2025届四川省内江市高三上学期一诊英语读后续写讲评课件（读后续写十大万能通用句式）

2025届内江一诊英语读后续写讲评 （读后续写十大万能通用句式） Frida Sadhana had been living with Mr. and Mrs. Acharya for over six months now. They were a retired couple who had taken her in as a paying guest while she pursued her first year of engineering college in a brand new city. Despite being away from her own family for the first time ever, the Acharyas had made her feel at home with their warmth and kindness. Mr. Acharya, a retired economist, had been particularly helpful with her studies. He often reviewed her notes, offered advice and patiently explained complex concepts to her. His friendly nature and mentoring made her academic journey smoother and more enjoyable. But today was different. It was her birthday and being so far away from her family made her feel very low. The care the Acharyas showered her with was comforting, but she felt a void（空白）only her beloved family members could fill on her special day. She sat quietly in the living room, where Mr. Acharya was engaged in a book and Mrs. Acharya was busy in the kitchen. "I miss my family so much today," Sadhana said softly, her voice filled with sadness. Mrs. Acharya looked up from her cooking, her eyes full of understanding. "We know it's tough, dear. Being away from family on special days can be really hard." Sadhana managed a small smile. "I'm so grateful for your company. You've really made me feel at home." Mrs. Acharya patted her head kindly and served them dinner. The meal was delicious, but she just couldn't help but feel gloomy. She tried to focus on the conversation and enjoy the food, but her thoughts kept drifting back to her family. She thought about how, every year on her birthday, her mother cooked her favourite meal and her father took her on a lovely long drive and treated her to her favourite mango ice cream. After dinner, Mrs. Acharya, with a mysterious smile, said, "My dear, stop being upset. Come with me!" 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Filled with curiosity, Sadhana followed Mrs. Acharya. Mr. Acharya came in, holding a bottle of freshly made mango juice. Curious, Sadhana followed Mrs. Acharya. They entered the kitchen. There, on the counter was a beautiful vanilla and mango cake with bright letters in the centre that read , “ Happy Birthday.Sadhana.”Sadhana's eyes widened in surprise.“ You baked this for me?” Mrs. Acharya nodded,her smile gorgeous.（独立主格结构）“ Yes, dear." Sadhana's eyes were filled with tears as she hugged Mrs. Acharya tightly. “ Thank you so much, You even remember the flavors I love! This really means so much to me.” Mr. Acharya came in, 1.________ (hold) a bottle of 2.______(fresh) made mango juice. “ Drink to Sadhana and tomaking wonderful 3.________ (memory) , even when far from home. " They all clinked their glasses together and Sadhana 4.________ (take) her first bite of the cake. It was very similar 5.________ the one she had every year and yet,there was a new kind of joy 6.________ (attach) to it. It wasn't 7.________ same as celebrating with her family, but the love and care from the Acharyas made her feel cherished 8.________ supported. “ This cake is 9.________ (amaze) ,”Sadhana said with a smile, her eyes still misty. “ Thank you for this.”10.________ though Sadhana was away from her family, she had a memorable and heartwarming birthday. holding freshly memories took to attached the and amazing Even Mr. Acharya came in, holding a bottle of freshly made mango juice. “ Drink to Sadhana and tomaking wonderful memories, even when far from home. " They all clinked their glasses together and Sadhana took her first bite of the cake. It was very similar to the one she had every year and yet,there was a new kind of joy attached to it. It wasn't the same as celebrating with her family, but the love and care from the Acharyas made her feel cherished and supported. “ This cake is amazing,”Sadhana said with a smile, her eyes still misty. “ Thank you for this.”Even though Sadhana was away from her family, she had a memorable and heartwarming birthday. Mr. Acharya came in, holding a bottle of freshly made mango juice. “ Drink to Sadhana and tomaking wonderful memories, even when far from home. " They all clinked their glasses together碰杯 and Sadhana took her first bite of the cake. It was very similar to the one she had every year and yet,there was a new kind of joy attached to it. It wasn't the same as celebrating with her family, but the love and care from the Acharyas made her feel cherished and supported. “ This cake is amazing,”Sadhana said with a smile, her eyes still misty.泪眼朦胧 “ Thank you for this.”Even though Sadhana was away from her family, she had a memorable and heartwarming birthday. 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 一．无灵主语句：（情绪描写万能通用） A wave/sense of +常见的情绪名词（happiness, joy, delight / surprise, astonishment /shame/anger /despair /regret /sorrow /horror/anxiety /disappointment/ satisfaction /puzzlement ）+有灵动词(seized /took hold of/ flooded over/swept over)+ sb. When the host announced that I won the prize, a wave of excitement and delight took hold of/swept over me. 当主持人宣布她得奖了的时候,她激动的不能自已。 【2021年新高考全国卷】Jenna and Jeff jumped to their feet and a wide excitement took hold of them. 爸爸答应俩孩子帮助他们做母亲节早餐。 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 一．无灵主语句：（情绪描写万能通用） A wave/sense of +常见的情绪名词（happiness, joy, delight / surprise, astonishment /shame/anger /despair /regret /sorrow /horror/anxiety /disappointment/ satisfaction /puzzlement ）+有灵动词(seized /took hold of/ flooded over/swept over)+ sb. When the host announced that I won the prize, a wave of excitement and delight took hold of/swept over me. 当主持人宣布她得奖了的时候,她激动的不能自已。 【2021年新高考全国卷】Jenna and Jeff jumped to their feet and a wide excitement took hold of them. 爸爸答应俩孩子帮助他们做母亲节早餐。 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 二. With 的复合结构：（情绪动作描写通用） with +n.+adj/adv/to do/doing/done/prep-phrase The boy dressed in dirty clothes looked up at me with tears welling up in his eyes. 那个穿着脏衣服的男孩眼含泪水的抬头看着我。 【2021年新高考全国卷】 Mother was so surprised she froze with her mouth wide open. 【2023年新高考全国卷】 With tears in my eyes I said to him, " I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your timely help. 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 三．So … that 句型（情绪描写万能通用） so+表示情绪的形容词angry/ sad/frightened/ moved/ surprised/ embarrassed + that +体现该情绪动作表情。 She felt so angry that she stormed out of the room, slamming the door. 她如此生气以至于一阵风似的冲出房间，重重地摔上门。 【2021年新高考全国卷】When they spotted their father, the twins were so embarrassed that they both dropped their heads in shame.【2023年新高考全国卷】On hearing of the unexpected news, she was so surprised that she froze with her mouth wide open. 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 四．动作链句型 : （动作描写万能通用） 主语. +V, V and V.  The coach stepped forward, patted him on the shoulder, and encouraged him never to give up. 他向前迈了一步,拍了拍他的肩膀并鼓励他永远不要放弃。 【2021年新高考全国卷】 Father turned around, left the kitchen and tiptoed to the bedroom. 【2023年新高考全国卷】 He stepped forward, patted me on the shoulder, and said softly, "where there is a will, there is a way. " 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 五．非谓语动词作状语（动作描写万能通用）：  主语＋V+非谓语动词 / 非谓语动词+主语+V Seeing his figure, she rushed to him with excitement and fell into his arms. 一看见他的身影她就兴奋地冲了过去扑进他的怀里。 【2022年新高考全国卷】 Eventually,finishing the running, he rushed to me with excitement and fell into my arms. 【2022年新高考全国卷】 After tasting it, Mother hugged the twins as tightly as possible and her eyes were filled with tears of gratitude. 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 六．be doing/be about to…when  正在/刚要做某事, 就在这时（生动讲述故事发展通用） I was walking along the river when I heard someone calling for help. 我正 沿着河边散步这时我突然听到有人呼救。 【2022年新高考全国卷】 I was about to say “come on” when the running began. 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 七．.“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone. （语言描写万能通用）: 某人以…的声音、 语气说到 “All that we have suffered will eventually make us better. Don't give up until the blessing happens,” he said in a firm voice. “我们已经遭受的一切终将会让我们变得更好。不要放弃直到幸事发生。” 他坚定地说。 【2021年新高考全国卷】They presented the breakfast and said in a happy voice , “Happy mother’s day”. 【2022年新高考全国卷】“Don’t be afraid of being laughed at.” I continued in a firm voice. 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 八． From the experience/From then on/ After that,（主题升华万能通用） From the experience, I was fully aware of the responsibility and value as a volunteer, which inspired me to continue to pursue my dream. 从这次经历，我充分认识到作为志愿者的责任和价值，而这个也激励我继续追求我的梦。 【2024年新高考全国卷】 From the unforgettable experience, I realize that a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference. I should pass on the kindness. 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 九． Only then did sb. realize that…“直到那时某人才意识到…”（主题升华万能通用） Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful. 直到那时候，我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖美丽。 【2023年新高考全国卷】 Only then did I realize that it was bravery and determination that can overcome all the difficulties. 读后续写 | 十大万能通用句式（高考真题版） 十．留白式结尾: 寓情于景，画面定格（故事结尾万能通用）Bathed in the warm sunshine, we made our way home happily. 沐浴着温暖 的阳光，我们高高兴兴的朝家走去。 【2022年新高考全国卷】 He hugged me as tightly as possible and his eyes were filled with tears of gratitude. 【2023年新高考全国卷】 After that, bathed in the warm sunshine, we made our way to the award presentation. Goodbye! $$