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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Peter sat at the kitchen table, having breakfast. It had been another bad night for his baby sister, Lily, and his parents were arguing in the sitting room. He heard his mother mention Tom, an old man who lived in the forest. Peter often explored the forest and knew Mr. Tom was a kind herbalist (草药医生). Was it true that he could help Lily? Peter wouldn’t rest until he found it out. After breakfast, Peter immediately set off. It was a short walk from his home to the forest’s edge. Peter was so focused on his thoughts of his sister that he didn’t notice the strange crying sounds in the distance until he got close enough. He followed the sounds until they led him to a cave. A flashlight lit up suddenly in the cave, and Peter saw a little boy lying on the dirt-covered stone. Peter learned that the boy called Cliff came to this forest with his mother but ran off by himself. Cliff was injured and didn’t see his mother. Peter decided to take Cliff to Mr. Tom. When they saw Mr. Tom and told him everything, Mr. Tom treated the injury with a bandage (绷带) and helped contact Cliff’s mother over the radio. Peter moved closer to look at Cliff’s bandaged ankle and felt a sense of relief. Then Peter turned to Mr. Tom and said, “Mr. Tom, my baby sister is very sick. I overheard Mom mention you, so I came out here today to ask you for help...” Before Peter finished his words, Mr. Tom said, “I had tried to help, but your sister needed to be sent to a big hospital and a lot of money...” Peter realized his parents had argued because they couldn’t afford Lily’s treatment. Mr. Tom was trying to comfort Peter when someone knocked on the door. Mr. Tom opened it and saw a lady, who claimed herself as Cliff’s mother. “It’s you!” Mr. Tom shouted excitedly. “You’re a fan?” the lady said. “I came to this area to spend a holiday with my son. Thankfully, you have saved him. Where is he?” 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mr. Tom nodded and led the lady to her son. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, in his bedroom, Peter was woken up by a joyful scream. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 Peter 的妹妹 Lily 生病，父母为此争吵，Peter 听闻住在森林里的草药医生 Tom 或许能帮忙，便前往森林。途中他发现受伤的小男孩 Cliff，将其带到 Tom 处。Tom 为 Cliff 治疗并联系其母亲。Peter 向 Tom 求助妹妹之事，得知妹妹需去大医院且费用高昂。这时 Cliff 的母亲前来道谢，故事在此处续写，展现了这笔意外之财如何帮助 Peter 一家解决难题，突出了善良和助人终有回报的主题。 故事分析 · 伏笔与回应： i. 伏笔：Peter 听到父母提到 Tom，且知道他是草药医生，便决定去森林找他帮助妹妹。 回应：Peter 在森林中找到了 Tom，引出后续向他求助妹妹病情以及一系列故事发展，体现 Peter 对妹妹的关心和为解决家庭困境所做的努力。 ii. 伏笔：Peter 在森林中听到奇怪哭声，循声发现受伤的 Cliff，这使他决定带 Cliff 找 Tom 治疗。 回应：通过救助 Cliff，Peter 与 Tom 有了更多接触，也为 Cliff 的母亲出现做铺垫，同时展现 Peter 的善良，推动情节发展，使故事更加丰富。 iii. 伏笔：Tom 提到 Peter 的妹妹需送大医院且费用高，父母为此争吵，暗示家庭面临经济困境。 回应：Cliff 的母亲送来的钱解决了这一问题，回应了前文关于费用的伏笔，使故事发展合情合理，突出了善良带来转机的主题。 iv. 伏笔：Peter 探索过森林，熟悉路径，所以能顺利找到 Tom 的住所，为故事发展提供了合理性。 回应：在后续情节中，他在森林中的行动和决策都基于此，如及时带 Cliff 就医等，进一步强化了他勇敢、善良且有担当的形象。 v. 伏笔：Cliff 的母亲带着儿子来森林度假，为她在森林中出现并对 Tom 表达感激之情埋下伏笔。 回应：她的出现和慷慨解囊不仅解决了 Peter 妹妹的治疗费用问题，还升华了故事主题，即善良的行为会引发连锁反应，传递温暖与希望。 · 续写要点： 2. 第一段：Mr. Tom nodded and led the lady to her son. Cliff's mother thanked Mr. Tom profusely and offered to compensate him further. Mr. Tom, instead, told her about Peter's sister's situation. Touched by the story, the lady decided to donate the money she had intended to give Mr. Tom as a reward to help Peter's sister. Mr. Tom quickly contacted Peter's parents with the good news. 2. 第二段：The next morning, in his bedroom, Peter was woken up by a joyful scream. It was his mother, who rushed in to tell him that a kind stranger had paid for Lily's treatment and that she was going to get better. Peter was overjoyed and realized the power of kindness. He thanked Mr. Tom and later, when he met Cliff and his mother again, he thanked them as well. From then on, Peter was inspired to be kind to others, knowing that even a small act of kindness could make a big difference. · 情感线：Peter 最初因妹妹生病而忧心忡忡，带着希望寻找 Tom；在救助 Cliff 过程中展现出善良和责任感；得知妹妹治疗费用高昂时感到无助；当 Cliff 的母亲表示愿意帮忙时，又燃起希望；最后妹妹有了治疗机会，他满心欢喜且深受触动，立志传承善良，情感变化丰富，凸显了善良在困境中带来希望与力量的主题。 · 故事线： 4. Peter 的妹妹 Lily 生病，父母争吵，Peter 听闻 Tom 能帮忙。 4. Peter 前往森林，途中发现受伤的 Cliff。 4. Peter 带 Cliff 找 Tom 治疗，Tom 联系 Cliff 的母亲。 4. Peter 向 Tom 求助妹妹之事，得知费用难题。 4. Cliff 的母亲出现，Tom 告知其 Peter 妹妹情况。 4. 续写部分，Cliff 的母亲捐款，Lily 有了治疗机会。 · 主旨升华句： 5. Kindness is a boomerang that always returns to us, sometimes in the most unexpected ways.（善良是一个回旋镖，总会以最意想不到的方式回到我们身边。） 5. In the darkest of times, a single act of kindness can be the glimmer of hope that lights up the entire sky.（在最黑暗的时刻，一个小小的善举可能成为照亮整个天空的希望之光。） 5. When we reach out to help others, we are unknowingly opening the door to blessings that will come our way.（当我们伸出援手帮助他人时，不知不觉中也为自己开启了即将到来的祝福之门。） 5. The chain of kindness is unbreakable; once started, it has the power to transform lives and spread love far and wide.（善良的链条是牢不可破的；一旦开始，它就有能力改变生活，将爱广泛传播。） 5. Every act of kindness is a seed planted in the garden of life, which will surely bear the fruit of love and gratitude in due time.（每一个善举都是在生命花园里种下的一颗种子，在适当的时候一定会结出爱与感恩的果实。） 写作示范 第一篇 Mr. Tom nodded and led the lady to her son. As she saw Cliff, relief washed over her face. She hugged her son tightly and turned to Mr. Tom. "I can't thank you enough. You are a true hero." Mr. Tom smiled and said, "There is another child who needs help. Peter's sister is very sick, and his family can't afford the treatment." The lady's eyes softened. She reached into her purse and took out a thick wad of cash. "Please give this to Peter's parents. I hope it helps." Mr. Tom was astonished but gratefully accepted. He immediately called Peter's father and shared the good news. The next morning, in his bedroom, Peter was woken up by a joyful scream. It was his mother, crying tears of happiness. "Peter, a miracle has happened! A kind woman paid for Lily's treatment. She's going to be okay!" Peter's heart swelled with gratitude. He rushed to find Mr. Tom and thanked him. Later, when he met Cliff and his mother again, he thanked them personally. From that day on, Peter vowed to always be kind, knowing that kindness could change lives. He learned that in a world full of difficulties, a helping hand could be the most precious gift. 第二篇 Mr. Tom nodded and led the lady to her son. She rushed to Cliff's side, checking his injury and thanking Mr. Tom repeatedly. Mr. Tom took a deep breath and told her about Peter's sister. The lady listened intently and was deeply moved. "I have been blessed today, and I want to pass on that blessing." She handed Mr. Tom a check. "Please make sure this gets to Peter's family. I hope it eases their burden." Mr. Tom was overwhelmed by her kindness. He promised to deliver it promptly. The next morning, in his bedroom, Peter was woken up by a joyful scream. His mother burst into the room, her face beaming. "Peter, someone anonymous has paid for Lily's hospital bills. She can get the treatment she needs!" Peter couldn't believe it. He knew it was the result of the kindness he had witnessed. From then on, Peter made it his mission to spread kindness. He understood that a simple act of kindness could create a ripple effect, bringing hope and happiness to those in need. The experience taught him that even in the toughest situations, kindness was the key to unlocking a better future. One possible version: Mr. Tom nodded and led the lady to her son. The lady hurried to Cliff’s side and hugged him. Mr. Tom told the lady that it was Peter who took her injured son to him for treatment and help. The lady turned to Peter and expressed her gratitude. Peter looked at Cliff’s mother and felt she looked very familiar. However, he had no mood for further exploration. Peter thought his parents might get worried, so he said goodbye and headed home. Looking at Cliff and his mother, Mr. Tom knew he could do something for Peter. The next morning, in his bedroom, Peter was worken up by a joyful scream. He went downstairs and found his parents dancing excitedly. Peter asked what was going on. Peter’s mother rushed to hug Peter and his father lifted him in the air. Then his mother showed him a letter and said, “This is from a lady, who is a famous movie star and mentions you helped her so n yesterday. It says Mr. Tom told her about Lily’s illness. She’s offered to pay for Lily’s treatment. We’ll be able to take Lily to a big hospital!” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$