英语读后续写--从树屋到温暖家庭的回归之路 讲义 湖北云学名校联盟2024-2025学年高三12月联考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My sister, Angie, locked herself in the tree house Dad made for her. I jumped, grabbed the lowest branch of the maple tree, and pulled myself up. "Here I go again," I thought. "Be careful, Matt," Mom said from the base of the tree. "Don't fall." I reached for the next branch. It wasn't a hard climb if Angie hadn't pulled the ladder into the tree house. I beat on the door and asked her to open up. Angie refused. Sometimes I wondered why I bothered. I crawled through the window opening Dad had cut in the wall. Angie sat in one corner. "Mom says you've been here long enough. You have to come down." I said. Angie shook her head, saying she was living in this tree forever and never going to school again. I asked her what happened at school. Angie's eyes were filled with tears, and she covered her face with her hands. "I told a kid at school we were getting a new baby brother. He asked, 'What color? Green?" I laughed. That was actually funny. "This is serious!" Angie cried. "He said the baby won't really be my brother, the same way you aren't. He said our family isn't a real family. We're like a circus. All different colors — black and yellow and white." "Well, he's wrong," I said. "We're a real family. You and I and the baby are adopted. So what?" Angie looked up, still believing that kid at school more than she believed me. I could tell. I sat down opposite her on the tree-house floor, a floor full of knotholes (节孔) and gaps. I began to convince her by laying out the facts. "Who taught you to ride a bike, to skate, and to e-mail Grandma?" After a long pause, Angie finally admitted that it was I. "Yes, I did all that because I'm your brother. It's what brothers do." I added. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Then I continued with more facts.. ___________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ Angie and I were talking when Mom called, "Hey, guys, are you coming down to meet your little brother?" ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：妹妹安琪因同学说她即将到来的弟弟不是 “真正的” 弟弟，还嘲笑他们的家庭像马戏团，各种肤色都有，便把自己锁在树屋里不愿下来上学。“我” 爬上树屋，通过列举自己陪伴她成长的诸多经历，如教她骑车、滑冰、发邮件给奶奶，在她迷路时寻找她，生病时照顾她等，试图说服她家庭的真正意义不在于血缘，而在于爱与关怀。 故事山分析： · 开篇：安琪因同学的话躲在树屋，引出家庭关系的问题，设置悬念。 · 上升情节：“我” 爬上树屋，安琪哭诉同学的嘲笑，让矛盾进一步凸显。 · 转折：“我” 开始列举过往照顾安琪的事实，试图改变她的想法。 · 高潮：继续深入阐述家庭的本质是爱而非血缘，安琪的态度逐渐转变。 · 结局：妈妈叫两人下来见新出生的弟弟，暗示家庭新成员的到来，也为故事画上温馨的句号，同时也象征着家庭的完整与延续，以及对 “家庭” 这一主题的升华。 伏笔及续写中的回应： 1. 伏笔：安琪把梯子拉进树屋，“我” 艰难爬上树。 · 回应：体现安琪当时的固执和内心的困扰，也暗示 “我” 为解决问题所付出的努力，在后续中通过 “我” 不断地说服，展示 “我” 对安琪的关心和家庭关系的修复。 2. 伏笔：安琪提到同学说新宝宝不是 “真正的” 弟弟，像马戏团，因为家庭肤色多样。 5. 回应：这是引发安琪情绪问题的根源，后续 “我” 通过强调家庭的真正意义在于爱，而非血缘和外貌，回应并化解了这一矛盾，如列举一起成长的经历，让安琪明白家庭的温暖与亲情的珍贵。 3. 伏笔：安琪哭诉时 “我” 的笑，引起安琪更强烈的反应。 5. 回应：凸显 “我” 起初对问题的轻视，到后来认真对待并耐心说服安琪的转变过程，展示 “我” 在家庭关系中的成长和担当，进一步深化亲情的主题。 4. 伏笔：树屋地板有很多节孔和缝隙。 5. 回应：象征着家庭关系可能存在的不完美和缝隙，但通过 “我” 和安琪在树屋中的交流与和解，这些缝隙被爱与理解所填满，暗示家庭关系在经历波折后会更加牢固。 5. 伏笔：安琪最初不相信 “我” 说的话，更相信同学。 5. 回应：与后面安琪逐渐被 “我” 说服，态度发生转变形成对比，突出 “我” 所阐述的家庭观念的力量，以及安琪对家庭情感的重新认知和回归，强调亲情在家庭中的核心地位。 续写要点： · 第一段：继续深入讲述 “我” 与安琪在树屋中的交流，列举更多生活中彼此照顾、相互陪伴的温馨细节，如共同面对困难、分享快乐等，进一步强化 “家庭是由爱构成” 的观点，让安琪从内心深处感受到家庭的温暖和亲情的不可替代，逐渐消除她对同学话语的在意和对家庭的误解，使她的态度发生明显转变，开始认同 “我” 的观点，并对新成员的到来有了期待。 · 第二段：描述听到妈妈呼唤后，“我” 和安琪一起下树进屋见到新弟弟的情景。重点刻画安琪看到弟弟时的温柔举动和内心的触动，如轻轻触摸弟弟的小手，眼中流露出的爱意和欣喜等，展现家庭新成员带来的喜悦和希望，同时再次强调家庭的完整与和谐，以及亲情的延续和传承，让故事在温馨的氛围中结束，给读者留下深刻的印象和对家庭亲情的深刻思考。 情感线：安琪最初因同学的嘲笑而感到伤心、委屈和困惑，对家庭产生怀疑和逃避的情绪；“我” 则从一开始的有些无奈和不太在意，逐渐转变为认真对待安琪的问题，通过回忆过往的点滴，用充满爱的事实和耐心的态度去说服安琪，展现出坚定、关心和爱护的情感；随着交流的深入，安琪的情绪从悲伤和不信任逐渐转变为感动、认同和期待，最终在见到新弟弟时，流露出温柔、喜悦和对家庭新成员的接纳与喜爱之情，整个情感线围绕家庭亲情的主题，从矛盾冲突到和解认同，展现了亲情的力量和家庭关系的重要性。 故事线： 1. 安琪被同学嘲笑后躲在树屋不愿上学。 2. “我” 爬上树屋与安琪交流，了解事情缘由。 3. “我” 列举过往照顾安琪的事情试图说服她。 4. 继续深入阐述家庭的本质，安琪态度开始转变。 5. 妈妈呼唤两人下来见新弟弟。 6. 安琪和 “我” 下树进屋，看到新弟弟，感受家庭的温暖与完整。 主旨升华句： 1. Family is not defined by blood or appearance, but by the love and care we share with each other.（家庭不是由血缘或外貌来定义的，而是由我们彼此分享的爱与关怀所决定的。） 2. In a real family, the bond of love is stronger than any difference, and it is this love that holds us together through thick and thin.（在一个真正的家庭中，爱的纽带比任何差异都要强大，正是这种爱让我们在艰难困苦中紧紧相依。） 3. The beauty of a family lies in the unique stories and experiences we create together, regardless of where we come from or what we look like.（家庭的美好在于我们共同创造的独特故事和经历，无论我们来自何处或长相如何。） 4. True family is a place where hearts are connected by love, and no one is left behind or made to feel different.（真正的家庭是一个心灵被爱连接的地方，没有人会被落下或感到自己与众不同。） 5. We may not be related by blood, but the love and memories we build as a family are what truly matter and will last a lifetime.（我们可能没有血缘关系，但作为一个家庭所建立的爱和回忆才是真正重要的，并且会持续一生。） 写作示范一 Then I continued with more facts. "When you had that nightmare and couldn't sleep, who stayed up all night with you? And who shared his favorite toys with you, even when he didn't want to at first? It was me, Angie. We've built a life full of memories, and that's what a family does. We support and love each other, no matter what others say. You're my sister, and that's the most important thing." Angie's eyes softened, and she nodded slowly. She was starting to understand that our family was real because of the love we had for one another. Angie and I were talking when Mom called, "Hey, guys, are you coming down to meet your little brother?" We climbed down the tree, hand in hand. As we entered the house, Angie walked quietly over to the crib. She looked at the baby with a newfound sense of love and acceptance. "He's perfect," she whispered. I stood beside her, feeling a warmth in my heart. Our family was growing, and with it, our love and understanding. We knew that no matter what the future held, we would face it together as a real family, bound by the unbreakable ties of love. 写作示范二 Then I continued with more facts. "Remember the time we got caught in the rain and had to run home, laughing all the way? Or when we made that secret fort in the backyard and shared our secrets? These are the things that make us a family. We've cried and laughed together, and that's what matters. Blood is just one small part; it's the love and loyalty that count." Angie sniffled and wiped her tears. She looked at me with a glimmer of hope in her eyes. "You're right," she said softly. "We are a family." Angie and I were talking when Mom called, "Hey, guys, are you coming down to meet your little brother?" We made our way down the tree and into the house. Angie's face lit up when she saw the baby. She reached out and gently stroked his cheek. "Welcome to our family," she murmured. I watched as the love in the room seemed to multiply. Our family was a beautiful mosaic of different pieces, held together by the glue of love. We had overcome the doubts and insecurities, and now, with the new addition, our family was even more complete. We were ready to write new chapters of our story, filled with love and acceptance for one another. Possible Version Para 1:Then I continued with more facts.“And who helped Mom bake and decorate that excellent cake for my last birthday?” I asked. Angie whispered that it was she because she was my sister. “And who stayed up late taking care of you every time you fell ill?” Angie pursed her lips and replied it was Mom. “And who built this tree house because you wanted one so badly, even after he’d hit his thumb with the hammer?” Angie giggled. “It’s a good thing that Daddy doesn’t build tree houses for a job.” I knew what she meant. The tree-house floor was full of gaps. Still, it was a great tree house built with love, just like our family. To my delight, I convinced her that our family was real because we loved each other. Para 2: Angie and I were talking when Mom called, “Hey, guys, are you coming down to meet your little brother?” Hearing that, I reached out my hand, asking Angie, “Shall we go now?” She took my hand and I pulled her to her feet. “When Mom and Dad brought you home for the first time, I felt proud and responsible as a big brother. The first time we see the new baby, we’ll know he’s part of our family. We’ll love him and take care of him.” “Even if he’s green?” Angie asked with a grin. “Even if,” I burst into laughter, letting down the tree-house ladder. Both of us were eager to greet our new family addition.  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$