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话题写作突破·安徽英语 写 作 高 分 秘 籍 技巧点拨 技巧 1　 灵活运用关联词汇 灵活运用关联词汇可以使文章条理清楚、连贯通顺。 写作中常用的关联词汇有: 1. 表示顺序: first( ly), second(ly), third(ly), to begin with, to start with, at first, at last, in the end, next, then, after that, finally􀆺 2. 表示并列: either􀆺 or, neither􀆺 nor, both􀆺 and, not only􀆺 but also, as well as, together with􀆺 3. 表示递进: besides, what􀆳s more, what􀆳s worse, in addition􀆺 4. 表示转折: but, however, though / although, after all, unluckily, unfortunately􀆺 5. 表示原因: because, because of, for, since, as, thanks to, for the reason that􀆺 6. 表示结果: so, therefore, as a result, so􀆺 that􀆺 7. 表示目的: so that, in order that, in order to, so as to􀆺 8. 表示对比: while, on the one hand􀆺 on the other hand􀆺 9. 表示让步: though, although, even if / even though􀆺 10. 表示举例: for example, for instance, such as, like􀆺 11. 表示总结: in a word, in short, all in all, generally speaking􀆺 技巧 2　 灵活引用名言警句、俗语谚语 具体见本书附录 P77 技巧 3　 灵活运用主从复合句 在文章中,灵活运用主从复合句可以为书面表达加分。 常见的从句有:①宾语从句;②定语从 句;③状语从句。 1. 宾语从句 句式 例句 陈述句 I know him. He is my sister􀆳s math teacher. →I know (that) he is my sister􀆳s math teacher. 一般疑问句 Does Kate get up early? Do you know? →Do you know if / whether Kate gets up early? 特殊疑问句 What􀆳s your favorite subject? I want to know. →I want to know what your favorite subject is. 3 话题写作突破·安徽英语 写 作 高 分 秘 籍 􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀦂 􀦂 􀦂􀦂 考生在使用宾语从句时应注意以下三点: 1. 分析语境及从句的句子成分,使用合适的引导词; 2. 宾语从句应使用陈述句语序; 3. 注意使用正确的时态。 【宾语从句具体讲解见《精讲册》P155】 2. 定语从句 先行词 例句 人 The man is making a speech. He is my father. →The man who / that is making a speech is my father. (先行词在从句中作主语) 事物 I􀆳ll never forget those days. We spent those days together. →I􀆳ll never forget those days that / which we spent together. (先行词在从句中作宾语) 时间 I remember the day. We met that day for the first time. →I remember the day when we met for the first time. (先行词在从句中作状语) 地点 This is a small town. I was born in the small town. →This is the small town where I was born. (先行词在从句中作状语) 􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀦂 􀦂 􀦂􀦂 考生在使用定语从句时应注意以下三点: 1. 分析从句成分及先行词,使用正确的关系词; 2. 若先行词在定语从句中作主语,需结合先行词判断定语从句谓语动词的单复数; 3. 注意使用正确的时态。 【定语从句具体讲解见《精讲册》P159】 3. 状语从句 引导状语从句常见的从属连词主要有: 时间状语从句: when / while / as, before, after, since, as soon as 条件状语从句: if, unless, as long as 原因状语从句: because, since, as 让步状语从句: though / although, even if / even though 目的状语从句: so that, in order that 结果状语从句: so􀆺 that􀆺 / such􀆺 that􀆺 技巧 4　 灵活运用特殊句式(特殊结构) 特殊句式或特殊结构可以丰富文章的句式结构,恰当使用特殊句式可以为书面表达加分。 以下 为常用的特殊句式: 4 话题写作突破·安徽英语 写 作 高 分 秘 籍 1. it 相关的句型 (1) it 作形式主语 ①It􀆳s+adj. ( +for / of sb.) + to do sth. 做某事(对某人来说)是……的。 / (某人)做某事是……的。 It􀆳s so kind of you to help me work out this problem. ②It􀆳s time to do / for / that􀆺 是(做)……的时间了。 It􀆳s time to go to school. ③It􀆳s one􀆳s turn to do sth. 轮到某人做某事。 It􀆳s my turn to do the dishes. ④It takes / took (sb. ) +一段时间+to do sth. 做某事花费(某人)……时间。 It took him three years to finish the task. ⑤It seems that􀆺 似乎 / 好像…… It seems that everyone likes him. (2) it 作形式宾语 find, think, consider, make, feel 等词后接的宾语为从句或动词不定式时,常用 it 作形式宾 语,真正的宾语(从句或动词不定式)后置。 ①I think it interesting to travel to Nanchang. ②I find it fun to play with little kids. 2. 比较等级句型 在写作中恰当运用形容词和副词的比较等级,可以使句型结构更丰富,表达更多样化。 常用 的比较等级句型有以下几种: (1)原级:(not) as+形容词 / 副词原级+as􀆺 He thinks math is as easy as English. (2)比较级:“the+比较级􀆺, the+比较级􀆺”,表示“越……,就越……” “比较级+and+比较级” / “more and more+多音节形容词 / 副词原级”,表示“越来越……” ①The more we communicate with our parents, the fewer problems we will have. ②Hefei is becoming more and more beautiful. (3)最高级:one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数,表示“最……的……之一” the+序数词+形容词最高级+可数名词单数+范围,表示“……中第……(最……)的……” ①Plastic pollution is one of the most serious environmental problems in the world. ②He is the third tallest student in the class. 5 话题写作突破·安徽英语 写 作 高 分 秘 籍 3. 感叹句增强表达情感 (1)The mooncakes are delicious. →How delicious the mooncakes are! (2)Du Fu is a great poet. →What a great poet Du Fu is! 4. 强调句提升表达档次 (1)My mother always takes good care of me. →It is my mother who always takes good care of me. (2)I met him in the park. →It was in the park that I met him. 技巧 5　 充实要点,防止冗杂 对于给出写作要点的作文,学生经常会遇到以下两个问题:①要点内容不够丰富;②无关信息相 对较多。 根本原因还是缺乏构建支撑句和关键信息联系的意识,以下为几个让文笔更加流畅优美、 意思表达更清楚明白的方法。 1. 丰富关键信息 (1)通过增添原因 / 结果丰富关键信息,如: ①First of all, you should wear proper clothes, which is very important for the doctors to do the check-􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 up.􀪍􀪍(增添原因) ②First of all, you should wear proper clothes. Therefore, much time will be saved while doing the 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 check-up.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍(增添结果) (2)通过增添目的丰富关键信息,如: ①First of all, you should wear proper clothes so that doctors can give you the check-up easily / in order 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 to save you the trouble during the examination.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍(增添目的) ②First of all, you should wear proper clothes to make the examination much easier for both yourself and 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 the doctors. 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 (增添目的) (3)通过举例丰富关键信息,如: I took part in a school sports meeting at the beginning of this term. There were many activities that I could do, such as running, relay race and swimming.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍(增添例子) (4)通过增添对比丰富关键信息,如: In my opinion, when time is gone, it will never come back. So we are supposed to put our hearts into study instead of losing ourselves in online games. 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 6 话题写作突破·安徽英语 写 作 高 分 秘 籍 除了以上四种丰富关键信息的方法外,考生还可以基于合适的情景和内容,使用其他句子连 接词。 2. 防止冗杂 在写作时,应拒绝语篇冗杂,聚焦关键信息,保持文章精练性。 如: We will meet at 1 p. m. next Monday in our school gym. If you don􀆳t know where the gym is, don􀆳t 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 worry. You can call me and let me take you there, which can make you know our school more and get 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 there quickly.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 (无关信息,应改为:Please arrive there on time. / You can set off for the gym by school bus. ) 技巧 6　 写好叙事类文章开头的四种方式 1. “开门见山”式开头 一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人 一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。 如“A Trip to Huangshan”的开头可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took 􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 us ten hours to get there.􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us. 2. 回忆性开头 在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。 这种类型的开头中 通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如 never forget, remember, unforgettable, exciting, surprising, sad􀆺 如 “A Trip to Huangshan” 的开头还可以这样写:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或 It was really an unforgettable experience I had. 3. 疑问性开头 在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住 中心。 如 “Planting Trees” 的开头可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don􀆳t you think planting trees is􀆺? 再如 “ Traveling Abroad” 的开头可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore? 4. 倒叙式开头 在有的文章中,特别是叙事类的文章,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述 过程。 如“Catching Thieves”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It􀆳s a􀆺 story. 7