2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+从陌生隔阂到温情转变的邻里故事课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 从陌生隔阂到温情转变的邻里故事 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 When Sam and I were first married, we lived in a quiet neighborhood. Across the street, there was a big house with a six-foot high hedge (树篱) that blocked all but a small path to its yard. It was clear that our neighbors wanted privacy and weren’t interested in any “neighborly” behavior. Sam had discovered that a brother and sister lived in the house. The house belonged to the sister, and the brother helped around the house with things like getting the mail and setting the rubbish cans out on the day when the rubbish-collecting truck would come. The sister and brother were both very old. And we considered them unfriendly because they had called the police when Sam played music with his band in our yard one afternoon. 4 4 续写原文 Not realizing it was we who were in the wrong, we thought our neighbors caused trouble to our already difficult life. At the time, Sam and I were quite short of money. We felt sad when Christmas was around the corner. It was our first Christmas as a married couple, and we didn’t have much money to celebrate it. There were no gifts or parties. We didn’t even have any special holiday treats to share at home. “I wish we could have enough good stuff on Christmas Day. When I was a kid, my family would always have cheese, meat, cookies, candies, etc. It always felt like a feast (盛宴) to me as a kid,” I told Sam. I understood that Christmas wasn’t all about nice things, but it just didn’t feel like Christmas with only a few foods. Sam seemed to feel the same way. “Things will get a lot better next year,” he said, trying to be cheerful. 5 5 续写原文 Three weeks before Christmas, we got to know our “unfriendly” neighbor, the brother, had a bad disease and passed away. One morning after that, we noticed our neighbor—the tiny sister Mary—trying with all her strength to pull her rubbish cans to the roadside alone. She looked so weak and lonely. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Sam couldn’t stand it and rushed to her, saying, “May I help you?” Paragraph 2：When we answered the door, there was nobody but a big bag of goods. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文中讲述了婚后的 “我” 和山姆住在一个宁静街区，对面邻居家有高大树篱，看似拒人于千里之外，还因山姆乐队演奏报过警，这让 “我” 俩觉得他们不友好，加上经济拮据，首个圣诞节也过得寒酸。“我” 向山姆回忆儿时丰盛的圣诞美食，满是遗憾。然而，圣诞节前三周，邻居哥哥病逝，姐姐玛丽独自艰难地拖垃圾桶，显得虚弱又孤独。此前的隔阂与误解在这一瞬间开始消融，“我” 和山姆对这位曾经 “不友好” 的邻居有了新的认识，也预示着邻里关系将发生转变，故事在这种微妙的氛围中留下了温情的伏笔。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Sam couldn’t stand it and rushed to her, saying, “May I help you?” 山姆看到玛丽如此艰难，心中一紧，再也忍不住了。他毫不犹豫地快步冲过去，脸上带着关切的神情，大声说道：“玛丽，我来帮你吧！” 玛丽有些惊讶地抬起头，眼中闪过一丝犹豫，但在看到山姆真诚的目光后，微微点了点头。山姆接过垃圾桶，轻松地将它拖到了路边，玛丽在一旁静静地看着，眼神里透露出一丝感激。随后，山姆陪着玛丽回到她家门口，简单聊了几句，玛丽的脸上渐渐有了些许笑容，仿佛坚冰开始融化。山姆离开时，玛丽轻轻地说了声 “谢谢”，这声谢谢让山姆心里暖暖的，也让他决心以后要多多关照这位孤独的邻居。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：When we answered the door, there was nobody but a big bag of goods. 圣诞节的清晨，阳光透过窗户洒在我们脸上，我和山姆被一阵敲门声吵醒。我们迅速起身，整理好衣服去开门，满心期待着会是怎样的一个惊喜。当门缓缓打开，却发现门口空无一人，只有一个大大的袋子放在地上。我们好奇地将袋子拿进屋，打开一看，里面装满了各种各样的美食，有鲜嫩的奶酪、喷香的肉类、精致的饼干，还有五彩斑斓的糖果。我们惊讶地对视一眼，心中满是疑惑和感动。是谁在这个特别的日子给我们送来了这样一份珍贵的礼物？突然，山姆像是想到了什么，他望向对面玛丽的家，眼神里透露出一丝了然和温情，我也瞬间明白了，这份礼物一定是玛丽送来的。这一袋礼物不仅仅是食物，更是一份珍贵的心意，它化解了过去的所有不愉快，让我们真切地感受到了邻里之间那份温暖的情谊在这个寒冷的冬日里悄然绽放。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Witnessing Mary's frail figure struggling with the heavy rubbish cans, Sam's heart was filled with compassion. Unable to bear the sight any longer, he dashed across the street without a moment's hesitation. As he approached Mary, his face showed genuine concern and he said in a warm voice, "May I help you?" Mary looked up, a bit startled by Sam's sudden appearance. For a moment, there was hesitation in her eyes, but upon seeing the kindness and sincerity in Sam's gaze, she nodded slightly. Sam then took hold of the rubbish cans with ease and hauled them to the roadside. Mary watched quietly, a glimmer of gratitude shining in her eyes. Afterward, Sam accompanied Mary back to her doorstep, and they exchanged a few words. Slowly, a faint smile emerged on Mary's face, as if the ice between them had begun to thaw. When Sam left, Mary whispered a soft "thank you", which warmed Sam's heart and strengthened his resolve to look out for this lonely neighbor in the future. 14 14 范文呈现 On Christmas morning, the sunlight filtered through the window and gently woke Sam and me. We were roused from our sleep by a knock at the door. Hastily getting out of bed and straightening our clothes, we rushed to the door, filled with anticipation of what surprise might await us. As the door creaked open, to our astonishment, there was no one in sight. Instead, a large bag sat on the ground. Curious, we brought the bag inside and opened it. To our amazement, it was filled with all sorts of delicious treats - fresh cheese, savory meats, delicate cookies, and colorful candies. We exchanged a look of surprise and wonder, our hearts filled with questions and gratitude. Who could have sent us such a precious gift on this special day? Suddenly, Sam seemed to have an idea. He looked towards Mary's house across the street, and there was a glimmer of realization and warmth in his eyes. I, too, immediately understood that this gift must have come from Mary. This bag of presents was not just food; it was a precious token of kindness that dissolved all the past unpleasantness and made us truly feel the warm bond of neighborly friendship blossoming on this cold winter day. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 It was a chilly morning when Sam caught sight of Mary, who was wrestling with the rubbish cans, her feeble frame seemingly on the verge of being overpowered by the weight. Unable to endure such a heart-wrenching scene any longer, Sam, with a surge of kindness flooding his heart, bolted towards her. "May I help you?" he inquired, his voice laced with genuine concern. Mary, taken aback by his sudden approach, hesitated for a split second. However, it was the sincerity gleaming in Sam's eyes that convinced her to nod ever so slightly. With Sam taking charge of the bins effortlessly, Mary followed, her eyes now shimmering with a tinge of gratitude. As they reached her doorstep, a few words were exchanged, and lo and behold, a faint smile crept onto Mary's face, as if the frosty relationship between them had started to thaw under the warmth of Sam's act. Little did they know that this was just the prelude to a heartwarming Christmas surprise. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Christmas morning arrived, bathing our humble abode in a soft, golden glow. Suddenly, a knock at the door shattered the stillness of the room. Roused from our slumber, we hastened to the door, our hearts pounding with anticipation. And there, much to our astonishment, was no one but a capacious bag laden with goodies. When the bag was opened, it revealed a cornucopia of delights – from creamy cheese to succulent meats, and from delicate cookies to vibrant candies. It was as if a Christmas miracle had been bestowed upon us. Who could have been the anonymous benefactor? Then it dawned on us. It must be Mary! It was her way of reciprocating the kindness shown to her. This unexpected act of generosity not only filled our stomachs but also warmed our hearts, proving that even the coldest of relationships could be rekindled by the magic of the holiday spirit. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$