Unit 2 Travelling Around Reading for Writing 作文批改常见问题（典型纠错）课件-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

Unit 2 Travelling Around 作文常见问题 [题目要求] 假定你是小李，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去北京游览长城。请你给你的好友Richard回信， 分享你的出行计划。 要点：1. 对长城的认识； 2. 其他旅游目的地(故宫和颐和园)及交通方式； 3．表达期望。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：故宫the Imperial Palace; 颐和园the Summer Palace; 目的地destination Writing tasks the Summer Palace the Imperial Palace the Great Wall there be 🆚 have There have so many statues. There have many interesting things. 2. it is amazing that +从句 It is amazing that the story of the Confucius. It is amazing that bright sunset. 3. I am planning to travel to/visit/pay a visit to （三选一） → There are so many statues. 4. 句式杂糅 I planning go to We are plan go to We are go to there I am wanting to visit We can planning to go to We are take the car I want to going to 5. Such as单独成句 We’re planning to visit several other places in xxx. Such as … and … are planning to will go are taking the car want to vist/go to 6. During/Over the October holiday ❌ In the October holiday 7. both of which（两者都） I am going to visit other places, such as xxx, xxx and xxx, both of which are … 8. share... with sb. share with you about my travel plan 9.单词拼写 Dear Richard, I’m very glad to know everything goes well in your time in China. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays. （问候+引出计划） Over the winter holiday, my parents and I are planning to pay a visit to the Great Wall. (时间+计划) I’ve heard that the Great Wall is an amazing sight, which was built by the ancient Chinese and now it has been famous all over the world, so we can't wait to go.(个人感受） What’s more, we're also planning to visit other places in Beijing. My father and I are both looking forward to visiting the Imperial Palace because it is recognized as a “Chinese treasure house". （引出地点+原因）The Summer Palace is another attractive destination, where we can admire amazing scenery. （引出地点+原因）We are taking a flight, leaving on Friday afternoon and arriving at 10 p.m. We will come back by train. （交通方式） Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Xiao Li 参考范文 Unit 3 Sports and Fitness 作文常见问题 假定你是李华，你将参加主题为“Me before and after sports”的英语沙龙。请结合自身经历，准备一份英语发言稿。 要点如下：1.年幼时期，身体虚弱，经常感冒。 2.因一篇晨跑文章改变生活。 注：词数80左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Homework Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to talk about me before and after sports. ....... Thank you! 8 典型纠错 1. I am small about age. 2. I used to caught a cold. 3.When I was young, My body was weak. 4. I read an article that about jog in the morning. I read an article that said jog in the morning. When I was young, I used to catch a cold. When I was young, I was weak. I read an article that said jogging in the morning is good for health. 5. It was make me no focus on learning. It let me did not focus on learning. It made me did not focus on class. It make me cannot focus on learning. 6. Sports change my life, let me more outgoing. 7. Now, I became both happier. It made me unable to focus on learning. It made it impossible for me to focus on learning. Sports change my life and make me more outgoing. Now, I become both happier and healthier. 1. After that I go to jog every morning and do 30 push-ups. I will climb the mountain on the weekend. I wanted to do 30 push-ups for 20 minutes. 2. Even though I sometimes wanted to give up, but I can stick to it. 3. Before I was so weak that I often caught a cold. 4. I now and then to run 3 kilometers in tenth minutes. 时态：一般过去时 Even though和but不能同时出现 出现两个连词，没有主句的现象，把before改为in the past 缺谓语，I now and then run 3 kilometers for ten minutes. 不能出现I want类的说法，因为描述的是已经发生的事情 5. I think if me no lose heart and never give up. 6. After that I made a list of my daily exercises! And doing sports everyday! 7. My body was very weak. My body was better than before. I believe I won’t lose heart and never give up. 第二句话缺少谓语 表示身体状况怎么样，直接用 “I”人称作为主语，说明状态即可，即I was better than before. Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to talk about me before and after sports. When I was young, I was so weak that I caught a cold now and then. As a result, it was difficult for me to focus on study like other children, which upset me. Then I read an article that said jogging in the morning would make a difference to health.It was then that I follow the advice and do it everyday in order to change myself . What's more, I formed the habit of getting up early and jogging for half an hour. Instead of feeling anxious, I became more positive about myself and my body. Now, by working out everyday, my body is building up , which is good for my daily life. Thank you! 参考范文 13 Unit 4 Natural Disasters 作文常见问题 Writing 2023年1月高考浙江卷 上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us 典型纠错 1. In order to broden our horizon of the nature, our Student's Union held a "Getting To Know The Plants Around Us"activity last weekend. 2.The activity began with lecture of local botanist. 3.The best part of the activity was that took a photo and labeled the plant species. broden our horizon to... Students’ Union "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us" of→by 从句缺少主语，在that前面补上we 4. Afterwards we moved on to saw and collected plants’ samples, it allows us to have closer contact with the plants around us. move on to+动词原形 表示〔为增加了解而〕观察用observe samples of plants/plant samples , which allowed have a closer contact with 5. Not only did it rich our campus life,but also enabled to realize the importance of closing to the nature. 过去式及过去分词： put-put-put tell-told-told teach-taught-taught enrich v. 充实 rich adj.富有的 enable sb/sth to do sth but also 后应有主语it get/be close to Thank you! $$