读后续写--Catia 与蜂鸟：十一年的救赎之约 讲义2024届安徽省蚌埠市高三第三次教学质量检查考试英语试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Catia Lattouf de Arída has been using her apartment in Mexico City as a hospital and shelter for injured and abandoned hummingbirds(蜂鸟)for the last 11 years. Hummingbirds are a very important part of Mexico’s ecosystem, but because of the ever-expanding urban landscape, they face all sorts of serious threats. That’s where 73-year-old Catia comes in. As a self-taught hummingbird caretaker, she devotes most of her free time and resources to nursing the tiny birds back to health. She has been doing it for over a decade and her home in Mexico City has become known as a hummingbird hospital. Catia’s story as a hummingbird nurse began in 2011, at a very difficult moment in her life. She had lost her husband two years prior and she herself was battling cancer. She was walking on the street one day when she noticed a hummingbird that had suffered a serious eye injury. The kindhearted woman took it home, but she knew nothing about taking care of a bird, let alone such a tiny one. However, a veterinarian(兽医)friend encouraged her to look after the hummingbird, and that led to a life devoted to rescuing hundreds of tiny birds. “It wrote me a new life,” Catia recently said about Gucci, the first hummingbird she ever cared for. Catia managed to nurse Gucci back to health, but she claims it was the tiny bird that saved her. She had sold her five high-end boutiques(精品店)in the city to focus on her battle with cancer and had fallen into a depression, but the hummingbird managed to pull her out of the sadness and loneliness that had taken over her life. And it was only the beginning. 注意： 1. 续写词数应在150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Word of her success spread among Catia’s friends, and before long some of them began bringing her injured and abandoned hummingbirds. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In order to raise awareness of the difficulty of hummingbirds in Mexico, Catia started posting videos of the patients on social media and many of them spread quickly. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：73 岁的 Catia Lattouf de Arída 在过去 11 年里，将自己在墨西哥城的公寓变成了受伤和被遗弃蜂鸟的医院与庇护所。她的故事始于 2011 年，那时她正经历丧夫之痛且身患癌症，偶然救助了一只眼部受伤的蜂鸟后，便开启了救助蜂鸟的生涯。在兽医朋友的鼓励下，她自学护理蜂鸟，成功救治了第一只蜂鸟 Gucci，而这只鸟也帮助她走出了抑郁，此后她便全身心投入到救助更多蜂鸟的事业中，她的善举也逐渐被人知晓。 故事山分析： · 开篇：介绍 Catia 救助蜂鸟的背景，展现她的日常行为和奉献精神，引发读者对其故事的兴趣。 · 上升情节：回溯到 2011 年，讲述她开始救助蜂鸟的契机，即处于人生困境时救助了第一只蜂鸟，突出这一行为的偶然与必然，为故事增添情感张力。 · 转折：尽管毫无经验，但在兽医朋友的鼓励下，她成功迈出第一步，从此改变了自己的生活轨迹，也预示着她将在这条路上继续前行。 · 高潮：第一只蜂鸟 Gucci 不仅被治愈，还拯救了她的精神世界，使她更加坚定地投身于救助蜂鸟的事业，让故事达到情感上的高峰，也凸显了人与动物之间的奇妙联系和相互救赎。 · 结局：她的成功事迹在朋友间传播，为续写部分他人送来更多蜂鸟以及她进一步扩大影响力做铺垫，推动故事的发展和升华。 五处伏笔及续写中的回应： 1. 伏笔：Catia 原本对照顾蜂鸟一无所知，暗示她在救助过程中会遇到诸多困难和挑战，也为她后续的成长和学习埋下伏笔。 · 回应：续写中可以描述她如何通过不断学习和实践，逐渐掌握了专业的护理知识和技能，克服了最初的无知和迷茫，展现她的坚韧和努力。 2. 伏笔：她曾身患癌症且陷入抑郁，这为她救助蜂鸟的行为赋予了更深层次的意义，即蜂鸟不仅是她救助的对象，更是她自我救赎的寄托。 5. 回应：在后续情节中，可以提及她在救助蜂鸟的过程中，身体和精神状态逐渐好转，进一步强调这种相互救赎的关系，突出生命的顽强和爱的力量。 3. 伏笔：她卖掉了自己的精品店，意味着她放弃了原有的事业，全身心投入到救助蜂鸟的事业中，显示出她的决心和专注。 5. 回应：续写部分可以描述她在经济上可能面临的困难，以及她如何通过各种方式克服这些困难，如接受捐赠、节省开支等，继续坚持自己的救助工作，展现她的执着和奉献精神。 4. 伏笔：朋友得知她救助蜂鸟成功后开始给她送受伤的蜂鸟，预示着她的救助工作将面临更大的挑战和责任，也为故事的发展提供了新的情节线索。 5. 回应：在续写中详细描述她如何应对蜂鸟数量的增加，如扩大救助空间、招募志愿者等，展现她的组织能力和应对困难的智慧。 5. 伏笔：她开始在社交媒体上发布蜂鸟的视频，暗示她将借助网络平台扩大自己的影响力，引起更多人对蜂鸟保护的关注，这将是故事进一步发展和升华的关键。 5. 回应：后续可以讲述视频的传播效果，如获得大量的点赞、评论和分享，吸引了更多的人参与到蜂鸟保护行动中来，包括捐赠物资、提供志愿服务等，最终实现从个人救助行为到社会公益行动的转变，突出主题的升华。 续写要点： · 第一段：详细描述朋友送来的蜂鸟的状况，有哪些不同的伤势和种类，Catia 是如何对它们进行分类和初步处理的。讲述随着蜂鸟数量的增多，她所面临的困难，比如空间不足、资金短缺等问题。可以提及她如何利用有限的资源，创造性地解决这些问题，比如自制一些简易的鸟笼，寻找更便宜的食物替代品等。同时，也可以写一些关于她和这些蜂鸟之间的温馨小故事，展现她对蜂鸟的关爱和耐心，以及蜂鸟对她的信任和依赖。 · 第二段：阐述社交媒体视频的传播效果，具体说明有哪些地区的人受到了影响，他们采取了什么样的行动来支持 Catia 的救助工作。例如，有些专业的鸟类保护组织联系她，提供技术指导和物资捐赠；一些学校组织学生来参观学习，开展保护蜂鸟的科普活动；还有很多志愿者主动前来帮忙照顾蜂鸟等。重点突出 Catia 的影响力不断扩大，她所带动的保护蜂鸟的行动已经形成了一种社会风尚，让更多的人意识到保护野生动物的重要性和紧迫性，从而实现故事主题的升华。 情感线：Catia 最初因生活的挫折而陷入痛苦和抑郁之中，在救助第一只蜂鸟时，她带着一丝怜悯和尝试的心态。随着救助过程的展开，她逐渐投入了更多的情感和精力，从蜂鸟的康复中获得了成就感和希望，慢慢走出了人生的低谷，情感也从悲伤绝望转变为坚定和充满爱。当朋友送来更多蜂鸟时，她感到责任重大但又充满热情，在克服各种困难的过程中，她的情感变得更加坚韧和执着。而社交媒体上的反馈让她感受到了社会的支持和认可，她的情感进一步升华，从个人的救助行为上升到对整个社会保护意识的触动，充满了使命感和自豪感，始终围绕着对蜂鸟的关爱以及自身价值的实现这条情感主线发展。 故事线： 1. Catia 在墨西哥城的公寓救助蜂鸟长达 11 年。 2. 2011 年因丧夫且患癌，偶然救助第一只受伤蜂鸟 Gucci。 3. 在兽医朋友鼓励下，自学护理蜂鸟并成功治愈 Gucci，自己也走出抑郁。 4. 救助蜂鸟的成功事迹在朋友间传播，朋友开始送受伤蜂鸟给她。 5. 她面临蜂鸟增多带来的各种困难，努力克服。 6. 为提高保护意识，在社交媒体发视频，引发广泛关注和支持，带动更多人参与保护蜂鸟行动。 主旨升华句： 1. In the act of saving these tiny creatures, Catia not only mended their broken wings but also healed her own wounded spirit, proving that love and kindness have the power to transform lives in the most unexpected ways.（在拯救这些微小生物的过程中，Catia 不仅修复了它们受伤的翅膀，也治愈了自己受伤的心灵，证明了爱和善良具有以最意想不到的方式改变生命的力量。） 2. The journey of Catia and the hummingbirds is a testament to the fact that every life, no matter how small or seemingly insignificant, is precious and worthy of our care and protection.（Catia 和蜂鸟的旅程证明了一个事实，即每一个生命，无论多么渺小或看似微不足道，都是珍贵的，值得我们关心和保护。） 3. Through her selfless dedication, Catia has shown us that one person's passion can ignite a spark of change, inspiring a community and even a nation to come together and safeguard the delicate balance of nature.（通过她无私的奉献，Catia 向我们展示了一个人的热情可以点燃变革的火花，激励一个社区甚至一个国家团结起来，维护自然的微妙平衡。） 4. The story of Catia and the hummingbirds is a beautiful reminder that in the face of adversity, hope and love can bloom, leading us to find purpose and meaning in the most unlikely of places.（Catia 和蜂鸟的故事是一个美好的提醒，即在逆境中，希望和爱可以绽放，引领我们在最不可能的地方找到目标和意义。） 5. Catia's actions have not only saved the lives of countless hummingbirds but have also created a ripple effect of compassion and awareness, teaching us that the smallest act of kindness can have a profound and far-reaching impact on the world around us.（Catia 的行为不仅拯救了无数蜂鸟的生命，还产生了同情和意识的涟漪效应，教导我们最微小的善举也能对我们周围的世界产生深远而广泛的影响。） 写作示范一 Word of her success spread among Catia’s friends, and before long some of them began bringing her injured and abandoned hummingbirds. There were those with broken wings, weakened by hunger or affected by parasites. Catia greeted each new arrival with the same tenderness and determination. She converted a spare room into a makeshift intensive care unit, carefully adjusting the temperature and humidity to mimic the birds' natural habitat. As the number of patients grew, she faced the challenge of providing enough food. With limited funds, she started a small garden on her balcony, growing nectar-rich flowers. She also reached out to local florists for discarded blooms. Despite the hardships, she never wavered, for these tiny birds had become her life's mission. In order to raise awareness of the difficulty of hummingbirds in Mexico, Catia started posting videos of the patients on social media and many of them spread quickly. People from all corners of the country were touched by the sight of these fragile creatures being nursed back to health. Offers of help poured in - from donations of medical supplies to volunteers willing to assist with the daily care. A local school even organized a fundraiser, raising enough money to purchase a professional incubator. Catia was invited to give talks at environmental conferences, sharing her knowledge and inspiring others to take action. Her apartment, once a private sanctuary, had now become a symbol of hope and a catalyst for change, proving that one person's love and dedication could make a world of difference for these precious birds and for the environment as a whole. 写作示范二 Word of her success spread among Catia’s friends, and before long some of them began bringing her injured and abandoned hummingbirds. Some were barely clinging to life, with severe injuries that required immediate attention. Catia worked tirelessly, using her limited knowledge and intuition to stabilize them. She spent long hours researching online and consulting with veterinarians via phone to learn new treatment methods. The financial strain became evident as she had to purchase expensive medications and specialized equipment. But her resolve only strengthened. She started a crowdfunding campaign, which slowly gained momentum as people heard her story. She also formed a network of local bird lovers who provided moral support and practical assistance, such as sharing tips on bird care and donating used cages. In order to raise awareness of the difficulty of hummingbirds in Mexico, Catia started posting videos of the patients on social media and many of them spread quickly. The videos went viral, attracting the attention of international conservation organizations. Experts offered their guidance and resources, helping Catia improve her rehabilitation techniques. Schools incorporated her story into their environmental education programs, inspiring a new generation of conservationists. The local government took notice and provided some funding for her cause. Catia's simple act of kindness had snowballed into a nationwide movement. She became a beacon of hope, showing that even in the face of seemingly insurmountable odds, one person's determination and love could create a ripple effect that would benefit not only the hummingbirds but also the entire ecosystem, and serve as a reminder of our shared responsibility to protect the natural world. One possible version: Word of her success spread among Catia’s friends, and before long some of them began bringing her injured and abandoned hummingbirds. She never turned them away. Some of them were just babies, while others had physical injuries or had suffered poisoning. She needed to study the birds and their habits in order to better take care of them, and after many years of experience, the 73-year-old woman is considered an expert on hummingbirds and she has been invited to speak at several events. In order to raise awareness of the difficulty of hummingbirds in Mexico, Catia started posting videos of the patients on social media and many of them spread quickly. That’s when the demand for her nursing services really blew up. She has cared for hundreds of hummingbirds in her career. Together with her partners, she spends pretty much all her time looking after the tiny birds. After nursing the birds back to health, Catia releases them in a wooded area on the south side of Mexico City. The ones that are beyond saving are cared for until their last moments and then buried near her building. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$