读后续写 无家之人的善举与幼犬的新生 讲义-2024届福建省莆田市高三下学期三模考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A powerful storm erupted in North Carolina, causing many roads to be severely damaged and some houses to collapse. In the aftermath of the terrible storm, an animal protection society discovered a surprise at their booster that both broke and warmed their hearts. The surprise was that a group of baby dogs were left with a sad note, revealing a tale of sympathy in the hardship. The note, written by a homeless man, explained that the heartbreaking circumstances led him to adopt the baby dogs. He regularly fed their mother dog, but he discovered that she had unfortunately been hit by a car. Despite his own homelessness, he had provided the baby dogs with a chance to have a better life. However, the storm destroyed his temporary residence, and he had to leave them at the animal protection society’s doorstep with a heartfelt request for help. The note read, “Please help! I was sad to find a local homeless dog that I used to feed when I could, dead by the road. What made me sadder was that her babies were left homeless. I’m sorry for leaving them like this, but I am also homeless and cannot afford to look after them. My heart breaks for them and their mother. I just want them to be taken good care of. I know that it’s wrong to abandon them. But please don’t think poorly of me. I really don t have any other choice. Sincerely, a homeless man, George.” David, who was in charge of the animal protection society, posted the story, on the social media pages, expressing gratitude to the homeless man and admiration for his selfless act. David assured nim that his kindness, had not gone unnoticed and promised to honor his gesture by offering the baby dogs the love and care they would deserve. David also gave an invitation to him which read, “If you would like, please come to the animal protection society to see how the baby dogs will live, and I think that they will be glad to see you again!” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A few days later, George, the homeless man, walked into the animal protection society. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then George and David started looking for new homes for the baby dogs. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：北卡罗来纳州的一场风暴后，动物保护协会收到一个无家可归的人乔治留下的一窝小狗和一张令人心碎的纸条。纸条讲述了乔治虽自身处境艰难，但在狗妈妈被车撞死后收养了小狗，后因风暴失去住所才无奈将小狗送来求助。动物保护协会的负责人大卫在社交媒体上发布了这个故事，表达了对乔治的感谢和敬意，并邀请他来看望小狗。 5 处伏笔及续写中的回应 1. 伏笔：乔治留下小狗时的愧疚与无奈。 1. 回应：乔治走进动物保护协会时，依然带着歉意，但看到小狗被照顾得很好，内心稍感宽慰，同时也为自己当初的决定感到庆幸，回应了他之前的复杂心情和艰难抉择。 2. 伏笔：大卫对乔治的感激与承诺。 2. 回应：乔治到来后，大卫热情接待，向他详细介绍小狗的情况，让乔治感受到自己的善举得到了尊重和重视，践行了大卫之前在社交媒体上表达的感恩和照顾小狗的承诺。 3. 伏笔：乔治对小狗的不舍。 3. 回应：在为小狗找新家的过程中，乔治积极参与，认真筛选合适的领养人，他对小狗的这份不舍转化为对它们未来生活的关心，确保小狗能找到真正爱它们的家，延续了他对小狗的情感。 4. 伏笔：小狗的悲惨身世。 4. 回应：新的领养家庭在了解小狗的故事后，更加珍惜和疼爱它们，给予小狗温暖、安全的生活环境，使小狗从不幸的开端走向幸福的未来，改变了小狗的命运轨迹，与之前的悲惨身世形成对比。 5. 伏笔：大卫邀请乔治来看望小狗。 5. 回应：乔治不仅来看望小狗，还与大卫一起为小狗的未来努力，这一情节推动了故事的发展，使两人因小狗结缘，共同完成一件充满爱心的事情，升华了故事中人与人、人与动物之间的情感联系。 续写要点 情感线： · 第一段：乔治起初带着忐忑与愧疚走进动物保护协会，看到小狗健康活泼后，内心满是欣慰与感动，同时对大卫和工作人员充满感激。大卫则热情友好地接待乔治，两人之间弥漫着温暖与善意，之前因小狗产生的情感纽带更加牢固。 · 第二段：乔治和大卫怀着对小狗的关爱和责任感，积极投入到为小狗寻找新家的工作中。他们认真对待每一个潜在的领养家庭，希望小狗能得到最好的照顾，情感专注且坚定，充满了对小狗未来幸福生活的期待。 故事线： · 第一段：乔治怀着复杂的心情走进动物保护协会，大卫热情地迎接他，并带他去看小狗。小狗们看到乔治后兴奋地跑过来，乔治眼中泛起泪花，他为小狗们现在的良好状态向大卫道谢。大卫邀请乔治参与照顾小狗一段时间，乔治欣然答应。 · 第二段：乔治和大卫通过各种渠道发布小狗的领养信息，仔细筛选领养家庭。他们面试了许多有意愿的人，询问他们的生活环境、养宠经验和对宠物的态度等。最终，为每只小狗都找到了合适的新家。在送小狗离开时，乔治虽然不舍，但也为它们的未来感到高兴，他与大卫约定以后会常来看望这些小狗。 主旨升华句 1. In the darkest of times, a glimmer of kindness can light the way for those in need, and when we come together to care, we create a tapestry of love that mends even the most broken hearts.（在最黑暗的时刻，一丝善意能为需要的人照亮道路，当我们共同关爱时，我们编织出的爱之锦缎能抚慰最破碎的心。） 2. True humanity shines not in the absence of struggle, but in the choice to show compassion despite our own hardships. Let us be the beacons of hope in a world that often seems cold and unforgiving.（真正的人性不是在没有挣扎时闪耀，而是在尽管自身艰难仍选择展现同情之时。让我们在这个常常看似冷漠无情的世界中成为希望的灯塔。） 3. The journey of these puppies from abandonment to a loving home is a testament to the power of kindness and the unbreakable bond that can form between all living beings, regardless of circumstance.（这些小狗从被遗弃到拥有充满爱的家的旅程，证明了善良的力量以及所有生物之间无论何种情况都能形成的牢不可破的纽带。） 4. Sometimes, the most unexpected acts of kindness can set in motion a chain of events that restores faith in humanity and shows us that even in the face of despair, there is always room for love and hope to grow.（有时，最意想不到的善举能引发一系列事件，恢复人们对人性的信心，并向我们表明，即使在绝望面前，爱与希望也总有生长的空间。） 5. No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. It has the power to transform lives, heal wounds, and create a ripple effect of goodness that spreads far beyond what we can imagine.（任何善举，无论多么微小，都不会白费。它有改变生活、治愈创伤的力量，并产生远超我们想象的善的涟漪效应。） 写作示范 第一篇 A few days later, George, the homeless man, walked into the animal protection society. His eyes were filled with a mixture of apprehension and hope. David immediately went to greet him with a warm smile and a handshake. George was led to the area where the puppies were playing. As soon as the puppies saw him, they wagged their tails furiously and bounded over, licking his hands. Tears welled up in George's eyes as he saw how healthy and happy they were. He turned to David and said, "Thank you. I've been worried sick about them." David patted his shoulder and said, "You did the right thing by bringing them here. You showed great kindness." Then George and David started looking for new homes for the baby dogs. They posted pictures and stories of the puppies on social media and local bulletin boards. Soon, there was an outpouring of interest. George was actively involved in the selection process, asking potential adopters questions about their lifestyle and their plans for the puppies. After careful consideration, they found loving families for each of the puppies. On the day of the adoptions, George was there to see the puppies off. Although it was bittersweet, he knew they were going to a better life. He looked at David and said, "This is all because of you and the kindness of these people. I'll never forget it." 第二篇 A few days later, George, the homeless man, walked into the animal protection society. He looked around nervously, unsure of what to expect. David recognized him instantly and walked over with open arms. "Welcome, George! The puppies are doing great," he said. George was taken to see the puppies, and his face lit up when he saw them. He crouched down, and the puppies climbed all over him, yapping with joy. George felt a sense of peace wash over him. He thanked David again and again for taking care of them. Then George and David started looking for new homes for the baby dogs. They worked together tirelessly, making phone calls and arranging meetings with potential adopters. George shared his own experiences with the puppies, which helped the adopters understand their unique personalities. Finally, they found suitable homes for all the puppies. George watched as each puppy left with their new families, a smile on his face. He realized that even in his difficult situation, he had been able to make a positive impact. As he left the animal protection society, he knew that he had made the right choice, and that kindness truly does have the power to change lives. 参考范文： A few days later, George, the homeless man, walked into the animal protection society. He introduced himself as the guy who had left behind the baby dogs. The staff welcomed him warmly and spoke highly of his action. They took him to see the baby dogs. He was touched to see them grow up a little. Then he met David and offered to be a volunteer to care for them. David accepted his request and provided him with food and accommodation. As a result, George devoted himself to looking after the baby dogs before they found new owners. Then George and David started looking for new homes for the baby dogs. They posted pictures of the baby dogs online and told the heart-warming story. Many people were impressed by the homeless man’s behavior, and they were happy to adopt these dogs. Soon each baby dog had a new home. The homeless man realized his wish. David suggested that George continue to act as the animal caregiver, and George agreed. It was George’s kindness that made him find not only a new home for the baby dogs, but also a new job for himself. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$