2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+医生的告诫：我与肥胖和运动之缘 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 医生的告诫：我与肥胖和运动之缘 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Though I cat an apple almost every day, one month ago my doctor came to my house standing in front of me, not being kept away, due to my sudden illness. “Well Jian, I think I need to have a strong talk with you. You are overweight. Have you ever heard about Body Mass Index (指数), BMI? Well, I’ve weighed you and measured your height and you have a BMI of 28. That is obese (肥胖的), ” said the doctor. I knew I was a little bit overweight but I didn’t think it was that bad. He added that my name means healthy in Chinese and he thought it is time that I should become healthy. There is a direct link between my health and sport. So he asked me, “How much sport do you do every week? ” 4 4 续写原文 I told him that I go for a walk every weekend. Then he replied, “Hmm, that’s not a lot. Sport and health go together. They affect your mental, physical and emotional health. For example, sport can improve your mental health, allowing your brain to think better and focus. It will help you to learn more easily. Is that clear, Jian? ” “I think so. I know it would be good to be able to concentrate better at school. ” I said. The doctor explained to me that from a physical point of view, sport makes us tired so helps us to sleep better. At the same time, sport bums off the calories that we have consumed. It builds muscle and improves our circulation. Sport helps to control our cholesterol count (胆固醇指标) and this is important to stop us having a heart attack. Additionally, it also keeps our blood pressure normal and strengthens our bones. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： The doctor’s words left me lost in thought. Paragraph 2： “Exercising alone is hard. Why not: try some team sports? ” the doctor suggested. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 文章讲述了一个月前，因突然生病，医生上门告知 “我” 身体状况。“我” 虽日常吃苹果，但体重超标，BMI 达 28 属于肥胖。医生指出 “我” 名字寓意健康，如今应重视健康与运动的关联。“我” 每周仅周末散步，医生详细说明运动对身心健康的诸多益处，包括改善心理健康、助于睡眠、消耗卡路里、增强肌肉与循环系统、控制胆固醇、稳定血压及强化骨骼等，让 “我” 意识到运动对自身健康的重要性，也引出 “我” 后续可能的改变，围绕健康问题展开了这样一段经历。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： That afternoon, I took the dog and sneaked into the bathroom. 医生的话犹如一记重锤，狠狠地敲在我的心上，让我陷入了深深的沉思。我呆呆地坐在椅子上，回想着自己这些年不健康的生活习惯，那些高热量的食物、慵懒的周末时光仿佛电影般在脑海中放映。我意识到，自己的肥胖问题并非一日之寒，也明白了医生话语中的关切与担忧。我低头看着自己微微隆起的肚子，心中暗下决心，一定要做出改变，不能再这样放任自流下去。可是，改变谈何容易？一想到即将面临的艰苦锻炼，心中又不禁有些打退堂鼓，但身体的健康状况又不容我再拖延。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2： I thought my mom would punish me, but she was just standing there and laughing. “独自锻炼确实艰难。为何不尝试一些团队运动呢？” 医生的提议打破了屋内的沉默。我猛地抬起头，眼中闪过一丝疑惑与好奇。医生接着向我介绍了团队运动的好处，比如在运动过程中可以互相鼓励、互相监督，更容易坚持下去，而且还能结识新朋友，让锻炼不再枯燥乏味。他列举了一些常见的团队运动项目，如篮球、足球、排球等，还提到了附近的一些运动社团和俱乐部。我开始在脑海中想象自己参与团队运动的场景，和队友们一起奔跑、欢笑，共同为了胜利而努力，也许这真的是一个不错的办法。但同时，我又担心自己在团队中会跟不上节奏，成为别人的负担。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 The doctor's words left me lost in thought. I sat there, staring blankly into space, the reality of my health situation sinking in. Memories of my sedentary lifestyle flashed through my mind - countless hours spent lounging on the couch, indulging in junk food while binge-watching TV shows. I knew I had been neglecting my well-being for far too long. The doctor's grave tone as he pronounced me obese echoed in my ears, filling me with a sense of shame and regret. I glanced down at my body, realizing how the extra weight had been silently taking a toll on my physical condition. A fierce internal struggle ensued. On one hand, I was determined to turn things around and reclaim my health. But on the other, the thought of the arduous journey ahead, filled with strenuous workouts and strict diet regimens, made me feel daunted. Doubts crept in, clouding my resolve. Would I really be able to stick to a fitness routine? What if I failed again? 13 13 范文呈现 “Exercising alone is hard. Why not try some team sports?” the doctor suggested. His words jolted me out of my reverie. I looked up at him, a mixture of surprise and intrigue in my eyes. He then elaborated on the advantages of team sports. He explained that in a team setting, there would be constant motivation and support from fellow players, which would increase the likelihood of sticking to the exercise regime. Moreover, it would add an element of fun and social interaction, making the whole experience more enjoyable. He mentioned popular team sports like basketball, soccer, and volleyball, and even provided information about local sports clubs and teams in the neighborhood. As I listened, I began to picture myself in the midst of a lively game, sweating and laughing with my teammates, all working towards a common goal. However, just as quickly, self-doubt reared its ugly head. What if I couldn't keep up with the others? What if my lack of athleticism made me a liability to the team? 14 14 升级版范文呈现 The doctor's solemn words lingered in the air, leaving me drowned in deep thought. There I sat, motionless, with my eyes fixed on the void, as the harsh reality of my physical state gradually dawned on me. Images of my indolent days, bingeing on junk food while being glued to the screen, flashed before my eyes, making it abundantly clear how I had neglected my health. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 "Exercising alone is indeed a Herculean task. Why not give some team sports a shot?" the doctor proposed. It was as if a ray of hope pierced through the dark clouds of my despair. Little did I know that this suggestion would open up a new vista. Team sports, as he expounded, not only offer the impetus to persevere through mutual encouragement but also transform the monotonous grind into an enjoyable social affair. Without hesitation, I decided to take the plunge, determined to embrace this new approach to fitness and bid farewell to my sedentary past. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$