读后续写 雨林绝境求生：暗夜盼援，感恩重生 讲义-四川省南充高级中学2024-2025学年高二上学期12月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语句续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I am an outdoor lover and I've made it a routine to explore different regions annually with a friend during our vacation .This year,in addition to beauty of nature,I've experienced something more. It was late afternoon.A few hours before sunset,Lucas and I decided to hike to Acomat Falls, hidden in the rainforest. Expecting to spend no more than an hour at the falls,we wore T-shirts and swimsuits and hadn't told anyone where we were going.After crossing the wide river at a shallow spot and walking upstream about 100 yards,we reached the falls at around 4 pm.We dived into the green pool and floated on our backs,amazed at the canyon (峡谷) walls. By 4:30,Lucas reminded me that we needed to head back to the car before dark,but I was waist-deep in the river trying to photograph the falls,the hanging vines(葡萄藤)and the dreaminess of the place.Lucas had to wait on a stone.I finally took a good photo--and then he screamed. With a crack like thunder,a violent wall of water rushed over the falls,turning the dreamy swimming pool into a churning(剧烈翻滚的)monster.A fash flond!Ijumped out of the river seconds before the flood crashed over the spot where I'd just been standing Lucas climbed barefoot off towards higher ground .Lucas and I climbed up the canyon on all fours,grabbing vines to pull ourselves up.Ilooked over my shoulder and saw that the water had risen 20 feet in less than a minute. Lucas led us through the dense bush,prickly trees,and ankle-deep mud.After we'd climbed 200 feet,we stopped to catch our breath.Now we had a different problem:The road was on the other side of the swollen river .We were stuck in the forested mountain. We had no rain jackets and were exhausted from the climb.Lucas asked if I had my phone.It was soaking wet,but still blinked on.We decided to move toward higher ground to get a better signal.It was almost dark.For a moment,I got through,and I heard the faint voice of Camila,our landlady(女房东). She said she'd called for help.Then the phone went silent---no signal again. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右。 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 第一段：It seemed that we were in a desperate(绝望的)situation. 第二段：Trapped there ,we wondered whether and how rescuers could find as. 文章大意：“我” 和 Lucas 是户外爱好者，今年去雨林探寻阿科马特瀑布。下午到达后在瀑布下游泳玩耍，“我” 因拍照未及时返程，随后遭遇山洪暴发，两人艰难爬上峡谷却被困在河对岸的山林中。手机虽能短暂拨通但很快无信号，他们又冷又饿，处境绝望，只能等待救援，最终听到直升机声获救，这次经历让他们深刻体会到生命的珍贵和探险前准备的重要性。 故事山分析： · 开端：“我” 和 Lucas 像往常一样去雨林徒步探寻瀑布，描述了轻松愉悦的氛围，展现他们对这次探险的期待，为后续的突发状况做铺垫，让读者感受从平静到危机的巨大转变。 · 发展：到达瀑布后尽情享受，却因 “我” 拍照未及时返程，此时气氛仍较为轻松，但已开始埋下危机的种子，随着山洪暴发，紧张感急剧上升，推动故事进入高潮。 · 高潮：两人在洪水中惊险逃生，爬上峡谷后却被困山林，面临寒冷、饥饿和未知的危险，生命受到威胁，将故事的紧张氛围推至顶点，使读者为他们的命运揪心，急切想知道他们能否获救。 五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应： 1. 伏笔：出发前只穿着 T 恤和泳衣，且未告知他人行踪，暗示了他们准备不足，一旦遇到危险，将面临诸多困难，也为后续被困后的艰难处境做了铺垫。 · 回应：被困后，他们在寒冷的夜晚没有保暖衣物，处境更加艰难，深刻体会到准备不充分带来的后果，也使读者意识到在探险前做好充分准备的重要性。 2. 伏笔：过河时选择在浅滩处且未考虑河水变化，这一细节为后来山洪暴发导致河水迅速上涨，切断他们的退路埋下伏笔，体现了他们对自然环境的潜在危险估计不足。 3. 回应：洪水来袭，河水瞬间变得汹涌，他们被困在河对岸，凸显了自然的不可预测性和他们所处困境的危险性，强化了故事的紧张感和意外性。 3. 伏笔：“我” 沉迷于拍照而忽略了返程时间，导致错过最佳撤离时机，这一情节不仅展现了 “我” 的大意，也为后面遭遇山洪时的惊险逃生情节提供了合理的发展脉络，增加了故事的紧张感和戏剧性。 3. 回应：“我” 因拍照险些丧命，在洪水中九死一生，让 “我” 深刻反思自己的行为，同时也让读者明白在户外探险时要时刻保持警惕，不能因一时疏忽而陷入危险。 4. 伏笔：手机虽带在身边但被水浸湿，为手机信号不稳定以及后续能否成功求救增加了不确定性，使故事的发展充满悬念，也让读者为他们能否与外界取得联系而担忧。 3. 回应：手机先是短暂拨通后又失去信号，这种反复让两人的心情随之起伏，也使救援过程更加曲折艰难，进一步突出了他们被困的困境，增强了故事的吸引力。 5. 伏笔：提到女房东 Camila，为后续她帮忙呼叫救援做了铺垫，使救援情节的出现不显得突兀，同时也体现了在危急时刻他人的帮助是多么重要。 3. 回应：女房东听到电话后呼叫了救援，虽然手机信号中断，但给读者留下了一丝希望，也为最终两人获救提供了合理的情节支撑，体现了人与人之间的互助精神在困境中的关键作用。 续写要点（两段）： · 第一段：续写两人在绝望中等待救援时的心理活动和具体行动，如回忆以往的美好经历来缓解恐惧，互相鼓励打气，同时继续寻找可以保暖和发出信号的方法，比如用树叶和树枝搭建简易遮蔽物，收集干燥的树叶准备生火，尽管困难重重，但仍不放弃求生的希望，进一步渲染紧张压抑的氛围，展现他们在困境中的顽强精神。 · 第二段：描述救援人员到来前的迹象，如听到越来越近的呼喊声和脚步声，看到远处闪烁的灯光，两人激动万分，拼命回应。接着详细写被救援的过程，如被救援人员用担架抬下山，送上救护车，以及对救援人员表达感激之情，最后写这次经历对他们未来生活的影响，让他们更加珍惜生命，敬畏自然，突出故事的主题和情感升华。 情感线（150 字）：起初，“我” 和 Lucas 怀着兴奋与期待的心情前往瀑布，沉浸在自然美景中，情感愉悦；遭遇山洪后，瞬间转为惊恐和慌张；逃脱洪水爬上峡谷却被困，陷入绝望和无助；在等待救援过程中，虽恐惧但仍抱有一丝希望，互相鼓励；听到直升机声和救援人员呼喊声时，激动欣喜；最终获救，满是感激和对生命的珍惜，情感从愉悦到惊恐再到感激，层次丰富，生动展现了人物在生死边缘的心理变化和成长。 故事线（6 条）： 1. “我” 和 Lucas 前往雨林徒步探寻阿科马特瀑布，心情愉悦。 2. 在瀑布下玩耍，“我” 因拍照未及时返程，危险悄然降临。 3. 山洪暴发，两人惊险逃生后被困在河对岸山林，陷入绝境。 4. 手机短暂拨通后失去信号，等待救援时内心煎熬。 5. 听到直升机声，看到救援人员，激动回应，最终获救。 6. 此次经历让两人深刻反思，更加珍惜生命，敬畏自然。 主旨升华句 5 句英文 1. In the face of nature's fury and the brink of despair, we realized that life is a precious gift, and every moment should be cherished with gratitude and care. 2. This harrowing adventure taught us that the wilderness, while beautiful, demands our respect and thorough preparation. Our overconfidence was nearly our downfall, a lesson engraved in our hearts forever. 3. Trapped in the unforgiving forest, we understood that hope is the most powerful weapon against despair. It was our unwavering hope that kept us alive and led us to the waiting arms of the rescuers. 4. The experience of being on the verge of losing everything made us appreciate the value of human connection. The brief call to our landlady was a lifeline, a reminder that we are never truly alone in our struggles. 5. Surviving this ordeal was not just a physical triumph but a spiritual awakening. We emerged from the forest with a newfound reverence for life and a determination to live each day to its fullest, knowing how quickly it can all be taken away. 写作示范两篇 第一篇 It seemed that we were in a desperate situation. The night was pitch-black, and the forest was alive with strange noises. We huddled together, shivering from the cold and damp. I closed my eyes, trying to calm my racing heart. Memories of our past adventures flashed through my mind, and I couldn't help but feel a pang of regret for not being more cautious this time. Lucas squeezed my shoulder, whispering words of comfort. We decided to build a small fire to keep warm and ward off any potential predators. With trembling hands, we gathered dry twigs and leaves, using a lighter that was miraculously still working. The small flame flickered, casting a faint glow around us, but it was better than nothing. Trapped there, we wondered whether and how rescuers could find us. We shouted for help at regular intervals, our voices hoarse and desperate. Suddenly, we heard a faint rustling in the bushes. Our hearts leaped with hope, but it turned out to be just a small animal. Disappointed but not defeated, we continued to wait. After what felt like an eternity, we saw a beam of light cutting through the darkness. It was the rescuers! They had followed the faint signal from my phone. We waved frantically, tears streaming down our faces. As they reached us, we hugged them tightly, overwhelmed with gratitude. This experience had been a terrifying wake-up call, teaching us the importance of respecting nature and always being prepared for the unexpected. 第二篇 It seemed that we were in a desperate situation. The wind howled through the trees, and the cold seeped into our bones. We were both exhausted and hungry, but we knew we had to stay strong. I looked up at the sky, hoping to see a break in the clouds, but there was only darkness. Lucas found a hollow tree trunk and we crawled inside, trying to find some shelter from the elements. We held each other tightly, sharing what little body heat we had. Every now and then, we would check my phone, praying for a signal. The silence of the forest was deafening, and our thoughts were filled with fear and uncertainty. Trapped there, we wondered whether and how rescuers could find us. We decided to use our shirts to create a makeshift flag, tying them to a long branch and waving it in the air. We also searched for any open areas where we might be more visible from the air. As the hours passed, our hope began to wane. But then, we heard the distant sound of a helicopter. We sprang into action, shouting and waving our flag with all our might. The helicopter circled closer, and we could see the faces of the rescuers looking down at us. They dropped a rope ladder, and with shaky legs, we climbed up. Once on board, we collapsed in relief. This adventure had changed us forever, making us realize how fragile life is and how important it is to be responsible when venturing into the wild. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$