读后续写 爱的传承：从回忆之书到新的旅程 讲义-2025届山东省临沂第一中学高考适应性测试（一）英语试题

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Ian was a young boy who loved spending time with his grandpa. They would go on adventures together, explore the woods behind their house, and play games. But as Ian’s grandpa grew older, he started to forget things. At first, it was just little things, like where he left his keys or what he had for breakfast. But soon, it became clear that something more serious was happening. His grandpa had Alzheimer’s disease (阿尔茨海默症). Ian didn’t fully understand what that meant, but he could see that his grandpa was changing. He would get confused and disoriented (迷茫的), and sometimes he didn’t recognize Ian or his parents. It was hard for Ian to watch his grandpa struggle, but he still loved spending time with him. One day, Ian’s grandpa didn’t come over for their usual adventure. Ian was worried and asked his parents where he was. They told him that his grandpa was in the hospital, and that he might not be able to come home. Ian began to experience a nerve breakdown. He didn’t know what he would do without his grandpa. But then he had an idea. He decided to make a book about their adventures together, filled with pictures and stories of all the fun they had had. He worked on it every day, drawing and writing and remembering. When Ian’s grandpa came home from the hospital, he was confused and disoriented. But then Ian showed him the book he had made. They looked through it together, and Ian told his grandpa all about the adventures they had had. Slowly but surely, his grandpa began to remember. Over the next few weeks and months, Ian and his grandpa looked at the book together every day. They laughed and talked and remembered. Ian’s grandpa may have forgotten a lot of things, but he never forgot the love he had for his grandson. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 第一段：Eventually, Ian’s grandpa passed away. 第二段：Years later, when Ian was all grown up, he found the book again. 文章大意：Ian 小时候常与爷爷一同冒险玩耍，感情深厚。但爷爷患上阿尔茨海默症后逐渐失忆，忘记许多事情，甚至认不出家人，还住进了医院。Ian 为此难过不已，随后他决定制作一本记录他们冒险经历的书，书中有图片和故事。爷爷回家后，Ian 给他看这本书，爷爷慢慢回忆起了过去。在之后的日子里，他们每天一起看这本书，爷爷虽遗忘诸多事情，却始终记得对 Ian 的爱。 故事山分析： · 开端：Ian 与爷爷亲密无间，一起经历许多冒险，为故事铺垫温馨的感情基础。 · 发展：爷爷患上阿尔茨海默症，病情逐渐严重，开始遗忘事情，生活受到影响，被送往医院，这引发了 Ian 的担忧与不安，推动故事发展。 · 高潮：Ian 制作回忆书籍，爷爷看后开始回忆起往昔，这是故事的关键转折点，情感在此处升温。 · 结局：在爷爷最后的时光里，Ian 和爷爷每天看这本书，爷爷未忘对 Ian 的爱，温馨收尾，同时也为后续的续写留下情感线索。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应： 1. 伏笔：Ian 爱和爷爷一起冒险，这为后面他能回忆起众多冒险故事制作成书埋下伏笔。 · 回应：在续写中，Ian 长大看到书回忆起与爷爷的冒险细节，这些细节正是源于小时候的频繁冒险经历，丰富了他对爷爷的情感内涵。 2. 伏笔：爷爷患上阿尔茨海默症逐渐遗忘事情，暗示爷爷的病情会持续发展，也为爷爷可能离世做铺垫。 4. 回应：续写中 “Eventually, Ian’s grandpa passed away.” 承接了爷爷病情恶化的趋势，使得故事发展符合逻辑，同时引发 Ian 后续情感的进一步深化。 3. 伏笔：Ian 制作关于他们冒险的书，为后面这本书对爷爷以及 Ian 自身的重要意义做铺垫。 4. 回应：爷爷在世时，书帮助爷爷回忆；爷爷去世后，Ian 珍藏书，长大后再次看到书引发深刻情感与回忆，凸显了书作为情感纽带的关键作用。 4. 伏笔：Ian 看到爷爷生病后的变化感到难过，体现他对爷爷的深厚情感，也预示着他会为留住与爷爷的回忆而努力。 4. 回应：Ian 制作书以及后续对书的珍视，都是他对爷爷情感的外在表现，在续写中进一步强化了这种情感的深度与持久性。 5. 伏笔：爷爷虽遗忘许多，但未忘对 Ian 的爱，这为续写中 Ian 对爷爷的思念以及传承这份爱做铺垫。 4. 回应：Ian 长大后决定将与爷爷的故事分享给孩子，体现了他对爷爷爱的传承，回应了爷爷对他爱的深远影响，升华了故事的情感主题。 续写要点（两段）： · 第一段：Ian 在爷爷去世后，陷入了深深的悲痛之中，但那本记录着他们美好回忆的书成为了他心灵的慰藉。随着时间的推移，Ian 逐渐成长，生活也发生了许多变化，但他始终将爷爷的爱深埋在心底，那本书也被他小心地保存着，成为他童年珍贵回忆的象征，也让他更加珍惜与亲人相处的时光。 · 第二段：多年后，Ian 偶然间再次发现了那本早已泛黄的书，当他翻开书页，往昔与爷爷共度的快乐时光如潮水般涌上心头。回忆起爷爷的爱与那些冒险经历，Ian 决定将这份爱传承下去，他要把这些故事讲给自己的孩子听，让他们也能感受到那份跨越时空的温暖与亲情，让爷爷的爱和精神在家族中延续。 情感线（150 字）：Ian 对爷爷的情感起始于亲密无间的爱，在爷爷患病后转为担忧与难过，制作回忆书籍体现他对留住这份爱的执着。爷爷去世后是悲痛不舍，长大后再次看到书则是深沉的怀念与感慨。最终，他决定将这份爱传承给下一代，从个人的亲情之爱上升到家族情感传承的高度，情感层层递进，真挚而深刻，展现了爱的延续与力量。 故事线（6 条）： 1. Ian 小时候与爷爷频繁冒险，建立深厚感情。 2. 爷爷患上阿尔茨海默症，逐渐遗忘事情，生活受影响被送医。 3. Ian 制作冒险回忆书籍，帮助爷爷回忆。 4. 爷爷去世，Ian 悲痛，珍藏书籍。 5. Ian 长大成人，生活变迁，始终保存对爷爷的思念。 6. Ian 多年后发现旧书，决定传承爷爷的爱给孩子。 主旨升华句 5 句英文 1. Love is like a flame that can never be extinguished, passing from generation to generation, as Ian did with his grandpa's love. 2. The bond of love between Ian and his grandpa transcended time and illness, teaching us that the power of love can create eternal memories. 3. In the face of the cruel Alzheimer's, Ian's unwavering love and the precious book became a testament to the strength of human connection and the value of cherished memories. 4. Ian's journey with his grandpa shows that love is not just an emotion but a legacy, one that we should hold dear and pass on to those who come after us. 5. The story of Ian and his grandpa illustrates that even in the darkest of times, love can shine through, illuminating our lives and guiding us to keep the flame of affection alive for future generations. 写作示范两篇 第一篇 Eventually, Ian’s grandpa passed away. Ian felt as if a part of his heart had been torn away. The days that followed were filled with a profound sense of loss. However, the book he had made became his most treasured possession. It was a tangible link to the past, a reminder of the love and adventures he had shared with his grandpa. He would often sit alone, gently turning the pages, reliving those precious moments. Years later, when Ian was all grown up, he found the book again. As he looked at the faded pictures and read the words he had written as a child, a wave of nostalgia washed over him. He realized how much those memories had shaped him. Inspired, he decided to take his own children on similar adventures. He would tell them the stories of his grandpa, passing on the spirit of exploration and the power of love. In this way, the legacy of his grandpa would live on, not just in the pages of the book, but in the hearts and experiences of future generations. 第二篇 Eventually, Ian’s grandpa passed away. Ian was plunged into a deep sadness, but he also felt a sense of peace knowing that he had done everything he could to keep their bond alive. The book remained on his bedside table, a silent witness to their relationship. He would sometimes touch its cover, as if touching the hand of his grandpa one last time. Years later, when Ian was all grown up, he found the book again. This time, it was like opening a door to a world he had almost forgotten. The memories came flooding back, and with them, a newfound determination. He understood that the love he had shared with his grandpa was a gift that he could not keep to himself. He began to volunteer at a local care home, sharing his story and the power of reminiscence with the elderly and their families. Through his actions, he hoped to bring a little bit of the magic that he had experienced with his grandpa to others, spreading the message that love and memories are the most precious things we can hold onto in life. 【答案】One Possible Version： Eventually, Ian’s grandpa passed away. At the funeral, Ian was crying his eyes out. Holding the adventure book tightly in his hand, never had Ian missed his grandpa so much. Memories of them exploring the wood and giggling with merriness came flooding back. Indeed, it was hard for Ian to say goodbye, but he knew that his grandpa was at peace. He had the book they had made together, a reminder of all the adventures they had shared and the love they had for each other. Years later, when Ian was all grown up, he found the book again. He looked through it and remembered all the good times he had shared with his grandpa. Sometimes, he would still go to the same wood and play the same games alone there. To him, it was a special way to commemorate his late grandpa. Also, at these special moments, Ian realized that even though he had lost his grandpa to Alzheimer’s disease, never would it deprive the deep bond they had for each other. As the sun streamed its last rays through the tree branches, Ian knew somewhere in the heaven, grandpa was looking at him with his reassuring smiles and loving eyes. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$