专题09 书面表达解题要点及专项训练-2024-2025学年九年级英语上学期期末复习（牛津译林版）

专题09 书面表达解题要点及专项训练 应试策略 1.审题目：要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。 3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。 4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面： (1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 (2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 (4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking… (6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 注意事项 书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷老师工作量大，时间紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 1.（23-24九年级上·江苏镇江·期末） 假设你是李华，你们学校将开设两个社团。请根据提示，向同学们介绍一个你喜欢的社团，并谈谈你喜欢的理由和你对该社团的建议。 Teens’ Corner·on Friday afternoon, at the school hall ·share ideas and feelings ·ask for advice to solve teenage problems ·make friends with each other … Art Club·on Tuesday afternoon, in the art room ·talk about different art forms ·enjoy beautiful paintings ·attend concerts … 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括一个社团的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 对你所喜欢的社团说明理由，并对其提出建议； 3. 文章不少于90词，已给出部分不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear classmates, I am glad that our school will set up two new clubs. I’d like to introduce ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2.（23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期末） 为进一步加强校园文化建设，促进学生全面发展，你校即将组织一系列课外社团活动，请你根据下图提示，用英语向全校同学介绍社团，并阐述开设这些社团的理由。 注意：1.表达中必须包含所给要点； 2.省略部分按要求自拟作答； 3.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 4.表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。 Students in our school are welcome to join our after-class clubs ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these clubs will be of great help and all of us can enjoy our school life. 3.（23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末） 近日，学校英文报刊开设了有关作业问题的专栏，你所在班级围绕作业问题进行了讨论，同学们表达了自己的观点，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇简要的报告向专栏投稿，介绍班级讨论的结果，并表明自己的观点。 大部分同学 ●帮助复习所学知识 ●帮助学生学会独立解决问题 ●完成作业是学生的职责，应合理安排好时间 …… 少部分同学 ●作业量大，耗时多，影响休息或不能做喜欢做的事情 ●有些作业机械重复，不感兴趣 …… 你自己 …… 要求： 1. 内容必须包括以上所有要点，须按照要求适当发挥，补充细节。 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。 3. 不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。 What Do We Think of Our Homework? Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.（23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末） 随着现代科技的发展，机器人已经来到我们身边，而且给我们的生活带来了便利。请根据下表所述内容，介绍家用机器人的基本情况，并就如何更好地让机器人为我们服务提出建议。 简介 家用机器人使用范围广，受到了人们的欢迎。 主要功能 1.你有更多的时间从事自己的爱好，可以帮助你做家务，如洗衣服，做饭，打扫卫生； 2.可以做像灭火或高空工作之类的危险工作； 3.在学校机器人可以帮助学生学习，在很多方面帮助老师。 存在问题 1.容易感染病毒，犯愚蠢的错误；有时会把家里搞得一团糟； 2.价格偏高，普通家庭消费不起。 你的建议 ……（至少两点） [要求] 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并进行适当发挥； 3.词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 [参考词汇]  家用机器人 home robots With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.（23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末） 生命，对于每个人来说只有一次，我们该如何保护自己的人身安全呢？Teens正在举办以“Protect Ourselves,Cherish (珍爱) Our Lives”为题的征文活动，请你从提供的六个类别里选择三个，谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享你的体会。 Contents (内容) Categories (类别) school safety food safety traffic safety Internet safety life safety electricity safety Solutions (措施) ......(请按你自选的三类内容分别写两点) Understanding (体会) cherish our lives;......(请写1-2点) 提示词汇： electricity safety用电安全 cherish 珍爱 vt. 注意： 词数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯； 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。 Protect Ourselves,Cherish Our Lives Safety is very important. 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6.（23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期末） 寒假即将来临，请以“How to have a meaningful winter holiday”为题写一篇演讲稿，给你的同学们讲一讲应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假。 要点如下： 学习 （1）仔细计划好每一天； （2）……（至少一点）； 阅读 （1）多看书，因为……（至少一点）； （2）推荐一本书； 听音乐 （1）自小就对音乐感兴趣，因为……（至少一点）； （2）计划……（至少一点）； 看电影 （1）推荐一部值得看的电影； （2）……是你最喜欢的演员之一，因为……（至少一点）。 注意事项： （1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 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三年的初中生活让你收获满满。假如你校英语报邀请你写一篇短文，谈谈你初中三年学习生活的感受，并给学弟学妹们提一些如何适应初中生活的建议。请你结合自己的学习（或生活）经历，根据以下提示和要求，用英语完成一篇短文。 Have a Meaningful School Life 你三年的学习生活感受。 你的收获： 学习上； 课外生活。 你的建议： 1.保持身心健康； 2.（补充 1—2 点） 要求： (1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3) 词数：100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 How time flies! My three years of middle school life is coming to an end. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams. 8.（23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期末） 义务教育阶段“双减政策”实施后，周末培训机构不再提供服务，校内课后服务全面覆盖。为更好地帮学生自主安排课余时间，校网站张贴了一份问卷。假如你是张宁，请根据问卷内容，用英语给校长回一封电子邮件。 要求：1. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。 2. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear headmaster, Thanks for offering us such meaningful chances. I am glad to tell you something about my after-school activities. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Zhang Ning 9.（22-23九年级上·江苏南通·期末） 最近，你校八年级将举行“十四岁青春仪式”活动，你将代表九年级同学发言，作为学长，你一定有许多话要对他们说。请根据以下要点提示及要求，用英语写一篇短文。 学习方面 生活方面 特别提醒 1. 独立思考…… 2. 保持好奇心…… 1. 积极锻炼身体…… 2. 健康饮食…… 1. 切忌迷恋手机…… 2. 远离电脑游戏…… 3. ……(至少一点) 要求： 1. 短文必须包括所有要点，并作适当发挥，不要逐词翻译，意思连贯通顺。 2. 词数90左右。短文的首尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear friends, It is my great honor to make a speech for you. As an old student in our school, I would like to talk about how to be a good teenager. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 10.（23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末） English for Teens正在举行以“My dream job”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇文章参赛。 内容包括： 1. What is your dream job and who has influenced your choice? 2. What qualities for the job do you have? 3. How can you achieve your dream? 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数100左右。 My dream job 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11.（23-24九年级上·江苏徐州·期末） 为大力弘扬尊师重教的良好风尚，我市启动“彭城恩师”评选活动。为此，你校英语社团开展主题为“What should a good teacher be like?”的讨论，邀请了一些学生，请你根据下列要点，给你们的校报写一篇90词左右英语短文，简单阐述你们的观点。 要点： 1.师生和睦；2.教学有趣；3.知识渊博；4.严于育人；5.……（你个人观点）。 注意： 1.短文需包括所给提示内容，但不要逐字翻译； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Our English club in our school has discussed about what a good teacher should be like. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12.（22-23九年级上·江苏淮安·期末） 现如今线上学习已经成为了一个热门话题，但大家对这件事褒贬不一。假如你是盱眙县一名九年级的学生，你班最近开设了一节主题班会课，同学们就围绕“中学生线上学习的优缺点”这个话题展开了热烈讨论。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，写一篇英语短文。 优点 缺点 节省时间； 能学到更多知识； 上网课不需要太多费用； 使学习变得更加方便。 长时间看手机、电脑，对眼睛有害； 部分学生律己不严，会玩游戏； 当学生遇到学习困难时，不能及时获得同伴的帮助。 1.你的观点：……   2.理由……（不少于2点） 要求：1. 不要逐句翻译，可适当添加细节使文章内容完整连贯；       2. 词数在80-100之间，文章中的开头已给出，不计入总词数；       3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Our class have a discussion about whether it’s good for students to study online at home. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13.（22-23九年级上·江苏镇江·期末） 青春逢盛世，奋斗正当时！作为新时代的青少年，我们应该不断提升自己，现学校英语周刊正以To Be a Better Teenager in the New Era为话题开展征文活动，请你从自身角度写一篇短文，谈谈你的想法。 内容 目前表现 努力方向 品德 有礼貌，谦虚不炫耀； 更乐于助人，…… 态度 有自信，勇于迎接挑战； 严于律己，不轻言放弃； 学习 合理利用时间，认真学习； 热爱阅读，各学科全面发展； 健康 坚持锻炼，饮食合理； …… 要求： 1. 文章需包括以上表格所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于90词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 To Be a Better Teenager in the New Era As teenagers in the New Era, we should try our best to improve ourselves. 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If I manage to do these things step by step, I believe I can be better. 14.（22-23九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末） 假设你是李华，是沭阳某中学九年级的学生。你们班正在选举新的班长，你想推荐方玲。请根据以下所给要点，给班主任兼英语老师孙老师写一封推荐信。 推荐理由 喜欢阅读 书籍帮助她了解许多中国文化，为她开启一个新世界。 吃苦耐劳 从不介意花很多时间组织各项班级活动，将中国文化介绍给外国友人。 能歌善舞 有音乐天赋，歌声优美，能边演奏边创作音乐，擅长跳舞。 擅长绘画 善于用颜色调节情绪，由于不懈的努力，曾在绘画竞赛中获奖。 乐于助人 当过志愿者，曾帮慈善机构募集资金；（另举一例…）。 1. 包含所有给出的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 省略号部分需作适当发挥； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Sun, I’m writing to recommend Fang Ling as our new monitor. She has many strong qualities for this position. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ So I think Fang Ling is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 15.（22-23九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末） 临近期末，学校将在学习小组内开展年终组评活动，假如你是Sunshine小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇100 字左右英语短文，对你的组员Daniel进行评价。 Name Daniel（十五岁的九年级学生） Characteristics 聪明，勤奋，乐于助人 Hobbies 不仅喜欢看关于体育新闻的电视节目，而且喜欢看侦探小说 Study 因为在学习方面的努力，这学期他取得了很大的进步 Honor 他成功的帮助Detective Lu解决了一个绑架案。今年学校给他颁发了见义勇为奖（Award for Bravery）。 Problems 面临考试，他没有足够的睡眠。 Your suggestions （根据实际情况提出至少一点建议）… 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确、上下文连贯。 2.要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥，但不得出现真实班级、姓名等。 Daniel is a member of my team called Sunshine. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题09 书面表达解题要点及专项训练 应试策略 1.审题目：要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。 3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。 4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面： (1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 (2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 (4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking… (6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 注意事项 书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷老师工作量大，时间紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 1.（23-24九年级上·江苏镇江·期末） 假设你是李华，你们学校将开设两个社团。请根据提示，向同学们介绍一个你喜欢的社团，并谈谈你喜欢的理由和你对该社团的建议。 Teens’ Corner·on Friday afternoon, at the school hall ·share ideas and feelings ·ask for advice to solve teenage problems ·make friends with each other … Art Club·on Tuesday afternoon, in the art room ·talk about different art forms ·enjoy beautiful paintings ·attend concerts … 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括一个社团的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 对你所喜欢的社团说明理由，并对其提出建议； 3. 文章不少于90词，已给出部分不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear classmates, I am glad that our school will set up two new clubs. I’d like to introduce ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear classmates, I am glad that our school will set up two new clubs. I’d like to introduce the Art Club to you. The Art Club will meet every Tuesday afternoon in the art room. During the club meetings, we will discuss different art forms, enjoy beautiful paintings, and have the opportunity to attend concerts. I am particularly fond of the Art Club because it allows me to appreciate diverse artistic expressions and develop my creativity. My suggestion for the Art Club is to invite local artists to give workshops, which would provide us with professional insights and inspiration. I hope more students will join and enjoy the club activities. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为一般将来时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍学校新社团以及选择你喜欢的社团的理由，给社团提出好的建议等； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待和愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be fond of喜欢、喜爱 ②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ③provide sb. with sth.为某人提供某物 [高分句型] ①I am particularly fond of the Art Club because it allows me to appreciate diverse artistic expressions and develop my creativity.（原因状语从句） ②I hope more students will join and enjoy the club activities.（宾语从句） 2.（23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期末） 为进一步加强校园文化建设，促进学生全面发展，你校即将组织一系列课外社团活动，请你根据下图提示，用英语向全校同学介绍社团，并阐述开设这些社团的理由。 注意：1.表达中必须包含所给要点； 2.省略部分按要求自拟作答； 3.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 4.表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。 Students in our school are welcome to join our after-class clubs ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these clubs will be of great help and all of us can enjoy our school life. 【答案】例文 Students in our school are welcome to join our after-class clubs. These clubs can help us relax and make our life colourful. If you’re interested in music, you may join the Music Club. The Music Club is open for those who wish to relax and enjoy music. It helps you unwind and offers opportunities to perform. If you are a movie fan, you can join the Film Club. It broadens your knowledge and enhances your critical thinking through discussions on various movies. The Art Club develops creativity and provides a platform to express your ideas visually. Why not join the Safety Club to learn some safety tips and skills? It is necessary for us to know how to guard against any possible danger around us. I hope these clubs will be of great help and all of us can enjoy our school life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出主题； 第二步，具体介绍学校的社团都有哪些，并介绍开设这些社团的理由； 第三步，书写结语，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②offers opportunities提供机会 ③develops creativity发展创造力 ④guard against防止 [高分句型] ①If you’re interested in music, you may join the Music Club. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②The Music Club is open for those who wish to relax and enjoy music. (who引导的定语从句) 3.（23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末） 近日，学校英文报刊开设了有关作业问题的专栏，你所在班级围绕作业问题进行了讨论，同学们表达了自己的观点，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇简要的报告向专栏投稿，介绍班级讨论的结果，并表明自己的观点。 大部分同学 ●帮助复习所学知识 ●帮助学生学会独立解决问题 ●完成作业是学生的职责，应合理安排好时间 …… 少部分同学 ●作业量大，耗时多，影响休息或不能做喜欢做的事情 ●有些作业机械重复，不感兴趣 …… 你自己 …… 要求： 1. 内容必须包括以上所有要点，须按照要求适当发挥，补充细节。 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。 3. 不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。 What Do We Think of Our Homework? Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible Version: Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it. Most students have positive attitudes towards homework. They think homework can not only help them go over what they’ve learnt before but also help them deal with the problems alone. Also, they think it’s a student’s duty to finish the homework and they need to plan their time carefully. Of course, they all think homework can improve their study and help them get high marks in the exams. However, a few students don’t think so. First, they think it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like. Second, they have to do the same boring exercises many times. As a result, they have no interest in homework anymore. And sometimes they can’t keep a balance between homework and their hobbies. In my opinion, I think it’s important for us to do our homework on time. Homework can help us consolidate our knowledge. Make a good plan before doing homework so that we can have more time for our interests. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，点明主题； 第二步，分别给出大部分同学和少部分同学的观点； 第三步，给出个人观点。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ②deal with处理 ③go over复习 ④as a result结果 ⑤keep a balance between在某事与某事间保持平衡 ⑥on time准时 ⑦consolidate巩固 [高分句型] ①They think homework can not only help them go over what they’ve learnt before but also help them deal with the problems alone.（句型：宾语从句，that省略） ②they think it’s a student’s duty to finish the homework and they need to plan their time carefully.（句型：宾语从句，that省略） ③they all think homework can improve their study and help them get high marks in the exams.（句型：宾语从句，that省略） ④they think it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like.（句型：宾语从句，that省略） ⑤it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like（句型：结果状语从句，so...that引导） ⑥Make a good plan before doing homework so that we can have more time for our interests（句型：目的状语从句，so that引导） 4.（23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末） 随着现代科技的发展，机器人已经来到我们身边，而且给我们的生活带来了便利。请根据下表所述内容，介绍家用机器人的基本情况，并就如何更好地让机器人为我们服务提出建议。 简介 家用机器人使用范围广，受到了人们的欢迎。 主要功能 1.你有更多的时间从事自己的爱好，可以帮助你做家务，如洗衣服，做饭，打扫卫生； 2.可以做像灭火或高空工作之类的危险工作； 3.在学校机器人可以帮助学生学习，在很多方面帮助老师。 存在问题 1.容易感染病毒，犯愚蠢的错误；有时会把家里搞得一团糟； 2.价格偏高，普通家庭消费不起。 你的建议 ……（至少两点） [要求] 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并进行适当发挥； 3.词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 [参考词汇]  家用机器人 home robots With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us. Home robots are widely used and popular with people. Home robots have many functions. Firstly, they can be used to cook and clean rooms. You can have more time to take up your own hobby. Secondly, they can do dangerous jobs such as putting out fires or working at heights. Moreover, they can help students learn and help teachers in many ways. On the other hand, the technology used in home robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems. They are easy to get viruses, and make stupid mistakes. Even they will mess up the house. What’s more, the price is too high for common people to afford it. Personally, robots should be used to improve people’s lives. Meanwhile, more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be brought down as well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍家用机器人的基本情况，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出介绍随着科技的发展，机器人已经来到了我们的身边； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“主要功能和存在问题”两个方面重点介绍家用机器人的情况； 第三步，阐述自己的建议并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of 随着……的发展 ②be used to 被用来 ③take up your own hobby 从事自己的爱好 ④On the other hand 另一方面 [高分句型] ①Meanwhile, more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be brought down as well.(含情态动词的被动语态) 5.（23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末） 生命，对于每个人来说只有一次，我们该如何保护自己的人身安全呢？Teens正在举办以“Protect Ourselves,Cherish (珍爱) Our Lives”为题的征文活动，请你从提供的六个类别里选择三个，谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享你的体会。 Contents (内容) Categories (类别) school safety food safety traffic safety Internet safety life safety electricity safety Solutions (措施) ......(请按你自选的三类内容分别写两点) Understanding (体会) cherish our lives;......(请写1-2点) 提示词汇： electricity safety用电安全 cherish 珍爱 vt. 注意： 词数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯； 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。 Protect Ourselves,Cherish Our Lives Safety is very important. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Protect Ourselves,Cherish Our Lives Safety is very important. Life is only once for everybody. It’s important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions. First, school safety. We should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, traffic safety. there are more and more cars nowadays. It is necessary for us to follow the traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. Third, Internet safety. We should surf the Internet safely. Especially, don’t give out your personal information when surfing the Internet. Moreover, we shouldn’t meet online friends alone. Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据表格中所给内容选择三点介绍保护自身安全的措施，并分享你的体会，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，点明安全的重要性； 第二步，介绍如何保证学校安全、交通安全和网络安全； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①get on well with和某人相处融洽 ②fight with和某人争吵/打架 ③have trouble in doing sth做某事有困难 ④follow the traffic rules遵守交通规则 [高分句型] ①If we really have trouble in communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. (when引导的时间状语从句) 6.（23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期末） 寒假即将来临，请以“How to have a meaningful winter holiday”为题写一篇演讲稿，给你的同学们讲一讲应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假。 要点如下： 学习 （1）仔细计划好每一天； （2）……（至少一点）； 阅读 （1）多看书，因为……（至少一点）； （2）推荐一本书； 听音乐 （1）自小就对音乐感兴趣，因为……（至少一点）； （2）计划……（至少一点）； 看电影 （1）推荐一部值得看的电影； （2）……是你最喜欢的演员之一，因为……（至少一点）。 注意事项： （1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to have a meaningful winter holiday Dear classmates, The winter holiday is coming. To make it meaningful, I have some good ideas to share with you. We should plan our time carefully. It’s a good way to make a list of all the homework so that we can finish it in time. Reading can help us learn more about the world. Reading is fun. The Diary of a Young Girl is my favourite. Listening to different kinds of music is a good choice. I have been interested in music since I was a child, because it makes me relax. I’m going to learn to play the guitar. I will see a movie called Roman Holiday. Audrey Hepburn is one of my favorite actresses, because she won the best actress award for her role in the film. Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据表格内容介绍应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①make a list of列出……的清单 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③play the guitar弹吉他 [高分句型] ①It’s a good way to make a list of all the homework so that we can finish it in time. (so that引导的目的状语从句) ②I have been interested in music since I was a child, because it makes me relax. (since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句) 7.（23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末） 三年的初中生活让你收获满满。假如你校英语报邀请你写一篇短文，谈谈你初中三年学习生活的感受，并给学弟学妹们提一些如何适应初中生活的建议。请你结合自己的学习（或生活）经历，根据以下提示和要求，用英语完成一篇短文。 Have a Meaningful School Life 你三年的学习生活感受。 你的收获： 学习上； 课外生活。 你的建议： 1.保持身心健康； 2.（补充 1—2 点） 要求： (1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3) 词数：100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 How time flies! My three years of middle school life is coming to an end. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams. 【答案】例文： How time flies! My three years of middle school life is coming to an end. In the last three years, I have made great progress. Although I was not very good at several subjects at the beginning, I am now very good at them with the help of my teachers and classmates. I have fallen in love with playing basketball since I was in Grade Seven. I often play basketball with my classmates when I am free. So I’ve made a lot of friends. I’ve been a member of the basketball club for three years. Here I’d like to tell you something to make your school life more meaningful. First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so don’t forget to exercise every day and have a balanced diet. You should always look on the bright side when you’re in trouble. Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. Besides, you should finish the exercises on your own. 　　 I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时，现在完成时； ③提示：结合表格所列出的要点提示，完成短文，注意避免语法错误，不要遗漏写作要点，可适当增加细节，确保上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：总体介绍初中三年的感受—— 取得了很大进步； 第二步：介绍你在学习上和课外生活上的收获； 第三步：介绍你给学弟学妹的建议； 第四步：书写结语——希望大家都能实现梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①make great progress 取得很大进步 ②fall in love with... 爱上…… ③on one’s own 独自 [高分句型] ①Although I was not very good at several subjects at the beginning, I am now very good at them with the help of my teachers and classmates.  (although引导的让步状语从句) ②Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. (if引导的条件状语从句) 8.（23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期末） 义务教育阶段“双减政策”实施后，周末培训机构不再提供服务，校内课后服务全面覆盖。为更好地帮学生自主安排课余时间，校网站张贴了一份问卷。假如你是张宁，请根据问卷内容，用英语给校长回一封电子邮件。 要求：1. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。 2. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear headmaster, Thanks for offering us such meaningful chances. I am glad to tell you something about my after-school activities. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Zhang Ning 【答案】例文 Dear headmaster,     Thanks for offering us such meaningful chances. I am glad to tell you something about my after-school activities.     Because of taking part in different after-school activities, my school life is much more colourful and meaningful than before. In my spare time, I like listening to different types of music like pop music, jazz or classical music. While listening, I feel relaxed and calm, especially after a day’s of hard work. I also like painting if I have a lot of time. Every time I paint, I lose myself in the world of colours.      However, it will be more pleasant if our school can organize more activities, such as going hiking, holding art festivals, and reading and speech contest. With more different choices, we students will be more active and improve ourselves better.      I hope you think my advice is worth taking. Yours faithfully, Zhang Ning 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据问卷内容及要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，校内课后服务带自己带来的变化，自己最喜欢的课后活动及原因； 第三步，给出建议； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] in one’s spare time在某人的业余时间 lose oneself in迷失在 such as例如 [高分句型] While listening, I feel relaxed and calm, especially after a day’s of hard work.(while引导的时间状语从句) I also like painting if I have a lot of time.(if引导条件状语从句) 9.（22-23九年级上·江苏南通·期末） 最近，你校八年级将举行“十四岁青春仪式”活动，你将代表九年级同学发言，作为学长，你一定有许多话要对他们说。请根据以下要点提示及要求，用英语写一篇短文。 学习方面 生活方面 特别提醒 1. 独立思考…… 2. 保持好奇心…… 1. 积极锻炼身体…… 2. 健康饮食…… 1. 切忌迷恋手机…… 2. 远离电脑游戏…… 3. ……(至少一点) 要求： 1. 短文必须包括所有要点，并作适当发挥，不要逐词翻译，意思连贯通顺。 2. 词数90左右。短文的首尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear friends, It is my great honor to make a speech for you. As an old student in our school, I would like to talk about how to be a good teenager. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Dear friends, It is my great honor to make a speech for you. As an old student in our school, I would like to talk about how to be a good teenager. Now you are not children any more. It is important for you to have your own ideas for your study. It’s always necessary for you to come up with good ideas to solve your problems. Being curious/Curiosity can also encourage you to find new amazing things around you. There is no doubt that health is quite important for everyone, so much time should be spent on exercise every day no matter how busy you are. You should also eat healthily because healthy food like vegetables and fruit can offer you enough energy instead of overweight. Moreover/In addition, I hope none of you will spend too much time using smart phones and all of you will keep yourselves away from computer games. Please try to spare time to go out to enjoy the sunshine, the fresh air and the beauty of nature. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意在“特别提醒”中补充自己的观点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出文章主题（已给出）； 第二步，从学习和生活两个方面具体阐述如何成为一名优秀少年； 第三步，从其他方面阐述自己的观点，介绍需要注意的地方。 [亮点词汇] ①come up with想出 ②instead of而不是 ③keep oneself away from让某人自己远离…… ④spare time to do sth.留出时间做某事 [高分句型] ①It is important for you to have your own ideas for your study.（It is+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.句型） ②There is no doubt that health is quite important for everyone, so much time should be spent on exercise every day no matter how busy you are.（that引导的同位语从句，no matter how引导的让步状语从句） ③I hope none of you will spend too much time using smart phones and all of you will keep yourselves away from computer games.（省略that的宾语从句） 10.（23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末） English for Teens正在举行以“My dream job”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇文章参赛。 内容包括： 1. What is your dream job and who has influenced your choice? 2. What qualities for the job do you have? 3. How can you achieve your dream? 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数100左右。 My dream job ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream job I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you. My dream job is to be an English teacher. My English teacher is very kind and helpful. She helps me with my English, and influences me a lot. I want to be a person like her. English is becoming more and more useful and important and being an English teacher is exciting, too. If I am an English teacher, I can help my students with their English study. I like being with children because it makes me feel young. To make my dream come true, I will study English hard every day and speak English as often as possible. I will do more listening in the morning. I’m sure I’ll love my job and students. No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍梦想的工作，注意语言通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍我梦想的工作是什么； 第二步，介绍谁影响了我的选择及具备的条件； 第三步，介绍如何实现自己的梦想； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb with sth在某方面帮助某人 ②come true实现 ③share sth with sb和某人分享某物 [高分句型] ①If I am an English teacher, I can help my students with their English study. (if引导条件状语从句) ②I like being with children because it makes me feel young. (because引导原因状语从句) ③To make my dream come true, I will study English hard every day and speak English as often as possible. (动词不定式作目的状语) 11.（23-24九年级上·江苏徐州·期末） 为大力弘扬尊师重教的良好风尚，我市启动“彭城恩师”评选活动。为此，你校英语社团开展主题为“What should a good teacher be like?”的讨论，邀请了一些学生，请你根据下列要点，给你们的校报写一篇90词左右英语短文，简单阐述你们的观点。 要点： 1.师生和睦；2.教学有趣；3.知识渊博；4.严于育人；5.……（你个人观点）。 注意： 1.短文需包括所给提示内容，但不要逐字翻译； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Our English club in our school has discussed about what a good teacher should be like. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Our English club in our school has discussed about what a good teacher should be like. It is my pleasure to share our ideas with you. As for students, they think a good teacher should get along well with their students. And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest. Different from students, parents think it’s very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge. What’s more, teachers should be strict with their students. In my opinion, the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students, especially those who have difficulties in learning. Anyway, they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：主要是一般现在时； ③提示：阐述你校英语社团关于“好老师”的观点，注意行文逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出“介绍你校英语社团的观点”这个话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“师生和睦，教学有趣、知识渊博和严于育人等”方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达你个人观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be strict with sb对某人严格 ②get along with sb与某人相处 ③have difficulties in doing sth做某事有困难 [高分句型] ①It is my pleasure to share our ideas with you.（it作形式主语） ②And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest.（so that引导目的状语从句） ③the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students, especially those who have difficulties in learning.（动词不定式做表语和who引导定语从句） 12.（22-23九年级上·江苏淮安·期末） 现如今线上学习已经成为了一个热门话题，但大家对这件事褒贬不一。假如你是盱眙县一名九年级的学生，你班最近开设了一节主题班会课，同学们就围绕“中学生线上学习的优缺点”这个话题展开了热烈讨论。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，写一篇英语短文。 优点 缺点 节省时间； 能学到更多知识； 上网课不需要太多费用； 使学习变得更加方便。 长时间看手机、电脑，对眼睛有害； 部分学生律己不严，会玩游戏； 当学生遇到学习困难时，不能及时获得同伴的帮助。 1.你的观点：……   2.理由……（不少于2点） 要求：1. 不要逐句翻译，可适当添加细节使文章内容完整连贯；       2. 词数在80-100之间，文章中的开头已给出，不计入总词数；       3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Our class have a discussion about whether it’s good for students to study online at home. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Our class have a discussion about whether it’s good for students to study online at home. Different people have different opinions. Some students think it can save time and they can learn more knowledge. Online classes don’t cost much. It makes learning more convenient. However, its disadvantages are also quite clear. If you watch mobile phones and computers for a long time, it’s harmful to your eyes. Some of us also spend too much time on games and movies. Besides, when we have problems, we can’t communicate with our teachers or classmates as much as we do in the classroom. I suggest that in order to protect our eyes, we should have a good rest. I think if we can learn to better control ourselves, we will enjoy the good service from online study and make great progress in our study. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示“中学生线上学习的优缺点”的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。承接短文开头，提出两个观点； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细的介绍网上学习的优缺点； 第三步，书写结语。陈述自己的观点和理由。 【亮点词汇】①be harmful to对……有害 ②as much as和……一样多 ③make great progress取得巨大进步 【高分句型】①Besides, when we have problems, we can’t communicate with our teachers or classmates as much as we do in the classroom.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I suggest that in order to protect our eyes, we should have a good rest.（宾语从句） 13.（22-23九年级上·江苏镇江·期末） 青春逢盛世，奋斗正当时！作为新时代的青少年，我们应该不断提升自己，现学校英语周刊正以To Be a Better Teenager in the New Era为话题开展征文活动，请你从自身角度写一篇短文，谈谈你的想法。 内容 目前表现 努力方向 品德 有礼貌，谦虚不炫耀； 更乐于助人，…… 态度 有自信，勇于迎接挑战； 严于律己，不轻言放弃； 学习 合理利用时间，认真学习； 热爱阅读，各学科全面发展； 健康 坚持锻炼，饮食合理； …… 要求： 1. 文章需包括以上表格所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于90词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 To Be a Better Teenager in the New Era As teenagers in the New Era, we should try our best to improve ourselves. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If I manage to do these things step by step, I believe I can be better. 【答案】例文 To Be a Better Teenager in the New Era As teenagers in the New Era, we should try our best to improve ourselves. Now I am polite and always show my good manners to others. Also, I am modest and never show off. I think it is necessary for us to be willing to help others any time, so I will be more helpful. For example, if my classmates have difficulty with their study, I will try my best to give them a helping hand. What’s more, I decide to do more extra work for my class. I am confident and always brave enough to take on new challenges. I will be stricter with myself in the future. I will have a positive attitude towards life and never give up easily. We are supposed to be excellent learners. I am always making wise use of my own time. Just as the saying goes, “Books are the stepping stones to human progress.” I will keep my interest in reading because reading can open up my eyes and enlarge my knowledge. Moreover, I will continue studying hard, and I believe I can surely do well in all the subjects. In my opinion, health matters more than anything else. Now I keep exercising and have a healthy diet. To be healthier, I will do as the follows. Firstly, I will get up and go to bed early. I will sleep at least 8 hours a day. Secondly, I will eat more vegetables and fruit. I will also drink enough water. Last but not the least, I should be in a good mood, a good mood can help build a stronger body. If I manage to do these things step by step, I believe I can be better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从品德，态度，学习和健康方面说说现在的表现。 第二步，再叙述这四个方面以后努力的方向。 [亮点词汇] ①show off 炫耀 ②try my best to do 尽我最大的努力去做 ③last but not the least 最后但同样重要的是 [高分句型] ①For example, if my classmates have difficulty with their study, I will try my best to give them a helping hand.（if引导的条件状语从句） ② I will keep my interest in reading because reading can open up my eyes and enlarge my knowledge.（because引导的原因状语从句） 14.（22-23九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末） 假设你是李华，是沭阳某中学九年级的学生。你们班正在选举新的班长，你想推荐方玲。请根据以下所给要点，给班主任兼英语老师孙老师写一封推荐信。 推荐理由 喜欢阅读 书籍帮助她了解许多中国文化，为她开启一个新世界。 吃苦耐劳 从不介意花很多时间组织各项班级活动，将中国文化介绍给外国友人。 能歌善舞 有音乐天赋，歌声优美，能边演奏边创作音乐，擅长跳舞。 擅长绘画 善于用颜色调节情绪，由于不懈的努力，曾在绘画竞赛中获奖。 乐于助人 当过志愿者，曾帮慈善机构募集资金；（另举一例…）。 1. 包含所有给出的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 省略号部分需作适当发挥； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Sun, I’m writing to recommend Fang Ling as our new monitor. She has many strong qualities for this position. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ So I think Fang Ling is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr Sun, I’m writing to recommend Fang Ling as our new monitor. She has many strong qualities for this position. She loves reading. She thinks books help her learn more about Chinese culture. They also open up a whole new world for her. She is hard-working. She never minds spending much time on different activities for our class and often introduces Chinese culture to foreign friends. She has a gift for music. Also, she has a good voice. She can make music while playing. Dancing is also her talent. She is good at painting. She knows how to use colors to change moods. She made every effort to keep on trying and won the Best Art Award. She is also helpful. She often works as volunteers. Once she collected money for charity. At weekends, she often goes to the elderly house to visit the old people. So I think Fang Ling is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为推荐信； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先表达自己的写信目的——推荐方玲作为新班长； 第二步，具体介绍推荐她当班长的原因，例如她喜欢阅读、她吃苦耐劳、能够善歌善舞、擅长绘画、乐于助人，并且列举一些例子来证明她的这些品质； 第三步，书写结束语，表达自己认为方玲是适合班长的人选，期待老师能选她当班长。 [亮点词汇] ① hard-working 勤奋的 ② mind doing sth. 介意做某事 ③ introduce sth. to sb. 给某人介绍…… ④ have a gift for 对……有天赋 ⑤ be good at 擅长 ⑥ make every effort to do sth. 努力做某事 ⑦ agree with sb. 同意某人的观点 [高分句型] ① She knows how to use colors to change moods. （特殊疑问词+动词不定式） ② So I think Fang Ling is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me. （省略that的宾语从句） 15.（22-23九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末） 临近期末，学校将在学习小组内开展年终组评活动，假如你是Sunshine小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇100 字左右英语短文，对你的组员Daniel进行评价。 Name Daniel（十五岁的九年级学生） Characteristics 聪明，勤奋，乐于助人 Hobbies 不仅喜欢看关于体育新闻的电视节目，而且喜欢看侦探小说 Study 因为在学习方面的努力，这学期他取得了很大的进步 Honor 他成功的帮助Detective Lu解决了一个绑架案。今年学校给他颁发了见义勇为奖（Award for Bravery）。 Problems 面临考试，他没有足够的睡眠。 Your suggestions （根据实际情况提出至少一点建议）… 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确、上下文连贯。 2.要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥，但不得出现真实班级、姓名等。 Daniel is a member of my team called Sunshine. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Daniel is a member of my team called Sunshine. He is a 15-year-old student in Grade Nine. He is clever and hard-working. He is ready to help others too. He not only likes watching TV programs about sports news but also likes reading detective stories. Since this term, he has made great progress in his study because of his efforts. Besides, he succeeded in helping Detective Lu solve a kidnapping case. Our school presented him with Award for Bravery this year. However, Daniel is facing some problems. He doesn’t have enough sleep because of the exams. As for his problem, I’d like to offer him some suggestions. First, he should go over what he has learned before exams. Second, it’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文一篇评价他人的材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所有的信息点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍本文要评价的组员的名字； 第二步，对该组员的性格，爱好，学习，荣誉和问题进行详细的评价； 第三步，针对他的问题，提出自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to help others乐于助人 ②not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ③make great progress取得巨大进步 ④succeed in doing sth.成功做某事 ⑤so that以便 [高分句型] ①Since this term, he has made great progress in his study because of his efforts.（现在完成时） ②First, he should go over what he has learned before exams.（what引导宾语从句） ③Second, it’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.（so that引导目的状语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$