2025届四川省内江市高三上学期一诊英语应用文投稿 讲评（运动 的好处含视频）课件

2025届内江一诊英语作文讲评 Frida 假定你是李华, 你校英文报正在举办主题为“Sports and Me”的征文活动, 请你写一篇英语短文投稿, 内容包括: 1. 你最喜欢的体育运动; 2. 此项运动对你的影响。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Sports and Me     1._______ a sports lover, I am passionate about various forms of exercise. Among them, jogging 2._______ (stand) out as my favorite. Initially,3. _______ attracted me was that it welcomes everyone, regardless of age or gender. All it takes is a pair of 4._______(trainer) and a relaxed mind.Gradually, I have realized, apart from its 5._______ (convenient) , jogging has shaped me both physically and 6._______(mental) . Not only has it become a lifelong habit, 7._______ it also serves as a source of relief during tough times, 8._______ (remind) me of the value of perseverance and optimism. Looking ahead, I know there are countless sports waiting 9._______ (explore) , but jogging will always hold a special place in my heart. I look forward to continuing this journey,10. _______ enriches my life. As stands what trainers convenience mentally but reminding to be explored which As a sports lover, I am passionate about various forms of exercise. Among them, jogging stands out as my favorite. Initially, what attracted me was that it welcomes everyone, regardless of age or gender. All it takes is a pair of trainers and a relaxed mind, Gradually, I have realized, apart from its convenience , jogging has shaped me both physically and mentally. Not only has it become a lifelong habit, but it also serves as a source of relief during tough times, reminding me of the value of perseverance and optimism. Looking ahead, I know there are countless sports waiting to be explored , but jogging will always hold a special place in my heart. I look forward to continuing this journey, which enriches my life. 对……充满激情 是我的最爱 吸引我的是 不分年龄和性别 所需要的只是 塑造了我的身心 作为……的用途； 充当……的角色 展望未来 丰富了我的生活 As a sports lover, I am passionate about various forms of exercise. Among them, jogging stands out as my favorite. Initially, what attracted me was that it welcomes everyone, regardless of age or gender. All it takes is a pair of trainers and a relaxed mind, Gradually, I have realized, apart from its convenience , jogging has shaped me both physically and mentally. Not only has it become a lifelong habit, but it also serves as a source of relief during tough times, reminding me of the value of perseverance and optimism. Looking ahead, I know there are countless sports waiting to be explored , but jogging will always hold a special place in my heart. I look forward to continuing this journey, which enriches my life. How Playing Sports Benefits Your Body And Your Brain 关于运动与健康的短语 sports and fitness运动与健康 ice sports冰上运动 ball games球类运动 track and field 田径运动 swimming events 游泳项目 gymnastics 体操 go jogging慢跑锻炼 go cycling 骑自行车 play tai chi打太极拳 sportsmanship体育精神teamwork协同工作 persistence坚持不懈 strong determination坚定的决心show respect for..尊重……. work hard to achieve excellence努力取得优秀成绩 benefits of playing sports体育运动的好处 build ah.up增强某人的体质 keep fit/one'sfigure 保持健康/体形 lower the risk of suffering diseases降低患病的风险reduce stress 减轻压力 get over negative feelings克服负面情绪 keep a good state of mind保持良好的心态 learn to focus on peace of mind学会专注于内心的平静feel positive about life对生活持积极态度 work out a training plan制订一份训练计划 wear proper clothes to avoid injury 穿着合适的衣服以免受伤 warm up properly before activities 运动前适当热身 warm down after doing sports运动后做放松活动 关于运动与健康的话题佳句 1. Sport teaches you character, it teaches you to play by the rules, it teachcs you to know what it feels like to win and lose—it teaches you about life. 运动教你坚强品格，它教你遵守规则，它教你感悟输赢——它教你生活的真谛。 2.I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered so loudly that I thought my lungs would burst！ 我也兴奋不已，欢呼雀跃，我觉得我的肺都要炸裂了！ 3. Doing exercise regularly can not only build us up, but also help us study more efficiently. Only in this way will we leada healthy and wonderful life. 经常锻炼不仅可以增强我们的体质，还可以帮助我们更有效地学习。只有这样我们才能过上健康美好的生活。 benefits of playing sports体育运动的好处 4. Not only do sports help people to stay fit, but the competition and teamwork in sport give people strength to overcome difficulties. 体育运动不仅有助于人们保持健康，而且运动中的竞争和团队合作给人们克服困难的力量。 5. The most important thing in the Olympic Games is not to win but to take part, just as the most important thing in life is not the triumph but the struggle. 奥运会中最重要的不是胜利，而是参与，正如人生最重要的不是成就，而是奋斗。 佳作欣赏 As is well known, playing sports is popular all over the world, which benefits us in many ways.  To begin with, it can build us up and help us keep fit physicaly.It also enables us to lose weight and lower the risk of suffering discases, such a high blood presure.Additiomally, it is a good way to develop teamwork skills and strong determination.Last but not least, we often play sports for social reasons,for it is a good way of making new friends and making us feel positive about life    Therefore,everyone should take an active part in sports. 　　征文投稿类文章属于活动介绍类中叙事的一种，一般是就某个特 定主题进行论述和描写，以记叙文和议论文居多。具体写作结构为： 　　（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你 写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Youth and Me  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 写作指导 1. 本篇作文要求学生写一篇征文。文章应包含题目所列要点，并且应交代写作背景——学校英文报 Youth 创刊十周年。 2. 文章可分为三段，分别讲述读报经历、喜爱的栏目及理由，最后一段谈期望与祝福。 3. 写作时要根据主要内容的顺序来写，可以适当增加细节，并且选用恰当的连接词使文章结构清晰、语言流畅。 Youth and Me For the 10th Anniversary of Youth， as a fan of Youth， I want to share my reading experience. Youth has accompanied me throughout my high school years. It covers a wide variety of topics to attract senior students， opening a new window to the outside world for us. As a regular reader of Youth， I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news. I sincerely hope that Youth will make new progress and that more readers will share their own stories. 佳作点评 1. 本篇作文完整地表达了写作要点。文章的内容及行文风格符合征文 的要求，表达流畅，情感真挚。 2. 作者不仅运用了accompany， cover， attract， be fascinated by， gain ...from， sincerely，make progress等高级词汇，还使用了动词 不定式、动词-ing短语和介词短语作状语。 3. 本文还运用了It covers a wide variety of topics to attract senior students， opening a new window to the outside world for us.和As a regular reader of Youth，I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news. 等较为复杂的句式。这些高级词汇和复杂句式的使用提升了文章的 档次。 第一部分（首段）：陈述一个问题或一种现象 1. There is no doubt that food waste has been a very serious social problem. 不可否认，食物浪费已经是一个非常严重的社会问题。 2. It is common knowledge that plastic pollution has been doing great harm to our environment. 众所周知，塑料污染正在严重破坏我们的环境。 3. According to a report， millions of tons of garbage is produced every day worldwide. If we let the situation goes on， our cities will be surrounded by the garbage in the near future. 据报道，全球每天要产生 数百万吨垃圾。如果我们让这种形势发展下去，在不久的将来，我 们的城市将被垃圾包围。 第二部分（主体段）：阐述具体情况及解决方案 1. Every day thousands of tons of plastic waste is dumped into nature without being reused or recycled. 每天数千吨的塑料垃圾未经重新利用和循环使用就倒进了大自然。 2. By sorting the garbage， not only can we turn “waste” into wealth， but we can also save energy and reduce environmental pollution. 通过垃圾分类，我们不仅能够变废为宝，而且可以节约能源和减少 环境污染。 3. In the restaurants， people usually order more than they can eat； at home， people dump the leftovers every day. 在饭馆里，人们通常要 多点菜；在家里，人们每天倒掉剩饭。 第三段：呼吁人们行动起来 1. It’s high time we took measures to stop food waste. 我们现在必须采取措施反对食物浪费。 2. So， please sort your garbage from today on. It’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. 因此，从今天开始实施垃圾分类。保护环 境，人人有责。 3. We have only one planet after all. Let’s take action to protect it， for you， for me， and for our future generations！ 毕竟我 们只有一个地球。让我们行动起来保护它，为了你，为了我， 也为了我们的后代！ 　　你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则主题为Reduce Screen Time to Protect Our Eyesight的倡议书，内容包括： 1. 现状：电子产品影响我们的视力； 2. 减少屏幕时间的必要性； 3. 呼吁大家行动起来。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 参考范文： Reduce Screen Time to Protect Our Eyesight It’s true that nowadays we are surrounded by different electronic devices， such as TVs， computers， mobile phones， and tablets. Due to the increasing number of hours we spend on them， our eyesight has been going from bad to worse. Actually， it’s absolutely unnecessary for us to spend so much time on those electronic devices. For one thing， we do many meaningless things on them， such as chatting， shopping， and watching short videos. For another， the long screen time has been doing great harm to our health — very few of us don’t wear nearsighted glasses nowadays！ Dear students， it’s time we reduced screen time to protect our eyesight. After all， never should we enjoy the convenience of technology at the expense of our health. The Students’ Union Goodbye! Lavf57.71.100 Packed by Bilibili XCoder v2.0.2 $$