2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+劳拉的足球逐梦：挫折后的坚持课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 劳拉的足球逐梦：挫折后的坚持 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 At Piedmont Middle School, a kid could run track or play tennis, but everyone wanted to be on the soccer team. Laura had dreamed of earning glory for the Falcons ever since the first grade, when her older brother Toni scored the winning goal in the county middle school championship. The day she joined the team as a sixth-grader, she felt like she could fly. But, unfortunately, her joy didn’t last. She spent most of the season on the bench. It was all because of the huge mistake she made in her first game. She passed the ball in the completely wrong direction! Straight to an enemy in blue, who quickly shot it into the corner of the net, scoring. The coach benched Laura for the rest of the game. When the Falcons lost 1-0, she was crushed. 4 4 续写原文 Now that the season was over, she just wanted to forget about soccer. She clearly wasn’t good enough to play with the Falcons, and that was that. A few days later, Laura’s mother found her lying on the sofa, watching music videos on her . phone. “You’d be better off praticing, ” her mother said. “What for? ” Laura said, rolling her eyes. “It won’t help me. I need someone to watch me and tell me how I can improve. I can’t get better by myself. ” Sighing, her mom sank down on the sofa. “Laura, for every lock, there is a key. We just have to find it. ” 5 5 续写原文 After a moment, she added, “What if I film you during practice to help you find ways to improve? ” “But the season’s over, Mom. No more practice, remember? ” “The best players keep practicing even when the season’s over, ” her mother said. “You remember Toni spending all summer bouncing a ball off his head in the driveway. He used to run ten miles a day in the Arizona summer sun. You think he did that for fun? “ “But to practice plays I need at least one other person, ” Laura protested. Her mother patted her on the knee. “We’ll find that key, too, ” she said. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： The next morning, Laura’s mother shook her awake early, “Come on, Laura; it’ s soccer time. ” Paragraph 2：When the next season came around, Laura was ready. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了在 Piedmont 中学，足球备受欢迎，劳拉自一年级起就梦想为校队“猎鹰队”争光，六年级如愿加入后却在首场比赛因传球失误致球队输球，从此沦为替补，这使她备受打击，赛季结束便想放弃足球。母亲见她消沉，提议拍摄她练习的过程来帮助她提升，劳拉虽觉得练习无用且需他人指导，但母亲以其兄长托尼刻苦训练为例，鼓励她优秀球员在赛季外也应坚持练习，还会帮她解决无人配合练习的问题，劳拉的足球之路似乎又出现了一丝转机。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： The next morning, Laura’s mother shook her awake early, “Come on, Laura; it’ s soccer time. ” 第二天清晨，劳拉的母亲早早地将她摇醒，“快点，劳拉，该练足球了。” 劳拉睡眼惺忪地看着母亲坚定的眼神，尽管心中满是不情愿，但还是挣扎着起身。母亲带着她来到空旷的操场，按照之前的计划，母亲站在一旁用手机认真地拍摄劳拉练习传球、带球、射门的每一个动作。劳拉一次次地奔跑、跌倒、再爬起，汗水湿透了她的衣衫，每当她想要放弃的时候，母亲就会在一旁鼓励她，为她指出视频中存在的问题和进步的方向。就这样，在母亲的陪伴和监督下，劳拉度过了一个又一个艰苦的练习日，逐渐地，她的技术越发娴熟，对足球的信心也在慢慢恢复。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：When the next season came around, Laura was ready. 当新的赛季来临，劳拉已经做好了充分的准备。她昂首挺胸地站在球场上，眼神中透露出自信与坚定。在比赛中，劳拉仿佛变了一个人，她灵活地穿梭在球场上，精准地传球、果断地射门，曾经那个失误连连的她已不复存在。每当队友将球传给她，她都能稳稳地接住并做出最佳的处理，她的出色表现赢得了队友们的信任和欢呼。在一场关键的比赛中，劳拉抓住机会，一脚劲射，球如炮弹般飞向球门死角，帮助球队取得了领先优势。最终，“猎鹰队” 在劳拉的助力下赢得了比赛，劳拉也实现了自己曾经的梦想，成为了球场上的闪耀之星，而她和母亲的这段经历，也成为了她人生中最宝贵的财富。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 The next morning, Laura’s mother shook her awake early, “Come on, Laura; it’ s soccer time. ” Laura opened her sleepy eyes and saw the determination in her mother's eyes. Reluctantly, she dragged herself out of bed. Her mother took her to an empty playground. As planned, her mother stood by and carefully filmed Laura practicing passing, dribbling, and shooting. Laura ran, fell, and got up again and again. Her clothes were soaked with sweat. Whenever she wanted to give up, her mother would be there to encourage her and point out the problems and improvements in the video. Day after day, with her mother's company and guidance, Laura's skills became more proficient and her confidence in soccer gradually returned. 14 14 范文呈现 When the next season came around, Laura was ready. She stood tall on the field, with confidence and determination in her eyes. During the game, Laura seemed like a different person. She moved nimbly around the field, passing accurately and shooting decisively. The girl who used to make mistakes constantly was no longer there. Whenever her teammates passed the ball to her, she could catch it steadily and make the best decisions. Her outstanding performance won the trust and cheers of her teammates. In a crucial game, Laura seized the opportunity and shot the ball powerfully into the far corner of the goal, helping the team take the lead. Finally, with Laura's contribution, the "Falcons" won the game. Laura achieved her once dream and became a shining star on the field. And this experience with her mother became the most precious treasure in her life. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 The next morning, Laura was roused from her slumber by her mother's vigorous shaking and the exclamation, "Come on, Laura; it’s soccer time." With a hint of reluctance, she nonetheless complied. On the playground, her mother, with the camera held steady, recorded Laura's every move as she practiced passing, dribbling, and shooting. Sweaty and exhausted, Laura was on the verge of giving up when her mother's encouraging words spurred her on. It was through this arduous process that her skills improved remarkably. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 When the new season dawned, Laura was primed and ready. Standing on the field, she radiated confidence. During the match, it was Laura who shone brightly, her precise passes and decisive shots leading the team to victory. Never had she imagined that she could transform so completely. In that crucial moment, with a powerful strike, the ball sailed into the net, and it was then that she truly realized her dream, etching this triumphant experience into the annals of her life as a cherished memory. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$