读后续写 意外邂逅独角兽：一场关于成长的旅程 讲义-2024届辽宁省鞍山市高三下学期第二次质量监测英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150左右。 My name is Fauna, but Mom and Dad sometimes call me Magpie, since I talk a lot. They call me “animal magnet,” too; because animals like me. I don’t mind at all because I like them, too. In fact, what I really, really want is a pet of my own. My dad has a pet fish, and I like it a lot — but I would still like a pet that’s all mine. “Please? I asked my parents.“Pretty please, with cherries and chocolate and whipped cream on top?” “We’ll see!” “I’ll walk it and feed it and brush it.... well, unless it has scales or something. Then I’ll polish them real nice.” “We’ll see.” Finally, though, “we’ll see” was upgraded to “soon.” “Let’s do some research,” said Dad, “and see what kind of pet is best for you.” “And keep your eyes peeled,” said Mom. “You never know when an opportunity will come along.” One did come along. I was on my way home from school when I saw a unicorn (独角兽) standing in back of Baker Trembly’s shop. He was nibbling stale biscuits out of the trash can. I thought he might be a wild unicorn come into town, but he trotted (小跑) right up to me when I held out the apple I had in my backpack, left over from lunch. “It followed me home!” I told my parents, after I managed to lead the unicorn to our front gate. “Can I keep it?” “I hope you were careful,” said my dad with a frown. “Unicorns can be dangerous.” “Not this one! He’s very sweet. And he’s just what I want!. I can keep him. in the garden.” “He does look sweet,” said my mom. “Let’s check his tags (标牌).” Tags? I hadn’t even noticed his thin silver collar, I’d been so excited. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 There was a little tag on it, with a phone number. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “I’ve had him since he was little,” Sari said. “We’ve never been apart.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：Fauna 非常想要一个属于自己的宠物，父母说要做些研究来确定哪种宠物适合她，还让她留意机会。一天 Fauna 在放学回家路上看到一只独角兽在吃 Baker Trembly 商店后面垃圾桶里的饼干，她用午餐剩下的苹果把独角兽引到了自家前门，请求父母让她养这只独角兽，父母发现独角兽戴着有电话号码的银项圈，故事由此续写。 5 处伏笔及续写中的回应 1. 伏笔：Fauna 一直渴望有一个属于自己的宠物，这为她发现独角兽后极力想留下它做铺垫。 1. 回应：当得知独角兽可能有主人时，Fauna 内心从期待转为失落，但最终在与独角兽主人的交流中学会了理解和成全，体现了她在追求宠物过程中的成长，也呼应了她对宠物的渴望，使情感线更加丰富。 2. 伏笔：父母提到要做研究确定适合 Fauna 的宠物，暗示宠物的选择并非随意，需要考虑多方面因素，这为独角兽有主人且需要归还这一情节做了伏笔。 2. 回应：独角兽有主人这一事实符合父母所说的要慎重选择宠物的理念，同时也教育了 Fauna 不是所有喜欢的动物都能成为自己的宠物，推动了故事的发展和主题的深化。 3. 伏笔：Fauna 用苹果轻易地将独角兽引到自家前门，显示出独角兽对食物的需求和它可能不太怕人的性格，这为后面独角兽与主人的关系以及它走失的原因做了暗示。 3. 回应：独角兽主人 Sari 提到独角兽是因为被食物吸引而走失，与前文 Fauna 用苹果引它的情节相呼应，使故事逻辑更加连贯，也解释了独角兽出现在这里的原因，丰富了故事细节。 4. 伏笔：Fauna 一开始没有注意到独角兽的银项圈，体现了她的兴奋和粗心，同时也为后续发现项圈上的电话号码以及联系主人的情节设置了悬念。 4. 回应：发现电话号码后联系主人，推动了故事向归还独角兽的方向发展，解开了之前独角兽身份不明的悬念，使故事节奏紧凑，情节跌宕起伏。 5. 伏笔：父母对独角兽的态度比较谨慎，担心其危险性，这为后面他们支持 Fauna 归还独角兽做了铺垫，也体现了父母在教育孩子过程中的理性和责任感。 5. 回应：父母在整个过程中引导 Fauna 做出正确的选择，帮助她理解宠物所有权和责任的重要性，使故事不仅是关于宠物的故事，更是 Fauna 成长的故事，深化了文章的内涵和教育意义。 续写要点 情感线： · 第一段：Fauna 看到项圈上的电话号码时，心情瞬间变得复杂，既有些失望，因为可能无法留下独角兽，又有些好奇和担忧，担心独角兽的主人会责怪它乱跑。她怀着忐忑的心情拨打了电话，等待主人的到来，此时她对独角兽的喜爱和不舍愈发强烈，但也知道应该做正确的事。 · 第二段：当 Sari 说她和独角兽从未分开过时，Fauna 看到了他们之间深厚的感情，心中的不舍逐渐转化为理解和成全。虽然难过，但她也为独角兽能回到主人身边而感到欣慰，感受到了一种超越个人喜爱的大爱，完成了从单纯的渴望拥有到学会放手和祝福的情感升华。 故事线： · 第一段：There was a little tag on it, with a phone number. I took a deep breath and dialed the number with trembling hands. A woman named Sari answered the phone. I told her I had found her unicorn. She sounded very relieved and said she would come right over. While we waited, I stroked the unicorn's mane and whispered to it that its owner was coming. The unicorn seemed to understand and nuzzled my hand. When Sari arrived, she ran up to the unicorn and hugged it tightly. · 第二段：“I’ve had him since he was little,” Sari said. “We’ve never been apart.” She thanked me for taking care of him and told me how he had gotten lost while following the smell of food. I felt a pang of sadness knowing I couldn't keep him, but seeing the joy on Sari's face made me realize it was the right thing to do. As Sari led the unicorn away, I waved goodbye with a smile, even though there were tears in my eyes. I knew that one day, I would find the perfect pet for me, and it would be mine in the right way. 主旨升华句 1. True love is not about possession, but about the ability to let go when it's necessary, allowing the ones we care about to be where they truly belong.（真正的爱不是占有，而是在必要时放手，让我们所关心的人回到他们真正属于的地方。） 2. Sometimes, the most difficult choices we make, like giving up something we desire, are the ones that teach us the greatest lessons about responsibility and kindness.（有时，我们做出的最艰难的选择，比如放弃我们渴望的东西，正是那些教会我们关于责任和善良的最重要课程的选择。） 3. In the journey of life, we may encounter many temptations, but it is our ability to make the right decisions, even when it hurts, that defines our character and shapes our future.（在人生的旅途中，我们可能会遇到许多诱惑，但正是我们即使在痛苦时也能做出正确决定的能力，定义了我们的性格并塑造了我们的未来。） 4. The path to maturity is often paved with the bittersweet experiences of letting go. It is through these acts that we learn to cherish the things that are truly meant for us and grow into better versions of ourselves.（通往成熟的道路往往是由放手的苦乐参半的经历铺就的。正是通过这些行为，我们学会珍惜真正属于我们的东西，并成长为更好的自己。） 5. Love and kindness extend beyond our own desires. When we choose to do what's right for others, we not only brighten their lives but also discover the beauty and strength within ourselves.（爱和善良超越了我们自己的欲望。当我们选择为他人做正确的事情时，我们不仅照亮了他们的生活，也发现了自己内心的美丽和力量。） 写作示范 第一篇 There was a little tag on it, with a phone number. My heart sank a little as I realized the unicorn probably had an owner. I showed the tag to my parents, and we decided to call the number. A woman answered, and she sounded frantic. She said her unicorn had gone missing and she had been searching everywhere. I told her where we were, and she said she'd be right there. While we waited, I gave the unicorn some more apples and talked to it softly. I told it that its owner was coming and that it had been very brave. When the woman arrived, she rushed over to the unicorn and hugged it tightly. “I’ve had him since he was little,” Sari said. “We’ve never been apart.” She thanked me profusely for taking care of him and told me how he had managed to slip away. I felt a bit sad that I couldn't keep the unicorn, but seeing the happiness on Sari's face made me feel better. My parents put their arms around me and told me that even though I couldn't have this unicorn, there would be other opportunities for me to get a pet. I nodded, realizing that sometimes, doing the right thing means letting go of what we want. And I knew that when the time was right, I would find the perfect pet that was meant for me. 第二篇 There was a little tag on it, with a phone number. I was hesitant to call at first, fearing that I would lose the chance to keep the unicorn. But my parents encouraged me to do the right thing. I dialed the number, and a lady named Sari picked up. She was overjoyed to hear that I had found her unicorn. She told me that he was very precious to her and that she had been worried sick. As we waited for her to arrive, I sat with the unicorn, petting it gently. When Sari showed up, she had tears in her eyes. “I’ve had him since he was little,” Sari said. “We’ve never been apart.” She explained how the unicorn had gotten out by accident. I could see the strong bond between them. Although it was hard, I knew I had to give the unicorn back. Sari thanked me again and again, and she even gave me a small unicorn charm as a token of her gratitude. As they walked away, I watched with a mixture of sadness and happiness. I learned that sometimes, the things we love the most aren't always meant to be ours, but that doesn't mean we can't find joy in doing the right thing. 【答案】 Paragraph 1: There was a little tag on it, with a phone number. “Do we have to call?” I said. “Can’t we pretend we didn’t see the tag?” “Think how you would feel,” said Dad, “if it was your unicorn that was lost.” We called the number. Soon after that a little girl about my age came to the house with her dad. The girl — Sari, her name was — almost cried, she was so happy. Paragraph 2: “I’ve had him since he was little,” Sari said.“We’ve never been apart.” But this morning something scared him, and he jumped over the fence. I guess he couldn’t find his way home. Thank you for finding him. I’m so happy!” Well, I wasn’t happy, even though Sari said I could visit him anytime I wanted. The next day Dad took me to a pet shop and we did buy a nice young unicorn. “That is for how honest you are and how much you like it.” said Dad. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$