读后续写 从疏远到亲密：兄弟在足球赛中的和解 讲义-2024届山西省太原市高三下学期第二次模拟考试英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My brother Matthew was becoming a teenager. Now everything was changing.He spent most of his time indoors talking on the phone. He refused to dive after the football for fear of getting his jeans dirty when we played catch. Yet I kept expecting to return to the past when I was his hero, his big brother and -his best friend. It was tough facing the fact that I was no longer the center of my brother's universe, and I worried about where I fit in his new life. I discovered the answer during Matthew's seventh-grade year, when he attended a summer camp and I served as a volunteer. He was usually the cenier of attention, blowing straw wrappers at all of his friends and showing off football skills. He was the kid everybody knew and loved. It was happy for him, But I barely saw my brother the whole week. I felt being cast aside like an old shoe. I was the one who had taught Manhew how to blow the wrappers of straws off and play football. I had been with him for every major moment in his life until now, and suddenly it was as if none of that mattered. Then, on the last evening, Matthew called me as I was leaving. "Chris! We're gonnia play football. You have to come!" I blinked in surprise. "Are you sure? Won’t embarrass you?" I asked. "It doesn't matter. Just play." he replied. smiling. I followed Matthew to the football field. When his cool new friends saw me. they laughed. "I thought you were getting a real player!" one of the guys shouted, eyes widening with disbelief. "He's my brother," was Marthew's reply. "And he's really good!" I wound up on the opposite team from Matthew. Still, I wanted to score a hundred touchdowns to prove to my brother that his faith in me wasn't misplaced. Unfortunately, I never got that chance. The guys on my team simply refused to pass the ball to an older man. Exactly they wouldn't let me anywhere near it。 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 That football game might have been the most frustrating one I'd ever played. "He’s my brother! " Matthew said proudly to all his friends. 文章大意 “我” 的弟弟 Matthew 进入青春期后，一切都发生了变化。他不再像从前那样与 “我” 亲密无间，而是把更多时间花在室内打电话上，也不再像以前一样尽情玩耍，这让 “我” 感到失落和担忧，不知道自己在他的新生活中处于何种位置。在 Matthew 七年级参加夏令营时，“我” 作为志愿者一同前往。期间，Matthew 成为众人焦点，与 “我” 相处时间甚少，直到最后一晚，他邀请 “我” 一起踢足球，故事在此处续写，讲述这场足球赛的经过以及它对 “我” 和 Matthew 关系的影响，突出亲情在成长与变化中的珍贵与坚韧。 故事分析 · 伏笔与回应： i. 伏笔：Matthew 进入青春期后行为的改变，如拒绝踢球怕弄脏牛仔裤，常待在室内打电话，暗示他与 “我” 的关系疏远。 回应：在夏令营中，他起初很少与 “我” 交流，专注于和新朋友玩耍，使 “我” 感到被冷落，进一步强化了这种疏远感；而最后邀请 “我” 踢球，则是关系转变的开始，回应了前文的疏远伏笔，展现亲情的纽带作用。 ii. 伏笔：“我” 一直期待回到过去与 Matthew 的亲密时光，为 “我” 在夏令营中对他的关注以及因他的忽视而产生的失落情绪做铺垫。 回应：足球赛中 “我” 努力表现，想证明自己，体现 “我” 对恢复亲密关系的渴望；比赛结束后 Matthew 的维护和关心，让 “我” 感受到亲情仍在，回应了 “我” 内心的期待，使故事情感更加完整。 iii. 伏笔：Matthew 在夏令营中是众人焦点，展示各种技能，这使他在朋友面前有了一定的形象和地位，也为他在足球赛中朋友对 “我” 的态度以及他的回应埋下伏笔。 回应：比赛中朋友嘲笑 “我”，而 Matthew 坚定地维护 “我”，表明他虽然有了新朋友，但依然重视与 “我” 的兄弟情，突出了亲情高于其他关系的主题，推动情节发展。 iv. 伏笔：“我” 教会 Matthew 吹吸管包装纸和踢足球等技能，这些曾经共同的回忆在他有了新朋友后被暂时搁置，凸显 “我” 的失落。 回应：在足球赛中，“我” 渴望通过这些技能表现自己，重新获得 Matthew 的认可；最终 Matthew 的肯定让这些回忆再次被重视，强化了亲情的珍贵，使故事前后呼应。 v. 伏笔：“我” 作为志愿者参加夏令营，有机会近距离观察 Matthew 的新生活，这为故事中 “我” 的情感变化和与 Matthew 的互动提供了场景和契机。 回应：在夏令营的一系列经历，包括被冷落和最后的足球赛，都因 “我” 的参与而发生，使故事围绕 “我” 与 Matthew 的关系展开，突出了亲情在成长过程中的重要性和复杂性。 · 续写要点： 2. 第一段：That football game might have been the most frustrating one I'd ever played. Despite my efforts, my team continued to ignore me, and I couldn't show Matthew what I was capable of. As the game ended, I walked off the field, feeling defeated and a bit embarrassed. But before I could dwell on it, Matthew came running over. He put his arm around my shoulder and said, "Don't worry about them. You're still the best brother ever." His words warmed my heart and made me realize that our bond was stronger than any momentary embarrassment. 2. 第二段："He's my brother!" Matthew said proudly to all his friends. Then he turned to me and said, "Let's go get some ice cream, just like we used to." As we walked away, I felt a sense of relief and happiness. That night, we talked and laughed like old times, sharing stories about our summers. From that day on, I understood that even though Matthew was growing up and his life was changing, our relationship as brothers would always remain special. We might have our differences and challenges, but the love we had for each other would endure. · 情感线：起初，“我” 因 Matthew 的成长变化而感到失落、担忧和被冷落；在足球赛中，因队友的忽视而感到沮丧和尴尬；比赛结束后，Matthew 的安慰和邀请让 “我” 感到温暖和欣慰；最后，通过交流和相处，“我” 重拾快乐，感受到亲情的珍贵与永恒，情感变化细腻，体现了亲情在经历波折后依然坚韧的主题。 · 故事线： 4. Matthew 进入青春期，与 “我” 关系疏远。 4. 参加夏令营，Matthew 受关注，“我” 被冷落。 4. 最后一晚 Matthew 邀请 “我” 踢足球。 4. 足球赛中 “我” 被队友忽视，感到沮丧。 4. 比赛结束，Matthew 安慰 “我”。 4. 续写部分，Matthew 带 “我” 吃冰淇淋，关系回暖。 · 主旨升华句： 5. Blood is thicker than water, and no amount of change or distance can truly sever the bond of family.（血浓于水，无论多少变化或距离都无法真正切断家庭的纽带。） 5. In the journey of life, the love of a sibling is a constant star that shines through the darkest times of change and growing apart.（在人生旅途中，兄弟姐妹的爱是一颗恒定的星，在变化和疏远的最黑暗时刻闪耀。） 5. True family love withstands the test of time and the winds of change, remaining steadfast and unyielding.（真正的亲情经得起时间的考验和变化的风浪，始终坚定不移。） 5. The ties that bind us as family are not easily broken; they are woven with threads of love, patience, and understanding.（将我们作为家庭联系在一起的纽带不容易断裂；它们是用爱、耐心和理解的线编织而成的。） 5. As we grow and change, the love we share with our family members is the anchor that keeps us grounded and reminds us of who we are and where we come from.（随着我们成长和变化，我们与家人分享的爱是让我们保持脚踏实地的锚，提醒我们自己是谁以及我们来自哪里。） 写作示范 第一篇 That football game might have been the most frustrating one I'd ever played. I felt like an outsider on my own team, chasing after a ball that never came my way. The jeers and laughter from the other boys stung, but what hurt most was the thought that I might be losing my connection with Matthew. As the final whistle blew, I trudged off the field, my head hung low. But then, Matthew jogged up to me, his face flushed with excitement. "Hey, Chris, don't let them get to you. You're still my favorite brother, and that game doesn't change anything." His words were like a balm to my wounded pride. "He's my brother!" Matthew said proudly to all his friends. He then grabbed my arm and led me towards the camp cafeteria. "Let's go grab a soda. I want to hear about what you've been up to." As we walked, he told me how much he had missed our old times together and how he was sorry if he had made me feel left out. That evening, we sat under the stars, sharing stories and laughing. I realized that our relationship was evolving, but the love between us was as strong as ever. We might not be as close as we once were, but we were still brothers, and that was something no one could take away. 第二篇 That football game might have been the most frustrating one I'd ever played. My teammates' indifference made me feel invisible, and I was sure Matthew would be disappointed. But as the game ended, Matthew rushed over to me. "Chris, I know it was tough out there, but thanks for playing. You mean more to me than any of these guys." His eyes were sincere, and I could see that he genuinely cared. We started walking back to the cabins, and he told me about his week at camp, sharing details he hadn't bothered with before. "He's my brother!" Matthew said proudly to all his friends. Then he turned to me and said, "Let's go to the lake. I want to show you something." We walked to the water's edge, and he pointed out the constellations he had learned about. As we lay on the grass, looking up at the sky, he said, "I know things have been different, but you'll always be my big brother. I love you." In that moment, I understood that growing up doesn't mean growing apart. Our bond was unbreakable, and we would face the changes of life together, with love and understanding as our guide. 【答案】    That football game might have been the most frustrating one I'd ever played.In spite of that，I ran up and down the field，trying my best to stay positive.The moment Matthew realized what was happening，he began to stick up for me.His support made a difference when one teammate eventually threw the ball in my direction.Seizing the opportunity，I ran with all my might.With a quick move，I got past the defender and scored a touchdown.Among the thunderous cheers，I distinctly heard Matthew's voice.   "He's my brother!"Matthew said proudly to all his friends.The words rang in my ears，dispelling all my disappointment.Hearing him saying that again in such a situation weighed a ton in me.Matthew ran over，his face beaming with pride，and gave me a high-five.At that moment，it dawned on me that my brother still saw me as his hero，which hadn't changed.From that night on，I no longer worried about losing him.Even though our relationship might change over time，I knew it would always remain strong. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$