读后续写 情暖冬日：由泰迪熊开启的友谊故事 讲义-2024届辽宁省丹东市高三下学期总复习质量测试英语试卷（二）

阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文，续写词数应为150左右。 Seeing the picture of Kelly and I holding teddy bears with great joy, I couldn’t help recalling the sweet memory. A few years ago, before Christmas, my dad placed a large box in his grocery store for people to donate toys for children in need. Kelly, my best friend came over to help with the wrapping. Knowing that our efforts would bring joy to so many children during the holiday season, we thought it was a rewarding experience. As we worked, we shared moments of laughter and joy. After a short while, we had almost finished wrapping all the toys with just one little teddy bear left. Looking at it, I said, “It is the sweetest! It reminds me of my teddy bear. I sold all my little kid stuff at our garage sale when we moved. But now I’m really missing it!” Kelly came to see it and shared. “I have a sad teddy bear story too. When my little brother was a baby, I let him play with my Rosy Bear, but he refused to give her back. Ever.” After our chat, we knew both of us had a special story with a teddy bear. Right then, my dad entered the room and exclaimed. “Wow, great wrapping job! The kids are going to be thrilled when opening these presents.” “They definitely will. Maybe we both want to be the one who can get the teddy bear. I can just imagine how delighted a kid would be to unwrap this sweet teddy bear.” said Kelly. We laughed, gazing at the perfectly wrapped bears. My mom, joining in the laughter, suggested, “Why don’t you gather at our house next Saturday for a cookie-decorating party and exchange your Christmas gifts in advance? I’ll prepare the cookies for you.” “Good idea! I will enjoy the great joy of unwrapping the gift.” I said cheerfully. Hearing what we said, Kelly’s eyes lit up, saying, “Count me in!” “All right, girls,” said my dad. “We need to do the toy-loading work now. We have to drop off all these presents before five o’clock!” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: The next week, I was trying to figure out a perfect gift for the party. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Finally, the day of the party arrived. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：几年前圣诞节前，作者和好友 Kelly 在爸爸的杂货店帮忙包装捐赠给贫困儿童的玩具，剩下一只可爱的泰迪熊，两人都对其有特殊情感且都希望有孩子能得到它。妈妈提议下周六在作者家举办饼干装饰派对并提前交换圣诞礼物，之后作者和爸爸去送玩具，故事在此处展开续写。 5 处伏笔及续写中的回应 1. 伏笔：作者和 Kelly 都讲述了自己与泰迪熊的故事，且都对剩下的那只泰迪熊有特别的情感，为后续两人准备礼物时可能与泰迪熊相关做铺垫。 1. 回应：作者四处寻找与泰迪熊有关的礼物，最终买到一只复古的小熊钥匙链，呼应了前文对泰迪熊的情感，也使故事围绕泰迪熊这一元素展开，情节连贯且主题突出。 2. 伏笔：妈妈提议举办派对并交换礼物，引发了作者准备礼物的行动，推动故事发展。 2. 回应：作者用心准备礼物，在派对上与 Kelly 交换，这一情节顺理成章，同时也营造了温馨欢乐的氛围，丰富了故事内容，体现了朋友间的情谊。 3. 伏笔：作者提到卖了小时候的东西后想念泰迪熊，暗示她可能对泰迪熊相关物品有渴望，这为她寻找礼物提供了方向。 3. 回应：作者买到复古小熊钥匙链，满足了自己对泰迪熊的情感寄托，也让这份礼物更具意义，既符合人物心理，又使故事更加完整，强化了情感线。 4. 伏笔：作者和 Kelly 都期待派对上拆礼物的快乐，表现出她们对这次活动的重视和期待。 4. 回应：派对上两人交换礼物时的惊喜和开心，回应了之前的期待，将气氛推向高潮，展现了友谊的美好，使情感线更加丰富和饱满。 5. 伏笔：之前包装玩具的欢乐场景，营造了温馨和谐的氛围，为后续派对的欢乐气氛做了铺垫。 5. 回应：派对上大家一起装饰饼干、交换礼物，充满欢声笑语，延续了之前的温馨氛围，使整个故事的情感基调保持一致，突出了爱与分享的主题。 续写要点 情感线： · 第一段：作者在准备礼物的过程中，心情既兴奋又有些忐忑，兴奋的是即将和 Kelly 交换礼物，忐忑的是担心自己准备的礼物不够好，同时怀着对童年泰迪熊的怀念之情，努力寻找能让 Kelly 开心的礼物，这份用心体现了对友谊的珍视。 · 第二段：派对当天，作者起初有些紧张，当看到 Kelly 时又充满期待，在交换礼物环节，收到 Kelly 的礼物后，心中满是惊喜和感动，感受到了友谊的深厚和温暖，两人的情谊在这个过程中进一步升温，整个氛围温馨而幸福。 故事线： · 第一段：接下来的一周，我绞尽脑汁想为派对准备一份完美的礼物。我逛了好几家商店，都没有找到合适的。直到有一天，我在一家二手店的角落里发现了一个复古的小熊钥匙链，它看起来和我小时候的泰迪熊有几分相似。我立刻把它买了下来，精心包装好，期待着在派对上给 Kelly 一个惊喜。我想象着她看到礼物时的表情，心中充满了喜悦和期待。 · 第二段：终于，派对的日子到了。Kelly 早早地来到了我家，我们一起开心地装饰饼干。当交换礼物的时刻到来时，我紧张地把礼物递给 Kelly，她也笑着递给我一个包装精美的盒子。我打开一看，里面是一只手工缝制的小熊玩偶，和我们之前看到的那只捐赠的泰迪熊一样可爱。Kelly 说她知道我想念小时候的泰迪熊，所以特意做了这个送给我。我感动得热泪盈眶，紧紧地抱住了她。这个圣诞节，因为有这份真挚的友谊，变得格外温暖。 主旨升华句 1. True friendship is like a warm fire in the cold winter, always bringing comfort and happiness, and making every ordinary day shine with extraordinary meaning.（真正的友谊就像寒冬里的一团温暖火焰，总能带来慰藉和幸福，让每一个平凡的日子闪耀出非凡的意义。） 2. The beauty of giving lies not in the value of the gift, but in the love and thoughtfulness behind it. It is these intangible things that truly touch the heart and strengthen the bond of friendship.（给予的美好不在于礼物的价值，而在于背后的爱和体贴。正是这些无形的东西真正触动心灵，加强了友谊的纽带。） 3. In the simple act of exchanging gifts, we find the essence of Christmas - the spirit of love, sharing, and the joy of making others happy, which is the most precious gift we can give and receive.（在交换礼物这一简单行为中，我们找到了圣诞节的精髓 —— 爱、分享的精神以及让他人快乐的喜悦，这是我们能给予和收到的最珍贵的礼物。） 4. Sometimes, the things we hold dear from our childhood can inspire us to create new memories and deepen our relationships. It shows that the past is not just a memory, but a source of inspiration for the present and the future.（有时，我们童年珍视的东西可以激励我们创造新的回忆并加深人际关系。这表明过去不仅仅是一段记忆，更是现在和未来的灵感源泉。） 5. The warmth of friendship can fill the void left by lost childhood treasures. It teaches us that while things may come and go, the love and connection we share with our friends will always remain, making our lives richer and more meaningful.（友谊的温暖可以填补童年失去的珍宝所留下的空白。它教导我们，虽然事物可能来来去去，但我们与朋友分享的爱和联系将永远存在，使我们的生活更加丰富和有意义。） 写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: The next week, I was trying to figure out a perfect gift for the party. I rummaged through my room, looking for something special. Then I remembered the story Kelly told about her Rosy Bear. I decided to search for a similar teddy bear online. After hours of browsing, I finally found one that looked just like it. I ordered it immediately and waited anxiously for it to arrive. When it came, I wrapped it up with a big red bow and a handwritten note, expressing how much our friendship meant to me and how I hoped this bear would bring her some comfort and joy, just like the memories of her Rosy Bear. Paragraph 2: Finally, the day of the party arrived. Kelly walked in with a big smile on her face, holding a beautifully wrapped box. We spent the afternoon decorating cookies and chatting happily. When it was time to exchange gifts, my heart raced with excitement. I handed her the teddy bear, and her eyes widened in surprise and delight. She then gave me her gift, and inside was a scrapbook filled with pictures of us and the memories we had shared over the years. As we looked through it together, tears of happiness filled our eyes. This Christmas, through these simple gifts, we realized that the most precious things in life are the friendships we cherish and the love we share with each other. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: The next week, I was trying to figure out a perfect gift for the party. I thought about all the things Kelly and I had done together and what she might like. I decided to make her a personalized photo frame with pictures of us and the toys we had wrapped. I spent days cutting and pasting the photos, decorating the frame with glitter and stickers. I also added a small charm in the shape of a teddy bear to the corner. While making it, I thought about how lucky I was to have such a great friend. I couldn't wait to see her reaction when she received my gift. Paragraph 2: Finally, the day of the party arrived. The house was filled with the smell of freshly baked cookies. Kelly arrived, and we hugged each other tightly. As we decorated the cookies, we laughed and shared stories. When it was time to exchange gifts, I handed her the photo frame. She gasped with delight and gave me a warm hug. Then she gave me her gift, which was a knitted scarf in my favorite color. She said she had spent weeks making it for me. I was deeply touched. That day, as we sat together, enjoying the cookies and our gifts, I understood that the best gifts are the ones that come from the heart, and that our friendship was the greatest gift of all. 参考答案  The next week, I was trying to figure out a perfect gift for the party. Hoping to bring great joy and surprise to Kelly, I searched for something unique. One day, walking home from school, I saw it in the shop window. It is a teddy bear exactly like the one I’d been wrapping. I quickly ran into the store, grabbed the bear, and brought it straight to the checkout counter. Upon returning home, I immediately started wrapping it up. I couldn’t wait to feel the joy and excitement when Kelly unwrapped this special gift. I imagined her face lighting up with surprise and delight. Finally, the day of the party arrived. After having fun decorating the cookies, we began the most exciting moment. We exchanged our gifts and were ready to open the beautifully wrapped boxes. My heart was racing as Kelly did that. Meanwhile, I unwrapped my gift from Kelly, only to find…a teddy bear! Much to my surprise, we had gotten the same brilliant idea. At the sight of the teddy bears, Kelly and I hugged each other tightly, grateful for the joy we had brought to each other. From that day on, the teddy bear became a cherished memory of us. It reminds us of the laughter and love we shared, and it always holds a special place in our hearts. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$