“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题01“同题异解”-2025届新高考英语二轮复习

“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题01“同题异解” 所谓“同题异解”是指题目所给出的话题相同，但是具体写作时不同的人针对相同的话题肯定有不同的构思，因而答案是多种多样的。“同题异解”的关键在于细节的构思，也就是将题目中所给的关键信息进行充实与拓展。 1. 细化写作内容：添加例证，具化话题 又称“细节性拓展”：通过适当添加例子，使所表达的内容具体化。 ①我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. →We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, ________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ (我们可以用可回收袋代替塑料袋,拒绝使用一次性产品，种植更多的树木，节约水和能源). ②我要花一些时间和父母在一起。 I’ll spend some time staying with my parents. →I’ll spend some time staying with my parents,________________________________________________ (与他们聊天和做一些家务). ③我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。 I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. →I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. ___________________________ ________________________________________(如果可能的话，我们可以一起旅行或者分享旅行经历). ④到中国旅行，你可以学到很多关于中国传统文化的知识。 Traveling in China, you can learn a lot about Chinese traditional culture. →Traveling in China, you can learn a lot about Chinese traditional culture, ____________________________ ____________________(如传统饮食、服饰、绘画、地方风俗等). 2. 深化写作内容：拓展外延，丰富话题 又称“延伸性拓展”：挖掘写作对象的不同方面，使所表达的内容更为丰富。 ①我发现了一些不良行为。 I found some bad behavior. →I found some bad behavior. ______________________________________________________________ _________________________(有些人在墙上乱涂乱画，有些人在草坪上踢足球，有些人到处扔垃圾). ②我要和父母一起去超市购物。 I’m going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket. →I’m going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket _____________________________ (直到下午五点左右才回来). ③近年来，越来越多的人开始保护我们的环境。 In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment. →In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, __________________________ _________________(这使得我们的环境变得越来越丰富多彩). →In recent years, there are so many people who start to protect our environment _______________________ ___________________________(<结果>我们的环境变得越来越丰富多彩) . ④此外，还将有很多有用和有趣的活动。 Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities. →Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, ___________________________________ (从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).  3. 优化写作内容：善用逻辑，深耕话题 又称“逻辑性拓展”：补充原因、结果、条件、让步、目的等，使所表达的内容更具逻辑性。 ①Tracy来电话说和你在博尔顿咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)的见面取消。 Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee. →Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee __________________________________ (因为她有重要的事情做). ②我精通好几门外语。 I have a good command of several foreign languages. →I have a good command of several foreign languages. _________________________________________ (因此，我可以与来自不同国家的人交流). →I have a good command of several foreign languages, ___________________________________________ (这将使我能够与来自不同国家的人交流). ③我会参加一些社交活动。 I’ll take part in some social activities. →________________________(如果我有时间/如果可能的话), I’ll take part in some social activities. →I’ll take part in some social activities ________________________________(为了更好地了解社会). ④会议将于5月13日在1号楼504室举行。 A meeting will be held on May 13 in Room 504, Building No.1. →___________________________________(为了提高学生的安全意识), a meeting will be held on May 13t in Room 504, Building No.1. ⑤课前请做好充分准备。 Please make full preparations for the lesson. →Please make full preparations for the lesson ___________________________________________________ (以便更好地理解内容). (2024年全国高考英语新课标I卷)假定你是李华，你们班上周五在公园上了一节美术课，请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的经历。 内容包括：1. 你的作品内容； 2. 你的感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class in a park last Friday.  ______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】1 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. No words can describe my fantastic and unique experience. We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】2 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class in the park last Friday. It was an unforgettable experience, and I think you might find it interesting. Our task was to capture a scene from the park. I painted a small arched bridge over a stream, with the blue sky mirrored in the water and vibrant flowers in full bloom. This experience allowed me to notice the small details of nature that we often overlook, which was a refreshing change from our usual indoor classes. Additionally, this outdoor art class not only enhanced my appreciation for nature’s beauty but also improved my artistic skills.  Do you have similar experiences? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】3 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class we had in a park last Friday. Such an interesting and meaningful class was it that I couldn’t wait to share with you! We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. When I was upset about what to draw, what came into my sight was the beautiful sunset. Sunlight filtered through the canopy of the trees, covering the pathways with a warm and golden glow. The lush lawn blanketed the land. So gorgeous a scene was it that I couldn’t resist painting it down. Nothing could express my love for this art class. Not only did this class give me relaxation from the heavy schoolwork, but it also let me experience the striking beauty of nature. What was more important was that I became more enthusiastic about painting. It was really a marvelous experience, wasn’t it? Anticipating your sharing of your art classes! Yours, Li Hua 【三篇参考范文简评】 1. 要点全面，结构完整：范文要点全面，包括了三个核心要点：上周五在公园上了一节美术课(已经给出所谓句子)、自己的作品内容和自己的感想。范文首段在原有提示句的基础上以引出话题(No words can describe my fantastic and unique experience/It was an unforgettable experience, and I think you might find it  interesting/Such an interesting and meaningful class was it that I couldn’t wait to share with you)，不仅增强了表达的连贯性，还强化了书信体的交际功能；范文尾段不忘与首段呼应(In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished/Do you have similar experiences? I look forward to hearing from you soon/It was really a marvelous experience, wasn’t it? Anticipating your sharing of your art classes)，体现了写作结构的完整性； 2. 细节描述，各显神通：围绕“在室外大自然(公园)上美术课”，利用大自然的美景，勾勒出自己的美术作品，恰如其分的进行了描述。范文1描述了一幅池塘、花朵衬托下的小桥水彩画；范文2描述了一幅溪流、蓝天和鲜花浑然一体的风景画；范文3描述了一幅阳光、树林、小径和草坪相互印衬的风景画。 3. 真情实感，有感而发：范文突出了户外课和室内课的不同给作者所带来的感受(The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted/This experience allowed me to notice the small details of nature that we often overlook, which was a refreshing change from our usual indoor classes. Additionally, this outdoor art class not only enhanced my appreciation for nature’s beauty but also improved my artistic skills /Nothing could express my love for this art class. Not only did this class give me relaxation from the heavy schoolwork, but it also let me experience the striking beauty of nature. What was more important was that I became more enthusiastic about painting)，表达了作者对自然的热爱和对美术作品创作的享受。 此外，在语言表达上，范文所用词汇丰富，句式复杂多变，充分彰显了作者高超的语言驾驭能力。 说明：要求每题提供两个答案。 1 (海南省海口市琼山区海南中学2024-2025学年高三上学期开学考试)高三是高中生活很重要的一年，这一年高三同学将面临巨大的挑战，他们需要制定周密的计划，才能很好地应对挑战，实现梦想。为了加深交流，学校英文报刊的“Campus Life”栏目开设“My Senior Three’s Resolutions”，假定你是李华，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 面临的挑战(至少2点)； 2. 制定的计划(至少2点)。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Senior Three’s Resolutions ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 (广东省揭阳市汕尾市2023-2024学年高三上学期1月期末)假定你是李华，你参加的选修课近期将组织一次校外实地考察，现就“A Field Trip to the City Museum or the Nature Park”在同学们中征求意见，请你给负责该课程的外教Brian写一封邮件。 内容包括：1. 你的意向和理由； 2. 对活动的期待。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Brian, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 3 (2024届山西省临汾市高考考前适应性训练考试一)假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Sam看到你在社交媒体上发布的“Just applied to be a volunteer at the 9th Asian Winter Games (HARBIN 2025). Feeling excited!”，他很感兴趣，发邮件询问志愿者申请事宜。请你给他回封邮件。 内容包括：1. 志愿活动要求； 2. 活动意义。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Sam, I hope this email finds you in great spirits. _____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4 (江西省武宁县尚美中学2023-2024学年高三下学期开学考)兔子灯的制作是中国传统手工艺，假设你是李津，你们社区本周六下午将邀请老艺人来教大家如何制作兔子灯。外教老师Mrs. Green对中国传统文化很感兴趣，请你给她写一封信，邀请她一同参加本次活动。 内容包括：1. 写信目的； 2. 活动简介； 3. 希望老师接受邀请并尽快回复。 注意：1词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇： 兔子灯：the rabbit lamp；老艺人：old craftsman Dear Mrs. Green, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 5 (2024届湖南省高三九校联盟第二次联考)假如你在一个网络论坛上发现外国网友提出了一个英语问题：“What do you want to do most with AI(人工智能)?”，请你用英语进行回复。 内容包括：1. 回答问题； 2. 简述理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 What do you want to do most with Al? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6 (2024届第西安市碑林区西北工业大学附中高三第14次适应性训练)从上个世纪50年代起，围绕“太空探索的巨大开支是否值得”的争论就不曾休止。有人辩称太空探索改变了我们的生活，但也有人说我们更应该用这些资金去应对气候变化，贫穷，饥饿等国际问题。请写一篇议论文表明你的观点，并给出相应的理由。 注意：1. 词数100左右，开头句已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Since 1950s, there has been a debate about whether the money spent on space exploration is worthwhile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7 (浙江省温州市十校联合体2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中)假定你是李华，你校正在与国外友好学校进行文化交流活动，学校安排你带领来访学生参观校剪纸手工艺社团，请用英文写一篇简短介绍，向他们介绍以下内容： 1. 介绍剪纸作品(如图案设计、文化价值等)； 2. 安排来访学生体验剪纸。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Hello everyone, welcome to our Paper-Cutting Club! ___________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 (山东省威海市2023-2024学年高二下学期期末考试)假定你是李华，你校英文报Opinion栏目本期话题为“Original Photo or Edited Photo for Resume (简历)?”请写一篇短文，发表你的观点。 注意：1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Regarding the topic of “Original Photo or Edited Photo for Resume”, I prefer ________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9 (山东省威海市2023-2024学年高二上学期期末)假定你是李华，近期收到美国朋友Ben的邮件，请你根据邮件内容(如图)，给他写一封80词左右的回信。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 (湖南省长沙市平高集团六校联考2023-2024学年高二下学期期末)假如你是李华。在暑假来临之际，学校向全校学生发出安全倡议，请你代表校英文俱乐部写一封防溺水(Drowning Prevention)倡议书。 内容包括：1. 倡议目的； 2. 倡议内容； 3. 发出呼吁。 注意：1.写作词数应为100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ “同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题01“同题异解” 所谓“同题异解”是指题目所给出的话题相同，但是具体写作时不同的人针对相同的话题肯定有不同的构思，因而答案是多种多样的。“同题异解”的关键在于细节的构思，也就是将题目中所给的关键信息进行充实与拓展。 1. 细化写作内容：添加例证，具化话题 又称“细节性拓展”：通过适当添加例子，使所表达的内容具体化。 ①我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. →We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products, plant more trees and save water and energy(我们可以用可回收袋代替塑料袋,拒绝使用一次性产品，种植更多的树木，节约水和能源). ②我要花一些时间和父母在一起。 I’ll spend some time staying with my parents. →I’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework(与他们聊天和做一些家务). ③我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。 I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. →I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. If possible, we can travel together or share traveling experiences(如果可能的话，我们可以一起旅行或者分享旅行经历). ④到中国旅行，你可以学到很多关于中国传统文化的知识。 Traveling in China, you can learn a lot about Chinese traditional culture. →Traveling in China, you can learn a lot about Chinese traditional culture, such as traditional food, clothes, painting, local customs and so on(如传统饮食、服饰、绘画、地方风俗等). 2. 深化写作内容：拓展外延，丰富话题 又称“延伸性拓展”：挖掘写作对象的不同方面，使所表达的内容更为丰富。 ①我发现了一些不良行为。 I found some bad behavior. →I found some bad behavior. Some people scribbled on the wall, some people played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere(有些人在墙上乱涂乱画，有些人在草坪上踢足球，有些人到处扔垃圾). ②我要和父母一起去超市购物。 I’m going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket. →I’m going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket and won’t be back until about 5:00 in the afternoon(直到下午五点左右才回来). ③近年来，越来越多的人开始保护我们的环境。 In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment. →In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes our environment more and more colorful(这使得我们的环境变得越来越丰富多彩). →In recent years, there are so many people who start to protect our environment that our environment is becoming more and more colorful.(<结果>我们的环境变得越来越丰富多彩) . ④此外，还将有很多有用和有趣的活动。 Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities. →Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).  3. 优化写作内容：善用逻辑，深耕话题 又称“逻辑性拓展”：补充原因、结果、条件、让步、目的等，使所表达的内容更具逻辑性。 ①Tracy来电话说和你在博尔顿咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)的见面取消。 Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee. →Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee as/because she had something important to do(因为她有重要的事情做). ②我精通好几门外语。 I have a good command of several foreign languages. →I have a good command of several foreign languages. Therefore, I can communicate with people from different countries(因此，我可以与来自不同国家的人交流). →I have a good command of several foreign languages, which will enable me to communicate with people from different countries(这将使我能够与来自不同国家的人交流). ③我会参加一些社交活动。 I’ll take part in some social activities. →If I have free time/If possible(如果我有时间/如果可能的话), I’ll take part in some social activities. →I’ll take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about society(为了更好地了解社会). ④会议将于5月13日在1号楼504室举行。 A meeting will be held on May 13 in Room 504, Building No.1. →In order to raise students’ awareness of security(为了提高学生的安全意识), a meeting will be held on May 13t in Room 504, Building No.1. ⑤课前请做好充分准备。 Please make full preparations for the lesson. →Please make full preparations for the lesson so as to understand the content much better(以便更好地理解内容). (2024年全国高考英语新课标I卷)假定你是李华，你们班上周五在公园上了一节美术课，请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的经历。 内容包括：1. 你的作品内容； 2. 你的感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class in a park last Friday.  ______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】1 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. No words can describe my fantastic and unique experience. We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】2 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class in the park last Friday. It was an unforgettable experience, and I think you might find it interesting. Our task was to capture a scene from the park. I painted a small arched bridge over a stream, with the blue sky mirrored in the water and vibrant flowers in full bloom. This experience allowed me to notice the small details of nature that we often overlook, which was a refreshing change from our usual indoor classes. Additionally, this outdoor art class not only enhanced my appreciation for nature’s beauty but also improved my artistic skills.  Do you have similar experiences? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】3 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class we had in a park last Friday. Such an interesting and meaningful class was it that I couldn’t wait to share with you! We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. When I was upset about what to draw, what came into my sight was the beautiful sunset. Sunlight filtered through the canopy of the trees, covering the pathways with a warm and golden glow. The lush lawn blanketed the land. So gorgeous a scene was it that I couldn’t resist painting it down. Nothing could express my love for this art class. Not only did this class give me relaxation from the heavy schoolwork, but it also let me experience the striking beauty of nature. What was more important was that I became more enthusiastic about painting. It was really a marvelous experience, wasn’t it? Anticipating your sharing of your art classes! Yours, Li Hua 【三篇参考范文简评】 1. 要点全面，结构完整：范文要点全面，包括了三个核心要点：上周五在公园上了一节美术课(已经给出所谓句子)、自己的作品内容和自己的感想。范文首段在原有提示句的基础上以引出话题(No words can describe my fantastic and unique experience/It was an unforgettable experience, and I think you might find it  interesting/Such an interesting and meaningful class was it that I couldn’t wait to share with you)，不仅增强了表达的连贯性，还强化了书信体的交际功能；范文尾段不忘与首段呼应(In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished/Do you have similar experiences? I look forward to hearing from you soon/It was really a marvelous experience, wasn’t it? Anticipating your sharing of your art classes)，体现了写作结构的完整性； 2. 细节描述，各显神通：围绕“在室外大自然(公园)上美术课”，利用大自然的美景，勾勒出自己的美术作品，恰如其分的进行了描述。范文1描述了一幅池塘，花朵衬托下的小桥水彩画；范文2描述了一幅溪流、蓝天和鲜花浑然一体的风景画；范文3描述了一幅阳光、树林、小径和草坪相互印衬的风景画。 3. 真情实感，有感而发：范文突出了户外课和室内课的不同给作者所带来的感受(The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted/This experience allowed me to notice the small details of nature that we often overlook, which was a refreshing change from our usual indoor classes. Additionally, this outdoor art class not only enhanced my appreciation for nature’s beauty but also improved my artistic skills /Nothing could express my love for this art class. Not only did this class give me relaxation from the heavy schoolwork, but it also let me experience the striking beauty of nature. What was more important was that I became more enthusiastic about painting)，表达了作者对自然的热爱和对美术作品创作的享受。 此外，在语言表达上，范文所用词汇丰富，句式复杂多变，充分彰显了作者高超的语言驾驭能力。 说明：1. 要求每个考生每题提供两个答案； 2. 题后的【简析】以其中的一篇参考范文为例； 3. 讲评时要引导考生关注不同参考范文的构思，特别是主体部分的构思。 1 (海南省海口市琼山区海南中学2024-2025学年高三上学期开学考试)高三是高中生活很重要的一年，这一年高三同学将面临巨大的挑战，他们需要制定周密的计划，才能很好地应对挑战，实现梦想。为了加深交流，学校英文报刊的“Campus Life”栏目开设“My Senior Three’s Resolutions”，假定你是李华，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 面临的挑战(至少2点)； 2. 制定的计划(至少2点)。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Senior Three’s Resolutions ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】1 My Senior Three’s Resolutions As senior three is approaching, I have made great resolutions to overcome the challenges and pressure I will be facing in the coming year. What challenges me most is that I have to meet the demanding requirements of Gaokao in one year so as to be admitted into my dream university. Consequently, I have made a study plan to help improve my study strategies. I believe that with my efforts, I will make progress day by day. I also have to learn to deal with the great pressure. As doing exercise can do good to us physically and emotionally, I have planned to go jogging every morning. Hopefully, it would help me keep strong and cheerful. The coming year would be tough but promising. 【参考范文】2 My Senior Three’s Resolutions As senior three is approaching, I have made great resolutions to overcome the challenges and pressure I will be facing in the coming year. What challenges me most is that I have to meet the demanding requirements of Gaokao in one year so as to be admitted into my dream university. I also have to learn to deal with the great pressure caused by the tight schedule. Consequently, not only have I made a study plan to help improve my study strategies, but I also have planned to go jogging every morning to help me keep strong and cheerful. I believe that with my greatest efforts, I will make progress day by day. The coming year would be tough but promising. 【简析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给校英文报刊的“Campus Life”栏目投稿， 介绍自己高三面临的挑战，并分享自己为此制定的计划。 【词汇积累】 战胜：overcome→conquer 面对：face→encounter, confront 应对：deal with→cope with, address 因此：consequently→as a result, as a consequence 【句式拓展】 原 句：I also have to learn to deal with the great pressure caused by the tight schedule. 拓展句：I also have to learn to deal with the great pressure that is caused by the tight schedule. 【高分句型】 1. As senior three is approaching, I have made great resolutions to overcome the challenges and pressure I will be facing in the coming year. (运用了as引导时间状语从句、that/which引导限制性定语从句并被省略) 2. What challenges me most is that I have to meet the demanding requirements of Gaokao in one year so as to be admitted into my dream university. (运用了what引导主语从句、that引导表语从句) 3. Consequently, not only have I made a study plan to help improve my study strategies, but I also have planned to go jogging every morning to help me keep strong and cheerful. (运用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装结构) 2 (广东省揭阳市汕尾市2023-2024学年高三上学期1月期末)假定你是李华，你参加的选修课近期将组织一次校外实地考察，现就“A Field Trip to the City Museum or the Nature Park”在同学们中征求意见，请你给负责该课程的外教Brian写一封邮件。 内容包括：1. 你的意向和理由； 2. 对活动的期待。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Brian, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【参考范文】1 Dear Brian, As for the upcoming field trip organized for our elective course, visiting the City Museum would be a fantastic choice in my opinion. Firstly, the City Museum offers a rich cultural experience, allowing us to appreciate the local culture and traditions. Moreover, with a wide range of artworks, and interactive displays, the museum provides a unique learning opportunity for us. Furthermore, the trip would be enjoyable, which will create lasting fond memories. I am eagerly looking forward to this field trip and believe that visiting the City Museum will greatly enrich our understanding of our city. Best regards, Li Hua 【参考范文】2 Dear Brian, I’m writing to share my preference for the upcoming field trip organized for our elective course. Personally, I would love to visit the Nature Park. Firstly, the Nature Park provides a peaceful environment where we can connect with nature and appreciate its beauty. Moreover, with various outdoor activities such as hiking trails and bird watching, it would be a wonderful chance for us to learn more about different wildlife. Finally, enjoying the fresh air and scenic views together with our classmates would be both relaxing and entertaining. I am really excited about this field trip to the Nature Park. It would be a great way to appreciate the wonders of nature and bond with our classmates. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Best regards , Li Hua 【简析】 【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，你参加的选修课近期将组织一次校外实地考察，现就“A Field Trip to the City Museum or the Nature Park”在同学们中征求意见，请你给负责该课程的外教Brian写一封邮 件。内容包括：1. 你的意向和理由；2. 对活动的期待。 【词汇积累】 在我看来：in my opinion→as fas as I’m concerned 极好的：fantastic→excellent 此外：Moreover→In addition 机会：opportunity→chance 【句式拓展】 原 句：As for the upcoming field trip organized for our elective course, visiting the City Museum would be a fantastic choice in my opinion. 拓展句：As for the upcoming field trip which will be organized for our elective course, visiting the City Museum would be a fantastic choice in my opinion. 【高分句型】 1. Furthermore, the trip would be enjoyable, which will create lasting fond memories. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. I am eagerly looking forward to this field trip and believe that visiting the City Museum will greatly enrich our understanding of our city. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 3 (2024届山西省临汾市高考考前适应性训练考试一)假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Sam看到你在社交媒体上发布的“Just applied to be a volunteer at the 9th Asian Winter Games (HARBIN 2025). Feeling excited!”，他很感兴趣，发邮件询问志愿者申请事宜。请你给他回封邮件。 内容包括：1. 志愿活动要求； 2. 活动意义。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Sam, I hope this email finds you in great spirits. _____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】1 Dear Sam, I hope this message finds you in great spirits. Delightedly knowing your interest in the 9th Asian Winter Games, I can’t wait to share details with you. The Asian Winter Games is a significant event. Volunteering at it is really a unique opportunity to meet and interact with many different people, and experience the spirit of sportsmanship and competition. As for its requirements, excellent communication and organization skills with flexibility are emphasized. Additionally, proficiency in both Mandarin and English is a must. For more detailed information, you can refer to the attachment. I sincerely hope you will take this opportunity to participate in the Games. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】2 Dear Sam, I hope this message finds you in great spirits. Yes, it’s true! I’ve just submitted my application for a volunteer position at the 9th Asian Winter Games to be held in Harbin in 2025. As for its requirements, it’s proficiency in both Mandarin and English that is a must, which is greatly beneficial in assisting those in need. Besides, both flexible skills in communication and prior relevant experience are especially highlighted. Undoubtedly, volunteering at it is really a unique opportunity to meet and interact with many different people, and experience firsthand the behind-the-scenes workings of a major sporting event. Why not consider volunteering for such a significant event? Waiting to receive your good news. Yours, Li Hua 【简析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国笔友Sam看到考生在社交媒体上发布的“Just applied to be a volunteer at the 9th Asian Winter Games (HARBIN 2025). Feeling excited!”，他很感兴趣，发邮件询问志愿者申请 事宜，要求考生按照要求给他回封邮件。 【词汇积累】 高兴地：delightedly→ happily 机会：opportunity→ chance 出色的：excellent→ outstanding 重要的：significant→ important 【句式拓展】 原 句：As for its requirements, excellent communication and organization skills with flexibility are emphasized. Additionally, proficiency in both Mandarin and English is a must. 拓展句：As for its requirements, not only are excellent communication and organization skills with flexibility emphasized, but proficiency in both Mandarin and English is a must. 【高分句型】 1. Delightedly knowing your interest in the 9th Asian Winter Games, I can’t wait to share details with you. (运用了现在分词knowing作状语以) 2. I sincerely hope you will take this opportunity to participate in the Games. (运用了省略了引导词that的宾语从句) 4 (江西省武宁县尚美中学2023-2024学年高三下学期开学考)兔子灯的制作是中国传统手工艺，假设你是李津，你们社区本周六下午将邀请老艺人来教大家如何制作兔子灯。外教老师Mrs. Green对中国传统文化很感兴趣，请你给她写一封信，邀请她一同参加本次活动。 内容包括：1. 写信目的； 2. 活动简介； 3. 希望老师接受邀请并尽快回复。 注意：1词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇： 兔子灯：the rabbit lamp；老艺人：old craftsman Dear Mrs. Green, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【参考范文】1 Dear Mrs. Green, How’s everything going? I’m writing to tell you that there will be an activity of making rabbit lamps. As far as I know, you are a fan of Chinese culture. So I am writing to invite you to go with me. The activity will start at 6 pm this Saturday in our neighborhood. An old craftsman will show us how to make a rabbit lamp. And then we can give it a try. It is said that the best rabbit lamp maker will receive a special prize. If you are interested in it, do let me know as soon as possible. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Jin 【参考范文】2 Dear Mrs. Green, It’s well known that you have a great affection for Chinese traditional culture. Therefore, I’m writing to offer you an invitation the moment I leaned that there was going to be an activity teaching us to make the rabbit lamps. Here are the details. It will start at 6 pm this Saturday. And it is in our neighborhood that an old craftsman will demonstrate how to make rabbit lamps, which are actually colorful, eye-catching lanterns made of paper, bamboo and sticks. Afterwards, we will have the opportunity to experience DIY. As planned, those whose works are among the top three will be rewarded. How I wish you would consider my invitation! Your early reply will be highly appreciated. Yours, Li Jin 【简析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师写一封邀请信，邀请她来自己的社区学习制作兔 子灯。信中需要简单介绍活动目的和过程，最后表达希望老师接受邀请并尽快回复。 【词汇积累】 活动：activity → event 据我所知：as far as I know → from what I can tell/according to what I know 试一下：give it a try → have a try 有兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in 【句式拓展】 原 句：The activity will start at 6 pm this Saturday in our neighborhood. An old craftsman will show us how to make a rabbit lamp. 拓展句：The activity will start at 6 pm this Saturday in our neighborhood where an old craftsman will show us how to make a rabbit lamp. 【高分句型】 1. I’m writing to tell you that there will be an activity of making rabbit lamps.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 2. It is said that the best rabbit lamp maker will receive a special prize. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句) 5 (2024届湖南省高三九校联盟第二次联考)假如你在一个网络论坛上发现外国网友提出了一个英语问题：“What do you want to do most with AI(人工智能)?”，请你用英语进行回复。 内容包括：1. 回答问题； 2. 简述理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 What do you want to do most with Al? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】1 What do you want to do most with AI? What I want to do most with AI is to tackle the issue of climate change. The situation with climate change is more than serious, and I believe that AI holds a significant potential to make a difference. By leveraging the power of big data, AI can detect changes in climate conditions in real time and provide critical feedback. Thus, this could enable us to implement more effective strategies for mitigation and adaptation, ultimately helping us to protect our planet for future generations. Hopefully, the capacity of AI to process vast amounts of data quickly and accurately makes it an invaluable tool in our fight against climate change. 【参考范文】2 What do you want to do most with AI? We have entered a world where everyone is expected to engage with AI. As a high school student, what I want to do most with AI is to use it to facilitate my learning process in various subjects. Firstly, AI in essence is a database of huge amounts of information. Simply type in a prompt and AI can develop creative writing skills from there. Besides, the accuracy rate of AI is far from perfect, which leaves room for further exploration. In other words, I can assess the AI-generated results through self-reflection and peer discussion. Whether you like it or not, AI is here to stay. We should learn not to be dependent on AI, but rather to use it to our advantage. 【简析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生在网络论坛上回复外国网友提出的问题“What do you want to do most with AI?”。 【词汇积累】 各种各样的：various → a variety of 另外：besides→what’s more 换句话说：in other words→that is to say 评估：assess→evaluate 【句式拓展】 简单句变复合句 原 句：Firstly, AI in essence is a database of huge amounts of information. 拓展句：Firstly, AI in essence is a database of huge amounts of information, which plays an important role in our daily life. 【高分句式】 1. We have entered a world where everyone is expected to engage with AI. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) 2. Besides, the accuracy rate of AI is far from perfect, which leaves room for further exploration. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 6 (2024届第西安市碑林区西北工业大学附中高三第14次适应性训练)从上个世纪50年代起，围绕“太空探索的巨大开支是否值得”的争论就不曾休止。有人辩称太空探索改变了我们的生活，但也有人说我们更应该用这些资金去应对气候变化，贫穷，饥饿等国际问题。请写一篇议论文表明你的观点，并给出相应的理由。 注意：1. 词数100左右，开头句已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Since 1950s, there has been a debate about whether the money spent on space exploration is worthwhile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】1 I completely agree with the view that the money spent on space exploration is a waste of resource. The reasons are as follows. It is extremely expensive to train scientists and other staff involved with space missions, and facilities and equipment also come at a huge cost to the government. Besides, many missions to space fail completely, and the smallest technological error can cost astronauts their lives. The money from space programmes should go to vital areas instead. It is much cheaper to train doctors, teachers, police and other public service workers to solve problems of health, education and security. Furthermore, many thousands of people could be lifted out of hunger and poverty and given a better quality of life. In conclusion, my view is that governments should spend money on public services rather than on space exploration. 【参考范文】2 I think space exploration is a venture that far exceeds its cost. The reasons are as follows. First, through the use of satellites, we’ve made strides in addressing global hunger by enhancing farming practices. Second, the technological innovations conceived for space missions have sparked new industries and jobs, while simultaneously improving our daily lives. Finally, the relentless pursuit of understanding the universe has led to significant breakthroughs in many areas, including medicine and agriculture. Any scientific progress needs financial support, which doesn’t contradict solutions to other problems like climate and poverty. In essence, the alignment of space exploration and our earthly goals solidifies my belief in the value of space exploration. 【简析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写一篇议论文表明你对探索太空的观点，并给出相应的 理由。 【词汇积累】 观点：view→opinion 完全：completely→totally 此外：besides→in addition 总之：in conclusion→in short 【句式拓展】 原 句：Besides, many missions to space fail completely, and the smallest technological error can cost astronauts their lives. 拓展句：Besides, many missions to space fail completely, where the smallest technological error can cost astronauts their lives. 【高分句型】 1. I completely agree with the view that the money spent on space exploration is a waste of resource. (运用了that引导同位语从句) 2. In conclusion, my view is that governments should spend money on public services rather than on space exploration.(运用了that引导的表语从句) 7 (浙江省温州市十校联合体2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中)假定你是李华，你校正在与国外友好学校进行文化交流活动，学校安排你带领来访学生参观校剪纸手工艺社团，请用英文写一篇简短介绍，向他们介绍以下内容： 1. 介绍剪纸作品(如图案设计、文化价值等)； 2. 安排来访学生体验剪纸。 注意：1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Hello everyone, welcome to our Paper-Cutting Club! ___________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】1 Hello everyone, welcome to our Paper-Cutting Club! My name is Li Hua, and I’m delighted to welcome you to our school’s paper-cutting club. It’s a pleasure to introduce you to one of China’s most cherished traditional arts. Paper-cutting with its rich history in China, is known for its symbolic meanings and beautiful designs. It often represents wishes for good fortune, happiness, and prosperity. These designs can depict animals, flowers, or traditional Chinese characters and are commonly displayed during festivals like Chinese New Year or at weddings. They are not only decorations but also carry cultural significance, expressing hope and positivity for the future. Today, we’ve arranged for you to try your hand at paper-cutting. Our club members will guide you step by step, so don’t worry if it’s your first time. We hope this hands-on experience helps you appreciate the beauty of this traditional art, and you’ll leave with a memorable piece of Chinese culture! 【参考范文】2 Hello everyone, welcome to our Paper-Cutting Club! My name is Li Hua, and today I’m excited to introduce you to one of China’s most traditional and captivating folk arts: Paper Cutting. Paper cutting is not merely a craft—it’s a form of cultural expression, with each piece holding deep symbolic meanings. For example, designs often feature Chinese characters, animals, or flowers, symbolizing good fortune, happiness, prosperity, and longevity. These intricate artworks are commonly displayed on windows, doors, or walls during festivals and special occasions, such as Chinese New Year or weddings, to bring blessings and joy to the home. Today, we’ve prepared some beginner-friendly designs for you to try. Don’t worry if you’re new to Paper Cutting—our club members will guide you through each step, from folding the paper to cutting delicate patterns, helping you create your own unique masterpiece. By the end of the session, you’ll have a beautiful paper cutting to take home as a keepsake! Enjoy the creative process, and have fun making your own paper-cutting art! 【简析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写一篇简短介绍，向国外友好学校学生介绍学校的剪 纸手工艺社团。 【词汇积累】 难忘的：memorable→unforgettable 欣赏：appreciate→admire 表达：express→convey 高兴：delighted→pleased 【句式拓展】 原 句：Paper-cutting with its rich history in China, is known for its symbolic meanings and beautiful designs. 拓展句：Paper-cutting, which has its rich history in China, is known for its symbolic meanings and beautiful designs. 【高分句型】 1. Our club members will guide you step by step, so don’t worry if it’s your first time. (运用了if引导条件状语从句) 2.We hope this hands-on experience helps you appreciate the beauty of this traditional art, and you’ll leave with a memorable piece of Chinese culture! (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 8 (山东省威海市2023-2024学年高二下学期期末考试)假定你是李华，你校英文报Opinion栏目本期话题为“Original Photo or Edited Photo for Resume (简历)?”请写一篇短文，发表你的观点。 注意：1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Regarding the topic of “Original Photo or Edited Photo for Resume”, I prefer ________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】1 Regarding the topic of “Original Photo or Edited Photo for Resume”, I prefer to use an original photo. Authenticity matters greatly in professional settings. An original photo reflects honesty and qualities that employers value when they assess candidates. An edited photo, while it may make you look better, runs the risk of misleading employers. They might get the wrong idea or even judge you unfairly based on your looks. So, it’s a better choice to use an original photo, which can keep people focused on what you can do professionally. Our qualifications speak louder than any digital touch-up. 【参考范文】2 Regarding the topic of “Original Photo or Edited Photo for Resume”, I prefer an edited photo for a resume. An edited photo allows us to present our best selves, enhancing our professional image. Minor adjustments, such as improving lighting or background, can make a significant difference without altering one’s true appearance. In a competitive job market, first impressions are crucial, and a polished photo can convey professionalism and attention to detail. However, it’s important to avoid over-editing, ensuring the photo remains a true representation of oneself. Striking this balance can help candidates make a positive impact on potential employers. 【参考范文】3 Regarding the topic of “Original Photo or Edited Photo for Resume”, I prefer using edited photos in resumes. Carefully edited photos can enhance your appearance and showcase your attention to detail, potentially giving recruiters a more favorable first impression and improving your chances of securing an interview. However, it’s crucial to strike the right balance excessive editing can make the photo seem inauthentic, which may raise doubts about your integrity. If you’re unsure about the appropriate level of editing, it’s best to consult a professional to avoid any issues. Ultimately, thoughtfully edited photos can be an asset, but you must ensure they remain genuine representations. 【简析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生写一篇短文，发表对于“Original Photo or Edited Photo for Resume (简历)?”的观点。 【词汇积累】 反映：reflect→mirror 评估：assess→evaluate 选择：choice→option 集中于：focus on→concentrate on 【句式拓展】 原 句：Our qualifications speak louder than any digital touch-up. 拓展句：Our qualifications are what speak louder than any digital touch-up. 【高分句型】 1. An original photo reflects honesty and qualities that employers value when they assess candidates. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句) 2. So, it’s a better choice to use an original photo, which can keep people focused on what you can do professionally. (运用了it作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式，which引导的非限制性定语从句和what引 导的宾语从句) 9 (山东省威海市2023-2024学年高二上学期期末)假定你是李华，近期收到美国朋友Ben的邮件，请你根据邮件内容(如图)，给他写一封80词左右的回信。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】1 Dear Ben, I understand your feelings. Sometimes we joke too much without realizing the potential impact on others. Here are some tips to help you strike a balance. Firstly, keep an eye on the reactions of your partners. If a joke lands poorly, stop and adjust your behavior accordingly. And put yourself in others’ shoes and consider how your jokes might affect them. Do remember to avoid targeting individuals, and be mindful of sensitive topics. If necessary, offer a sincere apology for any offense caused by your jokes. Humor is a powerful tool, but it’s important to use it wisely. I hope these suggestions will be of some help to you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】2 Dear Ben, Humor is a powerful tool in strengthening bonds, but it should never come at the cost of hurting others. Therefore, it’s vital to strike a balance. If you think it may offend others, it’s best to avoid making that joke. If you unintentionally make a joke that offends someone, why not apologize sincerely and tell them you didn’t mean to cause harm. Additionally, actively engaging in meaningful conversations and putting yourself in your friends’ shoes will enable you to tell jokes more appropriately. By being mindful of your jokes, I believe you will build a positive connection with your friends. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】3 Dear Ben, Cheer up, my friend! Even comedians bomb on stage sometimes, right? It’s awesome that you’re self-aware and open to making adjustments. Try sensing the mood of the conversation and being sensitive to your classmates’ reactions. Remember, a good laugh is enjoyable, but timing is crucial. Take a moment to reflect on your interactions and consider sharing your concerns with your classmates; they’ll likely to appreciate your honesty. Remember, it’s all about timing. Keep smiling and adapting — you’ll find the right balance! Stay funny, stay cool! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【简析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据美国朋友Ben的邮件内容写一封80词左右的回信。 【词汇积累】 影响：impact→influence 首先：firstly→first and foremost 提供：offer→provide 重要的：important→significant 【句式拓展】 原 句：Here are some tips to help you strike a balance. 拓展句：Here are some tips which can help you strike a balance. 【高分句型】 1. If a joke lands poorly, stop and adjust your behavior accordingly. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 2. I hope these suggestions will be of some help to you. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that) 10 (湖南省长沙市平高集团六校联考2023-2024学年高二下学期期末)假如你是李华。在暑假来临之际，学校向全校学生发出安全倡议，请你代表校英文俱乐部写一封防溺水(Drowning Prevention)倡议书。 内容包括：1. 倡议目的； 2. 倡议内容； 3. 发出呼吁。 注意：1.写作词数应为100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】1 Dear students, Summer vocation always comes along with people’s great concern over safety, especially when drowning remains a significant cause of death among young people. In order to call on everyone to prioritize safety, we propose: Whenever you participate in water-related activities, remember to have a friend or family member with you, in case an emergency arises. And do observe water safety rules, paying attention to warning signs and follow lifeguards’ instructions. More importantly, using appropriate safety equipment is highly proposed, especially if you are not a confident swimmer. Remember, prevention is the key. By taking these simple precautions, we can significantly reduce the risk of drowning incidents and enjoy a safer summer holiday. English Club 【参考范文】2 Dear students, With summer holidays around the corner, water activities will be getting more and more popular. To protect ourselves from getting drowned, we make the following proposals. First, a licensed water pool is always our No. 1 choice. What’s more, never do water sports without an adult’s company. Life jackets are strongly recommended, whether you are an expert or a green hand. Last but not least, try to spread knowledge about drowning prevention, which can help more people. Always give the highest priority to safety while enjoying ourselves. English Club 【简析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华。在暑假来临之际，学校向全校学生发出安全倡议，请 你代表校英文俱乐部写一封防溺水(Drowning Prevention)倡议书。 【词汇积累】 为了：In order to→ So as to 参加：participate in → take part in 注意：pay attention to→ take notice of 更重要的是：More importantly→ Above all 【句式拓展】 原 句：More importantly, using appropriate safety equipment is highly proposed, especially if you are not a confident swimmer. 拓展句：More importantly, it is highly proposed that appropriate safety equipment should be used, especially if you are not a confident swimmer. 【高分句型】 1. Whenever you participate in water-related activities, remember to have a friend or family member with you, in case an emergency arises.(运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句和in case引导的目的状语从句) 2.More importantly, using appropriate safety equipment is highly proposed, especially if you are not a confident swimmer. 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