专题07 书面表达解题要点及专项训练-2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期期末复习（沪教版2024）

专题07 书面表达解题要点及专项训练 应试策略 1.审题目：要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。 3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。 4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面： (1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 (2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 (4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking… (6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 注意事项 书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷老师工作量大，时间紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 1.（23-24七年级上·广东广州·期末） 寒假即将到来，假如你是李明，你得知英国网友 Mike 对广州很感兴趣，写一封邮件，邀请他来广州。 注意： 1. 词数：60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mike, I am happy to know that you are interested in Guangzhou. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you soon. Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I am happy to know that you are interested in Guangzhou. Guangzhou is one of the largest cities in China, located in the southern part of the country, close to the Pearl River Delta. What’s more, the city enjoys a subtropical climate with mild winters and hot, humid summers. When you visit, you can enjoy the stunning view of the city from the top of the Guangzhou Tower and experience the unique culture and delicious cuisine. I am looking forward to showing you around and sharing the beauty of Guangzhou with you. Hope to see you soon. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，主要是写一封邀请英国网友来广州的邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：需注意时态的一致性，按照提示进行写作，可适当发挥；准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等, 进行清楚连贯地书面表达，并保证语句通顺，意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头； 第二步，介绍广州的概况，提出旅游建议； 第三步，承接短文结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①located in位于 ②Pearl River Delta珠江三角洲地区 ③subtropical climate亚热带气候 ④stunning view of……的壮丽景色 ⑤unique独特的 ⑥share sth with sb与某人分享某物 [高分句型] Guangzhou is one of the largest cities in China, located in the southern part of the country, close to the Pearl River Delta. （非限制性定语从句） 2.（23-24七年级上·广东广州·期末）下周，学校将举行收藏品展示活动，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文，报道你们的准备情况。 年级 展示的收藏品 展示的时间 期望 九年级 玩具模型（如：飞机、汽车等） 下周一下午 对制作玩具更感兴趣 八年级 运动用品（如：服装、球类等） 下周五早上 了解体育并热爱运动 七年级 （请你补充） （请你补充） （请你补充） 注意： 1. 词数60字左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about our collection show next week. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you will come and enjoy yourself. 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about our collection show next week. The ninth grade students have prepared toy models, such as airplanes, cars, etc. They will have a presentation next Monday afternoon. They hope that everyone is more interested in making toys. The eighth grade students have prepared some sports equipment, such as clothing, balls, etc. They will have an exhibition next Friday morning. They hope that everyone can learn more about sports and love sports. The seventh grade students have prepared art works such as oil painting and photography. They will hold an exhibition next Wednesday. They hope that everyone will be interested in art. Hope you will come and enjoy yourself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍各年级的收藏品及展示时间； 第二步，介绍各年级的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②learn about了解 ③be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①They hope that everyone is more interested in making toys.（that引导的宾语从句） 3.（22-23七年级上·广东广州·期末）假设你是Mary，华附最近在评选“华附年度人物”，你想推荐自己的同学李雷。请根据下面提示写一封推荐信。 爱好 （1）收集明信片，了解世界各地历史；（2）……（请你补充） 擅长学科 擅长英语和地理 社团 参加了飞机模型社，因为他对空军（airforce）很感兴趣 推荐理由 （1）总是帮助他人；（2）学业上……（请你补充） 要求： （1）80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （2）可适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear teachers, These days, the school is holding an election for “Person of the Year at HF” and I recommend Li Lei. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Mary 【答案】例文 Dear teachers, These days, the school is holding an election for “Person of the Year at HF” and I recommend Li Lei. Li Lei has a lot of hobbies. For example, he enjoys collecting postcards because he can learn a lot about the history of different places in the world. Besides, he is good at various sports, such as basketball, volleyball and swimming. At school, he joined the Model Plane Club because he is extremely interested in airforce. His dream is to work in Chinese Airforce in the future. I think Li Lei should be the “Person of the Year at HF” for the following reasons. First of all, he studies so hard that everyone in class admires him. He does very well in English and Geography. What’s more, he is kind and always ready to give others a hand. He can be a very good example for all the students. Sincerely, Mary 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍自己的同学，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍李雷的爱好、擅长学科、参加的社团等； 第三步，介绍推荐他的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②be ready to do sth.准备好做某事 [高分句型] ①For example, he enjoys collecting postcards because he can learn a lot about the history of different places in the world.(because引导的原因状语从句) ②First of all, he studies so hard that everyone in class admires him.(so...that引导的结果状语从句) 4．（22-23七年级上·广东广州·期末）学校社团活动丰富了学生的课余生活，假如你叫李华，请你写一封英文邮件， 向你的英国笔友Jack介绍你和同桌Ben参加的社团活动。 注意： （1）70—120词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数，请根据要点适当发挥）； （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Jack, My deskmate Ben and I joined some wonderful clubs in my school this term.        _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me about your school clubs? I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, My deskmate Ben and I joined some wonderful clubs in my school this term. Let me give an introduction to you. I joined the English club at the beginning of this term. In the club, we usually talk in English and learn to sing beautiful English songs. Ben joined Sports club to learn to play basketball. In addition, in Sports club, they also play all kinds of games together. By joining the club, I learned many new words and became more interested in learning English. And Ben thinks that regular exercise is very important. Joining the club enriched his extracurricular life and it also makes him happy. Can you tell me about your school clubs? I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意根据要点进行恰当的发挥、丰富文章的内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题； 第二步，介绍自己和同桌加入的俱乐部及活动； 第三步，谈谈收获或感想； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①at the beginning of 在……的开始 ②in addition 此外 ③all kinds of 各种各样的 [高分句型] By joining the club, I learned many new words and became more interested in learning English.（by doing sth. 通过做某事） 5．（20-21七年级上·广东广州·期末）一个国家最好看的风景就是在奋斗中的人们。假如你是李敏，将代表七年级向向日葵英文演讲社发表英文演讲，介绍你自己和身边同学们努力奋斗的日常生 活，可进行适当拓展。 注意： 1. 参考词汇：解决：solve；垃圾分类：trash sorting； 2. 词数：不少于70个(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Good morning, everyone. I am Li Min. It’s my great pleasure to share some stories with you. Nowadays, everyone is fighting for their better future. And here are some ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Thank you for you listening! 【答案】例文 Good morning, everyone. I am Li Min. It’s my pleasure to share some stories with you. Nowadays, everyone is fighting for their better future. And here are some students’ daily life. Frank is always ready to help others. He often solves problems with his classmates in class. Lily is a volunteer. She spends a lot of time protecting the environment. She teaches people around her house how to sort rubbish. Steve is good at all subjects. In order to get better grades, he also joins two clubs. I love sports. I think health is the most important thing. So I exercise for half an hour every day to keep healthy. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图表内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，表述清晰，不要遗漏自己的做法和感想的写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，引出主题； 第二步，分别介绍周边同学及自己的日常生活； 第三步，书写结语，感谢聆听。 [亮点词汇] ①be always ready to do sth总是准备做某事 ②in order to为了 ③keep healthy保持健康 [高分句型] ①She teaches people around her house how to sort rubbish.（疑问词+不定式） ②I think health is the most important thing.（宾语从句） 6．（22-23七年级上·广东广州·期末）假如你是李华，想向英国的朋友Peter介绍你的情况：收藏爱好和校园社团活动两方面。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一封电子邮件。 个人情况 收藏爱好 收藏邮票，从邮局购买，了解各种各样的文化 校园社团 社团活动 你的收获 对该社团的想法 注意:1. 适当补充你所参加的一个校园社团信息：日常活动，你的收获和想法。 2. 词数60字左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人任何信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Peter, I’m writing to introduce myself to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, I am writing to introduce myself to you. I enjoy collecting stamps in my free time. I usually buy stamps from the post office. Stamps help me learn about different kinds of cultures. I join the school English club. We can talk in English, learn to sing English songs and tell English stories. I learn a lot from these activities and I am better at English now. It’s really helpful and interesting to join the English club. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：这是一篇电子邮件，为记叙文； ② 时态：一般现在时； ③ 提示：主要内容包括“收藏爱好”和“校园社团”，其中“校园社团”的每个小点需要自己补充，包括“活动”、“收获”和“想法”。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描写收藏爱好； 第二步，描写加入英语俱乐部后的具体活动、收获和感想。 [亮点词汇] ① enjoy collecting stamps 喜欢收集邮票 ② help me learn about different kinds of cultures 帮助我了解不同的文化 ③ learn a lot from these activities 从这些活动中学到很多 ④ be better at English 更擅长英语 [高分句型] It’s really helpful and interesting to join the English club.（it的固定句型） 7．（22-23七年级上·广东广州·期末）广州某电台英文频道将开设Welcome to Guangzhou栏目，目前面向全市中学生征集“微广州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文，向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。 注意：词数80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Guangzhou is a wonderful city to visit! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Guangzhou is waiting for you! 【答案】例文： Guangzhou is a wonderful city to visit! It lies in the south of China. There are many beautiful places in Guangzhou. It is famous for its delicious food. You can taste different kinds of delicious food in Xiguan. You can buy what you like in Beijing Road. There are many places of interest to visit. The Canton Tower is one of them. It is located in the center of the city and it is one of the tallest towers in the world. From the top of the tower, you can get a bird’s eye view of the whole city in every direction. Anyone who comes to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Guangzhou is waiting for you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”从美食、购物、景点等方面介绍广州。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引言，导入正文； 第二步，从美食、购物、景点等方面介绍广州； 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ① be famous for 以……出名 ② the top of ……的顶部 ③ in the center of 在……中心 [高分句型] ① There are many places of interest to visit.（动词不定式作定语） ② Anyone who comes to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time.（who引导定语从句） 8．（23-24七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假如你是李华，你的外国好友Jack来信告诉你，他计划下个月到深圳龙华旅行，请根据下面的提示内容写封回信为他介绍龙华的游玩攻略，70词左右。 要点： 地理位置 龙华区位于深圳市的中心。深圳最美的地区之一。 购物 大浪商业中心 观光 观澜版画村：看传统建筑，了解客家文化和历史；阳台山：……（自行补充） 美食 民治大道夜市街：买不同小吃 要求： 1. 70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 提示词：龙华区 Longhua District；文化 culture；观澜版画村 Guanlan Printmaking Village；民治大道夜市街 Minzhi Avenue Night Market Street Dear Jack, I am so glad to know that you will come to Longhua District next month, and I cannot wait to tell you something about it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can enjoy your stay in Longhua! Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, I am so glad to know that you will come to Longhua District next month, and I cannot wait to tell you something about it. Longhua District is in the centre of Shenzhen, as one of the most beautiful areas in the city. If you like shopping, you can go to Dalang Shopping Centre. Also, you can visit Guanlan Printmaking Village for sightseeing. There you can see many traditional buildings and learn about Kejia culture and history. In addition, it is exciting to climb mountains and enjoy natural beauty in Yangtai Mountain. Lastly, you can buy different snacks and food in Minzhi Avenue Night Market Street. I hope you can enjoy your stay in Longhua! Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍龙华区的地理位置； 第二步，从购物、观光、美食等方面详细介绍游玩攻略。 [亮点词汇] ①one of……之一 ②learn about了解 ③in addition此外 [高分句型] ①If you like shopping, you can go to Dalang Shopping Centre.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②In addition, it is exciting to climb mountains and enjoy natural beauty in Yangtai Mountain.（不定式作主语） 9．（23-24七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假设你是学校环保社（Environmental Club）的社长李华，你的英国笔友Jim对你校的环保社非常感兴趣，请你给他回邮件，内容包括： 1. 介绍本学期环保社活动内容： ①上个月在学校图书馆看了关于保护环境的电影； ②上周举办了有关保护地球的海报设计比赛； ③自行补充一点。 2. 活动收获。 3. 希望了解 Jim在英国的校园社团活动。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇：a poster design competition海报设计比赛     activity活动 Dear Jim, I am glad to know that you are interested in our Environmental Club. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jim, I am glad to know that you are interested in our Environmental Club. I will tell you something about it. This term we have a lot of activities. Last month, we watched a movie about protecting the environment in the school library. It made us realize the importance of protecting the environment. Last week, a poster design competition related to protecting the Earth was held. Many students took part in it. We also went to the city park to pick up the rubbish there. From these activities, we know that everyone should play an active role in protecting the environment. What about your school club? Please tell me about it. I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍学校的环保社活动，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍本学期环保社活动； 第三步，介绍活动收获； 第四步，表示希望了解 Jim在英国的校园社团活动。 [亮点词汇] ①the importance of……的重要性 ②play an active role in在……中扮演积极的作用 [高分句型] ①Last week, a poster design competition related to protecting the Earth was held. (过去分词作定语) ②From these activities, we know that everyone should play an active role in protecting the environment. (that引导的宾语从句) 10．（23-24七年级上·广东深圳·期末）南山区正在举办“Discover Nanshan 外国人看南山”系列活动。在寒假来临之际，你作为鹏城的一名中学生，受邀担任深圳市南山区的旅游小助手。请依据以下要点提示，为南山的旅游宣传片写一段英语解说词，将南山介绍给外国游客，带领他们品味南山古城，畅游山海南山! 要求： 1. 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 要点： Nantou Ancient Town 1. Location: in the west of Nanshan 2. Activities: ① learn about traditional Chinese culture ② enjoy delicious food Shenzhen Talent Park 1. Location: in the centre of Nanshan 2. Activities: ① … ② … Welcome to Nanshan, Shenzhen! In this video, I’ll introduce Nanshan to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for watching. 【答案】范文： Welcome to Nanshan, Shenzhen! Let me introduce Nanshan to you. At first, I’ll take you to Nantou Ancient Town. It is in the west of Nanshan. If you walk inside, you will learn more about traditional Chinese culture and the history of Nanshan. You can also enjoy delicious food here. What a nice place! Now, we come to Shenzhen Talent Park. It lies in the centre of Nanshan. It’s good for you to have a rest and get close to the environment. People often have a picnic, take a walk or ride a bike here. If you want to enjoy beautiful sunset, you will love this park. If you come to Nanshan, you’ll have a good time here. Thank you for watching. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中“外国人看南山”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍南山”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“位置、活动”几个方面重点介绍南头古镇和深圳人才公园的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“欢迎大家来到南山”的邀请。 ［亮点词汇］ ①have a good time玩得高兴 ②be good for对……有好处 ③have a rest休息 ④get close to亲近 ［高分句型］ ①If you walk inside, you will learn more about traditional Chinese culture and the history of Nanshan. （if引导条件状语从句） ②What a nice place! （感叹句） 11．（23-24七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假如你是学生李华，你校的外教老师Mr. Green想要了解你们学校最受欢迎的社团，请你根据以下要点写一封邮件，向他介绍学校社团。 要点: 1. 最受欢迎的社团： ①收藏社：展示各种物品； ②科学社：制作火箭模型； ③……（至少补充一个社团）。 2. 你最喜爱的社团及原因。 要求: 1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇: 受欢迎的popular      展示display Dear Mr. Green, I am very happy to tell you something about the popular clubs in our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Mr. Green, I am very happy to tell you something about the popular clubs in our school. To begin with, the Collection Club wins the hearts of many students because it displays all kinds of things such as stamps and coins. It is a wonderful way to learn about our country and its culture. What is more, some students are big fans of the Science Club because they can try making model rockets by themselves. It is an amazing experience. Besides, the History Club enjoys great popularity. It is quite interesting to learn about the history of different countries. As for me, I like the Football Club best because I can not only build up my body but also make many new friends. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍写电子邮件的目的； 第二步，介绍3个最受欢迎的社团以及各自的特色； 第三步，阐述自己喜欢的社团以及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①to begin with首先 ②all kinds of各种各样 ③by oneself独自 [高分句型] ①What is more, some students are big fans of the Science Club because they can try making model rockets by themselves.（原因状语从句） ②As for me, I like the Football Club best because I can not only build up my body but also make many new friends.（not only...but also...） 12．（22-23七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假设Peter是一位交换生，现在在你们班学习。为了让更多的朋友认识他，你打算以“My special friend”为题写一篇英文短文向大家介绍他。请根据下面表格中的信息，完成这篇文章。 要求：60 词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 个人情况 来自美国纽约(New York)，14 岁 兴趣爱好 游泳，收集邮票 生活习惯(habit) 早睡早起，经常运动，节约用水 其余情况 喜欢深圳：一年四季天气很好；有很多旅游景点 不太擅长汉语，所以加入汉语社团学习汉语 参考词汇：交换生 exchange student    汉语社团the Chinese Club My special friend Peter is an exchange student. Now he studies in our class. Do you want to know more about him? Let me tell you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文                                                                                           My Special Friend     Peter is an exchange student. Now he studies in our class. Do you want to know more about him? Let me tell you.     Peter is from New York, USA. He is a 14-year-old boy. He always wears glasses. He likes to travel. He visited some cities in China last year. He likes Shenzhen best because the weather is nice and there are many places of interest. His life is very healthy because he often plays sports. He plays basketball twice a week. He goes swimming every weekend. He is interested in collecting stamps. He gets up early and goes to bed early. He always eats healthy food like fruits and vegetables. He never wastes water and tries his best to protect the earth. He is very good at English, but Chinese is not very good, so he joined the Chinese Club to learn Chinese now.     We are good friends. I like him very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章为第三人称，介绍一位特别的朋友，表格内容描述清楚，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出介绍的人物； 第二步，具体介绍他的兴趣爱好、生活习惯和一些其他的情况； 第三步，表达自己对他的喜欢。 [亮点词汇] ① places of interest名胜古迹 ② tries his best尽他最大的努力 ③ be interested in对……感兴趣 ④ gets up起床 ⑤ goes to bed睡觉 ⑥ like…best最喜欢 ⑦ be good at擅长 [高分句型] ①He likes Shenzhen best because the weather is nice and there are many places of interest.（原因状语从句+and并列句+there be句型） ②He is very good at English, but Chinese is not very good, so he joined the Chinese Club to learn Chinese now.（but并列句+so并列句+动词不定式） ③His life is very healthy because he often plays sports.（原因状语从句） 13．（22-23七年级上·广东深圳·期末）春节是中国传统节日，人们纷纷回家与家人团聚，或是和家人一起外出旅游。你是如何度过春节的呢？请根据以下提示写一篇短文分享你在春节中的一次旅游经历。 要点提示： 1. 简单介绍你的春节旅游目的地、交通方式和同行者； 2. 分享你的春节旅游活动（不少于三种活动）； 3. 谈谈你对这次旅游的感受。 要求： 1. 要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺 2. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 3. 不少于60词。 【参考词汇】 pay a visit to 拜访； Spring Festival 春节； light the fireworks 放烟花； lunar calendar 农历 A trip to________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 A trip to Hongkong Last year, I had an exciting Spring Festival. Because I went to Hongkong by plane with my family. First, we paid a visit to the Ocean Park. It was very relaxed for us to ate the sea food and play with the dolphins! Then, we went to Disneyland. It was very romantic because it lighted the very beautiful fireworks. We enjoyed ourselves there. If we have another chance to go to Hongkong, we will go there again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：本文要求以“A trip to ...”为题，介绍一次春节旅游，写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出春节旅游的话题； 第二步，详细介绍旅游活动； 第三步，总结感受。 [亮点词汇] ①enjoy oneself玩得开心 ②have another chance to do sth.再有一次机会做某事 [高分句型] ①It was very relaxed for us to ate the sea food and play with the dolphins!（不定式作主语） ②If we have another chance to go to Hong Kong, we will go again.（if引导的条件状语从句） 14．（22-23七年级上·广东深圳·期末）学校延时服务提供了丰富多彩的社团活动。上周你校举办了“社团展览会”，假设你是学校英文校报小记者李华，请你根据以下要点提示，完成一篇展览会的活动报道。 社团展览 社团名称 社团活动 火箭俱乐部 学习制作火箭并发射上天； 太阳能俱乐部 制作使用太阳能的机器； 现场遥控使用太阳能的玩具车； ……（补充一社团及其活动） 展览会意义 1. 了解不同的社团，丰富知识； 2.发现自己的兴趣。 学生感受 ……（补充一点学生感受） 要求： 1．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2．必须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4．条理清晰、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁。 参考词汇：activity（n.）活动；enrich （v.）使丰富；knowledge （n.）知识 Last week, our school held the Clubs’ Fair. Many students attended it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last week, our school held the Clubs’ Fair. Many students attended it. They learnt a lot about different clubs. The Rocket Club taught students how to build rockets. Then they launched the rockets into the sky. The Solar Power Club made wonderful machines. They only used solar power. A girl from the club used a remote control to drive a toy car all round the playground. The Photography Club showed a lot of photos of the students in the club. Thought this fair, students can learn about different clubs and enrich their knowledge. They also find their interest. They all felt excited and had a great time at the fair. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点出社团活动的时间及重要性； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍社团名称及社团活动； 第三步，书写结语。表达展览会的意义及学生的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①launched the rockets into the sky向天空发射火箭 ②a lot of许多 ③learn about了解到 ④had a great time玩得开心 [高分句型] The Rocket Club taught students how to build rockets.（“特殊疑问词+to do”结构） 15．（22-23七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假设你是Jerry，你的英国笔友Mike和他的家人将在寒假来中国旅游，请你写一封80词左右的电子邮件，向他介绍中国的一些景点，并推荐适合的活动。 写作要求： （1）涵盖以下要点，并适当发挥。 （2）语句通顺，行文流畅，书写工整。 （3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 季节 位置 活动 春天 中国东部 杭州西湖（the West Lake）边放风筝，和家人一起野餐 夏天 中国南部 深圳大梅沙（Dameisha）海滩边游泳 秋天 中国北部 北京天安门广场（the Tian’ anmen Square）骑单车 冬天 …… …… Dear Mike, Welcome to China! Let me introduce some places of interest and fun activities to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I can’t wait to see you in China! Yours, Jerry 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, Welcome to China! Let me introduce some places of interest and fun activities to you. It is the best season to visit eastern China in spring. You can fly a kite by the West Lake in Hangzhou and have a picnic with your family. You can go to the south of China in summer. You can swim at Dameisha Beach in Shenzhen there. Autumn is a good season to visit northern China. You can ride a bike in Tian’ anmen Square in Beijing. It would be very meaningful. In winter, you can go to Harbin to see the ice sculpture exhibition. I can’t wait to see you in China! Yours, Jerry 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主，写一封80词左右的电子邮件向英国笔友介绍中国不同季节的景点和推荐活动。。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头文章已给； 第二步，具体介绍在中国一年四季可以游玩的景点和推荐活动； 第三步，结尾文章已给。 [亮点词汇] ①have a picnic with和某人一起野餐 ②ride a bike骑自行车 ③the south of……的南部 [高分句型 ①It is the best season to visit eastern China in spring.（动词不定式作定语） ②In winter, you can go to Harbin to see the ice sculpture exhibition.（动词不定式作目的状语） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题07 书面表达解题要点及专项训练 应试策略 1.审题目：要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。 3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。 4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面： (1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 (2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 (4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking… (6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 注意事项 书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷老师工作量大，时间紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 1.（23-24七年级上·广东广州·期末） 寒假即将到来，假如你是李明，你得知英国网友 Mike 对广州很感兴趣，写一封邮件，邀请他来广州。 注意： 1. 词数：60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mike, I am happy to know that you are interested in Guangzhou. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you soon. Yours, Li Ming 2.（23-24七年级上·广东广州·期末）下周，学校将举行收藏品展示活动，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文，报道你们的准备情况。 年级 展示的收藏品 展示的时间 期望 九年级 玩具模型（如：飞机、汽车等） 下周一下午 对制作玩具更感兴趣 八年级 运动用品（如：服装、球类等） 下周五早上 了解体育并热爱运动 七年级 （请你补充） （请你补充） （请你补充） 注意： 1. 词数60字左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about our collection show next week. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you will come and enjoy yourself. 3.（22-23七年级上·广东广州·期末）假设你是Mary，华附最近在评选“华附年度人物”，你想推荐自己的同学李雷。请根据下面提示写一封推荐信。 爱好 （1）收集明信片，了解世界各地历史；（2）……（请你补充） 擅长学科 擅长英语和地理 社团 参加了飞机模型社，因为他对空军（airforce）很感兴趣 推荐理由 （1）总是帮助他人；（2）学业上……（请你补充） 要求： （1）80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （2）可适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear teachers, These days, the school is holding an election for “Person of the Year at HF” and I recommend Li Lei. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Mary 4．（22-23七年级上·广东广州·期末）学校社团活动丰富了学生的课余生活，假如你叫李华，请你写一封英文邮件， 向你的英国笔友Jack介绍你和同桌Ben参加的社团活动。 注意： （1）70—120词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数，请根据要点适当发挥）； （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Jack, My deskmate Ben and I joined some wonderful clubs in my school this term.        _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me about your school clubs? I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 5．（20-21七年级上·广东广州·期末）一个国家最好看的风景就是在奋斗中的人们。假如你是李敏，将代表七年级向向日葵英文演讲社发表英文演讲，介绍你自己和身边同学们努力奋斗的日常生 活，可进行适当拓展。 注意： 1. 参考词汇：解决：solve；垃圾分类：trash sorting； 2. 词数：不少于70个(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Good morning, everyone. I am Li Min. It’s my great pleasure to share some stories with you. Nowadays, everyone is fighting for their better future. And here are some ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Thank you for you listening! 6．（22-23七年级上·广东广州·期末）假如你是李华，想向英国的朋友Peter介绍你的情况：收藏爱好和校园社团活动两方面。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一封电子邮件。 个人情况 收藏爱好 收藏邮票，从邮局购买，了解各种各样的文化 校园社团 社团活动 你的收获 对该社团的想法 注意:1. 适当补充你所参加的一个校园社团信息：日常活动，你的收获和想法。 2. 词数60字左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人任何信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Peter, I’m writing to introduce myself to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 7．（22-23七年级上·广东广州·期末）广州某电台英文频道将开设Welcome to Guangzhou栏目，目前面向全市中学生征集“微广州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文，向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。 注意：词数80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Guangzhou is a wonderful city to visit! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Guangzhou is waiting for you! 8．（23-24七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假如你是李华，你的外国好友Jack来信告诉你，他计划下个月到深圳龙华旅行，请根据下面的提示内容写封回信为他介绍龙华的游玩攻略，70词左右。 要点： 地理位置 龙华区位于深圳市的中心。深圳最美的地区之一。 购物 大浪商业中心 观光 观澜版画村：看传统建筑，了解客家文化和历史；阳台山：……（自行补充） 美食 民治大道夜市街：买不同小吃 要求： 1. 70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 提示词：龙华区 Longhua District；文化 culture；观澜版画村 Guanlan Printmaking Village；民治大道夜市街 Minzhi Avenue Night Market Street Dear Jack, I am so glad to know that you will come to Longhua District next month, and I cannot wait to tell you something about it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can enjoy your stay in Longhua! Li Hua 9．（23-24七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假设你是学校环保社（Environmental Club）的社长李华，你的英国笔友Jim对你校的环保社非常感兴趣，请你给他回邮件，内容包括： 1. 介绍本学期环保社活动内容： ①上个月在学校图书馆看了关于保护环境的电影； ②上周举办了有关保护地球的海报设计比赛； ③自行补充一点。 2. 活动收获。 3. 希望了解 Jim在英国的校园社团活动。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇：a poster design competition海报设计比赛     activity活动 Dear Jim, I am glad to know that you are interested in our Environmental Club. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 10．（23-24七年级上·广东深圳·期末）南山区正在举办“Discover Nanshan 外国人看南山”系列活动。在寒假来临之际，你作为鹏城的一名中学生，受邀担任深圳市南山区的旅游小助手。请依据以下要点提示，为南山的旅游宣传片写一段英语解说词，将南山介绍给外国游客，带领他们品味南山古城，畅游山海南山! 要求： 1. 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 要点： Nantou Ancient Town 1. Location: in the west of Nanshan 2. Activities: ① learn about traditional Chinese culture ② enjoy delicious food Shenzhen Talent Park 1. Location: in the centre of Nanshan 2. Activities: ① … ② … Welcome to Nanshan, Shenzhen! In this video, I’ll introduce Nanshan to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for watching. 11．（23-24七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假如你是学生李华，你校的外教老师Mr. Green想要了解你们学校最受欢迎的社团，请你根据以下要点写一封邮件，向他介绍学校社团。 要点: 1. 最受欢迎的社团： ①收藏社：展示各种物品； ②科学社：制作火箭模型； ③……（至少补充一个社团）。 2. 你最喜爱的社团及原因。 要求: 1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇: 受欢迎的popular      展示display Dear Mr. Green, I am very happy to tell you something about the popular clubs in our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 12．（22-23七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假设Peter是一位交换生，现在在你们班学习。为了让更多的朋友认识他，你打算以“My special friend”为题写一篇英文短文向大家介绍他。请根据下面表格中的信息，完成这篇文章。 要求：60 词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 个人情况 来自美国纽约(New York)，14 岁 兴趣爱好 游泳，收集邮票 生活习惯(habit) 早睡早起，经常运动，节约用水 其余情况 喜欢深圳：一年四季天气很好；有很多旅游景点 不太擅长汉语，所以加入汉语社团学习汉语 参考词汇：交换生 exchange student    汉语社团the Chinese Club My special friend Peter is an exchange student. Now he studies in our class. Do you want to know more about him? Let me tell you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（22-23七年级上·广东深圳·期末）春节是中国传统节日，人们纷纷回家与家人团聚，或是和家人一起外出旅游。你是如何度过春节的呢？请根据以下提示写一篇短文分享你在春节中的一次旅游经历。 要点提示： 1. 简单介绍你的春节旅游目的地、交通方式和同行者； 2. 分享你的春节旅游活动（不少于三种活动）； 3. 谈谈你对这次旅游的感受。 要求： 1. 要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺 2. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 3. 不少于60词。 【参考词汇】 pay a visit to 拜访； Spring Festival 春节； light the fireworks 放烟花； lunar calendar 农历 A trip to________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 14．（22-23七年级上·广东深圳·期末）学校延时服务提供了丰富多彩的社团活动。上周你校举办了“社团展览会”，假设你是学校英文校报小记者李华，请你根据以下要点提示，完成一篇展览会的活动报道。 社团展览 社团名称 社团活动 火箭俱乐部 学习制作火箭并发射上天； 太阳能俱乐部 制作使用太阳能的机器； 现场遥控使用太阳能的玩具车； ……（补充一社团及其活动） 展览会意义 1. 了解不同的社团，丰富知识； 2.发现自己的兴趣。 学生感受 ……（补充一点学生感受） 要求： 1．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2．必须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4．条理清晰、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁。 参考词汇：activity（n.）活动；enrich （v.）使丰富；knowledge （n.）知识 Last week, our school held the Clubs’ Fair. Many students attended it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（22-23七年级上·广东深圳·期末）假设你是Jerry，你的英国笔友Mike和他的家人将在寒假来中国旅游，请你写一封80词左右的电子邮件，向他介绍中国的一些景点，并推荐适合的活动。 写作要求： （1）涵盖以下要点，并适当发挥。 （2）语句通顺，行文流畅，书写工整。 （3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 季节 位置 活动 春天 中国东部 杭州西湖（the West Lake）边放风筝，和家人一起野餐 夏天 中国南部 深圳大梅沙（Dameisha）海滩边游泳 秋天 中国北部 北京天安门广场（the Tian’ anmen Square）骑单车 冬天 …… …… Dear Mike, Welcome to China! Let me introduce some places of interest and fun activities to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I can’t wait to see you in China! 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