专题07 书面表达解题要点及专项训练-2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期期末复习（仁爱科普版）

专题07 书面表达解题要点及专项训练 应试策略 1.审题目：要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。 3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。 4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面： (1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 (2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 (4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking… (6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 注意事项 书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷老师工作量大，时间紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 1.（23-24八年级上·福建福州·期末） 学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请你根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，并结合自己的一项观点，以 “How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题，写一篇小短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护。 注意事项： 1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范； 3. 词数80词左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 How Can We Protect Ourselves? As teenagers, we must always keep safety in mind. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How Can We Protect Ourselves?     As teenagers, we must always keep safety in mind. Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone. In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要点，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“作为青少年，我们必须时刻牢记安全。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照小贴士的要点——不要独自游泳、谨慎交朋友、遇到危险求助警察、健康饮食等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语——每个人都需要学会如何保护自己，远离危险。 [亮点词汇] ①be in danger处于危险 ②in time及时 ③each other彼此 [高分句型] ①In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. (“How +不定式”作宾语） ②Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. (if引导的条件状语从句，so that引导的目的状语从句) 2.（23-24八年级上·福建福州·期末） 每个人都希望自己过着幸福快乐的生活，但是不同的人对幸福和快乐有着不同的看法。请以“How to Live a Happy Life”为题，写一篇英语短文。 要点提示： 1、保持健康； 2、结交朋友； 3、助人为乐； 4、有理想； 5、有爱好。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，要适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范整洁； 3. 文中不要出现真实校名和姓名； 4. 词数：80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to Live a Happy Life Everyone hopes to live happily. But different people have different opinions about happiness. How can we live a happy life? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you follow my advice, I’m sure you will have a happy life. 【答案】例文 How to Live a Happy Life Everyone hopes to live happily. But different people have different opinions about happiness. How can we live a happy life? Firstly, you need to eat a balanced diet and do exercise more than three times a week. It can help you keep healthy. Secondly, making friends can also help you live happily. You will feel happy when you share joy with them. Thirdly, you can help others often, especially when they’re in trouble. It must be nice and unforgettable. Fourthly, you should have a nice dream and work hard for it. Lastly, you’d better take up some hobbies to make your life more colorful and enjoyable. If you follow my advice, I’m sure you will have a happy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示要点逐点介绍如何过上幸福的生活，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，号召大家努力尝试并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①eat a balanced diet均衡饮食 ②share sth with sb和某人分享某物 ③in trouble陷入于麻烦中 ④take up some hobbies培养兴趣爱好 [高分句型] ①Secondly, making friends can also help you live happily.（动名词作主语） ②You will feel happy when you share joy with them.（when引导的时间状语从句） 3.（23-24八年级上·福建三明·期末） 2023年12月18日，甘肃省石山县发生了6.2级地震，再次提醒我们在校园里开展防震演练活动的重要性，假如你是李华，请你根据以下导图提示，给你校校刊英语专栏写一封关于在地震中如何保护自己的建议信。 注意事项： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写工整。 Dear boys and girls, Many people get hurt or die in the earthquake every year. So it’s very important to know some ways to protect yourselves in the earthquake. Here are some suggestions for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the suggestions above may help you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear boys and girls, Many people get hurt or die in the earthquake every year. So it’s very important to know some ways to protect yourselves in the earthquake. Here are some suggestions for you. When the earthquake happens if you are in the classroom, you shouldn’t run out of the classroom. Instead, you should stay under the table and protect your heads with the schoolbags or your arms. Stay away from windows or anything may fall on you. As soon as you can move, walk down the stairs to the playground in order. You should get away from teaching buildings and trees. You shouldn’t stand under the fallen power lines. When it is safe to move around, try to help others in need. In a word, the most important thing is to stay calm in an earthquake. I hope the suggestions above may help you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍在地震中如何保护自己，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出介绍地震中保护自己很重要； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“应该做和不应该做”两个方面重点介绍地震中如何保护自己； 第三步，书写结语，希望这些建议能够帮助你。 [亮点词汇] ①run out of the classroom 跑出教室 ②stay away from 远离 ③stay calm 保持冷静 [高分句型] ①So it’s very important to know some ways to protect yourselves in the earthquake.(it作形式主语) 4.（22-23八年级上·福建泉州·期末） 班级准备召开“健康爱好 快乐生活”主题班会，请你根据以下提示，以“My Hobbies”为题，写一篇英语短文在班会课上与大家交流。词数80左右。 1. What hobbies do you have? 2. What do they bring for you, comfort, friendship, knowledge or anything else? 3. … 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可以适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 My Hobbies _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My Hobbies Everyone has hobbies. Good hobbies bring us pleasure, comport, friendship and knowledge. Now let me tell you something about my hobbies. I have many hobbies, such as listening to music, reading books and playing basketball. Music makes me happy and relaxed. I often listen to music, especially when I am tired. But reading books is my favorite. I find nothing more interesting than it. I lose myself in books because there are wonderful things in them. The more I read, the more I learn. In my free time I am interested in playing basketball. I think it can not only build me up, but also help me make friends. The healthier hobbies we have, the happier we will be. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括两个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表达对爱好的认识，从而引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己的爱好有哪些以及这些爱好给你带来的好处； 第三步，书写总结：The healthier hobbies we have, the happier we will be. ［亮点词汇］ ① build sb. up 使某人身体强壮 ② lose oneself in 沉迷于 ［高分句型］ ① I think it can not only build me up, but also help me make friends. (宾语从句、not only…but also…连接并列句) ② The healthier hobbies we have, the happier we will be. (The+比较级……, the+比较级…….) 5.（22-23八年级上·福建漳州·期末） 为了响应“全民健身计划 (National Fitness Program) ”的号召，近日北京国际学校举办了一系列活动来提高全校师生进行体育锻炼的积极性。假如你是该校英语社的小记者，请你根据以下图示，介绍这一系列活动；同时谈谈你最喜欢的运动，并说明原因。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Sports and health are important to us. To carry out the National Fitness Program, our school holds many sports activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Sports and health are important to us. To carry out the National Fitness Program, our school holds many sports activities. Now let me introduce some of the activities to you. There is a sports meet every year in our school. We also have football matches between different grades. Students can learn to perform Kungfu by taking the Kungfu courses. What’s more, the running exercises in the early morning can keep us active during the day. Among these activities, the football match is my favorite because I like playing football very much. In my opinion, it can not only build me up but also help to make me relaxed. Besides, football is popular all over the world, so it’s a good way to make friends when we play football together. Let’s do exercise together and live a healthy life! 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中北京国际学校举办的一系列体育活动的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍北京国际学校举办的一系列体育活动”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“学校活动内容、最喜欢的活动、喜欢的原因等”几个方面重点介绍北京国际学校举办的一系列体育活动的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，号召大家一起健身。 [亮点词汇] ①carry out执行 ②play football踢足球 ③all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ①Besides, football is popular all over the world, so it’s a good way to make friends when we play football together.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Let’s do exercise together and live a healthy life!（let’s引导的祈使句） 6.（21-22八年级上·福建泉州·期末） 你们学校的英语俱乐部正在举行以“健康的爱好、快乐地生活”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据下面的提示，以My Hobby为题写一篇短文参加比赛。词数80左右。 过去 玩电脑游戏 耗时 有害健康 现在 做运动 强身健康 ……（请补充） 听音乐 ……（请补充） 注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 My Hobby Different people have different hobbies. Some hobbies are good for us while some are bad. It’s important for us to have good ones. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My Hobby Different people have different hobbies. Some hobbies are good for us while some are bad. It’s important for us to have good ones. In the past, I was interested in playing computer games. It took me lots of time and it was bad for my health. Now I prefer doing exercise. Basketball is my favorite. It helps build me up and now I am much stronger than before. And I can make new friends when playing basketball with others. I also enjoy listening to music. It makes me relax. Sometimes I go to a concert with my parents or friends. Good hobbies can help people a lot. I hope everyone has good hobbies and lives happily. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述自己过去的爱好以及爱好的不好之处； 第二步，描述自己现在的健康爱好以及特点； 第三步，最后书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① be interested in对……感兴趣 ② prefer doing sth更喜欢做 ③ listen to music听音乐 [高分句型] ① And I can make new friends when playing basketball with others.（状语从句的省略） ② I hope everyone has good hobbies and lives happily.（宾语从句） 7.（23-24八年级上·山东聊城·期末） 安全（safety）是头等大事，作为中学生，日常生活中要注意校园、交通以及防震等各方面的安全。请你用英语写一篇文章，简要介绍以上各方面的注意事项，词数不少于80，要点如下： 1. 交通安全：上学路上不要并排骑自行车；遇到红灯要停下；不能骑太快，更不要骑车时听音乐。 2. 校园安全：不要追逐打闹；万一严重受伤时，先保持不动，确保温暖舒适，然后再寻求帮助。 3. 地震时：先躲在桌子下面，不要跳楼；一旦停止震动，立刻离开楼转移到操场上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Safety is of the utmost importance. As middle school students, we should pay attention to safety in various aspects of our daily lives, such as on campus, in traffic, and during earthquakes. Firstly, when it comes to traffic safety, we should not ride bicycles side by side on the way to school. When we encounter a red light, we must stop. We should not ride too fast and never listen to music while riding. Secondly, for campus safety, we should avoid chasing and playing around. In case of serious injuries, we should stay still first to ensure warmth and comfort, and then seek help. Finally, in the event of an earthquake, we should hide under a desk at first and never jump off a building. Once the shaking stops, we should leave the building immediately and move to the playground. In short, safety is crucial. We should always keep these safety tips in mind and follow them strictly to ensure our own safety. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，旨在介绍中学生日常生活中应注意的安全事项； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，因为文章描述的是普遍适用的安全规则和注意事项； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括交通安全、校园安全和地震时的应对措施。考生需围绕这些要点展开，确保内容全面，同时可以适当添加细节以增强文章的实用性和可读性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头可以直接点题，强调安全对于中学生而言是头等大事； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。交通安全方面；校园安全方面；地震时应对方面。 第三步，书写结语。总结全文，再次强调安全对于中学生日常生活的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①of the utmost importance至关重要的 ②pay attention to注意 ③In case of 假如，如果发生 ④move to 移动到 [高分句型] ①Safety is of the utmost importance. (介词短语作表语) ②We should always keep these safety tips in mind and follow them strictly to ensure our own safety. (并列句，and连接两个并列的谓语结构) 8.（23-24八年级上·四川泸州·期末） 假设你是Li Ming，请写一封信给你的笔友 Phil，向他介绍你平时如何锻炼，保持健康。信的内容提示信息要点如下： 1. 一月一次爬山，每周末帮父母做家务劳动； 2. 擅长跑步，每天早上花半小时跑步； 3. 下周学校将举行运动会，你打算参加男子400米赛跑； 4. 最喜欢篮球，长大后想成为篮球运动员； 5. 建议：运动有益于健康，它会使人强壮，希望他今后多运动。 要求： 1. 80词左右；包括所有提示内容，可以适当发挥； 2. 不得出现自己和学校的实名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： Dear Phil, How is everything going? I’m Li Ming. I want to tell you something about how to be a healthy person. I like doing sports very much. I go mountain climbing once a month, and I help my parents do housework every weekend. I am good at running. I spend half an hour running every morning. There is going to be a school sports meet next week. I am going to take part in the boys’ 400-meter race. My classmates will go to cheer me on. My favorite sport is basketball, and I am going to be a basketball player when I grow up. Doing sports is good for our health and makes us strong. If you do more sports, you will be healthier. I hope you will exercise more in the future. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①体裁：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候好友的近况，表达关切之心； 第二步，向朋友介绍自己的锻炼方式，并向好友提出建议； 第三步，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①go mountain climbing爬山 ②be good at擅长 ③take part in参加 ④be good for对……有好处 [高分句型] ①I am going to be a basketball player when I grow up.（when引导时间状语从句） ②If you do more sports, you will be healthier.（if引导条件状语从句） 9.（23-24八年级上·四川乐山·期末） 安全对于每一个人都很重要，特别是学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。为此，请根据下列所给要点给校报英语专栏写一封信呼吁大家重视安全。 1. 遵守交通规则，不闯红灯； 2. 吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品； 3. 锻炼的时候要小心，不能私自下河游泳； 4. 外出戴好口罩，回家洗手。 注意： 1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺； 2. 包含所给要点，并可适当发挥； 3. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：obey遵守；traffic rules交通规则；mask口罩；take care小心。 Safety is very important to everyone. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One Possible Version: First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Third, take care while we are exercising. It’s dangerous to swim in the river alone, so don’t go swimming without permission. Besides, remember to wear a mask when we go out. We had better wash hands when we get home. In a word, life is all, and safety is the first. As students, please remember all the above. It’s really important to us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“重视安全问题”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“交通安全、食品安全、自身安全”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①junk food垃圾食品 ②without permission未经许可 ③in a word总之 [高分句型] ①First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②We had better wash hands when we get home.（when引导的时间状语从句） 10.（23-24八年级上·陕西西安·期末） “往者不可谏，来者犹可追”。我们无法改变过去，却可以用勤奋和智慧创造更美好的未来。在2024年，你有什么新年打算呢? 比如：取得更好的成绩、结交更多的朋友、培养新的爱好、让身体更健康等等。请你以 “My New Year’s Resolution” 为题, 参考以下思维导图,写一篇英语短文, 向校刊 Hear My Voice英文专栏投稿。 参考词汇：get good grades, make more friends, develop hobbies, healthy, exercise,… 要求：1. 短文必须包括所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于70。  (开头已给出，但不计入总词数。) My New Year’s Resolution It’s necessary to make resolutions for New Year. In the year of 2024, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My New Year’s Resolution It’s necessary to make resolutions for New Year. In the year of 2024, I have several plans. Firstly, I want to get good grades. I will study harder and make a good study plan. I will listen carefully in class and finish my homework on time. Secondly, I hope to make more friends. I will be more active and join in more social activities. Thirdly, I plan to develop some new hobbies, like painting or playing a musical instrument. It can make my life more interesting. Finally, I will focus on my health. I will exercise regularly, eat more fruits and vegetables, and get enough sleep. I believe that with my efforts, I can achieve these goals and have a wonderful year. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：为一般现在时态和一般将来时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的新年计划是什么； 第二步，详细阐述你的新年计划内容和实施办法，包括个人学习、师生关系、个人爱好以及健康等方面； 第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①get good grades取得好成绩 ②on time按时、准时 ③plan to do sth.计划做某事 ④focus on集中精力于……、致力于…… [高分句型] ①It’s necessary to make resolutions for New Year.（it is+形容词+to do句型） ②I believe that with my efforts, I can achieve these goals and have a wonderful year.（宾语从句） 11.（23-24八年级上·安徽·期末） 近来世界地震频发，提高全民防震自救意识刻不容缓。假如你是李华，你所在的方兴社区邀请你寒假期间参加社区举办的防震减灾知识宣讲活动。活动中你将作为一名志愿者，向社区居民普及一些地震知识。请根据下面的要点信息，为本次活动写一篇英语演讲稿。 内容包括： 1. 楼中遇震莫慌张，坚固桌子底下藏，切莫靠近玻璃窗； 2. 地震停止速转移，遇火湿布捂口鼻，千万不可搭电梯； 3. 户外避震较方便，避开路灯和电线，…… 参考词汇：社区 community 布 cloth 作文要求： 1. 要点齐全，可适当拓展。 2. 语句连贯，词数不少于80词。开头和结尾不计入词数。 Dear residents, Good morning! I truly feel honored (荣幸) to stand here and share with you some knowledge on how to keep safe when an earthquake happens. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文 Dear residents, Good morning! I truly feel honored (荣幸) to stand here and share with you some knowledge on how to keep safe when an earthquake happens. First, if you are indoors, do not panic. Hide under a study table and stay away from windows. Second, when the shaking stops, evacuate the building quickly. If there is a fire, cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth and never use the elevator. Third, if you are outdoors, it is easier to stay safe. Keep away from streetlights and power lines. Remember, staying calm and knowing what to do can save your life. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据提示具体讲述地震来临时应该怎么做； 第二步，提醒大家要保持冷静。 [亮点词汇] ① stay away from远离 ② stay safe保持安全 ③ stay calm保持冷静 [高分句型] ①First, if you are indoors, do not panic. （条件状语从句） ②Remember, staying calm and knowing what to do can save your life.（动名词短语作主语） 12.（23-24八年级上·安徽六安·期末） 中学生的行为习惯直接影响着他们的健康成长。请根据下表提示，准备一篇英语发言稿，介绍你个人的行为习惯。 好习惯 坏习惯 感受和打算 1．早睡早起； 2．坚持锻炼； 3．每天阅读； …… 1．看电视或玩游戏时间太长； 2．常吃垃圾食品； …… …… 要求： 1．短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并适发挥； 2．词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和班名。 Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to talk about my habits. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文 Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to talk about my habits. I have some good habits. I always go to bed early and get up early. I keep exercising every day, such as running and playing basketball. I also read books every day because I think reading is very useful. However, I have some bad habits, too. I often watch TV or play games for too long. I also like to eat junk food, which is not good for my health. I know these bad habits are not good for me, and I will try to change them. I will spend less time on TV and games, and eat more healthy food. I will also keep reading and exercising to make myself healthier and stronger. That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时与一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的好习惯和坏习惯； 第二步，介绍自己的感受和打算。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time on在……花费时间 ②healthy food健康食物 [高分句型] ①I also read books every day because I think reading is very useful.（原因状语从句） ②I also like to eat junk food, which is not good for my health.（定语从句） 13.（23-24八年级上·河南周口·期末） 假如你是李明，你们班下星期将举行班级安全会议，大家推荐你发言。请你结合图示信息，并以“Keep Us Safe in a Fire”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，为发言做准备。 写作要求： 1)文中须包含图中提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3)词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Keep Us Safe in a Fire Hello, everyone! It is important to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep us safe in a fire. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Keep Us Safe in a Fire Hello, everyone! It is important to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep us safe in a fire. First of all, when there is a fire, you should shout out. Shout as loudly as you can because people can hear you so that they can come to save you as soon as possible. What’s more, keep down close to the floor. There is less smoke down there, so it’s easier to breathe and see where you are going. Last but not least, call 119 as soon as possible. Tell the firefighters where you are and what is on fire. However, don’t use the lift. The lift may go wrong. It isn’t safe and may keep you inside in a fire. What’s more, don’t go back. It may hurt you. When you are in a fire, calm down and do as the above. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍在发生火灾时应该如何保证安全，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍在发生火灾时应该做什么以及不应该做什么； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①as soon as possible尽可能快地 ②last but not least最后但同样重要的是 ③on fire着火 [高分句型] ①First of all, when there is a fire, you should shout out. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Shout as loudly as you can because people can hear you so that they can come to save you as soon as possible. (because引导的原因状语从句，so that引导的目的状语从句) 14.（23-24八年级上·陕西渭南·期末） 时间过得真快，寒假就要开始了。为了使同学们度过一个文明健康且安全有意义的假期，你们班将举行一次主题班会来讨论这个话题，请你写一篇发言稿，说出自己的想法和建议。 要点提示如下： （1）注意食品安全，不要吃太多的垃圾食品； （2）注意交通安全，遵守交通规则，不要与朋友肩并肩地骑自行车； （3）制订学习计划，认真完成作业； （4）多读书，读好书，因为读书能使人聪明； （5）…… 参考词汇： 注意……pay attention to...    垃圾食品junk food         安全safety    交通规则traffic rules 要求： （1）词数：70词左右； （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends, The winter holiday is coming! How shall we spend the winter holiday? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope we will have a meaningful and safe holiday! 【答案】参考范文： Dear friends, The winter holiday is coming! How shall we spend the winter holiday? I think, first we should pay attention to food safety. We can’t eat too much junk food because it is bad for our health. Second, we should pay attention to traffic safety. We must follow the traffic rules when we go across the road. We mustn’t ride bikes side by side because it is very dangerous. Third, we should make study plans and finish our homework carefully. We also should read more books because reading not only makes us get more knowledge but also makes us clever. In my opinion, it is good to help our parents do some housework. I hope we will have a meaningful and safe holiday! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿； ② 时态：一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我们怎么过寒假”来引出重点发言内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“食品安全、交通安全、学习计划及课外阅读等”几个方面重点阐述如何度过一个文明健康且安全有意义的假期； 第三步，书写结语。祝愿大家度过一个有意义和安全的假期。 [亮点词汇] ① pay attention to... 注意…… ② is bad for 对……有害 ③ follow the traffic rules 遵守交通规则 ④ go across the road 过马路 ⑤ side by side 肩并肩 ⑥ make study plans 制定学习计划 ⑦ not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且…… ⑧ in my opinion 在我看来 [高分句型] ① We must follow the traffic rules when we go across the road.（when引导时间状语从句） ② We also should read more books because reading not only makes us get more knowledge but also makes us clever.（because引导原因状语从句，not only ... but also ... 表并列） ③ In my opinion, it is good to help our parents do some housework.（it作形式主语） 15.（23-24八年级上·湖南益阳·期末） 请你以“My ______ Habits”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你的爱好。 内容包括以下几点： 1．介绍你的爱好（例如：音乐、运动、阅读、绘画等）； 2．说明你什么时候通常会从事这项爱好； 3．你最喜欢这项爱好的哪个方面或者具体是哪一种类型（例如具体的体育活动，音乐类型，书籍类型等）； 4．你为什么喜欢这项爱好。 注意： 1．词数为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My ______ Habits I love ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Reading Habits I love reading. Every evening, I sit in my room and open a book. I read many kinds of stories. But the fantastic tales with dragons are the best. Why? They are fun and take me to another world. In these stories, I meet different people and see wonderful places. Books make me happy because I learn new things. I always read before I sleep. It is my favorite time of the day. I like reading because it helps me dream and learn. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据所给提示介绍自己的爱好； 第二步，介绍从事这项爱好的时间、方面和原因等； 第二步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①fantastic tales奇幻故事 ②dragon龙 ③wonderful绝妙的 ④favorite最喜欢的 [高分句型] I like reading because it helps me dream and learn.(because引导原因状语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题07 书面表达解题要点及专项训练 应试策略 1.审题目：要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。 3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。 4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面： (1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 (2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 (4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking… (6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 注意事项 书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷老师工作量大，时间紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 1.（23-24八年级上·福建福州·期末） 学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请你根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，并结合自己的一项观点，以 “How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题，写一篇小短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护。 注意事项： 1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范； 3. 词数80词左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 How Can We Protect Ourselves? As teenagers, we must always keep safety in mind. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（23-24八年级上·福建福州·期末） 每个人都希望自己过着幸福快乐的生活，但是不同的人对幸福和快乐有着不同的看法。请以“How to Live a Happy Life”为题，写一篇英语短文。 要点提示： 1、保持健康； 2、结交朋友； 3、助人为乐； 4、有理想； 5、有爱好。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，要适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范整洁； 3. 文中不要出现真实校名和姓名； 4. 词数：80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to Live a Happy Life Everyone hopes to live happily. But different people have different opinions about happiness. How can we live a happy life? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you follow my advice, I’m sure you will have a happy life. 3.（23-24八年级上·福建三明·期末） 2023年12月18日，甘肃省石山县发生了6.2级地震，再次提醒我们在校园里开展防震演练活动的重要性，假如你是李华，请你根据以下导图提示，给你校校刊英语专栏写一封关于在地震中如何保护自己的建议信。 注意事项： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写工整。 Dear boys and girls, Many people get hurt or die in the earthquake every year. So it’s very important to know some ways to protect yourselves in the earthquake. Here are some suggestions for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the suggestions above may help you. Yours, Li Hua 4.（22-23八年级上·福建泉州·期末） 班级准备召开“健康爱好 快乐生活”主题班会，请你根据以下提示，以“My Hobbies”为题，写一篇英语短文在班会课上与大家交流。词数80左右。 1. What hobbies do you have? 2. What do they bring for you, comfort, friendship, knowledge or anything else? 3. … 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可以适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 My Hobbies _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.（22-23八年级上·福建漳州·期末） 为了响应“全民健身计划 (National Fitness Program) ”的号召，近日北京国际学校举办了一系列活动来提高全校师生进行体育锻炼的积极性。假如你是该校英语社的小记者，请你根据以下图示，介绍这一系列活动；同时谈谈你最喜欢的运动，并说明原因。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Sports and health are important to us. To carry out the National Fitness Program, our school holds many sports activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.（21-22八年级上·福建泉州·期末） 你们学校的英语俱乐部正在举行以“健康的爱好、快乐地生活”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据下面的提示，以My Hobby为题写一篇短文参加比赛。词数80左右。 过去 玩电脑游戏 耗时 有害健康 现在 做运动 强身健康 ……（请补充） 听音乐 ……（请补充） 注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 My Hobby Different people have different hobbies. Some hobbies are good for us while some are bad. It’s important for us to have good ones. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.（23-24八年级上·山东聊城·期末） 安全（safety）是头等大事，作为中学生，日常生活中要注意校园、交通以及防震等各方面的安全。请你用英语写一篇文章，简要介绍以上各方面的注意事项，词数不少于80，要点如下： 1. 交通安全：上学路上不要并排骑自行车；遇到红灯要停下；不能骑太快，更不要骑车时听音乐。 2. 校园安全：不要追逐打闹；万一严重受伤时，先保持不动，确保温暖舒适，然后再寻求帮助。 3. 地震时：先躲在桌子下面，不要跳楼；一旦停止震动，立刻离开楼转移到操场上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 8.（23-24八年级上·四川泸州·期末） 假设你是Li Ming，请写一封信给你的笔友 Phil，向他介绍你平时如何锻炼，保持健康。信的内容提示信息要点如下： 1. 一月一次爬山，每周末帮父母做家务劳动； 2. 擅长跑步，每天早上花半小时跑步； 3. 下周学校将举行运动会，你打算参加男子400米赛跑； 4. 最喜欢篮球，长大后想成为篮球运动员； 5. 建议：运动有益于健康，它会使人强壮，希望他今后多运动。 要求： 1. 80词左右；包括所有提示内容，可以适当发挥； 2. 不得出现自己和学校的实名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： 9.（23-24八年级上·四川乐山·期末） 安全对于每一个人都很重要，特别是学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。为此，请根据下列所给要点给校报英语专栏写一封信呼吁大家重视安全。 1. 遵守交通规则，不闯红灯； 2. 吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品； 3. 锻炼的时候要小心，不能私自下河游泳； 4. 外出戴好口罩，回家洗手。 注意： 1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺； 2. 包含所给要点，并可适当发挥； 3. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：obey遵守；traffic rules交通规则；mask口罩；take care小心。 Safety is very important to everyone. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One Possible Version: 10.（23-24八年级上·陕西西安·期末） “往者不可谏，来者犹可追”。我们无法改变过去，却可以用勤奋和智慧创造更美好的未来。在2024年，你有什么新年打算呢? 比如：取得更好的成绩、结交更多的朋友、培养新的爱好、让身体更健康等等。请你以 “My New Year’s Resolution” 为题, 参考以下思维导图,写一篇英语短文, 向校刊 Hear My Voice英文专栏投稿。 参考词汇：get good grades, make more friends, develop hobbies, healthy, exercise,… 要求：1. 短文必须包括所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于70。  (开头已给出，但不计入总词数。) My New Year’s Resolution It’s necessary to make resolutions for New Year. In the year of 2024, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11.（23-24八年级上·安徽·期末） 近来世界地震频发，提高全民防震自救意识刻不容缓。假如你是李华，你所在的方兴社区邀请你寒假期间参加社区举办的防震减灾知识宣讲活动。活动中你将作为一名志愿者，向社区居民普及一些地震知识。请根据下面的要点信息，为本次活动写一篇英语演讲稿。 内容包括： 1. 楼中遇震莫慌张，坚固桌子底下藏，切莫靠近玻璃窗； 2. 地震停止速转移，遇火湿布捂口鼻，千万不可搭电梯； 3. 户外避震较方便，避开路灯和电线，…… 参考词汇：社区 community 布 cloth 作文要求： 1. 要点齐全，可适当拓展。 2. 语句连贯，词数不少于80词。开头和结尾不计入词数。 Dear residents, Good morning! I truly feel honored (荣幸) to stand here and share with you some knowledge on how to keep safe when an earthquake happens. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 12.（23-24八年级上·安徽六安·期末） 中学生的行为习惯直接影响着他们的健康成长。请根据下表提示，准备一篇英语发言稿，介绍你个人的行为习惯。 好习惯 坏习惯 感受和打算 1．早睡早起； 2．坚持锻炼； 3．每天阅读； …… 1．看电视或玩游戏时间太长； 2．常吃垃圾食品； …… …… 要求： 1．短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并适发挥； 2．词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和班名。 Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to talk about my habits. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 13.（23-24八年级上·河南周口·期末） 假如你是李明，你们班下星期将举行班级安全会议，大家推荐你发言。请你结合图示信息，并以“Keep Us Safe in a Fire”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，为发言做准备。 写作要求： 1)文中须包含图中提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3)词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Keep Us Safe in a Fire Hello, everyone! It is important to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep us safe in a fire. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 14.（23-24八年级上·陕西渭南·期末） 时间过得真快，寒假就要开始了。为了使同学们度过一个文明健康且安全有意义的假期，你们班将举行一次主题班会来讨论这个话题，请你写一篇发言稿，说出自己的想法和建议。 要点提示如下： （1）注意食品安全，不要吃太多的垃圾食品； （2）注意交通安全，遵守交通规则，不要与朋友肩并肩地骑自行车； （3）制订学习计划，认真完成作业； （4）多读书，读好书，因为读书能使人聪明； （5）…… 参考词汇： 注意……pay attention to...    垃圾食品junk food         安全safety    交通规则traffic rules 要求： （1）词数：70词左右； （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends, The winter holiday is coming! How shall we spend the winter holiday? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope we will have a meaningful and safe holiday! 15.（23-24八年级上·湖南益阳·期末） 请你以“My ______ Habits”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你的爱好。 内容包括以下几点： 1．介绍你的爱好（例如：音乐、运动、阅读、绘画等）； 2．说明你什么时候通常会从事这项爱好； 3．你最喜欢这项爱好的哪个方面或者具体是哪一种类型（例如具体的体育活动，音乐类型，书籍类型等）； 4．你为什么喜欢这项爱好。 注意： 1．词数为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My ______ Habits I love ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$