2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+Riverton 马拉松：梦想与天赋之赛 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 Riverton 马拉松：梦想与天赋之赛 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 In the town of Riverton, surrounded by hills and lakes, the annual marathon brought the community together for a lively festival. Colorful banners waved in the breeze as families set up picnic blankets and children painted their faces. This year, the focus was on two athletes: Sarah, a devoted runner, and Jake, a relaxed natural talent. For months, Sarah woke up early, putting on her well-worn running shoes as the sun rose. She pushed herself through tough workouts, running up the challenging hills nearby. She dreamed of crossing the finish line, not for herself, but to inspire young runners at the local youth center who looked up to her. On the other hand, Jake had a natural talent for running. With messy hair and a friendly smile, he was the life of every event. He often took selfies during his runs, sharing laughs and jokes along the way. Though he was a strong competitor, he care more about having fun than strict training, enjoying the excitement of the moment. 4 4 续写原文 As race day approached, Sarah felt the weight of expectations. The gold medal shone in her mind as a symbol of hope, but she worried that Jake, with his natural abilities, would be a tough competitor. On race day, Riverton was full of energy. The crowd’s cheers felt like a heartbeat, and the smells of popcorn(爆米花) and baked goods filled the air. Sarah lined up at the front of the starting line, her heart racing with the countdown, while Jake chatted with friends, enjoying himself in the lively atmosphere behind her. When the starting gun fired, Sarah dashed ahead with great determination, her every step a proof to her months of strict training. Meanwhile, Jake started the race in a relaxed manner, taking in the lively crowd and the colorful banners swaying(摇摆) in the wind. The race went just as expected—Sarah was in the lead. But as they reached the middle of the course, dark clouds gathered in the sky. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： Suddenly, heavy rain poured down, making the road very slippery(湿滑的). Paragraph 2：Jake, who had been following behind, caught sight of Sarah as she struggled to rise. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 文章讲述了在山水环绕的 Riverton 小镇，一年一度的马拉松赛事盛大举行，同时也是热闹的社区节日。今年大家的目光聚焦于两位运动员，勤奋自律的 Sarah 和天赋异禀的 Jake。Sarah 为了激励当地青年中心崇拜她的孩子们，长期坚持刻苦训练，梦想夺冠；而 Jake 虽有天赋，却更注重享受跑步过程，轻松随性。比赛当日，小镇热闹非凡，Sarah 严阵以待，Jake 则轻松自在。枪响后，Sarah 凭借扎实的训练起初领先，但赛程中途，天空突然乌云密布，这场比赛的走向变得扑朔迷离，两人也将在变化的局势下继续他们的马拉松征程。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： Suddenly, heavy rain poured down, making the road very slippery(湿滑的). 突然，倾盆大雨从天而降，豆大的雨点狠狠地砸在地面上，瞬间让原本干燥的道路变得湿滑不堪。选手们在雨中艰难前行，脚步变得踉跄。Sarah 一不小心滑倒在地，膝盖和手掌擦破了皮，疼痛瞬间袭来，她的脸上露出痛苦和懊恼的神情。雨水模糊了她的视线，跑道也变得难以辨认，她咬着牙试图站起身来，可湿滑的地面让她屡次失败，此时她心中满是焦急与无助，望着前方的赛道，不知该如何是好。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：Jake, who had been following behind, caught sight of Sarah as she struggled to rise. Jake 本来在 Sarah 后面不紧不慢地跑着，他一边跑一边欣赏着雨中的景色，丝毫没有预料到前方的变故。当他看到 Sarah 在雨中挣扎着起身时，先是愣了一下，随即加快了脚步跑向她。雨水顺着他的头发和脸颊滑落，他的眼神中透露出关切。跑到 Sarah 身边后，他伸出手去，稳稳地扶住了 Sarah 的胳膊，将她从地上拉了起来。他拍了拍 Sarah 的肩膀，给了她一个鼓励的微笑，仿佛在说 “我们一起继续”，随后两人并肩在雨中重新踏上了充满挑战的赛道，雨水溅起的水花打在他们身上，而他们的身影在雨中却显得无比坚定。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Suddenly, heavy rain poured down, making the road very slippery. The once clear and dry running path transformed into a hazardous zone within seconds. The raindrops pelted the ground with such force that small puddles quickly formed, turning the surface into a muddy and treacherous mess. Sarah, who had been leading the race with determination, was caught off guard. As her foot landed on a particularly slick patch, it slipped out from under her, sending her crashing to the ground. Pain shot through her knee and palm as they made contact with the unforgiving asphalt. The rain poured down on her, drenching her completely and making it difficult to see. She tried to push herself up, but with each attempt, her hands slipped on the wet surface, and she fell back down. Frustration and helplessness filled her eyes as she looked ahead at the seemingly endless track, unsure of how to continue. 13 13 范文呈现 Jake, who had been following behind, caught sight of Sarah as she struggled to rise. At first, he was taken aback by the sudden turn of events. His carefree running pace halted as he saw his fellow competitor in distress. Without hesitation, he quickened his steps, splashing through the puddles as he made his way towards her. The rain streamed down his face, blurring his vision, but his focus remained fixed on Sarah. As he reached her side, he bent down and extended his hand, firmly grasping her arm. With a gentle tug, he helped her to her feet. He looked into her eyes and offered a reassuring smile, as if to say, "We're in this together." Sarah nodded in gratitude, and together they set off once more, their footsteps now synchronized as they faced the challenges of the rain-soaked track. The water splashed around them with each step, but their determination only grew stronger. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Suddenly, torrential rain came crashing down, rendering the road exceedingly slippery. The running path, which had been firm and dry just moments ago, was now transformed into a perilous quagmire. Sarah, who had been forging ahead with unwavering resolve, was caught unawares. Losing her footing on a slick patch, she tumbled to the ground, pain shooting through her limbs. Try as she might to get up, the wet surface thwarted her every attempt. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 It was then that Jake, who had been trailing behind, witnessed Sarah's struggle. Without a moment's delay, he hastened his pace, the rain lashing his face. Reaching her side, he extended a helping hand and pulled her upright. Their eyes met, and a silent understanding passed between them. United, they resumed the race, undeterred by the elements. Never had they felt such determination as they pressed on, the rain a mere backdrop to their unyielding spirit. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$