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英语 1 第二部分 常考话题写作精讲练 话题3 健康与安全（2024，2019） 2 考情概览 该话题安徽10年2考，具体如下： ①2024年要求介绍灭火器的使用方法； ②2019年要求为朋友提出保护视力的意见。 该话题通常包含以下写作要点： ①健康/安全的重要性； ②健康/安全问题； ③如何保持健康（2019）； ④如何保证安全（2024）。 3 优质素材积累 核心词块 健康（安全）问题 ［What’s wrong（the matter） with him （her）?］ 1.have a fever 发烧 2.have/catch a cough 咳嗽 3.have a cold 感冒 4.have a runny nose 流鼻涕 5.have a nosebleed 流鼻血 4 6.have a heart problem 有心脏病 7.have a headache 头疼 8.have a toothache 牙疼 9.have a stomachache 胃疼 10.have a sore throat 喉咙痛 11.have difficulty/trouble in breathing 呼吸困难 12.feel sick/don’t feel well 感觉不舒服 13.have an accident 出了事故 5 14.fall down 摔倒 15.get hurt/injured 受伤 16.get hit by a ball 被球击中 17.cut the hand/finger 割伤了手/手指 18.hurt the leg 伤到了腿 19.break the arm 伤到胳膊 20.food safety 食品安全 21.poor eyesight 视力差 6 做法与建议 ［What should you do to keep healthy（safe）?］ 1.lie down 躺下来 2.take the temperature 量体温 3.take some medicine 吃一些药 4.take/have a rest 休息一下 5.go to （see）a doctor/dentist 去看医生/牙医 6.put some medicine on the cut 在伤口上涂一些药 7.put a bandage on the cut 用绷带包扎伤口 7 8.keep fit/healthy保持健康 9.take regular exercise定期锻炼 10.stay up late熬夜 11.have/get enough sleep得到充足的睡眠 12.keep in a good mood保持愉快的心情 13.take breaks away from computers离开电脑休息片刻 14.develop a healthy diet/eating habit养成健康的饮食习惯 8 15.keep calm保持冷静 16.ask sb.for help向某人求助 17.stay/keep away from danger远离危险 18.follow/obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则 9 话题佳句 健康（安全）的重要性 1.Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life. 2.As is known to all， it is very important to keep healthy. 3.As everybody knows， it’s important to keep a balance between study and play. 4.As far as we know， health is the best gift that a man can ever have. 10 5.Safety comes first. 6.Safety is above everything. 7.Life is so valuable that we should take it seriously and never waste time. 8.Life is priceless， so life safety is the most important. 11 如何保持健康（10年1考） ★健康饮食 1.You’d better eat more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food. 2.Having a healthy diet plays an important role in keeping yourself healthy. 3.It’s important for us to have a healthy eating habit. 12 ★坚持运动 1.Exercise such as playing sports is fun， and you can spend time with your friends and family as you play together. 【人教八上P13】 2.Taking regular exercise， eating a healthy diet and getting enough sleep are all the things that can help you stay healthy. 3.Riding a bicycle is a healthy form of relaxing yourself. 4.No matter how cold it gets， we must stick to our exercise routine. 13 ★充足睡眠 1.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise. 2.Enough sleep can make sure that you are energetic in class. 3.Make sure to have enough sleep，and never stay up too late at night. 4.We need to focus on sleeping habits because they may have a big influence on our body. 14 ★保护视力（2019） 1.Don’t read in the poor or strong light， or it will hurt your eyes. 2.When you are reading，you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 3.It’s bad for our eyes if we read in the sun or in bed. I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phones or computers for a long time. 15 ★平和心态 1.Learn to relax. Force yourself to take a break from your studies and worries about exams. 2.We are all under pressure， so we should do some things to relax ourselves. 16 如何保证安全（10年1考） ★交通安全 1.Make sure that we always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. 2.Whether we walk or take a bus to school，we must be careful of the traffic. 3.Besides，you’d better not ride side by side，or you may be in danger. 4.It’s best to keep/stay away from the street while you are playing football. 17 ★家庭安全 1.For your own safety， you’d better not go out alone at night. 2.At our home， we should be careful while using electricity and natural gas. 3.We mustn’t play with anything dangerous， such as knives and fires. ★校园安全 1.Also， we mustn’t run too fast in the classroom， because it may cause accidents. 2.When we are at school， we mustn’t have a fight with our classmates. 18 ★网络安全 1.We shouldn’t put too much personal information on the Internet. 2.We should be careful when we make friends，especially online. 19 ★安全与救护（2024） 1.You should be careful with fire in the kitchen. 2.When an earthquake happens， stay under the table immediately. 3.Keep away from buildings when an earthquake happens because parts of a building may fall on you. 4.When swimming， it’s necessary for us to be accompanied（陪同） by those who are good at swimming， for they can help us in case of emergency. 20 典例剖析 角度1 健康 审好题，定方向 [2019安徽]假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到 不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。 要点如下： 1.审主题：________________ 2.审体裁：________ 3.审人称：以__________为主 保护视力的做法 应用文 第一人称 21 4.审时态：以____________为主 一般现在时 介绍自己保护视力的方法 22 注意：1.词数80~100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 23 Dear Mike. I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 24 搭框架，写句子 25 构篇章，润词句 组句成篇 润色美文 Dear Mike， I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life. At school， I often go out of the classroom to do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time， I seldom use my mobile phone.①The mobile phone gives off the light. The light is harmful to my eyes. ①用定语从句升格画线句子 ___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ The light which the mobile phone gives off is harmful to my eyes. 26 组句成篇 润色美文 ②Besides， doing eye exercises is very important to relax my tired eyes.Lastly，I usually examine my eyes every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy. I hope you’ll find my ways helpful. Yours， Li Hua ②用play an important role in doing sth. 升格画线句子 __________________________________________________________ ____________________ 小贴士：润色完成后，请不要忘记将文章誊写一遍哦！ Besides， doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. 27 角度2 安全 审好题，定方向 (2024安徽)假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动 中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英 文报投稿。 1.审主题：______________________ 2.审体裁：________ 3.审人称：__________ 4.审时态：以____________为主；描述过去的事情用____________ 介绍灭火器的使用方法 记叙文 第一人称 一般现在时 一般过去时 28 活动目的 灭火器的使用方法 个人体会 29 注意： 1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数） Last week， our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities.______ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 30 搭框架，写句子 31 构篇章，润词句 组句成篇 润色美文 Last week， our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. ①Among the activities， the way of using a fire extinguisher interested me most. ①用“疑问词+to do”结 构升格画线句子。 ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ __________ Among the activities， how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most. 32 组句成篇 润色美文 When we use a fire extinguisher， we should first shake it after picking it up， and then pull off the safety pin quickly. ②We should point the tube at the root of the fire， and then we should press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period， we should be careful enough not to get hurt. ②用as soon as和be expected to do sth.升格画线句子 ______________________ ______________________ ______________________ ______________________ ______________________ ______________________ As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire， we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. 33 组句成篇 润色美文 From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety. 小贴士：润色完成后，请不要忘记将文章誊写一遍哦！ 34 2025强预测 第1篇 生命只有一次，安全无小事。假设你是李辉，请你根据以下要点提示， 以“How to keep safe”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点提示： 1.校园安全：和同学友好相处，遇到麻烦向老师求助。 2.食品安全：吃健康食物，拒绝垃圾食品等。 3.至少补充一条其他安全注意事项。 35 要求：1.词数80~100（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯。 How to keep safe Life is only once， so safety is important for us teenagers. ________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ In a word， safety must come first! 36 一审 1.主题：______________ 2.文体：________ 3.人称：__________ 4.时态：以____________为主 5.要点：从__________、__________、__________三个方面写作 如何保证安全 说明文 第一人称 一般现在时 校园安全 食品安全 交通安全 37 二搭 38 三练写 How to keep safe Life is only once， so safety is important for us teenagers. _______ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ But how can we stay safe? Here are some suggestions. First of all， it is necessary to get on well with our classmates at school. If we really have trouble communicating with them， we can ask our teachers for help. Besides， we’d better buy and eat food carefully. Healthy food， such as vegetables and fruit， are our 39 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ In a word， safety must come first! first choices. Eating food that has gone bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least， what we should pay attention to is obeying the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. 第2篇（2024内蒙古自治区改编） 假如你是李辉，你的英国笔友 Mike饱受肥胖的困扰，他向你求助， 询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点提示，给他回复一封邮件。 要点： 1.多吃水果和蔬菜； 2.坚持每天锻炼，但是要适量； 3.保证充足的睡眠，绝不熬夜； 4.…… 41 注意： 1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80~100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 42 Dear Mike， I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I’d like to share some good ways to stay healthy with you. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ I hope these tips will be useful to you. Yours， Li Hui 43 一审 1.主题：______________________ 2.文体：__________________ 3.人称：__________ 4.时态：以____________为主 5.要点：从______、______、______、______四个方面写作 告诉Mike如何保持健康 应用文（说明文） 第一人称 一般现在时 饮食 运动 睡眠 心情 44 二搭 45 三练写 Dear Mike， I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I’d like to share some good ways to stay healthy with you. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ First， eat more fruit and vegetables. Say no to fast food， such as hamburgers and chips. Eating too much fast food may be harmful to your health. Second， take exercise every day. Find out your favorite sport and keep doing it. But remember not to do too much 46 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ I hope these tips will be useful to you. Yours， Li Hui at one time. Third， get enough sleep. As a teenager， you should sleep for at least 8 hours every day. Don’t stay up too late. Last but not least， try to do things that make you happy， like talking with your friends or enjoying a relaxing movie. 优质范文诵读 第1篇 How to Keep Mentally（心理地） Healthy As is known to us all， mental health is as important as physical health. As middle school students， there are several suggestions to keep mentally healthy. First of all， we should communicate with not only our parents and friends but also our teachers and classmates because communication 48 is a bridge to bring people together. Besides， instead of being afraid of all kinds of problems， be brave to face them. Moreover， we should be confident in ourselves. Believe that it’s we who shape our future. Last but not least， be independent. We’d better learn to look after ourselves so that we can earn our living when we grow up. To conclude， keep it in mind that mental health plays an important part in our growth. 第2篇 体育成绩是否应计入中考总分 Nowadays， it is said that sports scores will be raised in the senior high school entrance examination. But different people have different ideas about it. Some students believe that it is reasonable to raise sports scores， which will help us pay more attention to exercise. As a result，this will develop our physical abilities. However， some students don’t agree. 50 They think students are busy studying and doing homework， so they don’t have enough energy and time to do more exercise. They are under too much pressure. In my opinion， I suggest sports scores should be raised. A healthy body will be the basis for our students to study better. What’s more， I believe everyone can get the scores if they take exercise seriously. 第3篇 Protecting Our Eyesight As the saying goes， “Eyes are the window to the soul.” However， 70% of us have poor eyesight. The main reason why so many young people have poor eyesight is that many of us read in wrong positions， such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the book. What’s more， spending too much time playing computer games or watching TV is a big factor（因素） as well. Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes. 52 First of all， we should be cautious（谨慎的） about the health of using eyes. We should not keep our eyes working for a long time. While reading， we should keep the book about a foot away from us. After reading for an hour or two， it’s better to have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance. Second， using electronic products less is a good way to protect our eyes. Besides， we should see green plants as often as possible. Finally，remember to do eye exercises or take more outdoor sports，which will help us keep good eyesight. In a word，let’s take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future. 第4篇（2024雅安） 保护自身安全 Dear teachers and students， Today， I’m glad to give a speech about how to stay safe in our life. As far as we know， safety is the most important thing in our life. First， when we are at school， we can’t run in the hallways and mustn’t fight with others. We should walk slowly on the right side instead of rushing when we go up and down the stairs. Second， on our way home， we should follow the traffic rules. Don’t cross the street when the traffic. 54 light is red. When we ride a bike，we mustn’t listen to music or just use one hand to ride. Next，we should eat healthy food and stay away from junk food. Besides， don’t swim in the river. It’s very dangerous. In a word，safety must come first. Please remember these safety tips. Thanks for your listening. 第5篇 How to Protect Ourselves It is well-known that everyone has only one life， so we should value our lives. But how can we protect ourselves? On the one hand， we should be aware of the importance of safety and know what to do in our daily life. Firstly，when we go out， we must follow traffic rules. Secondly， we are supposed to be careful when making friends online， which may bring unnecessary trouble. What’s more，when we play sports or games，be careful not to hurt ourselves. 56 In addition， remember not to go swimming in the river or lake alone to avoid putting ourselves in dangerous situations. On the other hand， it is equally important to know how to protect ourselves in case of unexpected emergencies. In case of a fire， the most important thing is to stay calm and remember to call 119 for help so that more people can be prevented from being hurt. If the fire is small， try to put it out with a fire extinguisher（灭火器） or water. In short， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives. $$