2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+少年冲浪手汤姆的逐梦与重生之路 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 少年冲浪手汤姆的逐梦与重生之路 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Tom was a skilled teenage surfer. He had always been attracted by the ocean and the challenge of riding its waves. He had trained tirelessly for years, sharpening his skills and perfecting his technique. He had participated in many competitions and won several titles. But one day, his world was turned upside down. It was a routine training day. While Tom was concentrating on his training in the sea, a shark came in through the broken shark-proof net and approached him. The animal knocked over Tom’s surfboard and bit his right leg, tearing through his flesh (肉体) and causing massive damage. Despite the seriousness of his injuries, Tom was lucky to survive the attack. He was rushed to the hospital, where he received an emergency operation. With the efforts of doctors, his leg was saved. 4 4 续写原文 Tom’s recovery was long and painful, but he refused to give up on his dream of surfing. At first, his progress was slow. He had to learn to walk again, and then to run, and then to jump. Every movement was a struggle. But with the help of his family and friends, as well as his own fierce determination, Tom gradually began to make progress. He spent hours every day in the gym, doing strength and balance exercises to rebuild his body. 5 5 续写原文 Finally, after months of hard work, Tom was ready to get back into the water. His first training was incredibly difficult, as he struggled to overcome his fear of the ocean and the memory of the shark attack. But gradually, he began to regain his confidence and his love for surfing. As his strength and skills returned, Tom set his sights on competing once again. He trained tirelessly, working with a coach to perfect his technique and improve his performance. And finally, the day of the competition arrived. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1: Standing in front of the starting line again, Tom felt nervous. Paragraph 2: Tom fell into the sea. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文中讲述了Tom 曾是一名技艺娴熟的青少年冲浪者，在冲浪领域屡获佳绩。然而一次日常训练中，鲨鱼冲破防鲨网咬了他的右腿，伤势严重但他幸运存活并保住了腿。漫长痛苦的恢复过程中，Tom 未放弃冲浪梦，在家人、朋友的支持与自身坚定决心下，努力做康复训练。数月后他重返大海，首次训练艰难，不过他逐渐克服了对海洋和鲨鱼攻击的恐惧，重拾信心与热爱。最终，他再次踏上冲浪赛场，向着新的目标奋进，展现了顽强不屈、追逐梦想的精神。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Paragraph 1: Standing in front of the starting line again, Tom felt nervous. 再次站在起跑线前，汤姆感到紧张。他的手心沁出了汗水，心脏在胸腔里剧烈跳动。眼前的海面波光粼粼，却让他不禁回想起那次可怕的鲨鱼袭击。观众们的欢呼声在耳边回响，他深吸一口气，努力让自己镇定下来。他紧紧握住冲浪板，目光坚定地望向远方涌起的海浪，试图将恐惧转化为前进的动力，心里默默告诉自己，这是他重新证明自己的机会，无论如何都要勇敢地冲出去。 11 11 续写思路分析 Paragraph 2: Tom fell into the sea. 汤姆冲进了浪中，可就在他试图完成一个高难度动作时，突然一阵强烈的水流冲击过来，打乱了他的节奏，使他瞬间失去了平衡。他的身体不由自主地向一侧倾斜，冲浪板也从脚下飞了出去。紧接着，他整个人便直直地坠入了海中。冰冷的海水瞬间将他包围，他拼命地挣扎着，试图重新浮出水面。耳边是海水的轰鸣声和自己剧烈的心跳声，眼前是一片模糊的蓝色，他努力挥动着双臂，朝着水面游去，心中只有一个信念，那就是一定要回到冲浪板上，继续完成这次比赛。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Standing in front of the starting line again, Tom felt nervous. His palms were sweaty and his heart was pounding violently in his chest. The glistening sea in front of him involuntarily reminded him of that dreadful shark attack. The cheers of the audience rang in his ears. He took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down. Gripping his surfboard tightly, he looked firmly at the waves surging in the distance, attempting to turn his fear into the driving force for moving forward. He told himself silently that this was his chance to prove himself again and he must bravely ride the waves no matter what. 14 14 范文呈现 Tom paddled hard and caught a wave. As he started to stand up on the board, a sudden strong undercurrent hit him, throwing off his balance. His body tilted to one side uncontrollably and the surfboard flew out from under his feet. In the blink of an eye, he plunged into the sea. The icy water engulfed him immediately. He thrashed about desperately, struggling to resurface. The roar of the water and the sound of his own frantic heartbeat filled his ears. With a blurry blue all around him, he flailed his arms vigorously, swimming towards the surface, with only one thought in his mind - he had to get back on the surfboard and finish this competition. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Standing in front of the starting line again, Tom felt as if a thousand butterflies were fluttering in his stomach. His palms, damp with nervous sweat, and his heart, pounding like a jackhammer, betrayed his unease. The glistening sea that stretched out before him, which had once been the stage for his triumphs, now ominously reminded him of the terrifying shark attack. Amid the deafening cheers of the audience that echoed around him, he took a deep breath, attempting to soothe his frayed nerves. With his fingers tightly gripping the surfboard, he fixed his gaze firmly on the approaching waves, determined to transform his fear into a propelling force. It was precisely this moment that he silently vowed to himself was his opportunity to reclaim his glory and that he would, without a doubt, bravely ride the waves, no matter the odds. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Tom paddled with all his might and managed to latch onto a wave. But just as he was about to stand up on the board, a sudden, powerful undercurrent, like an invisible hand, yanked at his feet and sent him tumbling. His body, tilting uncontrollably to one side, caused the surfboard to be wrenched from beneath him. In the blink of an eye, he was plunged into the icy depths. The frigid water, like a hungry beast, immediately swallowed him whole. Thrashing about desperately, he fought to resurface. The thunderous roar of the water and the frantic drumming of his own heart filled his ears. Surrounded by a hazy blue blur, he flailed his arms with all his strength, his mind firmly set on one thing - that he must get back on the surfboard and see this competition through to the end. For it was not just a competition; it was a testament to his unyielding spirit. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$