读后续写--险象环生觅宝藏，挚友相伴悟真情 讲义-2024届安徽省芜湖市高中毕业班5月统测英语试卷

读后续写 Once upon a time, in a remote village, there lived two friends, Jack and Tom. They were inseparable, sharing every joy and sorrow, and always ready to start up new adventures together. One day, they heard stories of a hidden treasure buried deep in the forbidden forest. Motivated, they decided to start up a search to find the treasure and make their fortune. Equipped with only a map, a compass, and their courage, Jack and Tom entered into the dense and dangerous forest. The trees towered overhead, blocking out the sun, and the undergrowth was thick and messy. They had to crawl and climb their way through, facing all sorts of barriers and creatures. As they dug deeper into the forest, they encountered a fierce wolf that bared its teeth at them. They managed to escape by climbing a tall tree, but not before the wolf had torn their bag-pack to pieces, leaving them with only the essentials. Determined and fearless, they pushed their way onward, following the clues on the map. They crossed swamps(湿地) and scaled cliffs, despite hunger and thirst. Their feet were bleeding and their clothes torn, but their spirits were high and their determination unshakable. Finally, after days of hardship and danger, they hit on a clearing in the forest. In the center stood an ancient stone altar (祭坛), and beside it, a chest (箱子) that glowed with a mysterious light. They knew they had found the treasure. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But as they approached the chest, they heard a deep sound from the earth beneath their feet. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, the two friends realized that the true treasure of their journey was not the gold and jewels. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：在一个偏远村庄，好友杰克和汤姆听闻禁林中有宝藏，便带着简单装备勇敢地踏入森林探险。一路上，他们遭遇了凶猛的狼，狼撕毁了他们的背包，只留下必需品。尽管历经饥饿、口渴，双脚流血，衣服破损，他们依然坚定地克服了沼泽、悬崖等重重困难，最终找到了发着神秘光芒的宝箱。然而，此时意外发生，他们面临新的危机，而这次冒险也让他们对宝藏有了新的认识。 故事山分析： · 开篇：介绍杰克和汤姆亲密无间的关系以及他们听闻宝藏的消息，引出故事的开端，激发读者对他们冒险的期待。 · 上升情节：两人进入危险的森林，遭遇狼的袭击，这是他们遇到的第一个重大困难，增加了故事的紧张感和冒险氛围，也初步展现了他们的机智和勇敢。 · 转折：虽然遭遇狼的攻击，但他们没有放弃，继续前进并最终找到宝藏，使读者的情绪稍作舒缓，同时也为后续的情节转折做铺垫，引发读者对接下来会发生什么的好奇。 · 高潮：当他们靠近宝箱时，脚下传来声响，地面开始震动，预示着更大的危机来临，故事进入高潮阶段，读者的心也随之紧绷，急切地想知道两人能否脱险。 · 结局：续写部分将呈现两人如何应对危机以及他们对宝藏的重新认知，完成故事的起承转合，揭示故事的主题，给读者留下深刻的印象和思考。 五处伏笔及续写中的回应： 1. 伏笔：森林被描述为 “禁止进入的”，暗示其中充满危险和未知，为他们后续遇到狼、岩石滑坡等危险情况做铺垫。 · 回应：续写中详细描述他们面对岩石滑坡时的惊险场景和艰难应对，突出森林的危险程度，以及他们在这种极端环境下的挣扎与求生，呼应森林的危险特性，使故事更加连贯和真实。 2. 伏笔：他们仅带着简单的地图、指南针和勇气就进入森林，装备简陋，预示着他们在探险过程中会面临诸多困难和挑战。 5. 回应：后续情节中展现他们在面对饥饿、口渴、受伤等困境时，凭借坚定的意志和彼此的支持坚持下来，强调他们克服困难的不易，突出勇气和友谊在艰难环境中的重要性，回应前文对装备简陋的描述，凸显人物的精神品质。 3. 伏笔：狼的出现并撕毁背包，使他们只剩下必需品，加剧了他们在森林中的生存危机，也为后面的饥饿、口渴等困难埋下伏笔。 5. 回应：续写中可以提及他们在躲避岩石滑坡时，因饥饿和体力不支而更加艰难，进一步体现他们处境的危险和困难的层层叠加，同时也展示他们在困境中不屈不挠的精神，与狼的攻击这一情节相呼应，使故事的发展更加合乎逻辑。 4. 伏笔：地图上的线索引导他们穿越沼泽、攀登悬崖，暗示他们的寻宝之路并非一帆风顺，还会有更多艰难险阻等待着他们。 5. 回应：在后续故事中，通过描述他们在应对岩石滑坡时的紧张和艰难，以及对自身安危的担忧，再次强调寻宝过程中的危险重重，与之前遇到的沼泽、悬崖等困难形成呼应，强化了故事的冒险氛围和他们所面临的挑战的艰巨性。 5. 伏笔：神秘发光的宝箱的出现，引发读者对宝箱内宝藏的好奇，同时也为故事的转折和主题升华埋下伏笔，因为宝藏可能并非表面上的金银珠宝。 5. 回应：续写中最终揭示宝藏的真正含义是他们之间深厚的友谊，通过两人在危机中的相互扶持和最终对宝藏的领悟，完成对伏笔的回应，使故事的主题得到升华，给读者带来意外和感动，让整个故事更加富有深意和内涵。 续写要点： · 第一段：生动地描绘岩石滑坡的场景，如巨石滚落的轰鸣声、地面剧烈的震动、飞扬的尘土等，营造出紧张危险的氛围。描述杰克和汤姆在洞穴中的惊恐与不安，但同时也要展现他们相互鼓励、共同寻找求生办法的细节，比如他们紧紧握住对方的手，眼神中透露出坚定，彼此安慰不要放弃。可以提及他们利用洞穴内有限的空间和物品，试图阻挡可能涌入的石块，或者寻找其他出口，突出他们在绝境中的机智和顽强。 · 第二段：着重刻画两人脱险后对宝藏的感悟和内心的成长。他们望着宝箱，回想起一路上的艰辛与彼此的陪伴，意识到友谊才是最珍贵的财富。可以描写他们的表情和对话，如微笑着对视，感慨地说：“这一路的经历比任何金银财宝都更有价值，我们的友谊就是最大的宝藏。” 然后他们决定放弃宝箱中的物质财富，带着这份珍贵的感悟和深厚的友谊回家，展现他们精神上的升华和对人生价值的新认识，使故事在温馨、感人的氛围中结束，引发读者对友谊和人生的思考。 情感线：起初，杰克和汤姆听闻宝藏的消息，心中充满了兴奋和期待，对未知的冒险充满渴望。在森林中遭遇狼时，他们感到惊恐，但凭借机智逃脱后，又坚定了继续寻宝的决心，此时他们的情感中既有对危险的警惕，又有对目标的执着。随着困难不断增加，如饥饿、口渴、受伤，他们的身体疲惫不堪，但彼此之间的友谊和相互扶持让他们的精神依然保持着高昂的斗志，情感上充满了信任和依赖。当找到宝箱后，又遭遇岩石滑坡，他们陷入极度的惊恐和绝望之中。然而，在绝境中他们相互鼓励，最终脱险，此时他们对友谊的珍视达到了新的高度，深刻地认识到友谊才是这次冒险中真正的宝藏，情感也从对物质财富的追求转变为对精神财富的领悟和感恩，整个情感线随着故事的发展跌宕起伏，深刻地展现了友谊在困难时刻的强大力量和对人生的重要意义。 故事线： 1. 杰克和汤姆听闻禁林宝藏的传说，决定一同踏上冒险之旅。 2. 进入森林后遭遇狼的袭击，背包被撕毁，只剩必需品。 3. 凭借地图和指南针，克服沼泽、悬崖等困难，继续前进。 4. 历经艰辛后找到神秘发光的宝箱。 5. 靠近宝箱时遭遇岩石滑坡，躲进洞穴避险。 6. 脱险后领悟到友谊才是真正的宝藏，决定放弃物质财富回家。 主旨升华句： 1. True treasure lies not in the glimmer of gold and jewels, but in the unwavering bond of friendship that withstands the tests of time and adversity.（真正的宝藏不在于金银珠宝的闪耀，而在于经受住时间和逆境考验的坚定不移的友谊纽带。） 2. In the face of danger and uncertainty, it is the friendship we share that gives us the strength to persevere and find the real riches within our hearts.（在危险和不确定面前，是我们共享的友谊给予我们坚持下去的力量，并让我们在内心找到真正的财富。） 3. The journey through the forest of challenges taught Jack and Tom that the most valuable things in life cannot be found in a chest, but are the memories and connections we make along the way.（穿越充满挑战的森林的旅程让杰克和汤姆明白，生活中最有价值的东西不是在箱子里找到的，而是我们在旅途中创造的回忆和建立的联系。） 4. When the ground shook and the rocks tumbled, Jack and Tom discovered that the treasure they sought was not material, but the love and loyalty that held them together through the darkest hours.（当地面震动，岩石滚落时，杰克和汤姆发现他们所追寻的宝藏不是物质的，而是在最黑暗的时刻将他们紧紧相连的爱与忠诚。） 5. The adventure in the forbidden forest was not just a quest for treasure, but a voyage of self-discovery, where Jack and Tom realized that the greatest wealth is the friendship that enriches our souls.（在禁林的冒险不仅仅是一次寻宝之旅，更是一次自我发现的航行，在那里杰克和汤姆意识到最伟大的财富是丰富我们灵魂的友谊。） 写作示范一 But as they approached the chest, they heard a deep sound from the earth beneath their feet. The ground trembled violently, and before they could react, a massive rockslide was unleashed. Boulders the size of houses came crashing down, sending up clouds of dust. Jack and Tom instinctively ran for cover, finding a small alcove in the side of a nearby cliff. They huddled together, hearts pounding, as the rocks thundered past. Fear was etched on their faces, but they held on to each other, knowing that their lives depended on it. Finally, the two friends realized that the true treasure of their journey was not the gold and jewels. As the dust settled and the danger passed, they emerged from their hiding place and looked at the chest. But instead of opening it, they turned to each other and smiled. They had been through so much together, and in those moments of peril, they understood that their friendship was the most precious thing they had. They left the chest behind, content with the knowledge that they had found something far more valuable. With a newfound sense of purpose, they made their way back home, their bond stronger than ever, ready to face whatever life had in store for them, knowing that as long as they had each other, they were rich beyond measure. 写作示范二 But as they approached the chest, they heard a deep sound from the earth beneath their feet. The earth rumbled ominously, and cracks began to snake across the ground. A deafening roar filled the air as a rockslide barreled towards them. Jack and Tom's eyes widened in horror, but they didn't panic. They sprinted towards a cluster of large boulders and managed to squeeze into a narrow gap between them. The rocks crashed and tumbled around them, the vibrations shaking their very bones. They clung to each other, praying for the chaos to end. Finally, the two friends realized that the true treasure of their journey was not the gold and jewels. When the rockslide subsided, they stepped out, bruised and shaken but alive. They walked back to the chest, and as they stood before it, they felt a sense of peace. They realized that the journey itself had been a gift. The challenges they had overcome, the fear they had faced together, had forged a bond that no amount of treasure could match. They decided to leave the chest untouched and return home. Their friendship had been refined by fire, and they knew that it would be the foundation of their lives. They walked away, not with gold, but with hearts full of gratitude and a story that would be told for generations to come. 参考答案 But as they approached the chest, they heard a deep sound from the earth beneath their feet. The ground began to shake, and the trees around them collapsed, making them realize that they had triggered some ancient trip. Immediately, they leaped aside to avoid falling pieces of stone. As the ground settled, they saw that the chest had opened, revealing a glittering pile of golden coins and precious jewels. But before they could reach for the treasure, countless venomous snakes crawled out of the chest, hissing and striking at them. Fortunately, with quick responses and even quicker thinking, Jack and Tom managed to escape from the fatal chest. Finally, the two friends realized that the treasure of the journey was not the gold and jewels. However, the treasure was the challenges they had overcome and the bond they had built through their shared adventure. Hugging each other tightly, they were grateful for the friendship that had witnessed them through so much. With newfound wisdom and a deeper understanding of each other, they set out on their way back to the village, leaving the forbidden forest and its hidden treasures behind them. On the way home, the sun shining down on them, Jack and Tom realized that the most precious thing they had found was not the mythical treasure hidden in the forest, But the invaluable friendship between them. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$