2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习 邻居的冷漠：我心中的不解之谜 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 邻居的冷漠：我心中的不解之谜 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 For courage, my fingers clung to the harness (绳套) on Chó’s broad back as we passed my neighbor fence. Walking by Mr. Groll’s yard is the best part of our morning walk, and also the worst. It is the best part because the roses talk to us. “Good morning, Chó,” whisper the rose scents to my guide dog’s nose. Other roses shout to me, “Hello, Mai!” Now comes the worst part: Mr. Groll. As usual, friendly Chó thumps her tail. But Chó is just a dog; how can she know that this neighbor does not like me at all? “Hello, Mr. Groll.” I greeted him as I did every morning. And like every other morning, he did not answer me. But I knew he was there, watching, behind his fence. He always sounds out of breath, and the creaky gate swings nervously in his hand. Maybe he’s afraid of me because I’m blind. Disabilities do scare grown-ups sometimes. Then I remembered: the other day I heard him playing checkers with my friend Jimmy, who’s in a wheelchair. 4 4 续写原文 Chó and I marched on, and my thoughts kept step. “Why did Mr. Groll ignore me?” It’s a mystery to me. Papa has told me that some folks do not like people from faraway places. Does this solve the mystery? Maybe Mr. Groll does not like Vietnamese neighbors. No, that can’t be it. Every Saturday Mr. Groll and my big brother, Lien, help each other with yard work. They are friends. Well, then, maybe he doesn’t like me because I’m a girl. The sidewalk hummed(发出嗡嗡声) beneath my feet. A skateboard zoomed by. “Hello, Mai and Choó” my friend Jana yelled. “Hi, Mr. Groll.” I waited. If Mr. Groll ignored Jana, then the mystery was solved. But his voice called out, “Hello, Jana!” 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： The sound of it broke my heart. Paragraph 2：“Chó is a very... big dog.” he said in a voice that told me he thought I would laugh at him. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 文章讲述了故事的主人公是盲人女孩 Mai，每天早晨她和导盲犬 Chó 散步经过邻居 Mr. Groll 的院子时，玫瑰的香气让她感到愉悦，这是散步中美好的部分。然而，Mr. Groll 对她的问候从不回应，这让 Mai 很是困惑。Mai 猜测 Mr. Groll 不喜欢她或许是因为她是盲人、来自远方或者是女孩，但这些猜测都被一些事实推翻，比如 Mr. Groll 会和坐轮椅的 Jimmy 玩棋，还会和她哥哥一起做庭院工作，甚至会回应其他孩子的招呼，唯独不理会 Mai，这一奇怪的现象成为 Mai 心中难以解开的谜团，让她在散步途中不断思索。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： The sound of it broke my heart. 那声音让我心碎。是从隔壁院子传来的隐隐约约的抽泣声，在这寂静的清晨显得格外揪心。我下意识地抓紧了 Chó 的牵引绳，它也似乎感受到了我的不安，喉咙里发出低沉的呜呜声。我深吸一口气，鼓起勇气朝着声音的来源走去。每靠近一步，那破碎的抽噎声就愈发清晰，我的心也跟着揪得更紧。是不是有小动物受伤了？还是有孩子在偷偷哭泣？种种猜测在我脑海中闪过，脚步也愈发急促起来，满心担忧着即将面对的未知状况。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：“Chó is a very... big dog.” he said in a voice that told me he thought I would laugh at him. “Chó 是一只非常…… 大的狗。” 他用一种似乎觉得我会嘲笑他的声音说道。我微微一怔，没想到一向对我冷漠的 Mr. Groll 会主动开口跟我谈论 Chó。我轻轻笑了笑，回答道：“是啊，不过她很温顺。” 我能感觉到他的不自在，他的呼吸有些急促，手指不停地抠着衣角。沉默片刻后，我鼓起勇气问他有没有听到刚刚那令人心碎的声音。他犹豫了一下，然后缓缓开口，说出的话让我大吃一惊，也让我们之间那层冰冷的隔阂开始出现了一丝裂缝，仿佛有什么秘密即将揭开，改变我们一直以来微妙而又尴尬的邻里关系。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 The sound of it broke my heart. It was the sound of a violin, playing a mournful tune that seemed to seep into my very soul. I was standing outside the old, abandoned house at the end of our street. Chó sat by my side, her head tilted as if she too was affected by the melancholic melody. I had often heard rumors about this place, that a once-renowned violinist had lived here before vanishing mysteriously. Now, as the music filled the air, I couldn't help but wonder if those tales were true. The notes were filled with such sorrow and longing that I felt tears welling up in my eyes. I knew I had to find out who was playing and why the music was so heartrending. With Chó leading the way, I slowly made my way towards the house, my heart pounding with a mixture of trepidation and anticipation. 13 13 范文呈现 “Chó is a very... big dog.” he said in a voice that told me he thought I would laugh at him. I turned around to see Mr. Thompson, the local grocer, standing there. He had always been a bit gruff and distant, so his attempt at small talk took me by surprise. I smiled and replied, “Yes, she is, but she's a gentle giant.” He shifted his weight from one foot to the other, looking uncomfortable. After a moment of awkward silence, he cleared his throat and said, “I saw you heading towards the old house. You know, it's not safe there. There are rumors of it being haunted.” I raised an eyebrow, intrigued. “Haunted? By what?” I asked. He leaned in closer, as if sharing a secret, and whispered, “Some say it's the ghost of the violinist, still playing his sad song, unable to find peace.” His words sent a shiver down my spine, but my curiosity was piqued even more. I thanked him for his concern and, with new determination, continued my journey towards the house, eager to uncover the truth behind the haunting melody and the mysterious violinist, despite the warnings. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 One day, as I was walking with Chó, the sound of it broke my heart. It was a heartrending melody, like a wailing cry of a lost soul, that floated through the air. Standing there, tears welling up in my eyes, I was determined to find its source. Chó, sensing my distress, walked closely beside me. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Nearby, "Chó is a very... big dog," came a voice. It was Mr. Groll. Nervously, he uttered those words, as if fearing my reaction. Little did he know that at that moment, my focus was solely on the mysterious sound. With a firm resolve, I decided to approach the origin of the music, ignoring the uneasiness in Mr. Groll's voice. It was in that dilapidated old house that the truth awaited me. Only by mustering up all my courage could I hope to unravel the enigma that lay within, and perhaps, in the process, understand the reason behind Mr. Groll's odd behavior as well. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$