话题2 人物介绍-【一战成名新中考】2025安徽中考英语·一轮复习·话题写作突破

话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 　 　 　 话题 2　 人物介绍(2020,2018) 写作素材链接:见本书第三部分 P52 考情概览 该话题安徽 10 年 2 考,具体如下: ①2020 年要求向英语报纸“My Hometown”专栏写自荐信,应聘小记者; ②2018 年要求写一篇名为“Thank you, my teacher!”的短文参加征文活动。 该话题通常包含以下写作要点: ①基本信息;②外貌特征;③兴趣爱好;④性格品质;⑤职业;⑥经历与事迹;⑦影响、评价与感受。 典例剖析 　 审好题,定方向 (2020 安徽)假定你是李华。 某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文 给报社写封自荐信。 要点如下: 1. 审主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 审体裁:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 审人称:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 4. 审时态:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 1. 熟悉家乡; 2. 乐于交流; 3. 擅长英语。 　 　 5. 审要点:从 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 三个方面表明自己想要成为小记者 注意:1. 词数 80~ 100; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇: journalist n. 记者; column n. 专栏 Dear Sir / Madam, I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. 　 　 　 　 　 　 Yours, Li Hua 31 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 　 搭框架,写句子 　 构篇章,润词句 组句成篇 润色美文 Dear Sir / Madam, I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team. First, I am familiar with my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I􀆳m easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. ① Moreover, my English is good.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 ② I can express myself in 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 English easily.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 ③You are looking for a right person. I􀆳m sure to be the right person.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍I􀆳d be thankful if I get the chance. Yours, Li Hua ①用 have a good knowledge of 升格画线 句子 　 　 　 ②用“It is+adj. +for sb. to do sth. ”句型 升格画线句子 　 　 　 ③用定语从句升格画线句子 　 　 　 小贴士:润色完成后,请不要忘记将文章誊写一遍哦! 41 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 2025 强预测 第 1 篇(2024 亳州一模) 假如你是李辉,你的英国好友 Linda 想了解你过去与现在性格方面的改变。 请根据要点内容的 提示,给她写封邮件。 要点如下: 1. 过去害羞、喜欢乡村音乐,很少交友; 2. 现在开朗,喜欢古典音乐,有很多朋友; 3. 过去喜欢集邮,现在喜欢看书。 写作要求: 1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有要求的内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名; 3. 词数:80~ 100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Linda, I􀆳m very glad to tell you something about myself. 　 　 　 That􀆳s all about my character and hobbies. With my best wishes! Yours, Li Hui 一审 1. 主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 文体:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 人称:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 4. 时态:描述过去的情况用　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 ;描述现在的情况用　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 5. 要点:着重描写　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 二搭 51 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 三练写 Dear Linda, I􀆳m very glad to tell you something about myself. 　 　 　 　 　 　 That􀆳s all about my character and hobbies. With my best wishes! Yours, Li Hui 第 2 篇 假如你是学生李华,你校下周将举办主题为“我最敬佩的人”英文征集比赛活动,请写一篇英文 演讲稿参赛。 要点:1. 人物介绍(外貌、职业……); 2. 人物品格(有责任感、热心……列出至少三点并适当举例说明); 3. 人物影响(列出至少一点他 / 她对你的影响)。 要求:1. 词数 80~ 100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名; 3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯。 参考词汇:respect v. 尊敬　 quality n. 品格,品质 The person I admire most Dear teachers and fellow students, Everyone has a person they admire in their hearts. 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 Thanks for your attention! 61 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 一审 1. 主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 文体:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 人称:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 4. 时态:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 5. 要点:从　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 三个方面写作 二搭 三练写 The person I admire most Dear teachers and fellow students, Everyone has a person they admire in their hearts. 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 Thank you for your attention! 71 参考答案·安徽英语 话 题 写 作 突 破 话题写作突破 话题 1　 人物经历 典例剖析 审好题, 定方向 1. 制作海报的经历　 2. 记叙文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般过 去时　 5. 制作海报的时间、地点、人物;制作海报的目的 及过程;制作海报的感受 构篇章, 润词句 ①The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. ②Then, I found some old photos which showed the past and present of my hometown online. 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 一审 1. 解决自己遇到的问题　 2. 第一人称　 3. 记叙文　 4. 一 般过去时;一般现在时　 5. 遇到的问题是什么;如何解决 问题;从中学到的东西 三练写 I once solved a problem My middle school life is coming to an end. My biggest problem was that I was weak and often fell ill during the three years. I made a plan to make myself healthier. First, I walked to school instead of taking a bus every day. Secondly, I gave up my favourite junk food and got into the habit of eating more vegetables and fruit. Besides, I joined the school sports club and took part in all kinds of activities. Day by day, I felt stronger and healthier. I didn􀆳t need a thick coat in winter anymore. Since I have known that nothing is more important than health, I will keep healthy from now on. 第 2 篇 一审 1. 说明自己得到的帮助　 2. 第一人称　 3. 记叙文 4. 一般过去时　 5. 提供帮助的人;他 / 她所做的事情;这 次经历带给你的影响 三练写 An Act of Kindness There have been many people who have helped me in my life. I remember a young girl who helped me. I felt so upset when I failed the math exam. As I was about to cross the street to go back home, I dropped all my exam papers and books at the crossing. I hurried to pick them up, but some papers were blown away in the wind. At that moment, a young girl gave me a hand. After I stood up with all the papers and books under my arm, I wanted to thank her, but she just smiled at me and left quickly. I suddenly felt the warmth of the world. That girl􀆳s small act of kindness changed me and encouraged me to help others in need. I will remember that forever. 话题 2　 人物介绍 典例剖析 审好题, 定方向 1. 向英文报纸自荐　 2. 应用文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般现 在时　 5. 自荐的目的;自荐的原因;自己的意愿 构篇章, 润词句 ①Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English. ②It is easy for me to express myself in English. ③I􀆳m sure to be the right person who / that you are looking for. 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 一审 1. 告诉 Linda 自己的变化　 2. 应用文　 3. 第一人称 4. 一般过去时;一般现在时　 5. 自己过去和现在的不同 之处 三练写 Dear Linda, I􀆳m very glad to tell you something about myself. I used to be too shy to speak to others in public. As a result, I always made few friends. I feared facing others by myself. At that time, I usually liked country music, which made me feel quiet and peaceful. I also used to like collecting stamps. This always helped me get rich knowledge. However, I am outgoing now, so I make many friends. What􀆳s more, I like classical music, which makes me fall in love with books. So I love reading very much now. In books, I can learn a lot and know more about our world. That􀆳s all about my character and hobbies. With my best wishes! Yours, Li Hui 第 2 篇 一审 1. 介绍自己最敬佩的人　 2. 应用文　 3. 第三人称 4. 一般现在时　 5. 人物基本情况;人物品格;人物影响 三练写 The person I admire most Dear teachers and fellow students, Everyone has a person they admire in their hearts. For me, I admire my mother most. She works as a doctor in a hospital. She is tall with short hair and big eyes. My mother is a role model for me. First, she is very responsible. She works so hard that she wins the praise of many patients. What􀆳s more, she always gives a helping hand to people in need. In addition, she not only celebrates my success but also offers encouragement when I feel down. My mother sets a good example for me in many ways. She teaches me how to care about other people and deal with difficulties in my life. Thank you for your attention! 话题 3　 健康与安全 典例剖析 角度 1　 健康 审好题, 定方向 1. 保护视力的做法　 2. 应用文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般现 在时　 5. 介绍自己保护视力的方法 构篇章, 润词句 ①The light which the mobile phone gives off is harmful to my eyes. ② Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. 角度 2　 安全 审好题, 定方向 1. 介绍灭火器的使用方法　 2. 记叙文　 3. 第一人称 4. 一般现在时;一般过去时　 5. 活动目的;灭火器的使用 方法;个人体会 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 92