话题1 人物经历-【一战成名新中考】2025安徽中考英语·一轮复习·话题写作突破

话题写作突破·安徽英语 第二部分　 常考话题写作精讲练 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 编者按:话题写作课件扫各话题右侧二维码免费下载。 　 　 　 　 话题 1　 人物经历(2023,2021) 写作素材链接:见本书第三部分 P50 考情概览 该话题安徽 10 年 2 考,具体如下: ①2023 年考查自己制作海报的经历; ②2021 年考查自己用零花钱做有意义的事情并受到家人表扬。 该话题通常包含以下写作要点: ①引出经历; ②描述经历(10 年 2 考); ③表达感受。 典例剖析 　 审好题,定方向 (2023 安徽)假定你是李辉,你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。 请结 合下面图示信息,用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 1. 审主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 审体裁:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 审人称:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 4. 审时态:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 5. 审要点:从 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 , 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 , 　 　 　 　 　 　 三个方面描述自己的经历 注意: 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名; 3. 词数 80~ 100(短文题目与首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。 参考词汇: poster(n. 海报); design(v. & n. 设计) 8 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 My Experience of Making a Poster Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 搭框架,写句子 9 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 　 构篇章,润词句 组句成篇 润色美文 My Experience of Making a Poster Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. ①I made it to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions. ②Then, I found some old photos online. The photos showed the past and 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 present of my hometown.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 Finally, I collected the information that I had learned and designed a poster. This experience helps me know better about my hometown. With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved. I am very happy to see these changes. As a member of this town, I will contribute my own efforts to its development. ①用 the purpose of doing sth. is to􀆺句 型升格画线句子 　 　 　 ②用 which 引导的定语从句升格画线 句子 　 　 　 小贴士:润色完成后,请不要忘记将文章誊写一遍哦! 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 假如你是李华,你的初中生活即将结束。 在这美好的三年中,你一定遇到过令你困惑的事情。 当你遇到问题时,你是如何解决的? 请以“I once solved a problem”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你 是如何解决问题的。 要点:1. 你遇到的问题是什么? 2. 你是如何解决问题的? 3. 你学到了什么? 要求:1. 中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范; 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名; 3. 词数 80~ 100。 I once solved a problem 　 　 　 　 一审 1. 主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 人称:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 文体:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 4. 时态:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主,谈论感想时用　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 5. 要点:从　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 三个方面进行写作 01 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 二搭 三练写 I once solved a problem 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 第 2 篇 假定你是李辉,你们学校目前在举行“体验生活中的善意”征文活动。 请结合下面的提示信息, 你以“An Act of Kindness”为题,写一篇英语短文。 注意: 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名; 3. 词数 80~ 100(短文题目与首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。 An Act of Kindness There have been many people who have helped me in my life. I remember 　 　 11 话题写作突破·安徽英语 常 考 话 题 写 作 精 讲 练 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 一审 1. 主题:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 2. 人称:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 3. 文体:　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 4. 时态:以　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 为主 5. 要点:从　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 、　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 三个方面进行写作 二搭 三练写 An Act of Kindness There have been many people who have helped me in my life. I remember 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 21 参考答案·安徽英语 话 题 写 作 突 破 话题写作突破 话题 1　 人物经历 典例剖析 审好题, 定方向 1. 制作海报的经历　 2. 记叙文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般过 去时　 5. 制作海报的时间、地点、人物;制作海报的目的 及过程;制作海报的感受 构篇章, 润词句 ①The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. ②Then, I found some old photos which showed the past and present of my hometown online. 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 一审 1. 解决自己遇到的问题　 2. 第一人称　 3. 记叙文　 4. 一 般过去时;一般现在时　 5. 遇到的问题是什么;如何解决 问题;从中学到的东西 三练写 I once solved a problem My middle school life is coming to an end. My biggest problem was that I was weak and often fell ill during the three years. I made a plan to make myself healthier. First, I walked to school instead of taking a bus every day. Secondly, I gave up my favourite junk food and got into the habit of eating more vegetables and fruit. Besides, I joined the school sports club and took part in all kinds of activities. Day by day, I felt stronger and healthier. I didn􀆳t need a thick coat in winter anymore. Since I have known that nothing is more important than health, I will keep healthy from now on. 第 2 篇 一审 1. 说明自己得到的帮助　 2. 第一人称　 3. 记叙文 4. 一般过去时　 5. 提供帮助的人;他 / 她所做的事情;这 次经历带给你的影响 三练写 An Act of Kindness There have been many people who have helped me in my life. I remember a young girl who helped me. I felt so upset when I failed the math exam. As I was about to cross the street to go back home, I dropped all my exam papers and books at the crossing. I hurried to pick them up, but some papers were blown away in the wind. At that moment, a young girl gave me a hand. After I stood up with all the papers and books under my arm, I wanted to thank her, but she just smiled at me and left quickly. I suddenly felt the warmth of the world. That girl􀆳s small act of kindness changed me and encouraged me to help others in need. I will remember that forever. 话题 2　 人物介绍 典例剖析 审好题, 定方向 1. 向英文报纸自荐　 2. 应用文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般现 在时　 5. 自荐的目的;自荐的原因;自己的意愿 构篇章, 润词句 ①Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English. ②It is easy for me to express myself in English. ③I􀆳m sure to be the right person who / that you are looking for. 2025 强预测 第 1 篇 一审 1. 告诉 Linda 自己的变化　 2. 应用文　 3. 第一人称 4. 一般过去时;一般现在时　 5. 自己过去和现在的不同 之处 三练写 Dear Linda, I􀆳m very glad to tell you something about myself. I used to be too shy to speak to others in public. As a result, I always made few friends. I feared facing others by myself. At that time, I usually liked country music, which made me feel quiet and peaceful. I also used to like collecting stamps. This always helped me get rich knowledge. However, I am outgoing now, so I make many friends. What􀆳s more, I like classical music, which makes me fall in love with books. So I love reading very much now. In books, I can learn a lot and know more about our world. That􀆳s all about my character and hobbies. With my best wishes! Yours, Li Hui 第 2 篇 一审 1. 介绍自己最敬佩的人　 2. 应用文　 3. 第三人称 4. 一般现在时　 5. 人物基本情况;人物品格;人物影响 三练写 The person I admire most Dear teachers and fellow students, Everyone has a person they admire in their hearts. For me, I admire my mother most. She works as a doctor in a hospital. She is tall with short hair and big eyes. My mother is a role model for me. First, she is very responsible. She works so hard that she wins the praise of many patients. What􀆳s more, she always gives a helping hand to people in need. In addition, she not only celebrates my success but also offers encouragement when I feel down. My mother sets a good example for me in many ways. She teaches me how to care about other people and deal with difficulties in my life. Thank you for your attention! 话题 3　 健康与安全 典例剖析 角度 1　 健康 审好题, 定方向 1. 保护视力的做法　 2. 应用文　 3. 第一人称　 4. 一般现 在时　 5. 介绍自己保护视力的方法 构篇章, 润词句 ①The light which the mobile phone gives off is harmful to my eyes. ② Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. 角度 2　 安全 审好题, 定方向 1. 介绍灭火器的使用方法　 2. 记叙文　 3. 第一人称 4. 一般现在时;一般过去时　 5. 活动目的;灭火器的使用 方法;个人体会 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 92