读后续写--警徽闪耀下的善举：Willis 与迷失的 Luna 讲义-山东省潍坊市2024-2025学年高三上学期开学英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Willis was a highway patrol trooper (巡逻警察), who was in charge of the traffic safety of the Tennessee Highway. One afternoon this July, it rained heavily. He was driving along the busiest section of the highway during the downpour when he saw the traffic slowing down in front of him. Some cars stopped and bypassed one lane (车道). Willis initially thought there was a car crash, so he slowed down his car to approach. But he soon found out the source of the delay was an animal wandering on the wet road. And he spotted that was a dog when he got close enough. There was a large dog that looked like a brown German shepherd (牧羊犬) in the middle lane. The weather was at its worst, and the gray sky with the heavy rain gave the highway minimum visibility. The delay might cause a traffic jam and of course it was very dangerous to let the dog wandering in the middle of the highway. He immediately turned on his blue lights because people usually slow down when they see the blue lights and called into the radio so they knew where he was. He pulled over, got out , and whistled to draw the dog's attention. It seemed as if the dog knew Willis was its lifesaver. It walked to Willis and his car. Once the dog was in the car, Willis pulled into a parking lot nearby, where he called Petworks Animal Service. While waiting, he noticed the dog wearing a collar with its name “Luna”. Willis recorded a short video of the dog. Then an animal control officer came and took Luna to the shelter. Willis came back to work. Watching cars travelling on the highway through the window glass, he thought he might do something to let the dog's owner know their pet was found safe. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After work, Willis posted the video online with a brief description attached. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Days later, news came that Luna's owner had been found and would visit him. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文章大意 七月的一个下午，大雨倾盆，公路巡逻警察 Willis 在繁忙路段执勤时，发现交通因一只在路中徘徊的大狗（Luna）而堵塞。他将狗带回车上，并联系了动物服务机构，之后他将狗的视频发布到网上，希望能帮它找到主人。几天后，Luna 的主人被找到并前来感谢 Willis，Willis 成功帮助宠物与主人团聚，展现了他的善良和责任感，以及人与动物之间的温暖故事。 二、故事山分析 · 开场：大雨中，Willis 在高速公路上执勤，交通突然拥堵，原来是一只狗在路中徘徊，这一场景设置了悬念，引起读者对狗的命运以及后续发展的好奇，同时也展现了恶劣的天气条件，为故事增添了紧张感和危险性，奠定了故事的基础氛围，引出 Willis 后续的行动。 · 发展：Willis 开启警灯，停车将狗带回车上，并联系动物服务机构，还发现狗的项圈上有名字 “Luna”，这些情节进一步推动故事发展，展现了 Willis 的善良和责任心，同时 “Luna” 这个名字也为后续寻找主人提供了关键线索，使故事朝着解决问题的方向前进，增加了故事的可期待性。 · 转折：Willis 下班后将狗的视频发布到网上，这是故事的一个转折点，从线下的救援行动转移到线上的信息传播，借助网络的力量扩大寻找主人的范围，使故事的发展有了新的途径和可能性，引发读者对网络传播效果的猜测以及狗主人是否能看到视频的悬念。 · 高潮：几天后，得知 Luna 的主人被找到并将前来拜访 Willis，这是故事的高潮部分，读者急切想知道主人与狗重逢的场景以及他们之间的互动，此时故事的紧张氛围达到顶点，所有的情节都指向这一期待已久的团聚时刻，紧紧抓住读者的注意力。 · 结局：Luna 的主人与狗团聚，对 Willis 表达感激之情，Willis 也因自己的行为感到满足，故事在此处圆满结束，展现了一个温暖的结局，突出了善良和责任得到回报的主题，给读者留下温馨的阅读体验，同时也传递了正能量，让人们感受到人与动物之间深厚的情感纽带。 三、五处伏笔及续写中的回应 1. 伏笔：“There was a large dog that looked like a brown German shepherd (牧羊犬) in the middle lane.” · 回应：在续写中，当 Luna 的主人前来时，通过对狗的品种和外貌特征的描述，与前文提到的 “棕色德国牧羊犬” 相呼应，确认了这就是主人丢失的 Luna，使主人的出现更加合理且令人信服，同时也强化了故事的连贯性和逻辑性，让读者清晰地看到故事的发展脉络。 2. 伏笔：“He immediately turned on his blue lights because people usually slow down when they see the blue lights and called into the radio so they knew where he was.” 5. 回应：这一伏笔展示了 Willis 的职业素养和应对突发情况的经验。在后续情节中，虽然没有直接提及蓝色警灯和无线电通讯，但可以暗示 Willis 在整个救援过程中的专业和有条不紊，为他成功救助 Luna 并妥善处理后续事宜提供了背景支持，体现了他作为巡逻警察的职责和能力，使故事更加真实可信，也为他后续的善良之举增添了可信度和份量。 3. 伏笔：“While waiting, he noticed the dog wearing a collar with its name ‘Luna’.” 5. 回应：“Luna” 这个名字是寻找狗主人的关键信息，在续写中，正是通过这个名字，动物服务机构或者网络上的人们才能准确地联系到狗的主人，使得狗主人能够顺利找到 Luna，回应了前文留下的线索，推动了故事朝着圆满结局发展，体现了细节在故事中的重要性，也展示了作者构思的巧妙之处。 4. 伏笔：“Willis recorded a short video of the dog.” 5. 回应：录制视频这一行为为后续寻找主人提供了重要手段。在续写中，Willis 将视频发布到网上后，视频的传播引发了广泛关注，最终帮助找到了狗主人，这一伏笔的回应是故事发展的关键环节，体现了现代信息技术在解决问题中的作用，同时也突出了 Willis 的机智和主动解决问题的态度，使故事更加贴近现实生活，具有时代感。 5. 伏笔：“He thought he might do something to let the dog's owner know their pet was found safe.” 5. 回应：这一心理描写明确了 Willis 的意图和动机，为他发布视频的行为做了铺垫。在续写中，他不仅发布了视频，还通过网络的力量实现了自己的想法，成功让狗主人得知消息，回应了前文的伏笔，展现了 Willis 的善良和坚持，同时也体现了故事中人物的性格特点和行为逻辑的一致性，使读者更容易理解和认同故事的发展。 四、续写要点 第一段 · 情节发展：视频发布后，迅速在当地社区和动物爱好者群体中传播开来。许多人留言询问狗的情况并提供可能的线索。一位经常在附近遛狗的居民认出了 Luna，并联系了动物服务机构，告知了狗主人的大致住址。动物服务机构通过当地社区的帮助，成功找到了 Luna 的主人。主人看到视频后，激动不已，立即与动物服务机构取得联系，表达了对 Willis 的感激之情，并表示会尽快去拜访他。 · 情感变化：Willis 从发布视频后的期待，到看到视频传播和收到各种反馈时的紧张与希望，再到得知狗主人被找到时的兴奋和欣慰，情感逐渐升温，感受到自己的行为得到了大家的关注和支持，对即将到来的与狗主人的会面充满期待，同时也为能够帮助 Luna 回家而感到自豪。 第二段 · 情节发展：Luna 的主人带着礼物和鲜花来到 Willis 工作的地方。一见到 Willis，主人就紧紧地握住他的手，眼中含着泪水，不停地道谢。Luna 看到主人后，兴奋地扑了上去，围着主人转圈圈，尾巴摇个不停。主人向 Willis 讲述了 Luna 走失后自己的焦急心情，以及看到视频时的惊喜。Willis 笑着说这是他作为警察的职责，也是他对动物的一份爱心。周围的同事和路人看到这一幕，都被这份温暖的情感所打动，纷纷为 Willis 点赞。 · 情感变化：Willis 看到 Luna 与主人团聚的幸福场景，心中充满了成就感和喜悦。他感受到自己的工作不仅仅是维护交通秩序，还能在不经意间给人们带来如此大的幸福和感动。主人的感激之情让他觉得自己的付出都是值得的，同时也增强了他继续在工作中传递善良和正能量的决心。周围人的认可和赞扬也让他感到自豪和满足，进一步升华了他内心的情感，使整个故事在温馨和感动的氛围中结束。 五、情感线 故事中 Willis 的情感经历了几个阶段的变化。起初，在雨中看到路中的 Luna 时，他出于职业的责任感和对动物安全的担忧，果断采取行动将其救回，此时的情感是一种本能的关心和担当。在联系动物服务机构等待的过程中，他对 Luna 的命运有一定的牵挂，希望能尽快帮它找到主人，这种情感逐渐转化为一种期待。当他下班后发布视频时，他的内心充满了希望，希望通过网络的力量让 Luna 与主人团聚，同时也有些忐忑，不确定自己的做法是否能成功。随着视频的传播和线索的出现，他的情绪逐渐变得兴奋和紧张，期待着狗主人的出现。最后，当 Luna 的主人前来感谢他时，他感受到了强烈的成就感、喜悦和自豪，看到自己的努力得到了回报，不仅帮助了一只动物，也给一个家庭带来了欢乐，这种情感的升华让他对自己的行为和职业有了更深的认识，也让读者感受到了人性的美好和善良的力量。 六、故事线 1. 七月大雨天，Willis 在高速公路执勤时，发现交通因一只在路中徘徊的大狗（Luna）受阻。 2. Willis 开启警灯，停车将 Luna 带回车上，联系动物服务机构，并发现狗项圈上的名字 “Luna”。 3. Willis 下班后将 Luna 的视频发布到网上，希望找到狗主人，视频在网络上传播，引发关注和线索提供。 4. 一位居民认出 Luna 并告知动物服务机构狗主人的住址，动物服务机构成功联系到狗主人。 5. 狗主人得知消息后，激动地与动物服务机构联系，表示会尽快拜访 Willis，感谢他救了 Luna。 6. Luna 的主人带着感激之情前来，与 Luna 团聚，Willis 因自己的善举受到赞扬和感谢，故事圆满结束，突出了善良和责任的主题。 七、主旨升华句 1. A single act of kindness can create a ripple of hope that spreads far and wide, touching lives and bringing lost ones back home.（一次小小的善举可以掀起希望的涟漪，传播得很远很广，触动生命，让迷失的生命回家。） 2. In the face of uncertainty and chaos, it is our compassion and sense of responsibility that can guide us to make a difference and bring warmth to the world.（在面对不确定性和混乱时，是我们的同情心和责任感引导我们去做出改变，为世界带来温暖。） 3. Every life, whether human or animal, is precious and worthy of our care and protection. Our actions, no matter how small, can have a profound impact on others.（每一个生命，无论是人类还是动物，都是珍贵的，值得我们关心和保护。我们的行动，无论多么微小，都能对他人产生深远的影响。） 4. The bond between humans and animals is a testament to the power of love and kindness that transcends species and unites us in a shared sense of humanity.（人与动物之间的纽带证明了爱与善良的力量，这种力量超越物种，在共同的人性中使我们团结在一起。） 5. Sometimes, the most ordinary people can do the most extraordinary things when they act from the heart and take responsibility for those in need.（有时，最平凡的人在发自内心地行动并为有需要的人承担责任时，也能做出最不平凡的事情。） 八、写作示范 示范一 After work, Willis posted the video online with a brief description attached. He didn't expect the overwhelming response it would receive. Within hours, the video was shared hundreds of times. People left comments, expressing their admiration for Willis's kindness and hoping to help reunite the dog with its owner. Some even formed small search groups, sharing information about lost dogs in the area. A local animal rescue organization reached out to Willis, offering their assistance. They cross-referenced the name "Luna" with their database of lost pets and managed to narrow down the possible owners. Meanwhile, Willis was constantly checking his phone, his heart filled with anticipation and hope. Days later, news came that Luna's owner had been found and would visit him. Willis was overjoyed. When the owner arrived, there was an immediate connection. The owner, a middle-aged woman, was in tears as she hugged Luna tightly. She thanked Willis profusely, telling him how Luna had been a part of their family for years and how devastated they were when she went missing. Willis felt a sense of fulfillment that he had been able to bring such happiness to a family. The woman presented Willis with a handmade thank-you card and a donation to the local animal shelter in his name. As she left with Luna, Willis watched them go, knowing that this small act of kindness had not only reunited a pet with its owner but also strengthened the community's bond and belief in the power of good deeds. 示范二 After work, Willis posted the video online with a brief description attached. Little did he know that his simple act would set off a chain of events. The video caught the attention of a local news station, which decided to run a story about Luna's rescue. The story aired that evening, reaching thousands of viewers. People from all over the city called in with tips and possible leads. A kind-hearted elderly couple recognized Luna as the dog they often saw in their neighborhood. They contacted the news station, who then put them in touch with the animal shelter. The shelter verified the information and contacted the owner. Days later, news came that Luna's owner had been found and would visit him. Willis was excited to meet the person behind the name on the collar. When the owner walked through the door, accompanied by Luna, there was a sense of relief and joy in the air. The owner, a young man, shook Willis's hand firmly and thanked him from the bottom of his heart. He told Willis that Luna was his best friend and running partner. Willis smiled, realizing the importance of his role in this reunion. The owner invited Willis to join them for a walk in the park with Luna sometime, as a way to show his gratitude. As Willis watched them leave, he knew that this experience had not only brought a dog home but had also reminded him of the power of kindness and the impact one person can have on the lives of others. 参考答案 After work, Willis posted the video online with a brief description attached. He wrote about how he found Luna wandering on the highway during the heavy rain and how she was now safe at the Petworks Animal Service. He also included the contact information of the shelter, hoping that Luna’s owner would see the post and come forward. The video quickly gained attention, with many people sharing it and expressing their gratitude for Willis’s actions. Days later, news came that Luna’s owner had been found and would visit him. Willis received a call from the shelter informing him that Luna’s owner had seen the video and was overjoyed to know that Luna was safe. The owner, a woman named Sarah, had been desperately searching for Luna for days. When she arrived at the shelter, she was reunited with Luna, who greeted her with excited barks and wagging tail. Sarah thanked Willis profusely for his kindness and quick thinking. Willis felt a deep sense of satisfaction knowing he had helped reunite a lost pet with its owner. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$