话题3 健康与安全-【一战成名新中考】2025安徽中考英语·一轮复习·话题写作突破

话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 　 　 　 话题 3　 健康与安全(2024,2019) 写作素材链接:见本书第三部分 P55 考情概览 该话题安徽 10 年 2 考,具体如下: ①2024 年要求介绍灭火器的使用方法; ②2019 年要求为朋友提出保护视力的意见。 该话题通常包含以下写作要点: ①健康 / 安全的重要性; ②健康 / 安全问题; ③如何保持健康(2019); ④如何保证安全(2024)。 典例剖析 角度 1　 健康 　 审好题,定方向 (2019 安徽)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mike 最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写 封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。 要点如下: 1. 审主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 审体裁:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 审人称:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 4. 审时态:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 1. 经常做户外活动; 2. 很少用电子产品; 3. 坚持做眼保健操; 4. …… 　 5. 审要点:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 注意:1. 词数 80~ 100; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Mike. I􀆳m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. 　 　 　 　 Yours, Li Hua 81 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 　 搭框架,写句子 　 构篇章,润词句 组句成篇 润色美文 Dear Mike, I􀆳m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I􀆳d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I seldom use my mobile phone. ①The mobile phone gives off the light. The light is harmful to my eyes.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 ②Besides, doing eye exercises is very important to relax my tired eyes.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 Lastly, I usually examine my eyes every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy. I hope you􀆳ll find my ways helpful. Yours, Li Hua ①用定语从句升格画线句子 　 　 　 ②用 play an important role in doing sth. 升格画线句子 　 　 　 小贴士:润色完成后,请不要忘记将文章誊写一遍哦! 91 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 角度 2　 安全 　 审好题,定方向 (2024 安徽)假设你是李辉,上周你在学校举行的 “ 消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使 用方法。 请结合下图信息,写一篇英语短文,给校英文报投稿。 1. 审主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 审体裁:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 审人称:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 4. 审时态:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主;描述过去的事情用　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 要点: 1. 活动目的; 2. 灭火器的使用方法; 3. 你的体会。 　 5. 审要点:从 　 　 　 　 　 　 、 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 三个方面写作 　 注意: 1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 词数 80~ 100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数) Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. 　 　 　 　 　 搭框架,写句子 02 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 　 构篇章,润词句 组句成篇 润色美文 　 　 Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. ①Among the activities, 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 the way of using a fire extinguisher interested me most.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. ②We should point the tube 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 at the root of the fire, and then we should press down on the handle until we 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 put out the fire.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt. From the activities I􀆳ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety. ①用 “ 疑问词 + to do” 结构升格画线 句子。 　 　 　 ②用 as soon as 和 be expected to do sth. 升格画线句子 　 　 　 小贴士:润色完成后,请不要忘记将文章誊写一遍哦! 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 生命只有一次,安全无小事。 假设你是李辉,请你根据以下要点提示,以“ How to keep safe”为 题,用英语写一篇短文。 要点提示: 1. 校园安全:和同学友好相处,遇到麻烦向老师求助。 2. 食品安全:吃健康食物,拒绝垃圾食品等。 3. 至少补充一条其他安全注意事项。 要求:1. 词数 80~ 100(开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数); 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名; 3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯。 How to keep safe Life is only once, so safety is important for us teenagers. 　 　 　 　 In a word, safety must come first! 一审 1. 主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 文体:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 人称:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 4. 时态:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 5. 要点:从　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 三个方面写作 12 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 二搭 三练写 How to keep safe Life is only once, so safety is important for us teenagers. 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 In a word, safety must come first! 第 2 篇(2024 内蒙古自治区改编) 假如你是李辉,你的英国笔友 Mike 饱受肥胖的困扰,他向你求助,询问如何保持健康。 请你根 据以下要点提示,给他回复一封邮件。 要点: 1. 多吃水果和蔬菜; 2. 坚持每天锻炼,但是要适量; 3. 保证充足的睡眠,绝不熬夜; 4. …… 注意: 1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 词数 80~ 100(邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数)。 Dear Mike, I􀆳m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I􀆳d like to share some good ways to stay healthy with you. 22 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 　 　 　 　 I hope these tips will be useful to you. Yours, Li Hui 一审 1. 主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 文体:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 人称:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 4. 时态:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 5. 要点:从　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 四个方面写作 二搭 三练写 Dear Mike, I􀆳m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I􀆳d like to share some good ways to stay healthy with you. 　 　 　 　 　 　 I hope these tips will be useful to you. Yours, Li Hui 32 参考答案·安徽英语 话 题 写 作 突 破 话题写作突破 话题 1　 人物经历 典例剖析 审好题, 定方向 1. 制作海报的经历　 2. 记叙文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般过 去时　 5. 制作海报的时间、地点、人物;制作海报的目的 及过程;制作海报的感受 构篇章, 润词句 ①The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. ②Then, I found some old photos which showed the past and present of my hometown online. 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 一审 1. 解决自己遇到的问题　 2. 第一人称　 3. 记叙文　 4. 一 般过去时;一般现在时　 5. 遇到的问题是什么;如何解决 问题;从中学到的东西 三练写 I once solved a problem My middle school life is coming to an end. My biggest problem was that I was weak and often fell ill during the three years. I made a plan to make myself healthier. First, I walked to school instead of taking a bus every day. Secondly, I gave up my favourite junk food and got into the habit of eating more vegetables and fruit. Besides, I joined the school sports club and took part in all kinds of activities. Day by day, I felt stronger and healthier. I didn􀆳t need a thick coat in winter anymore. Since I have known that nothing is more important than health, I will keep healthy from now on. 第 2 篇 一审 1. 说明自己得到的帮助　 2. 第一人称　 3. 记叙文 4. 一般过去时　 5. 提供帮助的人;他 / 她所做的事情;这 次经历带给你的影响 三练写 An Act of Kindness There have been many people who have helped me in my life. I remember a young girl who helped me. I felt so upset when I failed the math exam. As I was about to cross the street to go back home, I dropped all my exam papers and books at the crossing. I hurried to pick them up, but some papers were blown away in the wind. At that moment, a young girl gave me a hand. After I stood up with all the papers and books under my arm, I wanted to thank her, but she just smiled at me and left quickly. I suddenly felt the warmth of the world. That girl􀆳s small act of kindness changed me and encouraged me to help others in need. I will remember that forever. 话题 2　 人物介绍 典例剖析 审好题, 定方向 1. 向英文报纸自荐　 2. 应用文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般现 在时　 5. 自荐的目的;自荐的原因;自己的意愿 构篇章, 润词句 ①Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English. ②It is easy for me to express myself in English. ③I􀆳m sure to be the right person who / that you are looking for. 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 一审 1. 告诉 Linda 自己的变化　 2. 应用文　 3. 第一人称 4. 一般过去时;一般现在时　 5. 自己过去和现在的不同 之处 三练写 Dear Linda, I􀆳m very glad to tell you something about myself. I used to be too shy to speak to others in public. As a result, I always made few friends. I feared facing others by myself. At that time, I usually liked country music, which made me feel quiet and peaceful. I also used to like collecting stamps. This always helped me get rich knowledge. However, I am outgoing now, so I make many friends. What􀆳s more, I like classical music, which makes me fall in love with books. So I love reading very much now. In books, I can learn a lot and know more about our world. That􀆳s all about my character and hobbies. With my best wishes! Yours, Li Hui 第 2 篇 一审 1. 介绍自己最敬佩的人　 2. 应用文　 3. 第三人称 4. 一般现在时　 5. 人物基本情况;人物品格;人物影响 三练写 The person I admire most Dear teachers and fellow students, Everyone has a person they admire in their hearts. For me, I admire my mother most. She works as a doctor in a hospital. She is tall with short hair and big eyes. My mother is a role model for me. First, she is very responsible. She works so hard that she wins the praise of many patients. What􀆳s more, she always gives a helping hand to people in need. In addition, she not only celebrates my success but also offers encouragement when I feel down. My mother sets a good example for me in many ways. She teaches me how to care about other people and deal with difficulties in my life. Thank you for your attention! 话题 3　 健康与安全 典例剖析 角度 1　 健康 审好题, 定方向 1. 保护视力的做法　 2. 应用文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般现 在时　 5. 介绍自己保护视力的方法 构篇章, 润词句 ①The light which the mobile phone gives off is harmful to my eyes. ② Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. 角度 2　 安全 审好题, 定方向 1. 介绍灭火器的使用方法　 2. 记叙文　 3. 第一人称 4. 一般现在时;一般过去时　 5. 活动目的;灭火器的使用 方法;个人体会 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 92 参考答案·安徽英语 话 题 写 作 突 破 构篇章, 润词句 ①Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most. ②As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 一审 1. 如何保证安全　 2. 说明文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般现在 时　 5. 校园安全;食品安全;交通安全 三练写 How to keep safe Life is only once, so safety is important for us teenagers. But how can we stay safe? Here are some suggestions. First of all, it is necessary to get on well with our classmates at school. If we really have trouble communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. Besides, we􀆳d better buy and eat food carefully. Healthy food, such as vegetables and fruit, are our first choices. Eating food that has gone bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, what we should pay attention to is obeying the traffic rules when we go out. Don􀆳t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. In a word, safety must come first! 第 2 篇 一审 1. 告诉 Mike 如何保持健康　 2. 应用文(说明文) 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般现在时　 5. 饮食;运动;睡眠;心情 三练写 Dear Mike, I􀆳m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I􀆳d like to share some good ways to stay healthy with you. First, eat more fruit and vegetables. Say no to fast food, such as hamburgers and chips. Eating too much fast food may be harmful to your health. Second, take exercise every day. Find out your favorite sport and keep doing it. But remember not to do too much at one time. Third, get enough sleep. As a teenager, you should sleep for at least 8 hours every day. Don􀆳t stay up too late. Last but not least, try to do things that make you happy, like talking with your friends or enjoying a relaxing movie. I hope these tips will be useful to you. Yours, Li Hui 话题 4　 读书学习 典例剖析 审好题, 定方向 1. 向 Jim 介绍学习英语的方法　 2. 应用文(说明文) 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般现在时 　 5. 学习英语的重要性;学 习英语的方法 构篇章, 润词句 ①Also, we need to get good grades in English so that we can get into our dream high schools. ②Besides, asking for help is of great importance. 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 一审 1. 介绍读书的好处及自己的读书计划　 2. 说明文(应用文) 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般将来时　 5. 读书的好处;读书计划; 对同学们的号召 三练写 Dear friends, World Reading Day is coming. Everyone should form a habit of reading because reading can broaden our minds. As for me, when I feel stressed, I enjoy reading to relax myself. Here I will share my reading plan with you. First, I plan to read a book once a month. Then I will write a book review about the book I have read and share it with my club members. Besides, I will go to the city library to tell stories to the children at the weekends so that children can be encouraged to read from an early age. In a word, for our future, it is very important for us to read more and better books. Let􀆳s take action. 第 2 篇 一审 1. 为 Anna 提供选修汉语课的建议　 2. 说明文(应用文) 3. 第二人称　 4. 一般现在时　 5. 学汉语的内容;原因;学 习方法 三练写 Dear Anna, I􀆳m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It􀆳s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What􀆳s more, you should join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Keep practicing it every day, and it will bring you something new. I believe this course will be your favorite. I hope my advice can help you. Yours, Li Hui 话题 5　 传统文化 典例剖析 审好题, 定方向 1. 为 Mike 推荐《西游记》　 2. 应用文　 3. 第三人称 4. 一般过去时　 5. 说明推荐《西游记》的原因 构篇章, 润词句 ①In the book, the four main characters showed us what teamwork was. ②I think it is a good book which / that is worth reading. 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 一审 1. 介绍中国茶文化　 2. 说明文　 3. 第三人称　 4. 一般现 在时　 5. 茶的历史和品种;茶具;喝茶的好处 三练写 Chinese Tea Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. Chinese people have been growing and drinking tea for over 4,000 years. There are many kinds of tea in China, such as green tea, black tea, and oolong tea. Longjing tea is famous all over the world. People use teapots and teacups, which are mainly made of ceramics, to drink tea. Drinking tea has many benefits. It is said that green tea can prevent cancer and it can make us healthy. When you are tired, a cup of tea can help you relax. I hope you will enjoy Chinese tea and love China. 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 03