Rob． The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature． The village was at the foot of a mountain， with beautiful views of the snowy mountain． The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees． Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty． While they lived a very happy life， Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village． She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life． She wanted to shop， move around the city， watch movies， and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes， etc． 读后续写——续写故事 However， there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had everything in the village． One day， Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep． Of course， she had a strange dream． She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish． Carol requested her that she should love to enjoy the city life as she always desired． Grandmother understood the desire of Carol， but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life． 读后续写——续写故事 She told Carol， “Baby， you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home． You cannot breathe fresh air． You cannot play with animals． You can hardly find any trees． You will not find peace as you see here! Do you still want to go to the city？” Without hearing the concerns， Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish． Grandmother granted her wish， but with a condition． Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city． Later， she would return to the village． Carol agreed． 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 读后续写——续写故事 Carol then found herself in the city with her friends．﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up．﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 读后续写——续写故事 [精彩范文] Carol then found herself in the city with her friends． Carol and her friends went to watch movies． After that they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall． Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city． Yet at the same time， she understood that everything told by her grandmother was true in the city． There was no peace and no silence; the city life was fast and rushing． The air quality is not satisfying． She could hardly find any animal or even a tree． 读后续写——续写故事 11 Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up． She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life． Carol understood that she was having a more joyful life． She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables， and they laughed together． Carol also developed love for plants， animals and beautiful nature． 读后续写——续写故事 12 总评　本篇范文在原文的基础上展开合理的想象，在段落开头语的基础上进行描述，续写自然，结尾巧妙。续写故事过程中用了不同的语法结构和简洁生动的词汇，展现出很好的语言功底；关联词的恰当运用使文章过渡自然，符合逻辑。 读后续写——续写故事 [亮点呈现] (1)fast and rushing， far more wonderful than等短语和结构的运用，使语言表达简洁、生动。 (2)Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city．中包含动词不定式作后置定语；while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables使用了状语从句的省略。高级句式的运用体现了较强的语言功底。 读后续写——续写故事 14 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Night terror In the middle of the night， as most of the residents slept， much of a 12­story Florida building collapsed， killing lots of people and sending survivors escaping for their lives． In this darkest time， however， the warmth and sparkles of humanity stood out． Alfredo Lopez and his wife， Marian， were asleep when the first thundering explosion made them awake at 1：14 am on Thursday， June 24． Moments later， a second boom， much louder than the first， shook the bed in their apartment on the fifth floor． 读后续写——续写故事 15 Alfredo rushed to waken his 20­year­old son， Michael， urging him to get dressed， before running to the balcony window． The swirling (旋动) dust and ash made it difficult to see only a few feet in any direction． “All I could see was just white dust， very thick． I could barely see the balcony，” he recalled． The lights cut out and the emergency alarm came on， warning the residents of the Champlain Towers South to move out． They rushed out and ran downstairs， as they realized before the world knew of the disaster， they were fighting to survive by themselves． 读后续写——续写故事 16 On the same fifth floor， in unit 111， a two­bedroom oceanfront apartment， Gabriel Nir， 7 years old and his 5­year­old sister， Chani， all heard the first thunderous noise． Their parents were out of town for some business， leaving their grandma， Garfinkel， who was asleep， to look after them． They panicked and confused， and after a while， they began to realize what had happened and try to make their grandma wake up． Together they walked to the door， only to find it jammed in the twisted doorframe． All measures taken， they had no choice but to shout， “Help! Help! The door won't open．” wishing people outside would hear and come to help． 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 读后续写——续写故事 17 “I heard people screaming． I have to go back to make sure everyone’s OK，” Michael yelled to his mother．﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ “I can’t make it． I’m 88． I’ve had a good life，” Garfinkel shouted， pointing at the walker (助行架)． ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 读后续写——续写故事 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。凌晨正当大家熟睡时弗罗里达州一栋12层的楼房突然开始大面积倒塌，Alfredo Lopez (阿尔弗雷多·洛佩兹)听到巨响，及时叫醒妻子和儿子，准备逃出去。但邻居家年幼的孩子和年老的祖母因门框变形而无法逃脱。儿子Michael (迈克尔)决心救祖孙三人，妈妈会同意吗？祖孙三人会成功获救吗？ 写前导读 读后续写——续写故事 19 [精彩范文] “I heard people screaming． I have to go back to make sure everyone's OK，” Michael yelled to his mother． But Marian， wondering whether it was worth it， feared， “What if you can't save them? What if you fail to escape？” Michael， ignoring these what­ifs， rushed towards the door like an arrow， but the door was stuck so tightly that it was three more attempts before he finally broke it open． Standing inside， he found the old grandma waiting with her walker， two frightened children hiding behind her back． At this moment， with a third boom， their way out was partly blocked by the concrete that had fallen from the roof． 答案 读后续写——续写故事 20 “I can't make it． I'm 88．I've had a good life，” Garfinkel shouted， pointing at the walker (助行架)． She begged the Lopezes to help the children leave without her． But the Lopezes weren't about to leave her behind． Without thinking， Alfredo rushed in， threw her over his shoulder and rushed out， with the children supported by Michael． They struggled through the concrete to the stairs and walked down． Each time with another level down， they yelled out the floor number， a small victory of survival， one floor closer to freedom． While their escape felt extremely long， it all unfolded in mere minutes． One by one they stepped into the street and into the safety． “Thanks to their heroic struggle，” the grandma said， “we were all able to get out and survive．” 答案 读后续写——续写故事 21 R $$