2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+从面试中领悟母爱的求职者 Jimmy 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 从面试中领悟母爱的求职者 Jimmy 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 It was time for graduates to hunt for jobs. The majority of them didn’t have working experience for they had spent most of their time at school studying academic subjects. It was not until they graduated from college that they realized it was a challenge for them to land jobs. Jimmy, one of these job hunters, was a young academically excellent person. One day, after making good preparations, he went to apply for a managerial position in a big company. In spite of fierce competition, he managed to pass the first interview. What a lucky dog! Jimmy was informed to come for the next round in a few days — the last interview for the company to make the final decision. 4 4 续写原文 The big day finally came. He dressed neatly, the grey tie matching perfectly the decent suit. Blood rushing to his face and heart pounding heavily, he tried to calm down, and then took a few deep breaths. It was his turn. The interviewer, an elegant lady, discovered from the CV that the youth’s academic achievements were excellent all the way, from the secondary school until the postgraduate research. After several rounds of questions related to the position, she asked, “Have you ever done any part-time jobs? ” “None. ” After a while, the interviewer asked who paid for Jimmy’s school fees. The youth answered in a low voice, “My father passed away when I was one year old, so it was my mother who paid for all my school fees. ” 5 5 续写原文 She continued, “What did your mother do? ” “My mother worked as a clothes cleaner. ” The lady requested the youth to show his hands. The youth showed a pair of hands that were smooth and perfect. The interviewer paused for a second, leaning against the chair, “Have you ever helped your mother wash the clothes before? ” Ashamed, Jimmy replied, “Never. My mother always wanted me to study and read more books. Furthermore, my mother can wash clothes faster than me. ” She nodded, adding, “I have a request. When you go back today, go and clean your mother’s hands, and then see me back here tomorrow morning. ” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Back home, Jimmy requested his mother to let him clean her hands. Paragraph 2：The next morning, Jimmy went to the interviewer’s office. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了34 岁的苏珊因医疗误诊失明后，陷入了黑暗、愤怒、沮丧和自怜的情绪中，生活完全依赖丈夫马克。马克作为一名军官，深爱着苏珊，决心帮助她重获自信与独立，回归正常生活。他首先鼓励苏珊重新乘坐曾经熟悉的公交车，尽管苏珊起初因失明而恐惧、抵触，觉得马克在抛弃她，但马克坚持陪伴苏珊坐了一周的公交，教她利用听觉等其他感官来适应新环境，还帮她与司机交好。最终，苏珊决定独自尝试乘坐公交，马克则在暗中守护，故事展现了这对夫妻在困境中的爱与勇气，以及苏珊努力走向独立的过程。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Back home, Jimmy requested his mother to let him clean her hands. 回到家后，Jimmy 略带紧张地走向母亲，轻声请求母亲让他为她洗手。母亲眼中满是疑惑，但还是缓缓伸出了那双饱经风霜、布满老茧的手。Jimmy 打来一盆温水，轻轻地握住母亲的手，仔细地揉搓着，每一道裂痕、每一处粗糙都像针一样刺痛着他的心。他回想起母亲多年来不辞辛劳地工作，独自承担家庭的重担，而自己却从未真正关心过母亲，心中满是愧疚与自责。水渐渐变凉，Jimmy 的心情却久久不能平静，他暗暗下定决心，以后一定要多帮母亲分担家务，不再让她如此辛苦。这一夜，Jimmy 辗转反侧，脑海中不断浮现母亲的手和她操劳的身影，同时也在思考着明天面试该如何面对。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：The next morning, Jimmy went to the interviewer’s office. 第二天清晨，Jimmy 早早地起床，整理好着装后前往面试官的办公室。一路上，他的心情既忐忑又坚定。见到面试官后，Jimmy 深吸一口气，然后平静地伸出了自己的双手。面试官看到他的手变得粗糙且有些微微泛红，上面还残留着昨晚做家务留下的痕迹，眼中闪过一丝惊讶。Jimmy 鼓起勇气说道：“昨天回家后，我认真地为母亲洗了手，也帮她做了许多家务。我深刻地意识到，这些年我忽略了母亲为我付出的艰辛。一个连对自己母亲的付出都不懂感恩和回报的人，又怎么能做好其他事情呢？如果我有幸能得到这份工作，我一定会带着这份对母亲的愧疚和感恩之心，更加努力地去工作，去关心身边的每一个人，去承担起我应尽的责任。” 面试官静静地听着，微微点头，似乎对 Jimmy 的回答很满意。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Back home, Jimmy requested his mother to let him clean her hands. His mother looked at him with a bit of surprise in her eyes but nodded with a gentle smile. As Jimmy took his mother's hands into his own, he was stunned by what he saw. Her hands were rough, chapped, and covered with the marks of years of toil. Each wrinkle seemed to tell a story of hardship. Gently, he lathered the soap and carefully washed her hands, feeling a mixture of guilt and gratitude welling up inside him. The water running over her hands was like a stream flowing through his heart. He realized that his smooth journey through life had been paved by his mother's hardworking hands. She had silently endured all the difficulties, just so he could focus on his studies. And he had never once bothered to notice her struggles. That night, Jimmy tossed and turned, the image of his mother's hands etched deeply in his mind, and he began to think about the upcoming interview in a new light. 14 14 范文呈现 The next morning, Jimmy went to the interviewer’s office. The interviewer looked at him, her eyes filled with inquiry. Jimmy took a deep breath and slowly held out his hands. Compared to the previous day, they were slightly reddened and bore some stains that wouldn't wash off, remnants of the numerous household chores he had done for his mother the night before. Looking earnestly at the interviewer, he said, "Yesterday, I went home and cleaned my mother's hands. I saw the hardships she has endured all these years, and I helped her with a lot of housework. I used to be so blind to her efforts, but now I understand. I know that being a good manager isn't just about academic knowledge and professional skills. It's also about having a sense of responsibility and gratitude, and being able to understand and care for those around me. I believe that if I can start to show my love and care for my mother, I can also bring these qualities to the workplace and be a valuable asset to the company." The interviewer listened intently, and a faint smile slowly spread across her face, as if she had found the answer she was looking for. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Back home, Jimmy apprehensively requested his mother to let him clean her hands. His mother, with a glimmer of astonishment in her eyes, consented. As he held her hands, which were rough and calloused from years of ceaseless labor as a clothes cleaner, a profound sense of remorse washed over him. Never had he been so acutely aware of the sacrifices his mother had made. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 The next morning, Jimmy entered the interviewer's office, his heart pounding. The interviewer regarded him with an inquisitive gaze. With newfound determination, Jimmy extended his hands, now reddened and slightly abraded from the previous night's chores. "Yesterday," he began, "I finally grasped the extent of my mother's toil. It dawns on me that success in a managerial role requires not only academic prowess but also empathy and a sense of duty. Only by caring for those around us can we truly thrive." The interviewer, seemingly satisfied, nodded approvingly. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$