读后续写--迟到后的觉醒：John 的自我成长之路 讲义-河南名校大联考2024-2025学年高三上学期毕业班阶段性测试(四)英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “John Tan! Wake up! You are late!” The loud voice of my mother rang in my ears.“Five more minutes ...” I said sleepily, covering my ears with my pillow（枕头）. I had a habit of being late for school every morning. Despite the repeated warnings of my discipline master and parents, I found it difficult to change. “I have no time to drive you to school anymore. I need to get to work. Walk to school by yourself！” my mother said in annoyance as she hurried out of the door. As I was about to close my eyes again, realization hit me—Today I was taking my mathematics test! I glanced at the bedside clock. A minute before 7：30 am.“Oh no! I am going to be late!” I panicked as I jumped out of bed. I got changed, grabbed my schoolbag and ran out of the house like a bolt of lightning. Just as I was about to run across the road, dark clouds filled the sky, appearing above like a heavy curtain. I dug in my schoolbag anxiously for an umbrella but to my regret, I had not packed one as I was late. Running now, I could see the school gate. Then, the heavens opened and I was wet from head to toe. I glanced at my watch. I was out of breath as I was ten minutes late for school! What if the examination had already started? What if I was not allowed to sit it because I was late? A lot of questions flooded my mind at the thought of missing the examination. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding in my chest. ________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ After the examination, I walked out of the hall with a mixture of relief and regret. _______ _______________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：John Tan 有上学迟到的习惯，这天母亲因要上班不能送他，他自己上学却睡过头了。醒来发现要考数学且即将迟到，没带伞冒雨冲向学校，担心考试已开始或因迟到被禁止参加。最终赶到考场，考试结束后他带着放松与后悔的复杂心情离开，决定改掉迟到的毛病。 故事山分析： · 开端：John 每天早上迟到，这天被母亲叫醒后得知要自己走路去学校且想起有数学考试，却又睡过头。 · 发展：匆忙准备上学，没带伞在路上遭遇大雨，最终赶到学校发现已经迟到。 · 高潮：担心无法参加考试，在老师的允许下进入考场答题。 · 结局：考试结束后，John 反思自己的行为，决定改正迟到的习惯。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应： 1. 伏笔：John 有上学迟到的习惯。 · 回应：续写中提到他决定改掉迟到的毛病，因为这次经历让他意识到迟到的危害，这是对他一贯迟到行为的反思与改变。 2. 伏笔：母亲没时间送他上学。 4. 回应：这促使 John 自己面对上学路上的突发状况，如忘带伞和即将迟到的紧张，也为他之后的改变埋下伏笔，因为他意识到不能依赖他人，要自己对上学负责。 3. 伏笔：没带伞。 4. 回应：在雨中奔跑导致全身湿透，让他赶到学校时更加狼狈，从而加剧了他对迟到的担忧和紧张情绪，也使得他进入考场后的状态受到影响，同时呼应了他早晨的慌乱。 4. 伏笔：担心考试开始或因迟到被禁止参加。 4. 回应：进入考场后老师虽然让他坐下考试，但他心情紧张，考试过程中也受到影响，这与前文的担心相呼应，体现了迟到对他的负面影响。 5. 伏笔：考试结束后心情复杂。 4. 回应：引出他后续的反思与改变决心，这种复杂的心情推动了故事的发展，让他从这次经历中吸取教训，实现自我成长。 续写要点： · 第一段：重点描写 John 在考场内的紧张心情和答题过程，以及他如何克服因迟到带来的心理压力，尽力完成考试。可以描述他一开始思绪混乱，但逐渐镇定下来，集中精力答题，同时也担心自己因迟到而影响发挥。 · 第二段：着重写 John 考试后的反思，包括他对自己迟到习惯的深刻认识和想要改变的坚定决心，以及他计划采取的具体行动，如设置多个闹钟、早睡早起等，体现他从这次经历中获得成长，完成自我救赎。 情感线： 故事开始，John 因迟到而感到慌乱和担忧，害怕错过考试。进入考场后，紧张情绪加剧，担心考试成绩受影响。考试结束，心情放松但又充满后悔，后悔自己一直以来的迟到习惯。最后，这种后悔转化为改变的决心，他决定克服迟到问题，变得更加自律和负责，情感从消极向积极转变，展现了人物的成长历程。 故事线： 1. John 每天早上迟到，母亲警告无果。 2. 这天睡过头，母亲没时间送他，自己匆忙上学。 3. 路上遇雨没带伞，赶到学校已迟到十分钟。 4. 担心无法参加考试，进入考场后紧张答题。 5. 考试结束后心情复杂，反思自己的行为。 6. 决定改掉迟到毛病，制定改变计划。 主旨升华句 1. This experience was not just about being late for an exam, but a lesson in responsibility and self-discipline that would shape John's future attitude towards life.（这次经历不仅仅是关于考试迟到，更是一堂关于责任和自律的课，它将塑造 John 未来对待生活的态度。） 2. From that day on, John understood that every minute counts and being punctual is a key to success, not only in academics but also in life.（从那天起，John 明白了每一分钟都很重要，守时是成功的关键，不仅在学业上，在生活中也是如此。） 3. The incident of being late for the exam served as a turning point for John, leading him to realize the importance of good habits and the consequences of his irresponsible actions.（考试迟到事件成为 John 的一个转折点，让他意识到好习惯的重要性以及不负责任行为的后果。） 4. John's journey from a habitual latecomer to a determined self-improver showed that mistakes can be the stepping stones to growth and positive change.（John 从一个习惯性迟到者转变为一个坚定的自我改进者的过程表明，错误可以成为成长和积极改变的垫脚石。） 5. Through this ordeal, John learned that taking control of one's time and actions is essential for achieving one's goals and becoming a reliable person.（通过这次磨难，John 明白了掌控自己的时间和行为对于实现目标和成为一个可靠的人至关重要。） 两篇写作示范 第一篇 I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding in my chest. As I entered the hall, all eyes were on me, and I could feel my cheeks burning with shame. The teacher gave me a disapproving look but gestured for me to take my seat. I quickly sat down, my wet clothes clinging uncomfortably to my body. My hands trembled as I picked up my pen, and my mind was a jumble of nerves and worry. The questions on the paper seemed to blur together at first, but I took a deep breath and forced myself to focus. I tried my best to recall the formulas and concepts I had studied, determined not to let my tardiness ruin my chances. After the examination, I walked out of the hall with a mixture of relief and regret. Relief that the test was finally over, but regret for all the times I had been late and the unnecessary stress I had caused myself. I knew I couldn't go on like this. As I walked home, the sun peeked through the clouds, as if signaling a new beginning. I made a solemn vow to myself that I would set multiple alarms and go to bed early every night. I would no longer be the boy who was always late. This experience had been a harsh wake-up call, and I was determined to answer it by changing my ways and taking control of my life. 第二篇 I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding in my chest. Panting, I reached the door and slowly pushed it open. The room was silent except for the sound of pencils scratching on paper. The teacher looked up, and I could see the disappointment in her eyes. However, she said nothing and nodded for me to find my seat. I sat down, my heart still racing, and glanced at the test paper. It seemed daunting, but I couldn't let my fear get the better of me. I started answering the questions, one by one, trying to block out the thought of my late arrival. After the examination, I walked out of the hall with a mixture of relief and regret. The relief of having completed the test was overshadowed by the regret of my chronic lateness. I thought about how my irresponsible behavior had almost cost me this important exam. As I walked, I remembered the look on the teacher's face and the stares of my classmates. I knew I had to make a change. I decided that from that moment on, I would ask a friend to call me in the morning as a backup and keep a strict bedtime routine. I didn't want to let myself down again. This incident was a turning point, and I was going to turn my life around, starting with being punctual. One possible version: I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding in my chest. I prayed that I would still be allowed to take the examination. When I reached the door, I took a deep breath and knocked gently on it. The teacher opened the door, looking confused and a little annoyed. I stammered out an apology and explained my situation. To my relief, she let me in, but warned me not to be late again. I quickly took my seat, trying my best to calm myself down. As I looked at the test paper, my mind almost went blank. But I knew I had to focus and do my best. After the examination, I walked out of the hall with a mixture of relief and regret. I was relieved that I had been able to take the examination, but in the meanwhile felt a little bit regretful for my habit of being late. I didn’t want to miss out on any opportunities because of my lateness or let my laziness ruin my future. So I decided then and there that I would get rid of the bad habit. I would set multiple alarms and make sure to be on time. As I walked home, still wet from the rain, I had faith in my becoming a more responsible and punctual person. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$