2025届读后续写写作练习-人与社会：贫家幼子，情暖圣诞 讲义

读后续写-人与社会：贫家幼子，情暖圣诞 第二节读后续写 第三节阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As Christmas decorations appeared in town, our parents called my two younger brothers and me together. At first, I thought someone had died, because I had never seen my parents look so sad. My brothers and I stood waiting for the awful news. Mom hugged me as she murmured, “Christmas is going to be different this year. We won’t be having a tree or presents. We can barely afford food.” Dad, resting on the couch, beckoned(招手示意)the boys into his arms. “Things will change when I get back to work.” My family was poorer than dirt. Dad, the only bread-earner in our family, worked in a coal mine. However, soon after returning to work at the end of a long strike, Dad was hurt in a rock fall that broke bones in his foot. Lying on the couch with the swollen foot high on pillows, he didn’t talk or smile much. There was little to smile about. No work, no income. At nine years old, I mothered my younger brothers: Rodney, aged six, and Stevie, three. We shared a small bedroom. That night, after our parents’ announcement, we talked. Rodney began. “Em, did you see how sad Mommy and Daddy looked? I thought Mommy was gonna cry.” “Me, too. Daddy’s foot’s … this big” whispered Stevie, holding out his arms. “Yeah ... We’re in hard times,” I said. “It makes Mommy and Daddy sad.” “But we don’t have to be sad,” I added, hoping to brighten the mood. “Since there are still several weeks to go, maybe we can do something to cheer them up,” I said with overdone enthusiasm. The boys proposed, “We can take the money from our piggy bank ... earn some more … and surprise them with gifts!” “I can run errands(跑腿)for Aunt … em … and neighbors to earn money,” I offered. “Yeah,” Rodney added, “Stevie and I can return bottles and save the deposit money ... instead of buying candy!” He pushed Stevie gently with his elbow. “Yeah!” Stevie clutched his hands together. We had a plan! Until they nodded off, I coached my little brothers (especially Stevie) in ways to guard our secret. “Don’t talk about it during the day.” 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: We awoke in the morning, transforming from sad children to the secret agents on an important mission! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On Christmas morning, we hurried into the living room and handed the gifts to Mommy and Daddy. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、事件线索 1. 圣诞节将至，父母告知 “我” 和两个弟弟今年圣诞节将没有圣诞树和礼物，因父亲在煤矿工作受伤，家庭失去收入来源，经济陷入困境。 2. “我们” 三个孩子决定采取行动，从自己的存钱罐拿出钱，并计划通过帮阿姨和邻居跑腿、回收瓶子等方式挣钱为父母准备礼物，还互相叮嘱要保守秘密。 二、人物情感线索 1. 开始时，父母因家庭经济状况而悲伤、忧愁，“我们” 因父母的神情而感到不安、难过，以为有不好的事情发生。 2. 当决定为父母准备礼物后，“我们” 充满热情、期待，带着一种使命感，努力为实现计划而行动，希望能给父母带来惊喜，改善家庭压抑的氛围。 三、文章主旨 文章通过描述一个贫困家庭在圣诞节面临的困境以及孩子们为给父母惊喜而努力的故事，展现了家庭在困难时期的相互关爱与支持。传达出即使生活艰难，家人间的爱与温暖依然可以成为力量源泉，孩子们纯真的心意和积极的行动能够在困境中点亮希望之光，强调亲情的珍贵以及面对困境时乐观和爱的重要性。 四、读后续写思路 续写第一段：可以写孩子们在接下来的日子里积极实施计划，详细描述 “我” 跑腿时的经历，比如遇到的困难或热心人的帮助，两个弟弟回收瓶子时的可爱模样和遇到的小插曲等。他们如何努力节省每一分钱，克服各种诱惑，一心只为给父母准备惊喜，并且随着圣诞节临近，他们越发兴奋又小心翼翼地守护着秘密。 续写第二段：描写圣诞节早上父母看到礼物时的反应，他们可能先是惊讶，然后被孩子们的心意深深感动得热泪盈眶。父母会表达对孩子们的感激与爱，一家人在这个特殊的圣诞节虽然没有丰盛的物质，但却被浓浓的亲情包围，共同度过一个难忘而温馨的节日，体现出亲情在困境中给予的力量和慰藉。 5、 范文 We awoke in the morning, transforming from sad children to the secret agents on an important mission! I immediately started my errand-running task. I raced around the neighborhood, delivering messages and groceries for Aunt and neighbors. Rodney and Stevie, meanwhile, scoured every corner for empty bottles. Rodney carried a large sack, and Stevie toddled behind, his little hands clutching a few bottles he had found. Despite the cold and weariness, we were filled with determination. We resisted the temptation of candies and small toys with the thought of our parents' smiles. As Christmas drew nearer, our excitement grew, but we still guarded our secret vigilantly. On Christmas morning, we hurried into the living room and handed the gifts to Mommy and Daddy. Mommy's eyes widened in astonishment, and Daddy sat up straighter, his face a mixture of surprise and emotion. “My dear children, how did you manage this?” Mommy exclaimed, tears welling up. We beamed with pride as we told them our story. Daddy hugged us tightly, his voice choked with gratitude. “This is the best Christmas gift ever. We may be poor, but we have the richest love in this family.” We spent the day sharing simple joys, the warmth of family love filling the room, making this a Christmas to remember. 6、 高分表达 1. barely（几乎不） 2. swollen（肿胀的） 3. enthusiasm（热情） 4. errand（跑腿） 5. scour（搜寻） 6. toddle（蹒跚学步） 7. weariness（疲倦） 8. astonishment（惊讶） 9. emotion（情感） 10. beamed（面露喜色） 11. “At nine years old, I mothered my younger brothers: Rodney, aged six, and Stevie, three.”（同位语结构） 12. “We had a plan! Until they nodded off, I coached my little brothers (especially Stevie) in ways to guard our secret.”（时间状语从句） 13. “Mommy's eyes widened in astonishment, and Daddy sat up straighter, his face a mixture of surprise and emotion.”（独立主格结构） 14. “This is the best Christmas gift ever. We may be poor, but we have the richest love in this family.”（并列句与最高级表达） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$