Unit7 Task 2课件-- 2024-2025学年牛津译林版八年级英语上册

Unit 7 Seasons By Tong Lanqing Jinling High School Xianlin Campus Task 2 Spring Summer Autumn Winter Task：Try to make your article more beautiful? 2 Others Structure /Content Language Coherence（行文） Shen Xin Structure /Content Structure Introduction Main body Conclusion Tip 1: _____ structure Clear Content Introduction Main body Conclusion What Why How weather views activities Tip 2: ______ content Content Rich weather views activities Others Structure /Content Language Coherence（行文） Language summer temperature is is makes Tip 1: Aviod ______ mistakes spelling Tip 2: Aviod __________ mistakes grammatical Language sentence patterns（句式） complex sentences（复杂句） figure of speech （修辞） Correct——Beautiful Language Language I always enjoy summer here in Nanjing. I can enjoy shade. I love swimming with my parents. I can have a good time on a lazy afternoon by a pool. I row a boat in summer. I like summer. Tip 3: Use _________ sentence patterns (句式) different Group work Work in a group of 3, use different sentence patterns to rewrite the following sentences as much as possible. Language sentence patterns（句式） complex sentences（复杂句） figure of speech （修辞） Language Tip 4: Use complex sentences (复杂句) Time seems to go faster when ... Language sentence patterns（句式） complex sentences（复杂句） figure of speech （修辞） Language personification 拟人 Language The flowers____________ in the gentle breeze. Insects _________ beautiful music on summer nights. In Autumn, maple leaves _________ freely in the sun. Trees and flowers ________ to grow in winter. Fill in the proper verbs smile/dance play dance forget Tip 5: Use figure of speech (修辞) Others Structure /Content Language Coherence（行文） Coherence Tip 1: Use transitional words or expressions (过渡语) and /also /not only...but also however / while / but in order to/ to What’s more /moreover /besides because / so/ as a result at the same time/before/after/when Others Structure /Content Language Coherence（行文） Others Tip 2: _______ punctuation 标点 Tip 3: ________handwriting Tip 1: ______ capitalization 大小写 Correct Correct Beautiful Self-assessment（自评） After readign this table I believe you can tell whether an article is good or not. Let's enjoy one of them? do you like it? Peer-assessment （互评） Group work Work in a group of 3. 1.Exchange your articles with the other two members. 2. Evaluate the articles. After readign this table I believe you can tell whether an article is good or not. Let's enjoy one of them? do you like it? Polish（润色） your writing and make it more beautiful accoring to the Evaluation sheet on writing. Show time make the world colourful. Seasons Enjoy seasons! Enjoy your life! Homework 1. Polish your article and make it more beautiful. 2. Feel the beauty of the season now. Thank you！ By Tong Lanqing Jinling High School Xianlin Campus $$