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Full Room For Everyone’s Potential
Unit 7 Seasons
Task
By Fan Rong
The Experimental School Affiliated to Nanjing Normal University
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From hill to hill no bird in flight;
From path to path no man in sight.
A lonely fisherman afloat.(漂浮)
Is fishing snow in a lonely boat.
--- Liu Zongyuan
Enjoy a poem
[flait]
[sait]
[əˈfləut]
Fishing in Snow
Notice
Our school will hold a writing contest about your favourite
season. Write down your article and post it on the website.
The winner will get a prize.
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The activities we enjoy doing in this season
Conclusion
weather
views
The weather and special views in this
season
Read the article about the winter in Harbin and learn from it
Find out the structure(结构)of this article
Introduction of my favourite season
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Title: ______________________
Introduction of my favourite season
The weather and special views in this season
The activities we enjoy doing in this season
Conclusion
Tip1:
Have a clear writing structure
I love .../ My favourite season
Para1:
Para2:
Para3:
Para4:
Which is your favourite season?
Why do you like this season best?
My favourite season is ... / I love ...best.
Activity1: Introduce your favourite season with at least 2 sentences to your partner.
...
Para1: introduction
Para2: What's the weather like in winter in Harbin?
The temperature is_________________ and it is often _____.
usually below zero
snowy
summer in Nanjing?
autumn in Nanjing?
The temperature drops quickly.
spring in Nanjing
The days are becoming...and it is...
Use different expressions
(表达)to describe the weather!
[diːp]
Everything is covered in deep white snow.
[ˈfrəuzn]
The lakes and rivers are frozen.
You cannot see beautiful flowers or green trees,but the land is
quiet and beautiful.
Useful expressions to describe the views:
be covered in / with...
You cannot ...but...
Para2: What does Harbin look like in winter?
be covered in / with...
In spring / summer / autumn / winter, ...
Activity2: Talk about the views in your favourite season with your partner.
Write about the weather and views in your favourite season
The temperature is usually above / below / around...
The days are becoming...
It is often sunny / windy / rainy...
...be covered in / with...
You can...
It is exciting to have big snowball fights.
We throw snowballs at each other, screaming and laughing.
[θrəu]
[skriːm]
We also make snowmen and use carrots for noses.
I enjoy the Ice Festival each year.
Para3:What activities do people love doing in winter in Harbin?
Useful expressions to describe the activities
It is exciting / interesting / ... to do...
sb. do sth. , doing (and doing...)
Activity3:
Talk about the activities you like doing in your favourite season.
Write about the activities you love doing in this season
Useful expressions
It is exciting to do sth.
sb. do sth., doing (and doing)
enjoy the hot springs 泡温泉
go skating 滑冰
go skiing 滑雪
Tip2: Use different expressions(表达)
to enrich your writing!
How to write a good conclusion?
too simple
Winter is a great season full of______, __________ and________.
Activity4: Change a conclusion of this article.
fun
laughter
happiness
Make your sentences coherent (连贯)
A: We throw snowballs at each other. We make snowman.
We use carrots for their noses.I enjoy the Ice Festival.
B: We throw snowballs at each other. We also make snowman
and use carrots for their noses. Moreover, I enjoy the Ice Festival.
To show contrast(转折)
but; however,
To add further information(递进)
and…also / moreover,…
Tip3: Use transitional words
(转接词)to connect your ideas
Make your paragraphs better
memories
ice cream
streams
shade
supporting sentences 支撑句
topic sentence主题句
Activity5: Describe the season with a topic sentence and some supporting sentences.
Writing Time
Tip1:
Have a clear writing structure
Tip2: Use different expressions(表达)
to enrich your writing
Tip4:Use rhetorical devices(修辞手法),
such as simile(明喻)and parallelism(排比)
Tip3: Use transitional words
(转接词) to connect(连接)
the ideas
Assess your writing
Your article should:
have a clear structure (introduction, main body and conclusion)
include main points (introduction, views, activities and conclusion)
use different expressions and make no grammatical mistakes
have a good handwriting, use correct punctuation(标点) and
capitalization(大写)
I hope all of you can discover the beauty of nature and accept the changes of each season.
Enjoy the seasons
Each season has her own beauty.
Homework:
1. Polish your article and add some pictures in your article.
2. Post it on our school website.
江雪
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