读后续写 铁轨边的救赎：收养小英雄的温暖旅程 讲义-2024届贵州省黔东南州高三下学期二模考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Being a train driver, I must concentrate on my driving when working. And on that particular day, I was glad for my outstanding attention. From a distance, I spotted a small figure like a thin kid on the train tracks. Immediately, I rang the alarm, but no response. Observing carefully, I saw a boy lying on the tracks, unable to escape from my train, as his foot was stuck. I pulled the brakes with all my might as soon as I could. Luckily, the train stopped a few inches from the boy, who was crying loudly in fear. I approached him, asking how he felt and whether I could give a hand. After getting his permission, I cautiously checked how his foot was stuck in the tracks. And after a few pulls,  the boy's foot came out finally. Hugging him and making sure everything was okay, I asked whether I needed to call his parents. To my astonishment, the child said nothing, just looking at me with his tearful eyes. Considering it was dangerous to leave the boy alone, I decided to take him to my home after work. Arriving at my home, I introduced him to my wife, Amelia. She looked at the child in surprise for a while, but she calmed down quickly and asked whether the boy remembered her. The boy nodded. Amelia explained to me that she had just walked out of the supermarket with some bread and vegetables the other day, when a group of bad guys blocked her way. Just then, a little boy ran toward them and screamed to attract the police, which at last saved her. Here stood the brave boy. In the following hours, we chatted with each other, and thus we knew that the kid was named Tom and he was abandoned by his parents and became an orphan who had been alone on the streets for years. As we didn’t have any children, we were determined to adopt Tom. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I told Tom our decision, waiting for his answer. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, we opened our bedroom door and saw Tom standing there. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 身为火车司机的 “我”，在工作时发现铁轨上有个小男孩，他的脚被卡住。“我” 紧急刹车后救下了他，并将其带回了家。妻子 Amelia 认出他是曾救过自己的勇敢孩子。交谈后得知男孩叫 Tom，是被父母遗弃的孤儿，“我们” 决定收养他，故事在此处续写，展现 Tom 对 “我们” 收养决定的反应以及之后一家人的生活，突出善良和爱的传递能温暖人心、改变命运的主题。 故事分析 · 伏笔与回应： i. 伏笔：“我” 在铁轨上看到小男孩时，他的脚被卡住无法逃脱，营造出紧张危险的氛围，凸显情况危急。 回应：“我” 尽全力刹车并成功救下男孩，为后续故事发展奠定基础，展现 “我” 的善良和责任感，引出后续一系列情节，如带他回家、决定收养等，推动故事向前发展。 ii. 伏笔：Amelia 讲述被一群坏人拦住时，小男孩出现并尖叫吸引警察救了她，这一情节为小男孩的勇敢善良形象做铺垫，也解释了为什么 Amelia 对他有特别的情感。 回应：在得知小男孩是孤儿后，“我们” 决定收养他，不仅是因为同情，更是因为他之前的善举，使收养行为更加顺理成章，也升华了善良有报的主题，丰富了故事的情感层次。 iii. 伏笔：小男孩被父母遗弃成为孤儿，在街头流浪多年，这一背景为他渴望家庭的情感做了铺垫，也使 “我们” 的收养决定更具意义。 回应：当 “我们” 告知他收养决定时，他的惊喜和感动充分体现了他对家庭的渴望，回应了前文的伏笔，展现了亲情的珍贵，进一步突出了故事温暖人心的主题。 iv. 伏笔：“我” 发现小男孩后，不仅救下他，还考虑到他的安全带他回家，表现出 “我” 的善良和细心。 回应：这种善良的举动持续发展，最终促成了 “我们” 收养他的决定，也为后续家庭生活的温馨和睦埋下伏笔，使故事的情感发展连贯自然，强化了善良能带来幸福的主题。 v. 伏笔：在得知小男孩的经历和他救过 Amelia 后，“我们” 内心已经有了收养的想法，这为后文正式做出收养决定做了铺垫。 回应：“我们” 明确告知小男孩收养决定，他的积极回应开启了一家人幸福生活的新篇章，使故事的情节完整，主题得到深化，体现了爱与善良能创造美好家庭的寓意。 · 续写要点： 2. 第一段：I told Tom our decision, waiting for his answer. Tom's eyes widened in disbelief, and then filled with tears of gratitude. He stammered, "Really? You want me to be your child?" I nodded, and Amelia hugged him tightly. Tom sobbed, "I've always dreamed of having a family. Thank you!" We spent the rest of the evening talking about our future together, and Tom's face was lit up with hope and happiness. 2. 第二段：The next morning, we opened our bedroom door and saw Tom standing there. He had a big smile on his face and was holding a plate of freshly made sandwiches. "I wanted to make breakfast for my new family," he said shyly. We were deeply touched by his thoughtfulness. From that day on, Tom became an important part of our lives. He was a bright and loving child, and our home was filled with laughter and warmth. We knew that this was the beginning of a beautiful journey together, and we were grateful for the chance to give Tom the love and family he deserved. · 情感线：起初，“我” 看到男孩在铁轨上时紧张担忧；救下男孩后关心他的状况；妻子 Amelia 看到男孩时惊讶，后因认出他而感慨；得知男孩是孤儿后，“我们” 心生怜悯与同情；决定收养他时充满慈爱与期待；告知男孩决定后，他惊喜感动；第二天早上看到 Tom 准备早餐，一家人温馨幸福，情感变化丰富，突出了善良与爱的力量，使故事温暖感人。 · 故事线： 4. “我” 在铁轨上发现被卡住的男孩，紧急刹车救下他。 4. 带男孩回家，妻子 Amelia 认出他是救命恩人。 4. 交谈中得知男孩是孤儿，“我们” 决定收养他。 4. 告知男孩收养决定，他欣然接受。 4. 第二天早上男孩准备早餐，一家人温馨和睦。 4. 续写部分，一家人开启幸福生活。 · 主旨升华句： 5. Love has the power to heal the deepest wounds and create unbreakable bonds.（爱有力量治愈最深的创伤，建立牢不可破的纽带。） 5. In the darkest corners of life, a single act of kindness can be the light that leads to a new beginning.（在生命最黑暗的角落，一个小小的善举可以成为通向新起点的光。） 5. Sometimes, the most precious gifts come in the form of unexpected encounters and the choice to open our hearts.（有时，最珍贵的礼物以意想不到的相遇和敞开心扉的选择的形式出现。） 5. The kindness we show to others is like a seed planted in the soil of life, which will grow into a tree of love and shelter.（我们对他人表现出的善良就像播撒在生命土壤中的种子，它将成长为一棵爱与庇护的树。） 5. When we choose love and compassion, we not only change the lives of others but also find the true meaning and beauty of our own.（当我们选择爱与同情时，我们不仅改变了他人的生活，也找到了自己生活的真正意义和美好。） 写作示范 第一篇 I told Tom our decision, waiting for his answer. Tom stood there, stunned for a moment. Then, a huge smile spread across his face, and he lunged forward to hug us both. "Yes! I want to be part of your family more than anything," he exclaimed through his tears. We held him close, feeling a sense of joy and purpose. That evening, we talked about our hopes and dreams, and Tom shared his love for drawing and his desire to go to school. We promised to support him in every way. The next morning, we opened our bedroom door and saw Tom standing there. He was neatly dressed, and his hair was combed. In his hands, he held a small drawing he had made for us during the night. It showed our family, holding hands and smiling. "I made this for you," he said softly. We were deeply moved by his gesture. From that day on, Tom fit into our lives seamlessly. He was a source of laughter and love, and we were grateful for the chance to give him a home. We knew that our lives had been forever changed by this brave and kind-hearted boy, and we looked forward to a future filled with happiness and togetherness. 第二篇 I told Tom our decision, waiting for his answer. Tom's eyes welled up with tears, and he nodded vigorously. "I've always wanted a family. Thank you so much," he whispered. We could see the relief and happiness in his eyes. We spent the evening making plans for his room and discussing his favorite things. Tom told us about his adventures on the streets, and we listened attentively, sharing in his joys and sorrows. The next morning, we opened our bedroom door and saw Tom standing there. He had prepared a simple breakfast of toast and jam, with a glass of orange juice. "I wanted to do something nice for my new parents," he said with a shy smile. We sat down together and ate, enjoying the warmth of the moment. As the days passed, Tom thrived in our care. He started school and made friends quickly. Our home was filled with his laughter and the sound of his footsteps. We realized that by opening our hearts to Tom, we had received a precious gift in return. Our story was a testament to the power of love and kindness, and we hoped to share this message with the world. 参考答案 I told Tom our decision, waiting for his answer. Tom stared at me, with a mix of feelings — shock, delight, or something else. Amelia couldn’t wait to say in a soft and sweet voice, “Tom, I love you and I need you.” I could feel his struggle, so I smiled at him and hugged him gently. Knowing it was hard for him to accept the whole thing in a flash, I suggested a good night to think it over. The next morning, we opened our bedroom door and saw Tom standing there. Being somewhat embarrassed, he took one of my hands, “You won’t abandon me, right?” I nodded firmly and promised that we would treat him as our own, without cheating or abandonment. On hearing this, he hugged both of us tightly, saying affectionately, “Dad! Mom!” Later, he jumped and ran full of joy, “I have a new family! I have Dad and Mom! I am no longer an orphan.” You see, love can not only make someone a day, but also make strangers a new family. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$