读后续写 情暖诊所：人与犬的生命羁绊 讲义-2024届贵州省黔南州高三下学期模拟考试（二模）英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I took a job as a receptionist for a vet almost five decades ago. As a keen animal lover, I accepted the position on the condition that I wouldn’t have to assist with any wounded animals. I couldn’t bear to see any creature in pain. It killed me to see the poor animals suffer. At the end of my first week, we were closing the office for the day when a young man ran up to us holding a severely injured Doberman Pinscher puppy (杜宾犬) in his arms and begging us to save his life. The four-month-old pup had been hit by a car out of the blue. The doctor and I ran back into the operating room. The only place the skin was still attached to this poor little animal’s body was around one shoulder. It was on the edge of dying, with awful blood and frightening bones. The vet worked tirelessly for what seemed like hours, stitching (缝针) him back together again. I stood in the clinic’s crowded waiting room, praying that the little puppy would pull through. It turned out that was the easy part. The puppy had broken multiple bones, including his spine (脊椎). If he survived the next few days, we were quite sure he would never walk again. What followed called for great care and patience in the long term, but the vet was too occupied to handle the puppy. That day forever changed my life. After the operation, the vet mentored me, and I became his assistant in all things medical. One of my first jobs was to give that Doberman puppy daily physical therapy. With mixed feelings, I accepted whatever came to my way—to attend to the puppy until its recovery. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The following weeks witnessed I bonded with the Doberman in the clinic. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A year later, a huge Doberman broke loose and rushed toward me while I was walking home. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 近五十年前，身为动物爱好者的 “我” 应聘成为兽医诊所接待员，前提是不协助处理受伤动物，因见不得动物受苦。然而在第一周结束时，一位年轻人抱着一只重伤濒死的杜宾犬幼犬前来求救。兽医全力救治后，幼犬虽暂时保命，但因脊椎等多处骨折，未来康复艰难，且兽医无暇照料，“我” 在其指导下成为助手，负责幼犬的日常理疗，故事续写将展现 “我” 与幼犬的后续相处以及一年后的意外重逢，突出爱与坚持能创造生命奇迹的主题。 故事分析 · 伏笔与回应： i. 伏笔：“我” 因极度喜爱动物却又不忍见其痛苦，应聘时特意提出不协助处理受伤动物，这为后文 “我” 面对重伤幼犬时内心的挣扎以及最终的转变埋下伏笔。 回应：当看到幼犬重伤濒死的惨状，“我” 虽心痛但在兽医的行动影响下，克服了内心障碍，接受了照顾幼犬的任务，体现了 “我” 的善良和爱心的升华，推动情节发展，展现人性在面对生命困境时的抉择与成长。 ii. 伏笔：幼犬伤势极其严重，只有一处皮肤相连且多处骨折，生命垂危，为后续漫长艰难的治疗过程和不确定的康复结果做铺垫。 回应：“我” 在后续的日常理疗中付出诸多努力，经历了从最初的担忧无措到逐渐坚定信念的过程，幼犬也从毫无生机到慢慢有了好转迹象，回应了前文的伤势描写，突出了坚持与爱的力量在对抗艰难命运中的作用，使故事充满张力。 iii. 伏笔：兽医因忙碌无法照顾幼犬，这促使 “我” 从接待员转变为医疗助手，承担起照顾幼犬的责任，为 “我” 与幼犬之间建立深厚情感创造了条件。 回应：在照顾过程中，“我” 与幼犬相互陪伴，情感日益深厚，“我” 见证了幼犬的顽强生命力和成长，进一步强化了人与动物之间真挚的情感联系，丰富了故事的情感层次，为后续的重逢情节奠定基础。 iv. 伏笔：“我” 为幼犬取名并悉心照料，每天进行物理治疗，这一系列行为加深了 “我” 与幼犬之间的情感纽带，暗示着这种情感将在未来产生重要影响。 回应：一年后幼犬长成大狗，还能在街头认出 “我” 并热情相迎，体现了动物对人类的感恩和情感回馈，回应了前文的情感铺垫，使故事的情感线更加完整，突出了爱与付出的双向性和美好回报。 v. 伏笔：幼犬最初受伤严重，即使存活也可能无法行走，这给它的未来蒙上阴影，也让读者对其命运产生担忧。 回应：一年后它不仅健康成长，还能自由奔跑，与之前的预期形成鲜明对比，展现了生命的顽强和爱的奇迹力量，升华了故事的主题，给人以温暖和希望，使整个故事更加感人至深。 · 续写要点： 2. 第一段：The following weeks witnessed I bonded with the Doberman in the clinic. I named him Max. Every day, I spent hours gently massaging his legs and spine, talking to him softly as if he could understand me. His progress was slow, but I could see the determination in his eyes. Some days, he would try to move his little legs, and those small efforts filled me with hope. I brought him toys and treats, and he would wag his tail weakly in response. As time passed, Max grew stronger, and our bond deepened. 2. 第二段：A year later, a huge Doberman broke loose and rushed toward me while I was walking home. I was startled at first, but then I saw the familiar glint in his eyes. It was Max! He had grown into a magnificent dog. He leaped up and licked my face, his tail wagging furiously. I hugged him tightly, tears of joy streaming down my cheeks. Max had not only survived but thrived. From that day on, he became my constant companion, a symbol of the power of love and perseverance. We would go on many adventures together, and he was a living reminder that miracles can happen when we least expect them. · 情感线：起初，“我” 对受伤动物心怀怜悯却又因害怕痛苦而逃避；看到幼犬重伤时，心痛且担忧；在帮助幼犬康复过程中，从犹豫到坚定，充满希望与关怀；随着幼犬逐渐好转，“我” 与它建立深厚情感，感到欣慰与温暖；一年后重逢，喜悦、感动与惊喜交织，情感变化细腻深刻，突出了爱与生命的紧密相连以及人性的美好光辉，使故事充满温情与力量。 · 故事线： 4. “我” 应聘兽医诊所接待员，前提是不协助处理受伤动物。 4. 第一周结束时，年轻人送来重伤濒死的杜宾犬幼犬。 4. 兽医救治后，“我” 在其指导下负责幼犬理疗。 4. 几周里 “我” 与幼犬相处，它逐渐好转。 4. 一年后 “我” 回家路上，长大的幼犬认出并奔向 “我”。 4. 续写部分，幼犬成为 “我” 的伙伴，见证爱与奇迹。 · 主旨升华句： 5. Love is the most powerful healer, capable of mending even the most broken of bodies and spirits.（爱是最强大的治愈力量，能够修复哪怕是最破碎的身体和心灵。） 5. In the face of despair and hopelessness, a single act of kindness can kindle the spark of life and transform it into a blazing fire of miracles.（在绝望和无助面前，一个小小的善举可以点燃生命的火花，并将其转化为奇迹的熊熊烈火。） 5. The bond between humans and animals is a testament to the beauty of life, where love transcends species and creates unbreakable connections.（人与动物之间的纽带是生命之美的证明，在那里爱超越物种，创造出牢不可破的联系。） 5. When we open our hearts to the suffering of others, we not only give them a chance at life but also discover our own strength and capacity for love.（当我们向他人的痛苦敞开心扉时，我们不仅给了他们生存的机会，也发现了自己的力量和爱的能力。） 5. True miracles are born out of perseverance and love, reminding us that no obstacle is too great when the heart is determined.（真正的奇迹诞生于坚持和爱，提醒我们当内心坚定时，没有什么障碍是无法逾越的。） 写作示范 第一篇 The following weeks witnessed I bonded with the Doberman in the clinic. I called him Buddy. Each day, I would carefully perform the physical therapy, watching for any sign of improvement. At times, it seemed hopeless, but I refused to let go. Buddy's eyes would follow me around the room, and I could sense his trust in me growing. As the weeks turned into months, he started to show more movement. His once limp legs began to twitch, and he even tried to stand on his own a few times. These small victories filled me with a sense of accomplishment and strengthened my resolve to see him through. A year later, a huge Doberman broke loose and rushed toward me while I was walking home. My heart skipped a beat until I recognized those eyes. It was Buddy! He had grown into a strong and healthy dog. He bounded up to me, his body wiggling with excitement. I knelt down and hugged him, tears of happiness flowing freely. Buddy had defied the odds, and our connection had endured. From that moment on, he was by my side, a constant reminder of the power of love and determination. We walked together through the neighborhood, and he became a beloved part of my life, a living testament to the fact that with love, all things are possible. 第二篇 The following weeks witnessed I bonded with the Doberman in the clinic. I affectionately named him Hope. I dedicated myself to his care, spending countless hours by his side. I watched as he gradually regained his strength, little by little. His first attempts at wagging his tail were like rays of sunshine in my heart. As he grew stronger, he would nuzzle against me, seeking comfort and affection. Our bond was unbreakable, and I knew I would do anything to see him fully recovered. A year later, a huge Doberman broke loose and rushed toward me while I was walking home. I was taken aback for a moment, but then I saw the unique markings on his coat. It was Hope! He had transformed into a magnificent creature. He leaped into my arms, nearly knocking me over with his enthusiasm. I held him close, feeling an overwhelming sense of joy and gratitude. Hope had come back to me, a symbol of the triumph of love over adversity. We shared many adventures together, and he taught me that no matter how difficult the situation, love and perseverance can create the most beautiful of miracles. 参考答案 The following weeks witnessed I bonded with the Doberman in the clinic. Each day, I carefully massaged his broken limbs and gently stretched his spine, all while he lay quietly, trusting me with his recovery. Slowly but surely, he began to show signs of improvement. His eyes brightened, and he even wagged his tail when I entered the room. Weeks went by until one day, I felt this little fighter push pack ever so slightly. And he continued to push back until he could fully use his legs. I was so overjoyed and relieved to see his recovery. A year later, a huge Doberman broke loose and rushed toward me while I was walking home. My heart skipped a beat, but as the dog drew closer, I recognized him—it was the puppy that I had nurtured back to health. He stopped in front of me, tongue lolling out with a friendly smile. I petted him gently when I saw his tail wagging just like one year ago. Soon, he ran into the distance. I stood there, realizing that my love and care not just saved his life, but also earned me a lifelong friend. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$