读后续写--破茧成蝶：艾米丽的演讲蜕变之路 讲义-湖南省市县联考（示范性高中）2024-2025学年高二上学期12月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Once upon a time in the bustling city of New York, there lived a young woman named Emily. Emily was a bright, ambitious woman with a promising career and a loving family. However, she had one major phobia (恐惧症) that held her back—the fear of public speaking. As a child, Emily had been the center of attention in her classroom. Her teachers loved her for her intelligence and her ability to fascinate her audience with her stories. But when it came to presenting in front of larger groups, Emily would break into a cold sweat and stammer (口吃，结结巴巴地说) out her words. This phobia had started to take a toll on her confidence and professional growth. One day, Emily received an invitation to speak at a prestigious (有声望的) event hosted by a global marketing firm. This was a golden opportunity for her to prove herself and advance her career. But the thought of standing in front of dozens of professionals and delivering a speech made her heart race faster. Emily consulted her best friend Sarah, who was a successful entrepreneur (企业家) and a public speaking expert. Sarah listened patiently and shared some valuable insights, “The first step to overcoming any fear is to face it head-on. Public speaking can be nerve-wracking (伤脑筋的), but remember, everyone feels that way at some point. The key is to prepare well and believe in yourself.” With Sarah’s advice, Emily decided to practice her speech daily and sought the guidance of professional public speakers. She attended workshops, watched videos, and even hired a coach to help her build confidence and improve her delivery. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The day of the event arrived, and Emily felt a mix of emotions. In the days that followed, Emily’s speech went viral on social media, earning praise from industry experts and peers alike. 一、文章大意 艾米丽是一位生活在纽约的年轻女性，虽事业有成且家庭美满，但患有严重的公开演讲恐惧症，这对她的自信和职业发展产生了阻碍。一次，她获邀在一场由全球营销公司举办的著名活动上发言，这是难得的晋升机会，却也让她倍感压力。在好友莎拉（一位成功的企业家兼公开演讲专家）的建议下，艾米丽决定迎难而上，每日练习演讲，并寻求专业指导，参加工作坊、观看视频，还聘请了教练来增强自信和提升演讲技巧。 二、故事分析 1. 伏笔与回应： 1. 伏笔：艾米丽儿时在小群体中善于讲述故事，但在面对大群体演讲时会紧张出汗、口吃，这为她的公开演讲恐惧症埋下伏笔。 回应：在活动当天，尽管紧张，但通过前期的练习和准备，她成功克服恐惧，流畅地完成演讲，与之前形成对比，体现出她的成长和突破。 2. 伏笔：收到知名活动的演讲邀请，这一情节推动故事发展，引出她内心的挣扎以及后续为克服恐惧所做的努力。 回应：演讲的成功以及后续在社交媒体上的走红，证明这次邀请是她人生的一个转折点，回应了开头的情节设置，展示了机会带来的改变。 3. 伏笔：莎拉作为成功的企业家和演讲专家给出的 “直面恐惧、充分准备、相信自己” 的建议，为艾米丽的行动指明方向。 回应：艾米丽按照莎拉的建议去实践，通过参加工作坊、看视频、聘请教练等方式准备演讲，最终在演讲中得以体现，回应了莎拉建议的重要性和可行性。 4. 伏笔：艾米丽每日练习演讲，参加各类提升活动，暗示她为克服恐惧付出的努力，为演讲成功做铺垫。 回应：演讲时她能够流畅表达，表现出色，正是这些努力的结果，展示了努力与成功的因果关系。 5. 伏笔：艾米丽最初因恐惧而内心挣扎，担心无法胜任演讲，影响职业发展，体现出问题的严重性。 回应：演讲成功后，她不仅克服了恐惧，还获得众多机会，实现了从焦虑担忧到自信从容的转变，完成了故事的情感和情节升华。 三、续写要点 第一段： · 描述艾米丽上台前的紧张情绪，如心跳加速、手脚冰凉等身体反应，以及脑海中不断浮现的过去失败的演讲场景和自我怀疑的念头。 · 讲述她走上舞台后，如何通过深呼吸、眼神交流等方式让自己镇定下来，逐渐进入演讲状态，专注于演讲内容，按照之前的练习和准备，有条不紊地展开演讲，注意语言表达的流畅性和生动性，体现她克服内心恐惧的过程和努力。 第二段： · 着重描写演讲结束后观众的热烈反应，如长时间的掌声、欢呼声，以及人们脸上的钦佩和赞赏之情，通过这些细节烘托出演讲的成功。 · 阐述艾米丽在后续日子里的变化，包括心态上的转变，从一个害怕公开演讲的人变成享受舞台、乐于分享的自信者；职业生涯的飞跃，因这次演讲获得更多的合作机会、晋升空间；社交方面，成为人们关注的焦点，受邀参加各种活动，结识更多行业精英，从而深刻体现出这次成功演讲对她人生的积极影响和重大意义，突出 “克服恐惧，迎接成功” 的主题。 四、情感线 起初，艾米丽收到演讲邀请时，内心充满了恐惧和焦虑，对自己能否胜任深感怀疑，过往失败的演讲经历如阴影般笼罩着她，自信心受挫严重。在好友莎拉的鼓励下，她虽然有了一丝尝试的勇气，但在准备过程中，仍不时被紧张情绪困扰，担心努力无法达到预期效果。随着练习的深入和演讲日期的临近，紧张感愈发强烈，但同时也逐渐夹杂着一丝期待和决心。到了演讲当天，上台前极度紧张，几乎想要放弃，但当她踏上舞台，看到观众的那一刻，责任感和想要突破自我的强烈愿望涌上心头，紧张情绪有所缓解，开始专注于演讲。演讲结束后，听到观众的热烈掌声和欢呼声，艾米丽内心被巨大的喜悦、自豪和成就感填满，长期以来的恐惧终于被克服，自信心得到极大恢复和提升，对未来充满希望和积极向上的力量，完成了从恐惧到自信、从逃避到勇敢面对的情感转变。 五、故事线 1. 艾米丽生活在纽约，事业家庭顺遂，但患有公开演讲恐惧症，儿时经历为其埋下伏笔。 2. 收到全球营销公司活动的演讲邀请，内心挣扎，恐惧与机会并存。 3. 向好友莎拉求助，莎拉给出克服恐惧的建议，成为艾米丽行动的指引。 4. 艾米丽按照建议，每日练习演讲，参加工作坊、看视频、聘请教练，积极准备。 5. 活动当天上台演讲，克服内心恐惧，顺利完成演讲，赢得观众掌声。 6. 演讲视频在社交媒体走红，艾米丽获得众多赞誉和机会，实现人生转变，完成故事叙述。 六、主旨升华句 1. The journey of conquering fear is not an easy one, but it is through such challenges that we discover our true potential and unlock the doors to a world of possibilities.（克服恐惧的旅程并非易事，但正是通过这样的挑战，我们才能发现自己真正的潜力，打开通往无限可能的大门。） 2. Fear is but a hurdle on the path to success, and once we muster the courage to leap over it, we find ourselves on a new trajectory of growth and achievement.（恐惧只是成功道路上的一道障碍，一旦我们鼓起勇气跨越它，就会发现自己走上了一条成长与成就的新轨道。） 3. In the face of fear, it is our determination and perseverance that light the way to self-transformation and the realization of our dreams.（面对恐惧，是我们的决心和毅力照亮了自我转变和实现梦想的道路。） 4. When we choose to confront our fears head-on, we not only overcome them but also gain the confidence and strength to soar to greater heights in life.（当我们选择直面恐惧时，我们不仅克服了它们，还获得了在生活中飞向更高处的信心和力量。） 5. The story of Emily teaches us that every fear is an opportunity in disguise, waiting for us to embrace it and emerge victorious on the other side.（艾米丽的故事告诉我们，每一种恐惧都是一个伪装的机会，等待着我们去拥抱它，并在另一端取得胜利。） 七、写作示范 第一篇 The day of the event arrived, and Emily felt a mix of emotions. Her heart pounded like a drum, and her palms were sweaty as she waited backstage. Memories of past failures and the fear of repeating them swirled in her mind. But as she heard her name announced, she took a deep breath and stepped onto the stage. The bright lights blinded her for a moment, but then she saw the faces of the audience, expectant and curious. She began to speak, her voice quivering slightly at first. But as she focused on the words she had practiced so hard, her voice grew stronger and more confident. She made eye contact with the people in the front row, and their nods and smiles gave her the encouragement she needed. By the end of her speech, she felt a sense of accomplishment she had never known before. In the days that followed, Emily’s speech went viral on social media, earning praise from industry experts and peers alike. She became an overnight sensation, with invitations to speak at various events pouring in. But more importantly, she had overcome the fear that had held her back for so long. She realized that the key to success was not the absence of fear, but the courage to face it. Emily's story inspired many, showing that with determination and hard work, one can break free from the shackles of fear and achieve great things. She was no longer the woman who shied away from public speaking; instead, she had become a symbol of courage and perseverance. 第二篇 The day of the event arrived, and Emily felt a mix of emotions. She paced back and forth, her mind racing with doubts and anxieties. What if she froze on stage? What if she forgot her lines? But she also remembered Sarah's words and all the hard work she had put in. As she walked onto the stage, she felt as if all eyes were on her, judging her every move. She took a moment to steady herself, looking out at the sea of faces. Then, she began to speak. The words flowed more easily than she had expected, and she found herself getting into the rhythm of the speech. She used the techniques she had learned, modulating her voice and using gestures to emphasize her points. The audience was captivated, and she could feel their energy feeding her confidence. In the days that followed, Emily’s speech went viral on social media, earning praise from industry experts and peers alike. Her inbox was flooded with messages of congratulations and offers for new opportunities. She was invited to be a guest on talk shows and to share her story with a wider audience. Emily's transformation was remarkable. She had not only conquered her fear of public speaking but had also found a new passion and purpose. She understood that fear was just a state of mind, and with the right mindset and actions, anything was possible. She became a role model for others, proving that one could turn their weaknesses into strengths and achieve extraordinary things. From that day on, Emily embraced every challenge with open arms, knowing that she had the power within her to overcome anything. 参考范文： The day of the event arrived, and Emily felt a mix of emotions. Excited and nervous, she was eager to give a good performance. However, looking at the cameras lighting up in all directions, she felt her mind went blank. Anxiety started taking over. With heart pounding and hands shaking, she stepped onto the stage, taking a deep breath and trying to calm herself down. Emily began her speech, weaving anecdotes from her experiences and using humor to engage the audience. To her surprise, the words flowed easily from her mouth, and the crowd responded positively. As she concluded her speech with a powerful message about believing in oneself, Emily felt a wave of relief washed over her. She had conquered her fear once and for all! In the days that followed, Emily's speech went viral on social media, earning praise from industry experts and peers alike. Emily's career took a significant leap forward, all thanks to her determination to overcome her fear. From that day forward, Emily became a renowned speaker, sharing her wisdom and inspiring countless others to confront their own fears and achieve their dreams. It dawned on Emily that however scary fears may seem, with perseverance, preparation, and belief in ourselves, she can overcome them and reach new heights in life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$