2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+超市里的温暖：玛丽与马克的故事 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 超市里的温暖：玛丽与马克的故事 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 “I must have left my wallet home. I’m so sorry. I’ll have to come back for these things later, ” Mary said to the cashier, who started picking up the items and putting them back. Meanwhile, Mary prepared to walk away when the boy behind her in line spoke up. “Wait, ma’ am. You don’ t have many things anyway. I’ll pay for them, ” the boy said. He couldn’t be older than 12, and Mary noticed that he didn’t look particularly well-off so she wanted to refuse his offer. “I insist, ma’ am. Sometimes, we have to do good things, right? ” the boy said and paid for everything that Mary had picked out. 4 4 续写原文 After they got their groceries ready, Mary and the boy went outside. “Hey, I’m Mary. What’s your name? ” she said conversationally. “I’m Mark, ” the boy said. “Thank you so much for what you did, Mark. It saved me a trip to the store. Listen, how about giving me your phone number so I can pay you back as soon as I get my wallet, ” Mary suggested, and the kid wrote down his number on the receipt. “Here, but don’t worry about it. There’s no rush. I live nearby anyway, ” Mark said. “Although I also believe in paying kindness forward like you, we have to pay off our debts, ” Mary added, and they said goodbye. 5 5 续写原文 Mary told her daughter Anastacia about this incident and always thought of the boy who paid for her things, worrying that he might need the money urgently. So the next day, after calling the boy and learning his address, they went to his home. Returning the money, they began to chat. By talking more, Mary learned that Mark’s grandma needed a huge surgery for $23, 000. The hospital was keeping her in observation while Mark raised the money. And he just started a GoFundMe but it was not that popular. “You shouldn’t have to do that on your own, ” Mary said, concerned. “We don’t have anyone else. It’s only us, ” Mark shrugged. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Mary and Anastacia looked at each other and came to a wordless decision. Paragraph 2：The GoFundMe project reached far beyond their goal. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了在超市里，玛丽发现自己忘带钱包，无奈准备稍后再来取选好的物品。这时，排在她后面的 12 岁男孩马克主动提出帮她付款，尽管马克看起来并不富裕，却坚持要这么做。之后玛丽想索要电话号码以便还钱，马克留下号码并表示不急。玛丽一直惦记着此事，担心马克急需钱用，次日得知地址后和女儿前去还钱。聊天中玛丽得知马克的奶奶需 2.3 万美元手术费，马克正通过 GoFundMe 筹款，却还未得到太多关注，玛丽为此深感担忧。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： I was at a restaurant with my family, which had a karaoke machine. 玛丽和阿纳斯塔西娅对视一眼，无需言语便心领神会地做出了一个决定。她们深知马克的不易和奶奶病情的紧迫，决定要全力帮助这个善良的孩子。回到家后，玛丽和女儿开始在各自的社交圈子里分享马克的故事，详细讲述他的善举以及目前所面临的困境，希望能发动身边的人一起为马克的奶奶捐款。她们还联系了当地的社区中心、学校等机构，请求他们帮忙宣传这个 GoFundMe 项目，不放过任何一个可能的途径来扩大这个项目的影响力，希望能汇聚更多的爱心来帮助马克一家度过难关。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：I realized not getting into the program did not mean that I had to give up all hope. 马克发起的 GoFundMe 项目如同星星之火，在玛丽母女以及众多热心人的努力下，迅速形成了燎原之势，很快就达到了远超预期的目标。来自四面八方的捐款如潮水般涌来，人们被马克的善良和玛丽母女的热心所打动，纷纷伸出援手。这些捐款不仅足够支付奶奶昂贵的手术费用，还为术后的康复治疗提供了充足的资金保障。医院也在收到足够的款项后，迅速安排了奶奶的手术，手术非常成功。马克一家对所有的好心人感激不已，而玛丽和阿纳斯塔西娅也为自己能够帮助这个善良的孩子感到无比欣慰，这个小小的善举如同温暖的阳光，照亮了每一个参与者的心灵，也让大家看到了人性中最美好的一面。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Mary and Anastacia looked at each other and came to a wordless decision. Their eyes met, and in that brief moment, a silent understanding passed between them. Without uttering a single word, they both knew what had to be done. Mary took out her phone and began scrolling through her contacts, determined to reach out to everyone she knew who might be able to help. Anastacia, on the other hand, fired up her laptop and started drafting a heartfelt message to share on social media, detailing Mark's kind act and the desperate situation his family was in. They worked tirelessly, making phone calls, sending emails, and sharing the GoFundMe link far and wide. They even visited local businesses, asking if they could put up posters or make announcements to spread the word. Their unwavering dedication and determination were palpable as they set out to make a difference for Mark and his grandmother. 14 14 范文呈现 The GoFundMe project reached far beyond their goal. Word of Mark's story spread like wildfire, thanks to Mary and Anastacia's efforts and the power of social media. People from all walks of life were touched by the young boy's selfless act and the urgency of his grandmother's situation. Donations started pouring in from every corner of the country, and even from overseas. What began as a seemingly insurmountable financial burden for Mark and his family quickly transformed into a heartwarming display of human kindness and generosity. The funds not only covered the $23,000 needed for the surgery but also provided additional resources for post-operative care and support. The hospital, seeing the outpouring of support, expedited the scheduling of the surgery, and it was a resounding success. Mark and his family were overwhelmed with gratitude, and Mary and Anastacia were filled with a sense of fulfillment and joy, knowing that their small act of kindness had set off a chain reaction that had changed lives forever. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Mary and Anastacia locked eyes, and in that split second, a tacit decision was reached. With firm resolve, Mary whipped out her phone and began dialing numbers, determined to enlist the help of every acquaintance who might offer a glimmer of hope. Anastacia, meanwhile, sat hunched over her laptop, fingers flying across the keyboard as she crafted a poignant social media post, recounting Mark's noble deed and his family's plight. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Word spread like wildfire, and soon, the GoFundMe project soared far beyond their wildest expectations. It was as if the kindness of strangers had been awakened, and donations flooded in from all directions. Not only did the funds amassed cover the hefty $23,000 for the surgery, but also ensured comprehensive post-operative care. The hospital, upon witnessing such an outpouring of support, hastened to schedule the operation, which was a remarkable success. Mark and his family were overcome with gratitude, and Mary and Anastacia were left with a profound sense of fulfillment, realizing that their small act of kindness had set in motion a wave of generosity that would be remembered for a long time to come. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$