英语读后续写 永不言弃：泳池赛场的信念之光 讲义-山西省朔州市怀仁市大地学校高中部2024-2025学年高二上学期12月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had been swimming competitively for five years but after such a long time, I was ready to quit. I was often the only African American at the swimming competitions and our team couldn’t afford good uniforms. However, my number-one reason for wanting to quit was that I kept receiving “Honorable Mentions (荣誉奖)”. Any athlete knows that you don’t want to have a bookshelf full of “Honorable Mentions”, which you get just because you showed up. One summer’s day, the day before a big swim meeting, I decided to tell my grandma that I was quitting the swim team. When I told her, she looked me in the eye and said, “Baby, remember these words ‘Quitters never win and winners never quit.’ Your grandmother didn’t raise losers or quitters. You go to that meeting tomorrow, and you swim like you are a grandchild of mine, you hear?” I was too afraid to say anything but “Yes, ma’am.” The next day we arrived at the swim meeting late, missing my group of swimmers in the 15/16 age group. My coach insisted I should be allowed to swim with the older group. I knew she expected me to take part. As I mounted the board, all the other girls looked at me. I quickly noticed that these girls were all here to do just one thing — beat me. All of a sudden, my grandma’s words rang in my head, “Quitters never win and winners never quit. You swim like you are a grandchild of mine.” “Yes, Grandma, I will swim like I am a grandchild of yours,” I said to myself. 续写要求： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The match began! I swam harder than I had ever swum before. It was then that I heard the claps and cheers around me. 一、文章大意 作者参加游泳比赛五年，因身为队伍中唯一的非裔美国人、队服差且总是获得 “荣誉奖” 而想放弃。在一次大赛前告知奶奶想退队，奶奶告诫他 “放弃者永不成功，成功者永不放弃”。比赛当天作者迟到，教练让他参加年龄更大的组别的比赛，站在跳板上，面对其他女孩充满挑战的目光，作者想起奶奶的话，决定奋力一搏，最终在比赛中获得胜利，体会到坚持的价值，决定继续游泳。 二、故事分析 1. 伏笔与回应： 1. 伏笔：作者经常获得 “荣誉奖”，心生退意。 回应：在比赛中作者拼尽全力，最终赢得胜利，突破了以往总是获得 “荣誉奖” 的局面，实现了从失败者心态到成功者姿态的转变。 2. 伏笔：奶奶的告诫 “Quitters never win and winners never quit.” 回应：比赛时作者反复默念这句话，成为其坚持下去并最终获胜的精神支柱，体现了奶奶话语对作者的深刻影响和激励作用。 3. 伏笔：队伍条件差，如买不起好制服。 回应：作者没有因外在条件差而放弃，反而在比赛中更加努力，突出了其内心的坚强和对游泳的热爱，使胜利显得更加珍贵和来之不易。 4. 伏笔：作者决定在比赛前一天告诉奶奶要退队，表现出他内心的挣扎。 回应：奶奶的话改变了他的想法，比赛中的表现展示了他从挣扎到坚定的心理变化过程，使故事发展更加自然流畅。 5. 伏笔：迟到错过自己年龄组比赛，教练让参加大年龄组比赛。 回应：这一情节增加了比赛的难度和不确定性，为作者的胜利增添了更多的戏剧性，同时也展现了教练对作者的信任和期望，回应了前文作者想放弃但教练仍希望他参赛的情节，使故事逻辑更加完整。 三、续写要点 第一段： · 详细描述比赛过程中的激烈竞争，作者如何运用技巧和力量逐渐超越其他选手。可以提及他在水中的动作、呼吸的节奏以及与对手的位置变化，突出他的专注和努力，表现他内心对胜利的渴望和为了不辜负奶奶期望而拼搏的决心。 第二段： · 着重描写听到掌声和欢呼声后的反应，包括作者的惊喜、激动和自豪等情绪。描述他上岸后与教练、队友的互动，以及他对奶奶话语的深刻感悟，展现这次胜利对他的重大意义，不仅是一场比赛的胜利，更是人生态度的转变，让他决心继续坚持游泳，为梦想努力奋斗，同时也传递出坚持就能成功的正能量。 四、情感线 起初，作者因长期获得 “荣誉奖”、队伍条件不佳等因素，内心充满了沮丧、失落和对游泳的厌倦，产生了放弃的念头，情绪低落且消极。当奶奶告诫他 “放弃者永不成功，成功者永不放弃” 后，作者内心虽有触动，但仍有些忐忑不安。站在跳板上，面对竞争对手的挑衅目光，他感到紧张和压力，但同时奶奶的话也激发了他的斗志，使他变得坚定而勇敢。在比赛过程中，作者怀着对胜利的渴望和不辜负奶奶期望的决心，全力以赴，此时他的情感是专注和执着的。当听到周围的掌声和欢呼声，看到自己的成绩时，作者内心被惊喜、激动和自豪所充斥，他深刻体会到坚持带来的喜悦和成就感，从而彻底改变了对游泳的态度，从想要放弃转变为坚定地继续追求，情感得到了升华，充满了对未来游泳之路的信心和热情。 五、故事线 1. 作者参加游泳比赛五年，因多种原因想要放弃，包括常得 “荣誉奖”、队伍条件差等。 2. 大赛前一天告知奶奶退队想法，奶奶用 “放弃者永不成功，成功者永不放弃” 的话告诫他。 3. 比赛当天迟到，教练安排他参加年龄更大组别的比赛。 4. 站在跳板上，作者想起奶奶的话，决定奋力一搏，比赛开始后全力冲刺。 5. 作者在比赛中逐渐超越其他选手，最终率先触壁赢得胜利。 6. 听到掌声和欢呼声后，作者深受鼓舞，决定继续坚持游泳，明白了坚持的价值。 六、主旨升华句 1. Success is not about the trophies on the shelf but the spirit within that refuses to give up, as I learned in that unforgettable swim meet.（成功不在于架子上的奖杯，而在于内心拒绝放弃的精神，正如我在那次难忘的游泳比赛中所学到的。） 2. In the face of difficulties and the temptation to quit, it is the unwavering determination that paves the way to victory and personal growth.（面对困难和放弃的诱惑，是坚定不移的决心为胜利和个人成长铺平了道路。） 3. The journey in the pool that day was not just a race; it was a testament to the power of perseverance and the belief that we can achieve the impossible if we hold on.（那天在泳池里的旅程不仅仅是一场比赛；它证明了坚持的力量以及相信如果我们坚持下去就能实现不可能的信念。） 4. Through the waves of the swimming pool, I discovered that the real champion is the one who can overcome self-doubt and keep moving forward, regardless of the odds.（在游泳池的波浪中，我发现真正的冠军是那些能够克服自我怀疑并继续前进的人，无论困难有多大。） 5. That moment of victory taught me that quitting is never an option; instead, we should embrace challenges and strive for excellence with unyielding spirit.（那个胜利的时刻教会我，放弃永远不是一个选择；相反，我们应该以不屈的精神迎接挑战并追求卓越。） 七、写作示范 第一篇 The match began! I swam harder than I had ever swum before. My strokes were long and forceful, cutting through the water with precision. I focused on my breathing, keeping it steady and rhythmic. As I passed one opponent after another, I could feel the adrenaline coursing through my veins. I remembered every grueling practice session, every moment of self-doubt, and used it all as fuel. I was no longer the swimmer who was content with "Honorable Mentions." I was a fierce competitor, determined to prove myself. With each lap, I inched closer to the lead, my body pushing to its limits. It was then that I heard the claps and cheers around me. I could scarcely believe it as I touched the wall and realized I had won. I looked up, my eyes filled with tears of joy and disbelief. My coach rushed over and hugged me tightly. The other swimmers looked at me with newfound respect. In that moment, I knew that I had overcome not only the competition but also my own insecurities. I was filled with gratitude for my grandma's words, which had given me the strength to persevere. This victory was not just a win in a swim meet; it was a victory for my spirit. I vowed to myself that I would continue to swim, to face every challenge with the same determination, and to never again consider quitting. 第二篇 The match began! I swam harder than I had ever swum before. I dug deep within myself, summoning every ounce of strength and willpower. My arms and legs moved in perfect harmony, propelling me forward with each powerful stroke. The water seemed to part before me as I charged ahead. I could sense the other swimmers struggling to keep up, but I didn't let it distract me. I kept my eyes fixed on the finish line, as if it were the only thing that existed in the world. I thought of the sacrifices I had made, the early mornings and late nights at the pool, and refused to let them be in vain. It was then that I heard the claps and cheers around me. A surge of emotion washed over me as I realized that I had achieved something extraordinary. I had broken free from the cycle of mediocrity and self-doubt. As I climbed out of the pool, dripping wet but victorious, I saw the pride in my coach's eyes and the admiration in my teammates' faces. I knew that this was just the beginning. I had found my true potential and was ready to embrace the journey ahead. From that day on, I would swim not for the sake of winning medals, but for the love of the sport and the knowledge that I was capable of achieving anything if I never gave up. The words of my grandma would forever be engraved in my heart, guiding me through every challenge that life threw my way. 【答案】The match began! I swam harder than I had ever swum before. After the first turn, I was surprised to find that I had a half-body length lead over other girls. However, they soon sped up and narrowed the gap. Halfway through the race, the girl to my left almost drew level with me, while I already began to feel tired. At that moment, the powerful words of my grandma echoed again in my ears, “Quitters never win and winners never quit.” I waved my arms and legs to keep swimming and used every last bit of strength to swim the last 50 meters. As soon as I touched the wall, I looked up at the screen, waiting anxiously for the result. It was then that I heard the claps and cheers around me. I saw my time in the screen but could hardly believe it - mine was at the top of the list! My coach ran to me and hugged me tightly when I got out of the water. Narrow victory as it was, I did win my first real trophy that day. Everything felt like a dream as I stood on the winner's podium, weeping tears of joy. Back at home, I delightedly replaced the “Honorable Mention” on my shelf with the new trophy. “Yes, grandma, you’re right. Quitters never win and winners never quit.” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$