读后续写 患难唤真情：我与脑瘫哥哥的和解之路 讲义-2024届河北省唐山市高三下学期二模考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 1 . have an older brother who suffers from cerebral palsy (脑瘫). For as long as I can remember, his struggles with basic movements and speech caused me a deep sense of embarrassment, I was afraid of the stares and the whispered questions from others, so I kept my distance, thinking it would protect me from their judgment. This avoidance became a habit, a way to protect myself from the discomfort I felt over something I didn't fully understand.Eventually, it became a barrier I built not around my heart, but around my life. Even when I kept my distance, my brother would often offer me warm smiles, providing comfort and help during my difficult moments. There were times when I directed my frustrations towards him, perhaps because he was an easy target or because I hated his existence. His reactions, however, often took the form of silent understanding. He wouldn't demand explanations for my behavior. Instead, he might reach out with a gentle gesture -- a touch, a smile,or simply his presence-reminding me that, despite my unnecessary outbursts, I was not alone. The more he cared about me, the more I hated him. I believed he brought me shame,disgrace, and embarrassment. How I wished to stay away from him! But I had to choose a university in our city in order to see my ill mother when convenient. My brother, however,would prepare meals and have them delivered to my school, each time attaching a note filled with concern, asking why I hadn't come home, if I was unwell, or if something was wrong. After my graduation and the loss of my mother, I decided to distance myself from my city and, more significantly, from my brother, to seek a fresh start in a different city. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右；。 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1 : I was in my own world in the city when I was badly ill with COVID-19 and had nobody to turn to. Paragraph 2: I returned to my city with a newfound purpose. 文章大意：作者的哥哥患有脑瘫，作者因害怕他人的目光和议论而疏远哥哥，甚至对哥哥态度恶劣，但哥哥一直默默关心作者。作者为了离开哥哥去了别的城市，在那里感染新冠无人照顾。 5 处伏笔及续写中的回应 1. 伏笔：作者哥哥虽患有脑瘫，却总是在作者困难时给予温暖微笑、关心和帮助，如送饭菜并附纸条询问作者情况，这为后文哥哥在作者患新冠时的帮助埋下伏笔。 1. 回应：作者生病无人照顾时，哥哥得知后不顾自身困难赶来照顾，体现了哥哥对作者无私且深沉的爱，与前文哥哥的关心行为相呼应，让作者开始重新审视对哥哥的感情和态度。 2. 伏笔：作者对哥哥的疏远和恶劣态度，是因为觉得哥哥给自己带来羞耻和尴尬，为后面作者的内心转变做铺垫。 2. 回应：生病期间哥哥的悉心照料使作者内心产生愧疚和悔恨，意识到自己以前的错误，从而促使其态度转变，情感从厌恶到愧疚，推动了故事的情感发展和情节转折。 3. 伏笔：作者为了离开哥哥选择在本市上大学，毕业后又去外市寻求新开始，突出了作者对哥哥的逃避心理。 3. 回应：生病这一经历让作者决定回到本市，打破了之前一直逃避的状态，使故事的发展有了转折，回到本市也为后续与哥哥关系的修复和重新相处提供了可能。 4. 伏笔：作者提到母亲生病，这暗示了家庭的不幸和哥哥承担的责任，也从侧面反映出哥哥的善良和坚韧。 4. 回应：母亲去世后，哥哥依然坚守对作者的关爱，进一步凸显了哥哥的美好品质，也让作者在经历种种后更深刻地认识到哥哥的可贵，有助于作者情感的转变和故事主旨的升华。 5. 伏笔：作者在回忆中多次提到哥哥的无声理解和包容，这为后文作者认识到自己的错误以及两人关系的改善奠定了基础。 5. 回应：生病时作者回想起这些，更加感到愧疚，也更容易接受哥哥的照顾和情感上的靠近，使得两人关系的转变更加自然流畅，同时也体现了情感的力量和人性的温暖在故事中的作用。 续写要点 情感线： · 第一段：作者起初感到孤独、无助和绝望，在患病的痛苦中思念家乡和亲人，对自己曾经疏远哥哥的行为开始有了一丝悔意，在哥哥赶来照顾后，内心充满了愧疚和感动，同时也有对哥哥的感激和重新认识。 · 第二段：作者怀着愧疚、感恩和弥补的心情回到城市，决心改变过去的态度，用爱和关怀去对待哥哥，弥补曾经的过错，内心坚定且充满温情，对未来与哥哥的相处充满期待和希望，完成了从逃避到面对、从厌恶到关爱的情感转变。 故事线： · 第一段：作者在异地独自与新冠病毒抗争，病情严重时孤立无援，身心俱疲。在绝望中，作者联系了家乡的一位熟人，熟人告知了哥哥。哥哥心急如焚，不顾路途遥远和自身不便，历经波折赶到作者身边，悉心照料作者的饮食起居，陪伴作者度过了艰难的隔离期，在哥哥的照顾下，作者逐渐康复。 · 第二段：康复后的作者深刻反思了自己过去的行为，决定回到家乡。回到城市后，作者第一时间找到哥哥，紧紧地抱住他，泪流满面地向他道歉，表达了自己的悔恨和想要弥补的决心。此后，作者每天都陪伴在哥哥身边，陪他聊天、散步，帮助他进行康复训练，两人的关系变得亲密无间，共同度过了许多温暖的时光，作者也真正懂得了亲情的珍贵和无价，完成了自我救赎和成长。 主旨升华句 1. Love is not always about grand gestures; sometimes, it's the silent and persistent care that truly touches the heart and has the power to heal the deepest wounds of our souls.（爱并不总是宏大的姿态；有时，默默且持久的关怀才能真正触动心灵，拥有治愈我们灵魂深处创伤的力量。） 2. In the face of life's trials, we often realize that the ones we pushed away might be the very ones who hold the key to our redemption and the source of the purest love we've ever known.（在生活的考验面前，我们常常意识到，那些被我们推开的人可能正是我们救赎的关键，以及我们所知道的最纯粹的爱的源泉。） 3. True strength lies not in running away from our problems but in facing them with courage and humility, and learning to cherish the love that has always been there, waiting for us to open our eyes and our hearts.（真正的力量不在于逃避问题，而在于勇敢而谦逊地面对它们，并学会珍惜一直存在、等待我们睁开双眼和敞开心扉的爱。） 4. The journey of self-discovery often begins with the recognition of our mistakes and the willingness to make amends. It is through these acts of repentance that we find the path to forgiveness and the restoration of the most precious relationships in our lives.（自我发现的旅程往往始于认识到自己的错误并愿意弥补。正是通过这些忏悔行为，我们找到了通往宽恕的道路，以及恢复我们生活中最珍贵的关系的方法。） 5. We may try to outrun our past and the people we think hold us back, but in the end, it is the ties of blood and the power of unconditional love that will draw us back, teaching us the true meaning of family and the value of every life, no matter how different or difficult it may seem.（我们可能试图逃离过去和那些我们认为阻碍我们的人，但最终，血缘的纽带和无条件的爱的力量会把我们拉回来，教导我们家庭的真正意义以及每一个生命的价值，无论它看起来多么不同或艰难。） 写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: I was in my own world in the city when I was badly ill with COVID-19 and had nobody to turn to. Lying alone in my small apartment, the fever made my head spin and my body ache. I felt so helpless and scared. In my delirium, I thought of my brother and the warm meals he used to send me. For the first time, I regretted pushing him away. I managed to call an old neighbor back home, who informed my brother. Without hesitation, my brother traveled all the way to the city to take care of me. He cooked nutritious soups, made sure I took my medicine on time, and sat by my bedside, offering me comfort with his silent presence. Seeing his worried face and feeling his gentle touch, my heart was filled with guilt and shame. Paragraph 2: I returned to my city with a newfound purpose. I realized how wrong I had been to judge and avoid my brother. I was determined to make up for all the lost time and love. As soon as I got back, I went straight to my brother's place. I hugged him tightly and apologized with tears in my eyes. From that day on, I became his constant companion. We went for walks in the park, watched movies together, and I helped him with his daily exercises. Our relationship grew stronger than ever, and I learned that love and acceptance are the most precious gifts we can give to our family. I no longer cared about what others might think; all that mattered was the bond I had with my brother and the love that had been there all along, waiting for me to embrace it. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: I was in my own world in the city when I was badly ill with COVID-19 and had nobody to turn to. I was barely able to get out of bed to fetch water or food. Fear and loneliness engulfed me as I struggled to breathe. In that moment of despair, I remembered all the times my brother had been there for me, despite my coldness towards him. I wondered if he would still care. Miraculously, he did. He somehow managed to find out about my situation and rushed to my side. He took care of me like a mother hen, never complaining about the inconvenience or the risk. His kindness and selflessness broke through the walls I had built around my heart, and I started to see him in a new light. Paragraph 2: I returned to my city with a newfound purpose. I came back to rebuild the relationship with my brother and to show him the love and respect he deserved. I moved in with him and dedicated myself to his well-being. I accompanied him to his therapy sessions and cheered him on every step of the way. I introduced him to my friends and was proud to have him by my side. The stares and whispers from others no longer bothered me because I knew the true value of my brother's love. I had learned that family is not defined by perfection but by the unwavering support and love we offer each other, and I was determined to cherish and protect this bond for the rest of my life. 【答案】 I was in my own world in the city when I was badly ill with COVID-19 and had nobody to turn to.Alone in my apartment，my health deteriorated rapidly.It was then，in the midst of my desperation，that my brother's familiar face appeared in my mind.His silent understanding and unwavering support came flooding back to me.I felt ashamed of my previous avoidance and judgment.It was then I realized that my brother was my true strength，not a source of shame.I picked up the phone and dialed his number，my voice weak but determined. I returned to my city with a newfound purpose.My brother greeted me with a warm hug and a smile that seemed to brighten my entire world.I apologized for my past actions and told him how much I needed him.He simply nodded，his eyes filled with love and understanding.From then on，I made it my mission to be there for him，to support him as he had always done for me.Our bond grew stronger，and I learned to appreciate and cherish our unique relationship.I realized that true strength lies in the unwavering support of those who love us unconditionally，not in the judgment of others. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$