2025届高考二轮复习读后续写专项提高积累之 Lily与Ethan跨越万水千山的友谊羁绊（四川泸州第一次质量检测卷）讲义

四川省泸州市高2022级第一次教学质量诊断性考试英语

第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节（满分15分）

假定你将参加学校组织的英语征文比赛，主题是“Our Land，Our Future”。请你用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：

1．土地的重要性；2．保护土地的建议。

注意：

1．写作词数应为80左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Our Land,Our Future

 

 

 

第二节 读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

In a quiet little town, there was a small park where children would laugh and play. In the center of this park stood a wooden swing set. Among the children, a nine-year-old girl named Lily had a special bond with this swing. Every day after school, she would rush to the park, her backpack bouncing against her back, and spend hours soaring through the air, her laughter mingling with the wind.

Lily's best friend, Ethan, was a boy who lived next door. They were inseparable, sharing secrets, dreams, and endless adventures. Often, you would find them on those swings, their feet barely touching the ground, their imaginations taking them far beyond the confines of the playground. They dreamed of becoming astronauts, traveling to outer space, and discovering new worlds together.

One sunny afternoon, Lily tested the limits of the swing. With a determined push, Ethan soared high, feeling the thrill as the swing reached its top. "Look, Lily! I'm flying!" Ethan shouted, his laughter ringing through the air. But not far from the park, his parents watched them with great concerns. There was an uneasy tension growing. When Ethan came down from the swing, his parents rushed to the swing and took him home immediately.

Later that evening, Lily cried on the couch, her tears staining the fabric. "Mom, Ethan said he would not play with me anymore. Why?" she asked, worry pooling in her blue eyes. Her mother took a deep breath, but the words seemed to be trapped in her throat. "I'm not sure, sweetie. He... He might be leaving for a while.”

Days turned into weeks, and the park felt emptier without Ethan's laughter. Each swing back and forth felt like a reminder of their vanished adventures. With every passing day, Lily's heart sank deeper into confusion and sorrow. She hoped that he would return, refusing to accept that he might not come back again.

注意：

1．续写词数应为150左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1

Eventually, Lily decided to write a letter to him.

Paragraph 2

The next day, Ethan showed up in the park as expected.

 

 

第二节 读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

In a quiet little town, there was a small park where children would laugh and play(定从). In the center of this park stood a wooden swing set(完全倒装). Among the children, a nine-year-old girl named Lily(非谓语动词作后置定语) had a special bond with this swing. Every day after school, she would rush to the park, her backpack bouncing against her back(独立主格), and spend hours soaring through the air, her laughter mingling with the wind(独立主格).

Lily's best friend, Ethan, was a boy who lived next door. They were inseparable, sharing secrets, dreams, and endless adventures(非谓语动词作伴随动作). Often, you would find them on those swings, their feet barely touching the ground(独立主格), their imaginations taking them far beyond the confines of the playground(独立主格). They dreamed of becoming astronauts, traveling to outer space, and discovering new worlds together.

One sunny afternoon, Lily tested the limits of the swing. With a determined push, Ethan soared high, feeling the thrill(非谓语动词作伴随动作) as the swing reached its top(状从). "Look, Lily! I'm flying!" Ethan shouted, his laughter ringing through the air(独立主格). But not far from the park, his parents watched them with great concerns. There was an uneasy tension growing. When Ethan came down from the swing(状从), his parents rushed to the swing and took him home immediately.

Later that evening, Lily cried on the couch, her tears staining the fabric(独立主格). "Mom, Ethan said he would not play with me anymore(宾从). Why?" she asked, worry pooling in her blue eyes(独立主格). Her mother took a deep breath, but the words seemed to be trapped in her throat. "I'm not sure, sweetie. He... He might be leaving for a while.”

Days turned into weeks, and the park felt emptier without Ethan's laughter. Each swing back and forth felt like a reminder of their vanished adventures. With every passing day, Lily's heart sank deeper into confusion and sorrow. She hoped that he would return(宾从), refusing to accept(非谓语动词作伴随动作) that he might not come back again(宾从).

注意：

1．续写词数应为150左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1: Eventually, Lily decided to write a letter to him.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Paragraph 2: The next day, Ethan showed up in the park as expected.